[Subject]

Usual rules apply :
2 verses
Deadlines - sensible timeframe

I'm dropping first.

subject

Voting rules..
- over 50 posts in this forum (with the majority of your posts here)
- have to understand the battle..
- unsure about a line.. get it clarified by pm before voting
- if you think your voting will be compromised by knowing either one of us.. don't vote

My vote -mode vs. kuss

[Subject]

I bet you were waiting for me to drop behind your monitor, nervous
Pulse racing up and down like your fist to to curb your fiendish urges *
To see my verses you’d have to mop that screen first it ain’t the cleanest surface
But wait, cause it’ll be smeared worse from tear bursts cause I got the meanest purpose
A free diss-service – leave you murdered and all I did was speak with these demon’s curses
I’m pleased by hearses.. as a victim you’re perfect, you couldn’t step to me like a minefield survivor **
While you’ll never hear praise like a deaf preacher in a convent full of atheist mute revilers ***
A loose-reciter keeping writtens on hand so he’s always prepared like McGuyver
I can’t be tigher like the noose garotting his throat while he dangles and chokes
Razzle’s already mangled his hopes cause I can already predict what he wrote
He’ll have more fruity punches than beverages at luncheons and fights at fag functions
Men-tall-y stunted like midget assumptions
and stock cars jumping people crippled by compaction devices in dungeons
Running cause his case is weak like broken attaches and prosecutors without a single witness
This man’s sickness needs extensive fixing as it only exists in his head like a hypochondriac’s failing fitness
-see the likeness? And when I’m done I’ll reminisce of the type-of-fun-you-lacked
cause you only tightest-on-the-tracks like your arm where the rubber thong was wrapped ****

-subject-


EDITed to include
Explanations:

* masturbating
** minefield survivors usually lose their legs
*** won't hear praise the preachers deaf, the followers don't believe in a religion and abuse his religion but are mute
attache - (attache case) suitcase
hypochondriacs - believe they're sick when they're not
**** tracks from needle insertion points

this guy'll be lieing in shock when i surprise him with shots flying out the side of my glock
sub's denying and trying to stop lying about buying his drops... by riding my cock...

waiting?? please... this baby needs to upgrade his frees
sub's been gassed up till his ass blasts up like inflated g's
afraid of me? of course, bitch. my rap's straight toppin dudes
even my fillers are killer. only way you'd be iller is if i swapped with you
rockin jewels, trippin on my wickedness, when razz talk, you'd better listen, bitch
what's that shit in ya av? sub's a goth, spittin that icky sick n' twisted shit
slit ya wrists, soon you'll see me do the deed of shootin two or three rounds through this g
cuz usually subject would refuse to free with dudes like you n' me... cuz he'd lose brutally.
screw the beat, i'll massacre you by fighting first... punch, kick, sub's whole type is worse
ya 21, man.. start makin punches, and stop droppin ya damn cypher verse.
razz'll sentence g's to spend ten to twenty three years in a penitentiary
some advice, sub... if ya gonna diss me... at least try n' mention me. (no personals)

uppin

[Subject]

Razzle’s convinced me a prolonged flu-season isn’t a fallacy for this clone opponent
I’ll even use his hankerchief and prospects in this battle as an an-allergy..he alone’s-blown-it

This battle.. I’ll own it, cause like camp x-ray I can smell this Afghan’s terror in his posting(1)
He’s interstellar with his boasting I’ll kill him cause he spent most of his last verse gloating..
He’s still toting a baby’s bon-net for head-wear this child’s got a sixth sense…he’s already dead-scared
He’s just lead-teared, his clothes thread-bare.. come on, fairs fair
this infant doesn’t know anything about hip hop… bet he rocks doo-rags without any head-hair! (2)
Don’t say I don’t care.. I’m feeling generous.. I’ll even shell out for his clothing like a Full Metal Jacket(3)
This bitch is packin it..? this prankster lies.. I ain’t havin it.. his demise?
..a text-gangsta disguise, with the remarkable feat of firing shots from outta his glock’s sides!
Still he confides, that he’s left newbies confused too (4)
.. razz, didn’t you know bullets spew thru the muzzle dude?
It’s true.. you’re making me in-telling-gents you’re unfamiliar with the drill I know’s gunna kill ya
Razzes dilly? He pops nil glocks cause he’s like Danny Devito in Army Intelligence.. short on military skills(5)
Must be poppin pills like mar ..a contest? bitch please, I’m doper than a customs seize
Razz is pleased paying prostitutes Primetime fees, I guess that’s why he can’t pop tarts(6) with his frees
I’m celebrity.. he’s too scared to give out personals he’s like a gossip columnist slash paparazzi(7)
I don’t need security like this parrappa-need while he keeps his naiive steeze safe behind his riot shield
Tell you what’s real.. reason I ain’t battled before’s cause I’m a 5star general without a battlefield
Razz’s zeal is missing it seems..i ain’t rankling.. he’s the sole queen in this battle like Aretha Franklin(8)
I don’t rank him cause I’m Sub, he was plain sailing in front of his piers.. and got sunk
..intoxicated after two beers.. jeez.. his punches had no spirit but he’s still punch drunk
No monk.. Razz’s religion couldn’t be christian .. this man thinks an absolution is an abswing system
His arrogant bitchin should cease instead I mean isn’t this the vet that got offended…in the B.S. thread?(9)
feel his pain? he’s a few cards short of a full deck.. and such a victim of stress from the voting system
Inflicting boredom.. after his disses every voter is either yawnin, snorin or clawin to stay awake
they’re catching more Z’s than the 4 in his alias’ name sake

Left him for dead… yeah I’ve shattered RD and this thread so there isn’t any need for a sequel
see .. Rah’s got sugar coated rhymes - a flawed sub-stitute so he’ll never be my EQUAL

Subject

(1)camp xray is a terrorist detention centre.. filled with mostly Afghans
(2)doo rags are properly used for keeping plaits tight...etc.
(3)FMJ's are shell casings
(4)MODE battle.. razz was saying noboby but vets understood rhyming
(5)In the movie Army Intell. danny devito was playing a literature teacher as a civilian with no military training
(6)Razz lost to Pop Tart.. a female emcee
(7)He uses personals but is too scared to list his own.. canada was the only thing personal he's ever posted yet i've been open about my views
(8)Aretha franklin was a famous soul singer - the queen of soul
(9)Razz was offended by mode bringing up his religion in a joke... he's a Muslim

blow ya top to pieces when my glock releases shots till ya life stops and freezes
when my talkin ceises, you'll feel hurt, but before my real verse drops, you just got defeated.
oops, now ya shot's depleated, this pansy gets antsy with vets cuz he doesn't wanna get clowned
sub, better step down before my best sounds get round to let you get crowned as a let down.
shit.. ya rep's drowned, now let's play. sub's verse is so long, half is on the next page.
n' how ya gon' say my text's played when all ya fuckin punches have to be ex-plained...
my tech sprays'll leave this g hurt. now, pen... please work as we give sub some ceisures
scary how ya know shit about me... look, i've got a damn stalker, who's done his research!!
rehearse ya weak verse and i'll speak words that release bursts to make sure you bleed first
whoah, don't get excited subject. stop hiding... this is only my pre-verse!

let me explain how this dame strays from any sane traces of hip-hop
just stop, look at his style... he's gone tick tock like alfred hitchcock.
bitch, ya fists drop, n' i ain't done saying. well, it gon' be a fun day...
shit, mut be a miscalculation... it took you two bars to diss one phrase.
you betta duck when i'm spraying, and that's just when i'm playing
*clap clap* you got some words on the page... but what the FUCK are you saying??
rap rejected you, you ain't blessed to do hip hop in any four ways.
and you'd think you got wiser with time... but not in your case.
you claim you can contain this, but in reality, ya skills are hanous.
n' how you say you're tighter.. when ya lines are s t r e t c h e d like ya anus.
ya ain't heavy. ya spittin feathers, distorted like twisted weather.
this bitch saw what he was up againsts.. and put all his pre-writs together.
read between the lines, punk... why is reality what you leave behind?
"well i put random shit into my verse and claim i 'speak my mind'..."
yeah, we've noticed sub...


oh, and by the way... the movie isn't Army Intell... it's Renessaince Man. dummy.


EDIT: changed hip=hop to hip-hop.

[Mrboogie23]

good battle I liked some shit up in here..


RD 1-


subject: good flow, had some good punches in there. would of liked to see some more personals. good wordplay, nice flow.

what I liked

I bet you were waiting for me to drop behind your monitor, nervous
Pulse racing up and down like your fist to to curb your fiendish urges *
To see my verses you’d have to mop that screen first it ain’t the cleanest surface
But wait, cause it’ll be smeared worse from tear bursts cause I got the meanest purpose
A free diss-service – leave you murdered and all I did was speak with these demon’s curses

nice flow here.. liked it all.


RD: dope flow, dope wordplay. like alot of the punches in here.

razz'll sentence g's to spend ten to twenty three years in a penitentiary
some advice, sub... if ya gonna diss me... at least try n' mention me.

dope closer!!!!!


RD 2


Subject: decent flow. seemed like some of the lines were mad long. seemed forced. some good punches tho


RD: good flow, punches were nice. good wordplay.


overall it was a good battle, I'm gonna go with Razzle, seemed to have better flow to me. some of the lines in subjects second verse seemed stretched. especially the one about the glock.

vote for
Razzle Dazzle

[intense]

aight, nice battle.. ima have to break this ish down.. i had to read subjects verses a couple of times cause theyre so complex..

FIRST ROUND
Subject: dope wordplay, flow was tight but i had to read it twice to pick up on it, lack of personals, hella complex spit..

I bet you were waiting for me to drop behind your monitor, nervous
Pulse racing up and down like your fist to to curb your fiendish urges *
To see my verses you’d have to mop that screen first it ain’t the cleanest surface
But wait, cause it’ll be smeared worse from tear bursts cause I got the meanest purpose
^^ nice flow

A free diss-service – leave you murdered and all I did was speak with these demon’s curses
I’m pleased by hearses.. as a victim you’re perfect, you couldn’t step to me like a minefield survivor **
^^aight worplay

While you’ll never hear praise like a deaf preacher in a convent full of atheist mute revilers ***
A loose-reciter keeping writtens on hand so he’s always prepared like McGuyver
^^hahaha, McGuyver line made me laugh, nice wordplay on both

I can’t be tigher like the noose garotting his throat while he dangles and chokes
Razzle’s already mangled his hopes cause I can already predict what he wrote
He’ll have more fruity punches than beverages at luncheons and fights at fag functions
Men-tall-y stunted like midget assumptions
and stock cars jumping people crippled by compaction devices in dungeons
^^dope wordplay, decent personal

Running cause his case is weak like broken attaches and prosecutors without a single witness
This man’s sickness needs extensive fixing as it only exists in his head like a hypochondriac’s failing fitness
-see the likeness? And when I’m done I’ll reminisce of the type-of-fun-you-lacked
cause you only tightest-on-the-tracks like your arm where the rubber thong was wrapped ****
^^ill finisher, tho concepts not entirely original

RAZZLE: dope flow, some dope punches, i couldnt see any wordplay, a few personals..

this guy'll be lieing in shock when i surprise him with shots flying out the side of my glock
sub's denying and trying to stop lying about buying his drops... by riding my cock...
^^side of glock?.. lol.. second line played but flowed well..

waiting?? please... this baby needs to upgrade his frees
sub's been gassed up till his ass blasts up like inflated g's
^^hmmm.. decent punch..

afraid of me? of course, bitch. my rap's straight toppin dudes
even my fillers are killer. only way you'd be iller is if i swapped with you
^^played bite line, first lines aight

rockin jewels, trippin on my wickedness, when razz talk, you'd better listen, bitch
what's that shit in ya av? sub's a goth, spittin that icky sick n' twisted shit
^^first line tight, the pic in the av is someone breaking baseball bats(kicking), punch was aight tho

slit ya wrists, soon you'll see me do the deed of shootin two or three rounds through this g
cuz usually subject would refuse to free with dudes like you n' me... cuz he'd lose brutally.
^^nice, very good flow an punch

screw the beat, i'll massacre you by fighting first... punch, kick, sub's whole type is worse
ya 21, man.. start makin punches, and stop droppin ya damn cypher verse.
^^dope punch

razz'll sentence g's to spend ten to twenty three years in a penitentiary
some advice, sub... if ya gonna diss me... at least try n' mention me. (no personals)
^^ dope finisher

Subject takes wordplay, Razzle has better flow and punches
__________________________________________________ __

ROUND TWO

Subject: Came back well, hella personals, dope wordplay an punches..

Razzle’s convinced me a prolonged flu-season isn’t a fallacy for this clone opponent
I’ll even use his hankerchief and prospects in this battle as an an-allergy..he alone’s-blown-it
^^hahaha, dope wordplay.. double meanings, nice punch..

This battle.. I’ll own it, cause like camp x-ray I can smell this Afghan’s terror in his posting(1)
He’s interstellar with his boasting I’ll kill him cause he spent most of his last verse gloating..
^^ill flow, decent personal

He’s still toting a baby’s bon-net for head-wear this child’s got a sixth sense…he’s already dead-scared
He’s just lead-teared, his clothes thread-bare.. come on, fairs fair
this infant doesn’t know anything about hip hop… bet he rocks doo-rags without any head-hair! (2)
^lol, made me laugh..

Don’t say I don’t care.. I’m feeling generous.. I’ll even shell out for his clothing like a Full Metal Jacket(3)
This bitch is packin it..? this prankster lies.. I ain’t havin it.. his demise?
..a text-gangsta disguise, with the remarkable feat of firing shots from outta his glock’s sides!
Still he confides, that he’s left newbies confused too (4)
.. razz, didn’t you know bullets spew thru the muzzle dude?
^^nice flip of razzles line, prob a little strung out, flows well through it..

It’s true.. you’re making me in-telling-gents you’re unfamiliar with the drill I know’s gunna kill ya
Razzes dilly? He pops nil glocks cause he’s like Danny Devito in Army Intelligence.. short on military skills(5)
^^hahaha, good..

Must be poppin pills like mar ..a contest? bitch please, I’m doper than a customs seize
Razz is pleased paying prostitutes Primetime fees, I guess that’s why he can’t pop tarts(6) with his frees
^^nice personal

I’m celebrity.. he’s too scared to give out personals he’s like a gossip columnist slash paparazzi(7)
I don’t need security like this parrappa-need while he keeps his naiive steeze safe behind his riot shield
Tell you what’s real.. reason I ain’t battled before’s cause I’m a 5star general without a battlefield
^^nice wordplay and flip on razz..

Razz’s zeal is missing it seems..i ain’t rankling.. he’s the sole queen in this battle like Aretha Franklin(8)
I don’t rank him cause I’m Sub, he was plain sailing in front of his piers.. and got sunk
..intoxicated after two beers.. jeez.. his punches had no spirit but he’s still punch drunk
^^dope wordplay, nice punches..

No monk.. Razz’s religion couldn’t be christian .. this man thinks an absolution is an abswing system
^^ROFL.. fuckin funny shit..

His arrogant bitchin should cease instead I mean isn’t this the vet that got offended…in the B.S. thread?(9)
^^good punch an personal, but doesnt rhyme with previous line..

feel his pain? he’s a few cards short of a full deck.. and such a victim of stress from the voting system
Inflicting boredom.. after his disses every voter is either yawnin, snorin or clawin to stay awake
they’re catching more Z’s than the 4 in his alias’ name sake
^^hahaha, nice personal/wordplay

Left him for dead… yeah I’ve shattered RD and this thread so there isn’t any need for a sequel
see .. Rah’s got sugar coated rhymes - a flawed sub-stitute so he’ll never be my EQUAL
^^dope finisher, awesome flow and wordplay


RAZZLE: dope flow, was off the hook, nice punches and personals

blow ya top to pieces when my glock releases shots till ya life stops and freezes
when my talkin ceises, you'll feel hurt, but before my real verse drops, you just got defeated.
^^insane flow

oops, now ya shot's depleated, this pansy gets antsy with vets cuz he doesn't wanna get clowned
sub, better step down before my best sounds get round to let you get crowned as a let down.
^^decent punch, flow again tight
shit.. ya rep's drowned, now let's play. sub's verse is so long, half is on the next page.
n' how ya gon' say my text's played when all ya fuckin punches have to be ex-plained...
^^haha, nice flip..

my tech sprays'll leave this g hurt. now, pen... please work as we give sub some ceisures
scary how ya know shit about me... look, i've got a damn stalker, who's done his research!!
^^dope punch

rehearse ya weak verse and i'll speak words that release bursts to make sure you bleed first
whoah, don't get excited subject. stop hiding... this is only my pre-verse!
^^flow good..

let me explain how this dame strays from any sane traces of hip-hop
just stop, look at his style... he's gone tick tock like alfred hitchcock
^^hah, nice

bitch, ya fists drop, n' i ain't done saying. well, it gon' be a fun day...
shit, mut be a miscalculation... it took you two bars to diss one phrase.
^^average punch..

you betta duck when i'm spraying, and that's just when i'm playing
*clap clap* you got some words on the page... but what the FUCK are you saying??
^^nice, firing is getting a little played in your verse

rap rejected you, you ain't blessed to do hip hop in any four ways.
and you'd think you got wiser with time... but not in your case.
^^good

you claim you can contain this, but in reality, ya skills are hanous.
n' how you say you're tighter.. when ya lines are s t r e t c h e d like ya anus.
^^hahaha, nice

ya ain't heavy. ya spittin feathers, distorted like twisted weather.
this bitch saw what he was up againsts.. and put all his pre-writs together.
read between the lines, punk... why is reality what you leave behind?
"well i put random shit into my verse and claim i 'speak my mind'..."
^^aight finisher..

dope second verses.. subject takes the punches, wordplay an personals, razz deff takes flow..

VOTE
Ima have to go with SUBJECT... tho razz took the first verse, i didnt feel he could compete with subs second.. hella nice drops from both of you tho... mad props and respect..

NOTE: felt i had to break this battle down.. sorry bout length..
and razz... it is army intelligence.. it was named different things in different countries.... dummy

[Mode]

Subject - 1st - nice flow, real good wordplay, some good punches. some bars were a little stretched.

bet you were waiting for me to drop behind your monitor, nervous
Pulse racing up and down like your fist to to curb your fiendish urges *
To see my verses you’d have to mop that screen first it ain’t the cleanest surface
But wait, cause it’ll be smeared worse from tear bursts cause I got the meanest purpose
A free diss-service – leave you murdered and all I did was speak with these demon’s curses

I’m pleased by hearses.. as a victim you’re perfect, you couldn’t step to me like a minefield survivor **
While you’ll never hear praise like a deaf preacher in a convent full of atheist mute revilers ***
A loose-reciter keeping writtens on hand so he’s always prepared like McGuyver

2nd - picked it up real nice here. flow was good, fell off at times 'cos of stretched bars. some tight punches (personals) and nice wordplay.

Razzle’s convinced me a prolonged flu-season isn’t a fallacy for this clone opponent
I’ll even use his hankerchief and prospects in this battle as an an-allergy..he alone’s-blown-it - nice opener

I don’t need security like this parrappa-need while he keeps his naiive steeze safe behind his riot shield
Tell you what’s real.. reason I ain’t battled before’s cause I’m a 5star general without a battlefield - kinda stretched, could'a made it flow better.

Inflicting boredom.. after his disses every voter is either yawnin, snorin or clawin to stay awake
they’re catching more Z’s than the 4 in his alias’ name sake - nice play on his name.

Razzle Dazzle - 1st - tight flow, nice punches, some good wordplay.

screw the beat, i'll massacre you by fighting first... punch, kick, sub's whole type is worse
ya 21, man.. start makin punches, and stop droppin ya damn cypher verse.

razz'll sentence g's to spend ten to twenty three years in a penitentiary
some advice, sub... if ya gonna diss me... at least try n' mention me.

2nd - flow was off the chain, dope punches. some of your lines getting a bit played though (guns an shit).

blow ya top to pieces when my glock releases shots till ya life stops and freezes
when my talkin ceises, you'll feel hurt, but before my real verse drops, you just got defeated.
oops, now ya shot's depleated, this pansy gets antsy with vets cuz he doesn't wanna get clowned
sub, better step down before my best sounds get round to let you get crowned as a let down.
shit.. ya rep's drowned, now let's play. sub's verse is so long, half is on the next page.
n' how ya gon' say my text's played when all ya fuckin punches have to be ex-plained...
my tech sprays'll leave this g hurt. now, pen... please work as we give sub some ceisures
scary how ya know shit about me... look, i've got a damn stalker, who's done his research!!
rehearse ya weak verse and i'll speak words that release bursts to make sure you bleed first
whoah, don't get excited subject. stop hiding... this is only my pre-verse! - loved this whole part.

on the whole, after reading subjects second verse i thought maybe he'd take this battle, but razz came back with a hella tight verse. so my vote has to go to Razzle Dazzle on account of punches and flow. subject was all over this shit with wordplay though.

peace.

[Subject]

Razz.. where's ya vote man.. it is army intelligence by the way

edit: last vote murda vs. zen

and when i saw the movie, it was called renessaince man... musta changed it..

anyway, good battle sub.

bump

[Reflexion]

rd 1

subject - your shit seemed stetched to me at some points no matter which way i look at it but it generally had alright flow.. the inners and structure was nice and it would have been better if there were a bit harder punches.. overall a pretty good verse and i liked the structure and complexity but could have been harder..

Razzle - good flow, seemed to be what subject was aiming at but couldn't quite get down, some good punches and overall a pretty nice verse.

ya 21, man.. start makin punches, and stop droppin ya damn cypher verse.
razz'll sentence g's to spend ten to twenty three years in a penitentiary
some advice, sub... if ya gonna diss me... at least try n' mention me.

the last part owned it up i think

rd 2

Subject - Some better content I'm seeing here but it needed some mad power wording I think, better punches and the structure was nice styll, pretty nice verse overall

Razzle’s convinced me a prolonged flu-season isn’t a fallacy for this clone opponent
I’ll even use his hankerchief and prospects in this battle as an an-allergy..he alone’s-blown-it

..a text-gangsta disguise, with the remarkable feat of firing shots from outta his glock’s sides!

Razz’s zeal is missing it seems..i ain’t rankling.. he’s the sole queen in this battle like Aretha Franklin(8)

Inflicting boredom.. after his disses every voter is either yawnin, snorin or clawin to stay awake
they’re catching more Z’s than the 4 in his alias’ name sake

i thought it was a tight closer too, gj

Razzle - better verse all around, the flow was still pretty nice and the punches were ill, in contrast u were a lot more concise than subject and well rounded

shit.. ya rep's drowned, now let's play. sub's verse is so long, half is on the next page.
n' how ya gon' say my text's played when all ya fuckin punches have to be ex-plained...

rehearse ya weak verse and i'll speak words that release bursts to make sure you bleed first
whoah, don't get excited subject. stop hiding... this is only my pre-verse!

bitch, ya fists drop, n' i ain't done saying. well, it gon' be a fun day...
shit, mut be a miscalculation... it took you two bars to diss one phrase.

ya ain't heavy. ya spittin feathers, distorted like twisted weather.
this bitch saw what he was up againsts.. and put all his pre-writs together.

ahah all this shit was pretty dope.


= overall i think both of ya did a good job but Razzle brought it a lot more concise and well rounded with better punches and flow also, but ya did pretty good sub.

vote= Razzle

peace

[Zeke1]

ill battle.....best one i read in a minute!


Sub - you got some complex shit, i see you're straying from the norm, that's hot.....you're wordplay is really dope, you're first verse (like mostly everyone said) no personals, good punches and sweet flow, specially the first three lines, i like that rhyme scheme.......second verse....better personals and your wordplay was like "WHAT!", but i felt since you concentrated on wordplay it fucked your flow up a little, and it took you more words then it should have to get to the punchline.....that made it streched....good job flipping shit too
overall 8.5/10


RazzleDazzle - hot shit bro.....flow is so sick like usual, first verse was short but to the point, dopest closer i've read in a long time....i know you might be ganster or w/e but the gun talk is getting played, that's the only thing i didn't like...and dude, you can't shoot out the side of a glock, i'm sure you ment holding the glock sideways and bustin (i've tried shooting a .22 like that.....takes alot of practice) but w/e......besides that i couldn't find aything i didn't like.....not much wordplay, but you flipped shit, hit hard, and used some nice personals.....specially the closer in the second verse....made me do one of those "OOOoohhh...that hurt!"
overall 9.5/10

vote-so i give it to Razzle Dazzle for better punches, flow....but sub deffinately took it on the wordplay...but that's all that stood out, smart wordplay, but i felt it hurt the flow and punches....mad respect to both ya'll though...dope battle

1

[B-Girl BaLi]

.. im hella late....

Sub- God dannnnnggg.... i never really read ya shit b4 ... but wow... your flow was on point for the most part, word play killed it, punches were nice an hard.. great showing over all you may want to work on ya flow a lil but it was still good...

8 outta 10

razz- ya shit felt like kindergarden rhymes next to subs deep wordplay and punches... you focused too much on gunplay... and multis an didnt let it just flow.... your flow was decent but elementry and very choppy at points... just elevate

6 outta 10....



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SUBJECT