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**DeathWish** vs Talib Kweli - 10-15-2003, 05:33 AM

last vote: wolf vs lyric

rules:

2 verses each
no bar limit but not too long
3-0 = KO otherwise 5 votes wins
no time limit but dont take forever

edit: make it 1 verse...




My pops always had the sharpest lyrical sword/
shit, I was born with a mic at the end of my umbilical chord!

I Love SARA


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10-15-2003, 06:08 AM

Im gonna spill-this-kid, kill-this-kid/
first battle but we all know who the props-is-with/
i rock-this-shit, my words have immerse power/
flowin in milliseconds while the punks verse takes hours/
gonna shower, ya ass with lyrics that dont pose/
couldnt rap, so talib kweli was the name ya chose/
rapper, he wrote "get by" and "the manifesto"/
but ya bit a chunk of his personality and made it ya own/
im shakin ya bones. not hairline fractures, ya cartilidge gets snapped/
before you accept a battle try learning to rap/
Ya rhymes are just crap, battle me and you dont know what hit-you/
Thats what my name means, i dont got it, the wish lies with-you/
my verse splits you, takes ya cells and rearranges mollecules/
your dna that says "im gay" changes to read "DeathWish slaughtered-you"/
flockin through, ya pores and into ya brain/
ya get slain, cos you cant handle the pain/
i live withit every day, its called pity for others/
like when kweli and huzey battled but no-one voted for the fuckers/


peace... no beef.
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punsihment - 10-15-2003, 08:54 PM

iam a newbi so go easy on me def~

I'll fake-ya-death and take-ya-cheques~
you know your rythming with da best-n da-less but bless-ya-versues before you come on yapping shit.......~
i might a apuld you for you marauding services ~
but u mose well keep that fukin mouth shut~
A slut you are but how do i know,you know why cause iam mother fucking TALIB KWELI~
Ill crush your ribs with my big dipz,then run your face over with my volleyz~
you sure are rapping with da best , but you are trying to make me test , but your real name was jess untill surgy cost less~
iam gona teach you how to rythme,his your number back,
dont crumble under your lack of persistents,wait for da creatures to bleach bak~
here's one more call back is all you are worth,imagey is all for you,
ill damage you in more ways den god did,i was at your birth im was done that cut da wrong thing off....~
ill try and make dis flow and put dings into you dough,this should end it,
you cant affend me in anyway cause,iam done one with da will~
peace_ no beef aswell

there might be some spelling errors who cares though




"GRAFFITI IS AN ART, AND IF ART IS A CRIME, HOW COME PICASSO NEVER DONE TIME"

Cavemen did it, so did Romans and Egyptians. The Incas did
it, so did Greeks and Native Americans. There was graffiti on the
New York subway a year after it was built. There`s graffiti on the
moon. If graffiti is vandalism, and vandalism is graffiti, then man
has left his mark with garbage at the farthest reaches of the
universe. So you with your pathetic desire to be remembered are in
good company. I could spend a ream of paper telling you about the
development of modern graffiti, but we`ve got other ground to cover.
It`s important that you know it, so ask your local expert (or DJ
Deadly Budda in Pittsburg if you don`t have one) and he`ll tell you
his version.

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10-15-2003, 10:49 PM

VOTE plz ppl
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10-15-2003, 11:55 PM

ok well it says 2 verses but ull only get more slammed so...this battle goes to deathwish on the account that his words actually rhymed and he also had hot flow, nice dilvery 2...
umm talib u need 2 work on ur shit, relax on battles for a while shits messed up, theres no punches, it doesn't make sense, and it doesn't flow

1-0 to deathwish




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LET THE MUSIC MOVE YOUR SOUL.
~Aint No Stoppin Me- No One Does It Better~
IT'Z ALL BOUT THE MOVEMENT!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
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10-16-2003, 03:10 AM

i see...

more votes??
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Mode Vote - 10-16-2003, 07:37 AM

deathwish was all over this battle, hot flow in places, some nice punches.

talib, keep going man, this is definatly an improvemnt on your last battle. stretched lines threw off the flow. little to no punches. keep elevating.

vote - Deathwish

peace.




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10-16-2003, 09:09 AM

VOTE: Deathwish.

Nice punches, last line had me Laughing MAO cuz I just got done reading the huzzey/talib battle

Talib- Practice man. Some of your punches don't make a whole lot of sense...no offense.




One life one tribe one love one blood
Too much has been shed its time to rise above
You don’t have to understand it and you dont have to like it
But were much more powerful when we're UNITED
Ignorance fight it Knowledge embrace it
Have sympathy for people who too scared to change shit
Dont talk it just live it
Enjoy life absorb every minute
Quit placing the blame
Put your mind towards change
Hold the torch, light the flame, make a difference
One love one nation lets get uplifted
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10-17-2003, 05:06 AM

thats 3-0... or im bad at maths... but i think thats knockout.

thanks for the battle talib. keep elevating.

peace all.
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10-18-2003, 05:53 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by **Deathwish**
thats 3-0... or im bad at maths... but i think thats knockout.

thanks for the battle talib. keep elevating.

peace all.
yeah thanks for teaching me a few things battle another time in a month + or something ok
peace_
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