[GORGANUS]

2 verses each
3-0 = KO, first to 5 when split
unlimited bars
no deadline


i dont care who drops first
when i get back from work then i'll spit!

[GORGANUS]

last vote http://www.bboy.org/forums/showthrea...156#post279156


look you came and put ya little nose in big people's shit,
calling me a fucking biter and criticizing my spit,
i'll will never hit, a bitch wearing fucking glasses,
but i will smack the fuck out you for not knowing what a biter is,
ya trying to act like a mod telling me you lost my respect,
you never had it in the first place like love from ya mom or ya pet,
ya just a orphan confused as fuck looking for a father figure to bond with,
you probably think i was joking when i said i the wrong person to fuck with,
nuff shit, went through my head when you stuck ya nose in my business,
like sniping you cut up ya body and leave you sleeping with the fishes,
i knew only bitches will talk shit, and bang bus ya head is what i'll hand you,
shit blood stains! i'll wash and go but i ain't bout Pert Plus Shampoo,
i could just picture you, crying like fuck mouth stuffed and tied up,
a bomb in ya lap with 10 seconds ya life's flashing then times up,
autopsy shows that ya body was poisned before ya balls splattered ya wide screen,
ohh shit i almost forgot i gotta leave some of this pussy for newBreaker19,
bang bus your a fucking faggot that needs a coke bottle to stick his cock in,
ya mom's proud cause you named yourself after us when she and i was fucking,

BANG, BANG, BANG, BANG, BANG, BANG, BANG, BANG, BANG, BANG,



GOR FUCKER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[bang bang]

bang bang bang bang bang. haha.
i laugh when i'm blastin a tech, cuz gor's another fag who lacks my respect
thing is, half the shit he's practiced, i've mastered. and the other half's just wack at its best
ya keystyle's as bad as it gets, ain't take much to soften ya knees, ho.
ya give dickriding a new meaning, so tell newb to get the fuck off ya burrito
n' ya gotta stop with the deep throat, cuz you're made up like star signs
ya havin hard times with charred lines. we beefin, son. ya could at least make ya bars rhyme
'fore you get jacked up like car crimes, break ya back and crack ya spine out
n' it's funny how ya say you'd rip me, when you get beat with half ya line count
it's hard to complain with 'anus' in the last part of ya name, this is amazingly fun.
and ya close with a mom joke? shit, kid.. call newb to face me, cuz you're basicly done.


sorry bout that razz. i didn't check what name it was under. shit, next time i'm over i won't drop on your comp.

yeah, me n' razz been tight for a few years now. he's tought me almost everything i know. and yeah, this is probly gonna a source for personals that'll get MAD played, but whatev'. i got my own shit on yall

waitin on gorg.
peace

[GORGANUS]

ohh ya finally came out the closet, but that bullshit really i dont need,
i could really see razzle rubbing off on you son cause ya both cant read,
telling me that ya'll went way back and he's got a overinflated ego,
ya just piss that he cant get pregnant like Shaq cant shoot a freethrow,
i think ya need to, fight ya own battles bang bus and think for a moment,
how ya gonna call ya self a keystyler when Razzle Dazzle wrote 80% of it,
i'll will never spit, a wack rhyme and i still dont have respect for you,
you'll need to bite to win this battle...maybe you'll learn a thing or two,
mister wanna be moderater, fucking assistant mastubater,
with more bat man than the cape crusader leave ya with patches on ya eye like an Okland Raider,
ya just a bullshit hater, than wanna be breakdance savior,
just stick to freestyling on paper or get ya hand chopped off like Darth Vader,
you see a hungry rapper, will spit like there's no tomorrow,
i told you i'll rip you ya little bitch without no pain or sorrow,
you ain't got no balls bang bus ya weak like Superman and Kryptnonite,
i'll bitch slap you and kick you in the ass and still you cant put up a fight,
so tell breakdance goodnight, then i'll kill you like Freddy Kruger,
or i'll put you over my head and break ya back quicker than Lex Luger,
so bring ya tech and ya ruger, and ya Grand Theft Auto double pack,
you'll take more shoots to the head like pornstars fuck Cactus Jack,

BANG, BANG, BANG, BANG, BANG, BANG, BANG, BANG, BANG, BANG,


GOR FUCKER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[bang bang]

i'm waiting for you to rip me, sickly, cuz ya seem to like talkin lots
sparkin shots, you'll be surrounded by more lines on pavement than parkin lots
bang'll break n' sprain ya neck till ya style's lookin fake and lame
ya av's pumped up n' ready to fight... too bad ya freestyle's ain't the same...
change ya name, then maybe you wouldn't be ridiculed as much.
a sudden storm of blood and gore will rip ya jewels n' nuts
sendin a curse to bend and dispurse of ya sentences first.
look, this dude loves me so much, he's chantin my name at the end of his verse
relentless with words, ya ain't worth shit. can't ya see, boy?
what the fuck is breakdance savior? you should know it's bboy...
n' why ya keep callin me bang bus? it ain't funny, i checked 'em.
the funny thing, though, is ya name's synonimous with rectum
fuck rap, you ain't gonna make it.. work on your R&B hope
hey kuss, he wasn't callin dopekilla.. he's just callin me dope.
ya wack verse can be sent back, i'll end that, with a bent back
gor's battle is finished.. but where the fuck's your friend at....?

GOR GOT FUCKED, FUCKER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
lol, j/p

[GORGANUS]

about fucking time

PLEASE
WE NEED VOTES YA'LL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Mode]

oh damn, the tensions so thick you can cut it with a knife.

GORGANUS - 1st - came hard, flow was on and off at times, some nice an funny punches though. lmao @ closer.

autopsy shows that ya body was poisned before ya balls splattered ya wide screen,
ohh shit i almost forgot i gotta leave some of this pussy for newBreaker19,
bang bus your a fucking faggot that needs a coke bottle to stick his cock in,
ya mom's proud cause you named yourself after us when she and i was fucking,

BANG, BANG, BANG, BANG, BANG, BANG, BANG, BANG, BANG, BANG,

2nd - picked it up nice, flow was good, some nice punches. came real hard.

ohh ya finally came out the closet, but that bullshit really i dont need,
i could really see razzle rubbing off on you son cause ya both cant read,

i think ya need to, fight ya own battles bang bus and think for a moment,
how ya gonna call ya self a keystyler when Razzle Dazzle wrote 80% of it,

so bring ya tech and ya ruger, and ya Grand Theft Auto double pack,
you'll take more shoots to the head like pornstars fuck Cactus Jack,

BANG, BANG, BANG, BANG, BANG, BANG, BANG, BANG, BANG, BANG,

Bang Bang - 1st - good flow, some good punches. your quite similar to razz, but you had a bit of filler there also.

[i]n' ya gotta stop with the deep throat, cuz you're made up like star signs
ya havin hard times with charred lines. we beefin, son. ya could at least make ya bars rhyme
'fore you get jacked up like car crimes, break ya back and crack ya spine out
n' it's funny how ya say you'd rip me, when you get beat with half ya line count[i]

2nd - nice shit, good flow, nice punches. really picked it up. was really feeling these lines -

i'm waiting for you to rip me, sickly, cuz ya seem to like talkin lots
sparkin shots, you'll be surrounded by more lines on pavement than parkin lots

sendin a curse to bend and dispurse of ya sentences first.
look, this dude loves me so much, he's chantin my name at the end of his verse

fuck rap, you ain't gonna make it.. work on your R&B hope
hey kuss, he wasn't callin dopekilla.. he's just callin me dope.

pretty tight battle from both sides, especially the second round, but overall my vote has to go to Band Bang on account of coming harder in the second verse. first was pretty even, and bang just edged out in the second.

peace.

[GORGANUS]

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NEED MORE VOTES PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[flobotopics]

aight this is real close. more of a tie but here we go.

gor-second verse was real ill, but the first needed something. this is what i liked
1st:
bang bus your a fucking faggot that needs a coke bottle to stick his cock in,
ya mom's proud cause you named yourself after us when she and i was fucking,

real nice endin

ya trying to act like a mod telling me you lost my respect,
you never had it in the first place like love from ya mom or ya pet

2nd:
ohh ya finally came out the closet, but that bullshit really i dont need,
i could really see razzle rubbing off on you son cause ya both cant read,
telling me that ya'll went way back and he's got a overinflated ego,
ya just piss that he cant get pregnant like Shaq cant shoot a freethrow

the shaq thing could be the hottest line in the battle.

bang- you were real consistant wit your punches. none really stuck out too much. it was all pretty good
1st:
'fore you get jacked up like car crimes, break ya back and crack ya spine out
n' it's funny how ya say you'd rip me, when you get beat with half ya line count

it was kool but true ya brought way less stuff than gor did.

2nd:
i'm waiting for you to rip me, sickly, cuz ya seem to like talkin lots
sparkin shots, you'll be surrounded by more lines on pavement than parkin lots

hahaha real nice

sendin a curse to bend and dispurse of ya sentences first.
look, this dude loves me so much, he's chantin my name at the end of his verse

overall it was real close for me to judge. bang bang was better at the end, although he used way less lines. such a hard decision, but it goes to BANG BANG

[GORGANUS]

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NEED VOTES YA'LL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

[GORGANUS]

NEED VOTES YA'LL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

count it or not, here's my vote:

gor: came nice. ya put good effert into the verse, but ya coulda put a bit more emphasis on rewording ya punches to make them hit harder. personals were there, but like i said, they coulda came out nicer. not bad though, on the whole.

"autopsy shows that ya body was poisned before ya balls splattered ya wide screen,
ohh shit i almost forgot i gotta leave some of this pussy for newBreaker19"
^nice, that was probly ya sickest line. that was ill.

"i think ya need to, fight ya own battles bang bus and think for a moment,
how ya gonna call ya self a keystyler when Razzle Dazzle wrote 80% of it"
^that was too predictable. arite though, but we saw that comin from miiles away.

a lot of your shit didn't really make sense. ya mostly talkin about gettin violent n' shit... not what you should do in a regular battle.
but ya get a 7/10. not bad.

bang: pretty good, even though you're biting my style . whatev. ya came pretty nice though. punches were dope, and flow was ill too. personals were on target, and the punches made sense. pretty dope.

"ya keystyle's as bad as it gets, ain't take much to soften ya knees, ho.
ya give dickriding a new meaning, so tell newb to get the fuck off ya burrito"
^ha, burrito cuz he's mexican. lmao.

"i'm waiting for you to rip me, sickly, cuz ya seem to like talkin lots
sparkin shots, you'll be surrounded by more lines on pavement than parkin lots"
^dope.

"sendin a curse to bend and dispurse of ya sentences first.
look, this dude loves me so much, he's chantin my name at the end of his verse"
^daang. that was sick.

ill. i'll give it 8.5/10.

overall, i'm gonna have to go with bang bang on account of better flow n' punches.

[GORGANUS]

ahh who cares anyway
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congrats bang bang
good battle son RESPECT!

i'am out for good peace.