[XLyricX]

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you called me out

you drop 1st hot shot

[XLyricX]

Your up wolf..

[XLyricX]

Drop man

[The Hungry Wolf]

i don't know why you're gettin bent outta shape. today is the first day i've been on the site in a couple days. i'm hangin wit my friends right now so i'm not gonna drop. i'll do it no later than tomorrow night. don't get your pannies in a bunch bitch.

[XLyricX]

.......the bitch will be determined by the outcome of this battle

[The Hungry Wolf]

sorr for not droppin earlier. had to take care of some business and get a vote.

vote = Dtack v. Zodiak

I'm only here to start shit cause Lyric fears my hard hits/
Got beef cause you sparked it; Increased your lease in the mar-ket/
You better park it; "painted" your face red for a target/
Gutted your carcus and dumped your dead body in a dark ditch/
The Arcitc couldn't "freeze" the "heat" that i bring/
Shoved his dick so far up his ass he's "seeking his thing"/
"Dethroning this King"; your fabricated title I smashed/
Don't need a rifle to clash, but death results if you're brash/
Take your "Midol"son, on second hand don't take it/
Your only "flow" is your period, but my raps will still rape it/
Still degrade it; 45 posts - already hated/
Creative? I'm bein real. Need proof? check how your rated/
It's been debated; won't keep your demise from bein belated/
Got my "15 Minutes"; murdered him and I taped it/

*painted red as in his face is bloody
*He says his location is King's throne
*his rating is only one star

EDIT - i forgot to add an explanation. 15 Minutes was a movie about some guys killin people and taping it.

I woulda spit more, but i didn't feel like takin time with you. I know I'll kill you so it doesn't matter. Go ahead and drop a long ass verse. I'll still KO you in less than 8 bars per faggot.

[XLyricX]

Vote: Zen Vs Murda



How _n hell th_s n_gga gets k_lled and have th_s many L_VES!!!,
From that last line reading my shit twice ripped out your eyes,
You got it twisted, cause truthfully I pitty you fiend,
My ILL verses whither ya spleen,
You wanted to see my "shit" so I whipped my ass wit ya computer screen!!,
Awe Said I need "personal's" So I got it!
I thought i'd get Personal by takin this bitch's Purse-n-all,
Blast em With a Curse n all, Stick you in a Herse n all,
Cut out this "wolfs" legs to watch him trip n fall,
I bang on foes who would oppose and make me blast my glocks,
I'll hit ya "nose" with more combos than Master locks,
This nigga think he's topping me, So I'll make him a mockery,
Snatch his Keyboard and use the Cord to hang him high like Apostrophies('),
Theres no Way the "heat you Bring" could take this,
Im hotter than Burning Crosses dogg and I aint even even racist!
So next time try and come at me with a better Delivery or a diss,
Cause my Delievry is so Smooth even my birth was Contraction-liss,

[XLyricX]

your up squirt

[XLyricX]

Come on now.. how long does it take tow rite an 8 bar verse seriously... like 2 mins... hurry your ass up im gettting sick of waiting...

[Mode]

some people got lives son..

mods, delete all these freeposts.

[The Hungry Wolf]

You really think you're somebody...haha. Think what you want nigga, you ain't nothin but a bitch to all of us. Check it...

Never a mockery; You shock me with your false philosophy/
Provin your principles wrong like Galileo did Socrates'/
My animosity's velocity breaks free of viscosity/
Movin at full force to smash your raps colossally/
Fuck your apology; tried to make a truce cause he's weak/
I'll "lynch" your ass for sayin "nigga"; hung from a noose till he's "sleep"/
You're intrusive so leave; beat 'em like Bruce or Ali/
I put a "X" through your "Lyrics" so "choose a new ID"/
Employin tacts to destroy your raps and foil your stats/
You ain't makin money from rap; better boil some crack/
I don't need "eyes" to "rip"; your whole flock is beneath me/
I'm skilled with guns like Cleric and swords like Zatoichi/
I'm still "half-assed" but I'm "full penis'd"- length and girth/
Leavin you "fucked up" so your "delivery at birth hurts"/

*he apologized for startin shit with awe-dio after awe showed him that he ain't shit with his "lyric diss". now he's tryin to be all cool with him. and we all know why that is. cause you're a bitch.
*he sounds white, yet he used nigga in his verse, so he'll get lynched like a black person livin in the south a few centuries ago.
*he said he ripped my eyes out, and i said i didn't need eyes to defeat him, like Cleric from Equilibrium (in the movie the Cleric is really skilled with guns and can aim perfectly in the dark, as seen in the first scene) and Zatoichi from old Zatoichi samurai movies (Zatoichi was a blind swordsman who was real skilled with the sword. He's also a folk hero in Japan.)
*he said my delivery was weak and he's contractionless at birth, so I "fucked him up" with my verse causing him a painful birth cause my delivery was hard

gay ass little bitch. sittin around waitin for me to drop. trust me nigga, i got way more better things i'm doin (like your girl) than battlin you. this is gonna be the highlight of your stay at the site. better start wearin diapers, i know you pack fudge. i'm out nigga.

[XLyricX]

Lol you crack me up kid, Time to make this little faggot non-exhistent...
Just get over it kid ya got murdered!!

First off THis little nigga disses me for "nigga" with a White Icon.
I'll tighten my shit up to choke you like Ball Pythons,
Yo Wolf think about it....Lyric murders people through usage of the mutha fuckin alphabet,
Your rhymes aren't "SHARP" they "DULLER" than a fuckin rusted out "SCALPAL-GETS",
U just started text-battling which makes you a rookie, and rookies get face-jobs,
You runnin wit richard simmons two non musicans whose hobby's is to chase-cocks,
The real meaning to "going down south" Hungry wolf brings it out,
He just covers it up by saying "I'm going to Indianopolis to my House",
161 post and this bitch thinks he's a classic,
I'll pack this faggots casket so fast you'd think this shit was magic,
your easy to beat like a midget with no arms,
U trying to throw punches, which results in no harm,
I treat “The Kitty Kat” like paid artist when I’m makin computer “MP3’s,
I’ll “burn” him then “delete him” till my share folder empties,
bitch please, my lyrics boil over yours like heated beakers in chemistry,
He is like an anorexic model who just vomits and spits shit,
Get a “DJ Clue” fix, and bring more “exclusive hits”,
You can't be considered active because you won’t ever be “hype”,
Your flows come like decaffeinated pop that explains ya “rhyme free” mic,
And you get My Girl??
Come on dog, you have no such thing as supporters,
Your own girl would give me “head or tail” with out flippin the quarters,

Lets get some votes on this shit
if you dont get my shit dont vote...
thats simple i want 150+ people voting on this shit

[**Deathwish**]

aight, heres my breakdown:

Round 1

Wolf -

Wordplay : I wasnt really feelin ya wordplay in this verse. It seemed a little too basic, not the best i've seen from you. And some of it was a little far-out, if you know what i mean.
4/10


Flow : You used a really played and standard rhyme scheme, and I felt that your multies were a little drawn out. You lost the flow at some points, where there were sudden changes of rhyme. seemed a little rushed for a text battle.
5/10


Punches : I didnt think your punches hit that hard... and you were talkin yourself up for a lot of it, not that thats bad. Your personals, that one star thing and the king joint, i thought, could have been used in a better way.
3/10

OVERALL --- 4/10

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Lyric -

Wordplay : Your wordplay was nice. kept it frequent throughout, which is always good. I liked that "purse-n-all" line, that master lock line, and the delivery outro. could have been a little more complicated though.
7/10


Flow : I thought your flow was mainly good. Smooth transitions between lines, use of multies, and it all made sense. You lost it at points, though. Like that fiend spleen screen bar.
6/10


Punches : I think you tied punches in with wordplay well. Average strength, with only 1 weak personal, though.. definitely needed more personals.
6/10

OVERALL --- 6.5/10

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Round 2

Wolf -

Wordplay : Your wordplay was still basic, but better than the first verse. I liked that personal, with the "X" thing.
5/10


Flow : MUCH BETTER! Your flow came bouncin back this round, still a simple rhyme scheme but it flowed nice. i dont think it fell off once. Atogether it seemed like a more educated and skillful rhyme than the last.
7.5/10


Punches : I liked your first 4 lines.. relatively hard hitting, and nice flow. I also liked that "X" line but i think i already mentioned that. There wasnt really much other hard hitting stuff.
5/10

OVERALL --- 6/10

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Lyric -

Wordplay : Ya wordplay was good. I was feelin ya on most of it. I liked that little computer themed bit, that was orright. most of it was part of your punches, which is good.
7/10


Flow : reaally simple rhyme scheme, but somehow you had the right number of syllables in almost every line to make it work. Still would have flown better with more multies etc. but yeah, lack of flow improving tech's really brought it down.
5.5/10

Punches : No personals, but youre punches nice. Again mixing them in well with your wordplay. still not as deep as to break the opponent mentally, but it got the job done. If you used personals it would have beefed up your score.
6.5/10

OVERALL --- 6.5/10

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VOTE = XLyricX

But Props to Wolf, if you dropped a first verse liek ya second, you might have won.

[razorbrain]

this battle was deffinately ....somthing.. lyric, you gonna ended up the next hated man in the FRS ya keep actin tha way you do.. just rememeber: how you read the text someone says, might not be how its meant..anyways back to the battle:

round 1

wolf... ya verse ok... some decent punches, flow was off and on..the period thing has been used to death..even by me..so thing that are redundant like that i dont count..also rememeber when ya usin punche that involve realtiy, like movies or facts..make sure ya use ones that is popular and use most people know..ill explain later..


lyric- very nice way ya started ya verse.. that would have never worked in a audio battle, but it worked pefectly here.. nice idea..very creative.. your punches were decent to and the flow was ok..last line was alil forced rhyme.. and thats not how ya spell contradictionless..but it was good none the less

round2
wolf ya deffinately pick it up here.. flow was verygood..fuck wordplay, ya punches, they did god.. but the refferal to equilibrium is what i meant be makin sure ya actually punches were more popular..not everyone saw that movie cuz it went to dvd wuite quickly, and i can say that i thought it sucked..so if i was another person thatd be a strike against you..and the samurai i didnt knwo about at all, so you can see wher eyou wold lose points on those 2 points..but over all a better verse than first

lyric- gurss what? non-existant and murdered dont rhyme! who a thunk it? no i realize it may not be apart of ya intended rhyme scheme, likeit is with mode and razz so if it aint then forget that comment..
ya verse started off slow the begining not too many punches hit very hard to me..they picked up later in the verse..i think you were tryin to many ideas at once too many type of was to flip it..so it lost its appeal..closer was ok..punches got better at the end. the quarter thing i liked.

final vote: WOLF- he stepped it up at the end if lyric had put a 2nd round verse liek his first, he would have won for sure, which surpised me, cuz he aint that bad..but wolf over came the weakness of the first and made his shit tighter.. good battle yall, now stop acting like bicthes and give respect lol

[XLyricX]

Good votes thje counts 1:1

and the Razors comment i wasnt rapping or texting.. i was just talkiing shit thats why non exhistent and murder dont rhyme....

it wasnt a rhyme sceme homie