[Zodiak Stizo]

2 verses
no dr votes
4 day dq
no bitin
open votes for nu b's


ima drop first <--vote

[Zodiak Stizo]

i tried breakin it up better for some ppl to understand. still dont get flo, then pm me. explanations tomorrow

aint no doubt about it/ this fag is straight//
cuz all he do is/ is sit home n masturbate//
i got that fire son//
and this game cant b won//
my spit is like fire/ it should b treated wid fear//
i can warm or burn ur ass and you wouldn't b here//
roll so much spit suckin dick like u aint got no teeth//
nigga wtf dawg/ just stop beatin ur meet//
this kat so stupid he as smart as tree//
only time u hot iz when u got a bad pee//
**grasp wood as a brain, cuz u cant [under]stand things too/ complitcated//
n ur skill has been overrated, u spitin online, inlife is as lame as
pootie's 'game'//**
pull out ur skeletal structure through a hole in ur head//
spat so much hot shit ur xray looks like u've been filled wid lead//
even the doc's eyes got filled wid deep red//
feds tol i leave niggas fucked/ edit:/ then dead//
I'll leave ur carcass/ as a bag of bones//
then fed x ur brains in pieces bck to ur home//
u'r picture purfect/ i'll rip off ur face n put it on a frame//
if u were white michael jackson's expression, would have been the same//
but i left u so scarred, even, ur carcass screams//
and you wont wake up by thinkin this wuz a dream//
is like Bush pheonix/ wont happen/ kno wut i mean//

my spit so slick it flows in "laser" streams//

ur nightmare turned out to ba bad dream/but as soon as u woke up, u got hit by a "beam"//
only one word to describe u.... is cream*//



explanations now today:
**tried using a call back**
// <---end of line
/ <---means pause in beat
* cream as in creamated

Am tryin to get instrumental out hea, but site aint lettin up. I was tryint o go on "The Lox - Go Head"

[AzNbReAkA]

this boys at it again, tryin ta beat me when i already had a 3-0 in his face//
yes that's the case, he thinks of this shit as a damn race//
tryin ta be quik as possible with ur short lines, showz a sign//
that later, this guys gonna be right in the middle of an emcee crime, take ur time//
think bout ur rhymes, dont spit it out like fire, i know itz what u desire//
but as far as i can see, what u spittin out, we oculd call you a liar//
in the wildcard race ur voting spree was on, but not ur emcee spree//
losin ALL ur battles, u finally decided not to put ut emcee record in ur sig, please believe//
itz somethin you will never achieve, yes, you, tryin ta be just like me//
go back to what you were doing before u came here, cuz now...i'm your worst fear

edit
spellin errors

[AzNbReAkA]

last vote

--//SESSION COMPETITION\\--

[Zodiak Stizo]

i think u mispelled half the words in ur verse//
punches & lit. both suck and i dont kno wut is worse//
i would say it was ur structure/
......but u aint got none//
and my spit do more damage than u tryin to handle a gun//*
i filled ur ass wid so much nut cum started comon from ur sweat glands//
ur ass turned yello and u aint even from japan//
whack shit, only way u get through is flipped scripts//
but bad flo cant cover up for spit tht's whack shit//
fuckin minor/
.....ima buse, slander n rape u//
dismember ur bones n send it home on plates too//
take a whip and slip this kid 30 slashes//
now azn trembles in fear 'vrytime he sees my double slashes//
I kill this azn wid words he cant say//
in multiple synapses, disable 'is vertabrae//
ima kill u wid verbal improper misuse//
every time i spit web dictionary* sues me for verbal abuse//
slit ur wrist n nuff blood fell to fill dry wells//
dry spell/
......bulieve in hell/
..........cuz after his battle ur mental state wont b well//
ur mouth is an atm and my dick is the card//
like Enron statements, one hit and ur ass gets discharged//

**this kat a kunt or "dyke"? u suck so much dick u spit in grammatical 'syntax'//
filled ur kidneys wid 'exlax', got burned now u look like a blunt on a "mic"//**
i kilt this kat/

ALRIGHT!

[AzNbReAkA]

first off, the day you see me handlin a gun is the day you beat me, but shit i never front//
not like me at all, not perfromin crazy ass stuntz//
yea, i'm talkin bout you with your hat that says dunce//
cuz every line you spit, showz ur that ur intelligence is none//
when ur still thinkin in ur head, this shitz just begun, damn man, this shitz already done//
i know, ruinz ur fun...since you already know i wun//
so why go further on?.. when your still too young//
wait a while, then try ta test my style, cuz remember...itz classed x-files*//
yes, while u up ur skillz in the art of typin wild, i'm freestylin here in the wildz//
yes, i'm talkin bout the real shit, not the shit you do like this, yea, your weakass prewrits//
itz not ur fit if you wanna be an emcee, cuz gettin use to this, will give you fitz//
when it comes to the reality, the vitality when u get stuck when rhymin with it//
not ur game, go back to the french quarter and break for money as a livin**//
cuz all that comes from my mouth unlike yours, goes on the computer screen potentialy driven

*in our first battle, i said my style was classed x-files, lol, corny, but it was jus bringin some shit from our past battle
**he livez in new orleanz, and if i'm not mistaken, therez bboyz there who make money on the streetz and shit

[Mode]

zodiak 'stylez' - 1st - i couldn't find your flow, i believe you could prob flow to it, but your lay out, nah don't like it. ok punches, some didn't make sense. good to see you using new techniques though, sorry about being harsh, but i've seen heaps better from you..

- .....this fag is straight// - ???

2nd - much better than your first, flowed better, with better punches also, picked it up.

i filled ur ass wid so much nut cum started comon from ur sweat glands//
ur ass turned yello and u aint even from japan// - good, but japs aint yellow, thats chinese.

I kill this azn wid words he cant say//
in multiple synapses, disable 'is vertabrae//
ima kill u wid verbal improper misuse//
every time i spit web dictionary* sues me for verbal abuse//

ur mouth is an atm and my dick is the card//
like Enron statements, one hit and ur ass gets discharged//

Aznbreaker - 1st - ok flow, not many punches. seen better from you also.

losin ALL ur battles, u finally decided not to put ut emcee record in ur sig, please believe//
itz somethin you will never achieve, yes, you, tryin ta be just like me//

2nd - picked up flow a little, punches were a little better.

yes, i'm talkin bout the real shit, not the shit you do like this, yea, your weakass prewrits//

in the end, it was a close battle, i know you both could've picked it up more than you's did. my vote has to go to Zodiak 'Stylez' on account of his second verse. was even all the way through, but zodiaks 2nd had more punches than azn's second.

peace. keep elevating.

[Zodiak Stizo]

.....this fag is straight




the dote [...] was because i would indent, but when i sent it the site would not read it. Just to emphazsize there is that pause:

aint no doubt about it/ this fag is straight//


how the line would look, but some ppl would ignore the [/] and read it as one line wid no pauses. I have always had trouble wid ppl doin that

[The Hungry Wolf]

mode was pointing out that "this fag is straight" is a paradox. cause if you're straight, you're heterosexual, not homosexual. he wasn't talkin about how your flow was there.

[Zodiak Stizo]

that was supposed to b a joke. I kno fag means gay, but i was not bout to use nigga, jigga,...mc. but yeah. aight

[Zodiak Stizo]

uppin for votes

[Reflexion]

Zodiak - Majorly choppy and played played played, seems like u drop the same stuff everytime.. I'd just work on some more original stuff and test it out if i was u.. seemed to be verbal violence or soemthing in the first and second verse.. man just some really wack shit ya throwing out, just get some practice man

i filled ur ass wid so much nut cum started comon from ur sweat glands//
ur ass turned yello and u aint even from japan//

man WTF.. fucked up shiot

Azn - Pretty stretched and verse had me saying like 'wtf'.. just confusing and needs some major rearrangement and rewording and shit for both verses.. both verses had some confusing shit and just badly worded..


= overall, no offense to people, this was a wack ass battle. Some times ya just have to get cut up to get better, but u guys need to up ya skill someway cuz it was just all wackness dudes

hope y'all can elivate

vote- Azn for being slightly less wack

peace all

[Zodiak Stizo]

mmmmmmm


uppin for more votes i guess. Forgot bout this battle

[Zeke1]

Whoa!....

Originally posted by !nfinitE_

= overall, no offense to people, this was a wack ass battle. Some times ya just have to get cut up to get better, but u guys need to up ya skill someway cuz it was just all wackness dudes

yea..i agree 100%.....i haven't voted or read any battles in a while, and i hope this isn't how all the battles are going.....this was horribly weak....if you two were on stage you'd both get laughed off...and ya'll have been at this for a minute, so you shouldn't be droppin shit as shitty as this shit...but w/e

Zodiak - i kind of understand you're flow...KIND OF....but you have some many lines that are like "wtf is he saying"....

aint no doubt about it/ this fag is straight//
cuz all he do is/ is sit home n masturbate//
....maybe to you this makes sense.....but to any other person...this punch makes NO FUCKING SENSE AT ALL!!

this kat so stupid he as smart as tree//
only time u hot iz when u got a bad pee//
.....what???

there are way to many dumb confusing corney lines in that verse.....you're second verse was better, i could flow with it mostly and the majority of the punches were played, but some were ok

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Azn - haven't seen you around for a while, not sure if you've been writing or what, but both verses in my opinion were exactly like each other.....streched lines, bad rhyme scheme, not much flow....first verse was better the flow was decent in the middle....but you need to work on punches....you had one good personal but you worded it all fucked up.....maybe if you write the verse out first, then read through it and see if these lines sound dumb to you....

in the wildcard race ur voting spree was on, but not ur emcee spree//
losin ALL ur battles, u finally decided not to put ut emcee record in ur sig, please believe//
........see, you were going somewhere good, but the wording and rhyme scheme fucked it up....just work on stuff like that and inner rhymes, cuz you strecth your lines way to much

vote - i'm gonna have to agree with Inf again on this one....really weak battle guys....but i'm giving it to Azn cuz he was least wack....i've seen better Zodiak....keep elevatin

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[Subject]

ZODIAK VS AZN

ROUND ONE

ZODIAK

I think I've criticised you for similar problems in your Jumar battle, but i see some of the same things cropping up here as well.. so bare with me man. I think you're a little stuck on Verbal violence.. too much of your verse was a VV i was wondering when a punch was going to be evident.. you have to stick to the format, otherwise, even if you have better skills, i can't give you any credit for it if its not a battle rhyme. I think your flow could benefit from a bit more consistency.. stick to a similar flow all the way through (rhyme structure) instead of short lines and longer cause it fucks the flow up and leaves ya wondering where you are in the flow.. I didn't see anything i liked at all man.. not hating on ya at all, but i think a bit of criticism will help ya if you take it on board. Work on dissing people more.. focus on who you're battling and keep the focus on them thru the whole battle, use punches in nearly every line instead of seldomly used.

AZN

Dunno man. You had one or two punches but they weren't executed well so they fell short. Be more to the point and make them hurt. For the whole verse it sounded like you were giving him friendly advice on how to battle.. it was too soft.

ROUND TWO

ZODIAK

Big improvement. Too much gay shit... i've told you this before.. it makes you look gay as fuck saying you are gonna cum in his arse and have him suckin you off.. it's fuckin suspect man. Steer clear of that shit, or you'll make yourself an easy victim for script-flipping. Your flow was way better, but still just adequate cause you fell off a few times with lines that don't have a rhyming partner.

"every time i spit web dictionary* sues me for verbal abuse//"
-bloody oath it does.. lol. Don't use concepts that you don't have a clear understanding of... if i remember correctly, a synapse is where two neurons are connected to each other and where electrical impulses are transferred from one to the other, and where chemicals are released/have an effect. So in your verse, it doesn't make any sense to use Synapse at all...

AZN

Better punches, flow was better.. no real criticisms its just way too soft and you don't bring anything new at all.

Vote...
I don't really want to give a winner here.. i could flip for it. okay.. i'm giving it to Azn cause he didn't have sick gay shit and stuck to the format better... and was more direct, with more personals, flipping.