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Battle: FlawlessSkillz VS MODE - 09-27-2003, 04:06 PM

Flawless VS MODE

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2 verses

MODE you drop first ya bitch

Peace




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09-27-2003, 06:07 PM

damn man, ya 'skills' are 'flawed', i pack beef an this kat brings lentils,
fucking retard, here let mode teach you the funduhmentals,

got my name in capitals, 'cos to this game i'm a giant,
i'm inclined to be violent, this fag might drop hot spits but know, i'm his suppliant,
can't spit if there aint shit ta feed off can't free unless theres a script ta read off,
my spits sick bite my verse an ya teeth rot, say you got hard punches, but shit they seem soft,
you don't really wanna fuck with me, i rush this G an bust ya knees,
i breathe diseased, ya free's deceased i kill ya flow as my speeds increased,
tryin ta flow with mode this hoe'll explode, ya rhymes blow an you know,
go an borrow a flow, damn bro, couldn't come phat usin butter an dough,
illiterate bitch how can we battle if ya can't use a pen an a pad,
this wigga's a faker, damn he even got em on his av..

peace, keep it short, your up bro.




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yo
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yo - 09-28-2003, 01:41 PM

Hey I'm kinda busy with homework and junk..cuz its finals week...Ill drop on MONDAY aight?....thanks
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10-01-2003, 06:17 AM

s'cool bro, just bumpin to keep it near the top.
Sorry it took me so long
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Sorry it took me so long - 10-03-2003, 03:36 PM

Like the wind..Im'a breeze thru this battle..Ill be cruisn/
Teach me Shit??..ya right the funduhmentals of losin'/

Supplaint?..be appliant ya need new shit..cuz all ur stuff is the same/
Strap on a vest,cuz im packin more glocks than ScarFace,Bustin' CAPS in your name/
Don't need scripts to spit or read...cuz i come more harder than a "beat off"/
The only way you can u win.. is if I post Razzles verse here for you to "read off"/
Don't forgoet to tee-off,,,wait I think your missin' the point/
Expectin to win this shit whan ya challenged..shit ya must have been smokin' a joint/
butter, dough, bread?..damn when ya write this, ya must have been hungry/
Take ya bitch ass out like a rug,,and beat this fat ass bitch like i'm doing the laundry/
pack this shit up..leave ya cold, and bold, and Breezy/
Turn on this game, check the optons....damn this MODE must have been set to easy/

well there my verse...back to skool work..peace all
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10-04-2003, 09:56 PM

FlawlessSkills? damn it's how you describe me,
can't defeat me on easy? must shatter ya pride G..

bitch quit frontin an spit somthin, where'd you bite ya lines, a shit luncheon?
i rip punches, premature fag you 'come hard' but 'grip nothin',
fucking girl, why am i servin ya.. when you the one doin my dishes an laundry,
ya shit is so corny, ya 'beat off' to my text, this bitch is so horny,
beat mode? man you need some copperfield shit, i' droppin ill spits,
lucky your a pussy.. 'cos i stop an kill dicks, you pack more 'whack' punches than kung foo flicks,
you need to go back to basics, dumb fuck, your wack just face it,
if you want to stand a chance at winning, you'd copy my verse.. an paste it,
on you, my skills are wasted, shit, your a fuckin disgrace kid,
i know your dope, thats why i smoked you,
your eatin emcee's daily, should've known against mode you'd choke dude..

peace. your up bro.
aight
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aight - 10-04-2003, 10:50 PM

Ya mouth and words I supress..I lay my shit down smoother than Caress..Play around with this Dogg?..fuck it.. I'll rape and Molest/


I pack the heat..that blast ya feet..Put more holes in ya then Soccer Kleets/
Im real with my words...While u got more fake shit in ya than "doggie Treats"/
No repeats..I crack ya back..rip ya track..Making ya "blue and Black"/
This fool can't rhyme on time..thats why he gots more Lyrical "beats"..than a Heart attack/***
Go ahead copperfield pull ya tircks..cuz I pack my punches and kicks..blast my glock in your face..untill you hear the clicks/
Nigga..ill even smoke ya crew..ya aint got no clue..got more rhymes that you can cook'n' brew/
Smoking dope?...dont ya know that shit kills ya too?/***
No need to flip tha scripts..ya practicall hurt ya self/
Yo verse came weak and short this time..like one of Santa's Elfs/

***-..no heart beats in a heart attack
***-He says im dope and he smoked me..so i flipped it

Peace,,,,,,,vote NOW

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10-04-2003, 11:53 PM

average battle..

FIRST ROUND
MODE - hmm... battle verses always a little too similar for my liking... flow good as always.. punches average.. lack of real wordplay..

damn man, ya 'skills' are 'flawed', i pack beef an this kat brings lentils,
fucking retard, here let mode teach you the funduhmentals,
^^nice opener..

i breathe diseased, ya free's deceased i kill ya flow as my speeds increased,
^^liked it...

FLAWLESS- came harder than i suspected, flow was good, felt a lil off in some places.. decent personals an punches..

Teach me Shit??..ya right the funduhmentals of losin'/
^^flipped nicely

Turn on this game, check the optons....damn this MODE must have been set to easy/
^^coulda been reworded a lil better to come stronger... but nice..

ROUND 2
MODE- almost none of this verse was real original, same played punches and words used.. flow decent.. bro, take a break from battlin or somthin, cause you seem to be stuck on the same battle concepts.. you need some original shit again..

i rip punches, premature fag you 'come hard' but 'grip nothin',
^^nice

lucky your a pussy.. 'cos i stop an kill dicks, you pack more 'whack' punches than kung foo flicks,
^^first part of line is good, kung foo line part has been used.. mostly thats the only real original parts of your verse..

FLAWLESS- came weak man, seemed rushed an no thought really put into it.. attempted wordplay.. weak punches and decent flow..

Play around with this Dogg?..fuck it.. I'll rape and Molest/
^^not bad..

Nigga..ill even smoke ya crew..ya aint got no clue..got more rhymes that you can cook'n' brew/
Smoking dope?...dont ya know that shit kills ya too?/***
^^alright..


I know both you can come harder than this, MODE, ya need to rethink ya battles.. bring some original punches.. FLAWLESS, ya shit was decent in ya first verse but fell off pretty hard in the second.. yall just keep elevatin.. much respect,,,

vote: MODE cause of stronger first verse, second verses were both weak..
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more votes - 10-05-2003, 12:06 AM

thanks for voting..I always like to play with different syles..thats why my second verse is different from my first..just a different style..I dont liike to stick with the same shit,,ya know?

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10-05-2003, 07:27 PM

Mode: first verse was aight... flow's good, but punches weren't all that... i liked the opener, and the "seem soft" line was ok, kinda played, but still ok... besides that, didn't feel much.. the closer was pretty wack too... i think ya gotta try using more personals, and get more creative wit you ish, na'mean?... but it was a decent verse......

Flawless: first verse was pretty nice... flowed good and ya came some some pretty nice punches... every line except that "laundry" line was nice... plus ya opener and closer was tight... the way it should be... you def took the first round....

Mode 2nd verse: again, ya came aight... had some decent punches and some good flips... but nuttin that really caught my attention... flow's good, but it seems like tha's what u rely on.. jus droppin multis and flowin good... i think ya really need to get more creative, think outside the box... make peeps be like "dayum"... but still, it was a decent verse, and i liked the "grip nothin" line... that was pretty nice... overall ya came aight..

Flawless 2nd verse: dude, you came mad weak... seems like a totally different person than the first verse... u str8 fell off... i wasn't feelin any of ya punches... and the flow was kinda choppy a couple times... i dunno man, u jus fell off... after the first verse i thought u was gonna win, but dayum, that shit was disappointing..

Overall: Mode came alright in both verses, and consistantly average ... lol, nah, u came aight Mode... jus need to be more creative wit your punches... anyway, he def gets the 2nd round... Flawless came real nice the verse (n took that one), but str8 fell off... i mean, that last verse was jus too weak for me to give him the win... so basically, i think Mode took this battle, he was more consistent...

Vote: Mode... what happened Flawless?

peace.




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thanks for the vote - 10-05-2003, 08:00 PM

Ya i know...my second verse sucked...i was in a rush...cuz of my school work..the quarter is ending..so i got mad shit to do....so i got quick and sloppy with my second verse........thanks for being honest......you wont see one of those again..lol

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10-07-2003, 03:02 PM

votes??..we need votes
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10-09-2003, 10:26 AM

Mode: Flow? Good flow, usually, although a few of your lines're awkward to say (If you'd actually be sayin' 'em out loud, their beats'd be off of the rest of the verse.) Wordplay? Not too many man, although the 2 or so you had're nice....IE, smokin' the 'dope'. Punches? Not too bad.

Flawless: Flow? Good flow. I don't think I found any lines that're off the beat. Wordplay? Obviously you win this round of wordplay (But is it just because he barely put any? We'll never know. The battle's over.) lol Nice relations, turnarounds, and such. IE: "Play around with this Dogg?..fuck it.. I'll rape and Molest" Punches? Not too bad either.


Flow: Flawless
Wordplay: Flawless
Punches: You're both about dead even in that one IMO...Although I've never seen either of you in battle, I'll take Intense's word for it, and say you guys can come harder.


So I gotta vote for Flawless. 2.5/3.

Peace.
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