[B-Girl BaLi]

Rules:
2 verses .. 20 line max... no time limit who wanna post first?Last vote

[XLyricX]

live to hate; topple all colossals and kill the greats,
like a disgruntled dyke, you ain't "thinking straight",
Hoe fill ya plate; the food'll be gone 'for my pistol say's grace,
graffitti ya head wit a knife to leave this bitch "de-faced",
kick this disgrace; the devil called me detrimental,
punches parallel a religious rebel and fucking wreck ya “temple”,
My lyrics is like 'art' of weaponry..."draw" the tech and then pull/
you say you handle "beef", but that was before you met the head bull,
ya skills are fake; claim to keep spitting tough,
you never lie? that's like saying you sleep sitting up,
i rule the "pen", you just a "pig" like the 5 0 inspector,
i get more "props" than a live show director,

Switch it a little

Ive check this dames game, she done masterd in hoe thangs,
On razors dick so much she's constantly givin 'razor'-'brain',
Dont hate this game; hate the Slang that lyric brings to damage ya name,
Bend ya neck with this next text that flex ya right before i sex ya,
Sexually assult this hoe then perplex ya come back and vex ya,
The Femcee holding it down on, "Bd.Com",
your Right holdin me "Big Dick" down when im on the jon,
Make you Drink Dye To bleed ya insides as you slowly die,
Read my damn 'lyrics'; that should answer ya sig line how im so fly,

[B-Girl BaLi]

Killin it stealin it better than a professional con man,
comin to me for rhyme help like im ya "balisbond man"
lyric lackin orginality, cant even get a decent siggy/
woulda been famous in the 80's only if his name was ZIGGY/
Location: Kings Throne, well u should change it to tha QUEEN's/
cuz my hot lines suround you i'm every where like tha ring/
no escape, not even suicide* will save ya/
MASH* lied, this death is sure to PAIN YA/
banned, cuz i'll verbally "dismember" an rearange ya/
jealous cuz he wishes he could ride razors dick/
to bad raz isnt a fag like this kid LY-RIC/
silly prick, dicks are for chicks/
claimin wolf's on his ass cuz thats his fantasy
a bigger fag than Brian Kinney*? its true INDEED/
Queer as Folk invadin when Lyric an his crew rolls on tha spot/
couldnt spit streight if he was tha lines in tha side walk/
dont talk, ya privelidges have been revoked/
stealth slit ya throat raps are cloked/
Name couldnt be damnaged if ya pulled a 9-11 on me/
one punch from Bali an ya cryin like a Banshee/
talkn bout ya big dick, can it be? over compensation/
1 inch rock hard after a hour of inflation/
imaginin it is worse than taxation with out representation!/
i can see y ya suicidal, SHIT i would be Too/
as Lyric wit no one to play his kazoo*/


*suicide-See his post in the freestyle session
*MASH- in the movie and the tv shows theme song's words were "Suicide is painless"
*Brian Kinney- lead character of Queer as folk
*kazoo= dick in this sense

[XLyricX]

Alright Silly Rabbit, Listen Hoe; Tricks are for kids,
So go play with ya Barbie dolls, cause rappin aint for ya bitch
Ive wrote shit better Drunk, And then Come back n Crinkle em,
Im Intellectualy advanced.. this hoes still a simpleton,
This bitches IQ is worse than a snakes ass hole,
im in a castle, the 'king' of this shit we calling a rap battle,
This hoe is movin so slow I could pass her at a Stand still,
Packin her Guns with Cancer, and bali still couldnt blast ill,
Ive seen your Old av, Wit Glasses Bitch look retarted,
2nd place at Beauty Down syndrome contest before it started,
Starin at ya computer like all you do is 'text spit',
I'd be wrong, ya other hobby is at my dick waiting for the 'next spit',
I need not a Plane to damage you on 9-11, Thats too much 'work',
I'll send Anthrax through ya bonus check to make it seem like a perk,

Switch it a little more

Come on Girl stop thinking you could win this,
and Stop callin me 'lucky charms', just cause you think my dick is 'magically delicious',
You cant Top This, Rock this, Block hits, From My wits,
From ya last pic...How can you be female with no Ass Or Tits,
Ur lines are like shopping centers.. if u’ve seen one u’ve seen 'a mall',
With Ankle to femur damaging axes that make yo ass trip n fall,
Like 'Blind Orgies' You Must Not Know Who the fuck you fuckin wit,

So To end this shit,

Yes Votes Im guilty of ripping this bitch take my ass to the main Judge,
I'll rock my O.J. simpson throwback with the matching murder glove,

[B-Girl BaLi]

This nigga Lyric, he got no flow,/
lackin originality 6 times he called me HOE,/
same punches as every one else uses when they battle me,/
come up wit new material an ya stil couldnt "rattle" me/
Childish punches soft, just like nursery rhymes,/
cant understand a word hes spittin compare him to a mime/
lines not hittin like Jazz in ya speakers.../
rockin velcro cuz my lines laced him like my sneakers/
more frightning than metalica with guns, im tha master of puppets/
turnin fake emcees like lyric into tha ghetto version of tha muppets/
instead of fozzy, Miss pigg, Kermit an tha rest./
ya got Tyrone Lamar and Curtis * sportin his vest/
sayin all i do is spit text but u gravely mistaken/
audio tracks or live shows im crazy like a BLAZED JAMACIAN/
vision blury, you dont want to see me when im smashing to wreck/
crashin tha set, up against the wall's the only chance you have at "standing erect"/
say im a chick with no "ass or tittys"/
Bull shit, tops double D an BaLi got back, ya feel me?/
the little skills that ya weildin not worth seein like soft porn/
what ya think puttin 2 x's before ya name makes ya HARD CORE?/
kickin ya own ass,dont even try an insult me, /
OJ ran outta juice cuz ya hollowed out an pulpy/
I couldnt call this a battle more like a micromachine vs a bulldozer/
fuck a closer, from verse one this shits been over./


*curtis Jackson aka 50 cent

[Zeke1]

nah yo....i'm sorry bali....you got ya ass handed to ya....i've read and listened to most of your battles since i started coming here and, i'll give it to ya, your first verse was better then his first, some punhces were overused in his first verse......BUT, damn his second verse ripped you apart....

best punch....this capped it for me...
"Ive seen your Old av, Wit Glasses Bitch look retarted,
2nd place at Beauty Down syndrome contest before it started,"
.....yo this line had me laughin sooo hard....

sorry bali, but my vote has to go to Lyric, not ust for that punch, but i liked the way his verses flowed and the wordplay and punches came out real nice....blai, you had nice shit too, but i just feel he got you

VOTE:Lyric

hot shit ya'll

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[XLyricX]

Uppin One mo Gin

[XLyricX]

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[B-Girl BaLi]

theres.. this thing called most the people who NORMALLY vote cant b/c either

1) they have beef with me
2) their friends with me an would bee seen as dick riding if they vote for me...

[Mode]

i'm only voting 'cos it's my sworn duty to uphold the voting system, but damn lyric, stop fucking freeposting, they'll come.

Lyric - 1st - nice drop, flow was nice, some played punches about fat an slut etc but some good punches an nice wordplay.

2nd - real nice, good flow, nice punches lmao at the beauty pagent line. good wordply.


Bali - 1st - good drop, flow was on, nice punches an wordplay.

2nd - came back good, but not much different from your first. nice flow an good punches.

overall i'ma have to agree with zeke, lyric killed it with his second verse. so my vote goes to Lyric on account of better punches/wordplay. tight battle, respect due to you both keep it up.

peace.

[B-Girl BaLi]

i'd just like to say... *NO IM NOT FUCKIN COMPLAINING SO DONT EVEN PULL THAT SHIT WITH ME*

that i'd give it to lyric if he had ONE FUCKIN ORRIGINAL PUNCH... all his shit has been said AGAINTS ME BEFORE...

*most of it was from awe.. in his audio track*

im not saying that those votes dont count but ... if some ones gonna put the nail in the coffin .. PLEASE FUCKIN EXPLAIN YOUR VOTE... im tired of votes being half assed.. i know i do it occationally but i try not to ... so please do the common courtesy an explain the shit... NO ONE IS GETTING BETTER FROM HALF ASSED VOTES....

[XLyricX]

im exactly sure whats up...but i sense some heat..
But either way I just wanna say big ups to bali for a good battle...
you can count those votes or not..since you think there not explained well enough...

w/e you want bali aint trying to piss noon off here just trying to get some battling in

Respect

and Still need votes

*Also, it seems some of yall gettin little comfortable with "nigga", Bali i kno yo ass aint black and ive seen that shit been comin outta peeps, now im just here to say if you aint black dont be usin that word aight, yall aint got the right..so cool it with that shit....and das on a real note*

[B-Girl BaLi]

actually lyric thats where your wrong.. i have JUSt as much a right to say nigga as i do BITCH... its a word.. take it how you want it.. substitue it for SON do watever makes you happy but i live in the USA ... and we got freedom of speach last time i checked


and those votes count.. im just saying... FROM NOW ON explain ya shit or dont fuckin vote

[XLyricX]

Fuckin wiggers tryin to act black now...its a sad thing....
silly hoes aint got no damn respect...
so if yall gonna get racial up in this bitch when can do that

[Reflexion]

Lyric - Nice shit from the starting.. good flow and use of inners and alliterations, sometimes it got to be too cramped, but it was good structuring for the most part..good wordplay...wasn't feeling the starting of the second verse too much, but u picked it up as it went along and a bit of rearranging would have made it some tight stuff, but it was nice styll..

Ive check this dames game, she done masterd in hoe thangs,
On razors dick so much she's constantly givin 'razor'-'brain',

Ive seen your Old av, Wit Glasses Bitch look retarted,
2nd place at Beauty Down syndrome contest before it started,

I need not a Plane to damage you on 9-11, Thats too much 'work',
I'll send Anthrax through ya bonus check to make it seem like a perk,

With Ankle to femur damaging axes that make yo ass trip n fall,
Like 'Blind Orgies' You Must Not Know Who the fuck you fuckin wit,

Yes Votes Im guilty of ripping this bitch take my ass to the main Judge,
I'll rock my O.J. simpson throwback with the matching murder glove,



aahah that blind orgie one was funny and the end line had perfect flow and good content, overall good shit man.

Bali - Had some alright stuff but it fell off at times just in the content and set up..like could have been rearragened better and the content upgraded a bit, but generally alright.. it looks like it would be a better audio verse cuz there isn't so much attention payed to everything, but ya need more detail text battlin'.. some of ur stuff was kinda played out, esp after the length of time ya been here..I could see potention at most parts in ur shit, it's just the articulation and expressing was lacking a bit to me..

I couldnt call this a battle more like a micromachine vs a bulldozer/
fuck a closer, from verse one this shits been over./

liked the ending the best, good job.

- - -

Well I think Lyric took this battle with just coming harder and better overall shit. You can work on some rearrangin a bit from what I can see and perhaps cutting some of the less qual content out to get a more ill-concise verse, but u did really good man. Bali, I think ya just have to work on the expression because more of the content is fine.. I think a nice match to see for you to is maybe Bali vs Zeke and Lyric vs Mode (I don't know if that happened yet) or Lyric vs Talent would be good too..

Y'all did good,

vote Lyric

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