you know the deal...the usual, but no looong ass verses.
i'll go first..

oh no, this homo's gon say i got no flow, when his own show goes so slow.
tryin' a be mod with no dough? whoah, ho... might as well just go home, ya no show...

mode, flow? please.. i'll explode holes into ya knees and ya arm, rooky'll get beat in a bar
release these 3 piece B.B's at ya species, cuz there ain't no way you're defeatin a star
razz be leavin a scar, and soon, you'll see this fag kissin my belt
i'd say that mode bit my style..... but i'd just be dissin myself.
n' that's a straight diss that ya felt, cuz with a bit verse, you're happy
no more callin him gay...cuz last time i did it, he grabbed his purse, n' slapped me
come on bitch, attack me. if ya ain't choke, i'll strangle ya next time
if ya already trippin on keystyles... how the fuck you gon' handle my best lines?
fag'll get dangled with tangled intestines, understand it? you're through.
joined MT too late, bitch... ain't battle RAH cuz ya didn't want ya ass handed to you.


plain n' simple keystyle... 6 bars
hit me back.

[Mode]

modes back to dazzle this kat i hate reading ya shit, it’s a hassle infact,
damn razzle ya wack, you’re a dickridin bitch, don’t straddle ma lap..

fuck Razzles A Homo i needn’t mention ya flow bro,
ya just proved it blows yo, i aint gon‘ hate on this fag, it’s life ya chose hoe,
ya whole rhyme schemes horrible, an to think it was borrowed to,
run ya mouth but aint followed through, ya belt? ha that shits corroded dude,
get outta the past, fuckin baby, here let mode powder ya ass,
i’m doubtin ya razz, slap this bitch with my wallet, he getting showered in cash,
this ’cunts' a ‘pussy’, spittin shit out ya ‘two lips’, i won’t diss ya av, but damn man it’s stupid,
i couldn’t join ya crew bitch, they only want wack emcee’s, but i aint an ya’ll knew this,
ya names lame, this shits fa real, i aint here to play games,
get back ta school an quit rappin, you should stick to beyblades..

peace, your up.

razz'll spray clips to this gay bitch's anus till his brains split to eight bits.
bringin great spits to bake kids.. shit mode, if you're representin fakeness.... you aced it.

you'll hate this, cuz the real damage starts once the pain stops
mode trains cocks... shit kid, how u expect to gain props with the same drops?
showering punches like raindrops, thong tied, ya hopped on the wrong guy
tried to copy my rhyme scheme, but got lazy like jay-z, and made the song cry
been a long time, and ya still ain't crazy mad, so get off ya lazy ass
ya verse? a clone of mine.. start explaining that.. this ain't mode, it's baby-razz
mode's as gay as eighty fags, and twice as scared as chickens be
if i'm a pussy, that's okay.. cuz he's got no dick to stick in me
bitch's lickin me, cuz i'm all fluid, hey bitch, watch what you call stupid
how you gon' diss my av (again), when yours looks like my balls drew it?

rap? you'll fall through it, cuz ya ain't stock a punch or flow
mode likes the taste of razz, cuz he bit a line i dropped months ago (his opener)

you're up.
peace

[Mode]

RD beleive me when i say ya free's be painless, try spit from ya 'dome', but shit ya 'brainless',
ya flows aimless, ya couldn't 'step on me' if you were 'trainers'..

damn more gay shit, an you say my rhymes are played bitch,
i got this dame split, damn your original, you dropped the same spit,
this afgans a fag man, only blows up the mic strapped with C-4,
all ya shits ghost writ, this fucks never rapped before,
just look at this queer he's attakin rappin pioneers,
each time ya qoute 'RAH' ya get billed for royalties by rakim an his peers*,
if i'm a clone of yours i must be the updated model, ha,
comparing my style to yours is like a grown man to a toddler,
damn man i'm hotter, a step up on the evolutionary tree,
what faults you had i discarded to promote an elocutionary breeze,
you understandin me, to beat mode you'd have to up ya standard G,
commanding me? you can't stop my flow like i was anti-freeze,
ya schemes broken, he's beat, but razzles still gloatin,
dazzled? ya free's choakin, blaze ya last week an your av's still smokin..

*rakim calls himself 'rah'

peace. ready for votes.

let's get some votes on this...

[FlawlessSkillz]

Well I Liked this battle alot....nice shit both of yall

Razzle=Good shit nice multi's and flows

Good shit...verse 1
n' that's a straight diss that ya felt, cuz with a bit verse, you're happy
no more callin him gay...cuz last time i did it, he grabbed his purse, n' slapped me

nice one..lol

Verse 2
mode's as gay as eighty fags, and twice as scared as chickens be
if i'm a pussy, that's okay.. cuz he's got no dick to stick in me

Nice shit dogg......overall=9


MODE=Ya came Hard..nice punches..dropped kinda bad at second verse

verse 1
get outta the past, fuckin baby, here let mode powder ya ass,
i’m doubtin ya razz, slap this bitch with my wallet, he getting showered in cash,

nice flip

verse 2
Didnt like anything from ya second verse....overall=7

well this battle goes to Razzle for me..

VOTE=RAZZLE
Peace

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[Zodiak Stizo]

Razzle first Round:
tght flo, good disses. some nice punches. Here is wut i liked:

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oh no, this homo's gon say i got no flow, when his own show goes so slow.
tryin' a be mod with no dough? whoah, ho... might as well just go home, ya no show...
- tight intro

mode, flow? please.. i'll explode holes into ya knees and ya arm, rooky'll get beat in a bar
release these 3 piece B.B's at ya species, cuz there ain't no way you're defeatin a star
-nice start n diss

razz be leavin a scar, and soon, you'll see this fag kissin my belt
i'd say that mode bit my style..... but i'd just be dissin myself.
-iz like a reversal reversal from tekken

no more callin him gay...cuz last time i did it, he grabbed his purse, n' slapped me


fag'll get dangled with tangled intestines, understand it? you're through.
joined MT too late, bitch... ain't battle RAH cuz ya didn't want ya ass handed to you
-nice outro
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Mode first round:
Tgh flo also. Disses were good. some nice punches also.

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modes back to dazzle this kat i hate reading ya shit, it’s a hassle infact,
damn razzle ya wack, you’re a dickridin bitch, don’t straddle ma lap..
- good intro also

fuck Razzles A Homo i needn’t mention ya flow bro,
- nice wordplay


get outta the past, fuckin baby, here let mode powder ya ass,
i’m doubtin ya razz, slap this bitch with my wallet, he getting showered in cash,
- nice punch

this ’cunts' a ‘pussy’, spittin shit out ya ‘two lips’, i won’t diss ya av, but damn man it’s stupid,
i couldn’t join ya crew bitch, they only want wack emcee’s, but i aint an ya’ll knew this
-nice diss cuz i kno wut it means
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Razz second round:
Flo is always nice. As far as punches was better than first verse. You kind of alwas seem to drop back on him btin from u though

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razz'll spray clips to this gay bitch's anus till his brains split to eight bits.
bringin great spits to bake kids.. shit mode, if you're representin fakeness.... you aced it.
-Killla intro

you'll hate this, cuz the real damage starts once the pain stops
mode trains cocks... shit kid, how u expect to gain props with the same drops?
- nice flo n diss

showering punches like raindrops, thong tied, ya hopped on the wrong guy
tried to copy my rhyme scheme, but got lazy like jay-z, and made the song cry


been a long time, and ya still ain't crazy mad, so get off ya lazy ass
ya verse? a clone of mine.. start explaining that.. this ain't mode, it's baby-razz
- nice punch

mode's as gay as eighty fags, and twice as scared as chickens be
if i'm a pussy, that's okay.. cuz he's got no dick to stick in me
- first line kind of seemed out there. sec. line was tight

bitch's lickin me, cuz i'm all fluid, hey bitch, watch what you call stupid
how you gon' diss my av (again), when yours looks like my balls drew it?
-damn dude. nice punch
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Mode sec round:
Flo is tgh also. Disses were straight. Some parts could have been directed at him harder though.

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RD beleive me when i say ya free's be painless, try spit from ya 'dome', but shit ya 'brainless',
ya flows aimless, ya couldn't 'step on me' if you were 'trainers'..
- first line was flowin, but trainers kind of through me off at end of bar. nice intro though. I knew wut u meant


damn more gay shit, an you say my rhymes are played bitch,
i got this dame split, damn your original, you dropped the same spit
- liked the line cuz it made sense


just look at this queer he's attakin rappin pioneers,
each time ya qoute 'RAH' ya get billed for royalties by rakim an his peers*,
- nice diss

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First round you guys were def tied. Sec round razz had a few hard punches and came wid better disses. My vote goes to
Razzle Dazzle for a better 2nd rnd 2nd verse.

[The Hungry Wolf]

dope battle fellas. yall are both tight mc's. this was hard to judge cause i thought i was pretty even. yall both had tight disses. lemme break the shit down:

Razz - you're a dope mc man. i was readin your shit before i joined the site. your flow is decent man. what i liked from both rounds:

mode, flow? please.. i'll explode holes into ya knees and ya arm, rooky'll get beat in a bar
release these 3 piece B.B's at ya species, cuz there ain't no way you're defeatin a star

i'd say that mode bit my style..... but i'd just be dissin myself.

fag'll get dangled with tangled intestines, understand it? you're through.
joined MT too late, bitch... ain't battle RAH cuz ya didn't want ya ass handed to you.

razz'll spray clips to this gay bitch's anus till his brains split to eight bits.
bringin great spits to bake kids.. shit mode, if you're representin fakeness.... you aced it.

you'll hate this, cuz the real damage starts once the pain stops
mode trains cocks... shit kid, how u expect to gain props with the same drops?

mode's as gay as eighty fags, and twice as scared as chickens be
if i'm a pussy, that's okay.. cuz he's got no dick to stick in me
bitch's lickin me, cuz i'm all fluid, hey bitch, watch what you call stupid
how you gon' diss my av (again), when yours looks like my balls drew it?

nice man.


Mode - also dope. i thought you countered his punchlines well. thought you coulda cam harder with the reverses, but it was still a decent job man. what i liked from you both rounds:

modes back to dazzle this kat i hate reading ya shit, it’s a hassle infact,
damn razzle ya wack, you’re a dickridin bitch, don’t straddle ma lap..

get outta the past, fuckin baby, here let mode powder ya ass,
i’m doubtin ya razz, slap this bitch with my wallet, he getting showered in cash,
this ’cunts' a ‘pussy’, spittin shit out ya ‘two lips’, i won’t diss ya av, but damn man it’s stupid,
i couldn’t join ya crew bitch, they only want wack emcee’s, but i aint an ya’ll knew this,

RD beleive me when i say ya free's be painless, try spit from ya 'dome', but shit ya 'brainless',
ya flows aimless, ya couldn't 'step on me' if you were 'trainers'..

damn more gay shit, an you say my rhymes are played bitch,
i got this dame split, damn your original, you dropped the same spit,
this afgans a fag man, only blows up the mic strapped with C-4,
all ya shits ghost writ, this fucks never rapped before,

ya schemes broken, he's beat, but razzles still gloatin,
dazzled? ya free's choakin, blaze ya last week an your av's still smokin..

cool.

well yall, when it comes down to it, i gotta give it to mode, cause i thought he reversed razz's shit well. it was still really close though. yall keep doin what ya do. holla.

vote=Mode

[Subject]

Nice battle guys. It was an even contest all the way through but here's the breakdown..

Round 1:

RAZZLE

mode, flow? please.. i'll explode holes into ya knees and ya arm, rooky'll get beat in a bar
release these 3 piece B.B's at ya species, cuz there ain't no way you're defeatin a star
-started off really powerfully, so you set the bar high even for yourself to follow..

no more callin him gay...cuz last time i did it, he grabbed his purse, n' slapped me
-nice punch..

Problem with battling mode is biting gets brought up an awful lot, its kinda played now, but the rest was tight

MODE

modes back to dazzle this kat i hate reading ya shit, it’s a hassle infact,
damn razzle ya wack, you’re a dickridin bitch, don’t straddle ma lap.
-nice intro, no punch but tight flow

run ya mouth but aint followed through, ya belt? ha that shits corroded dude, - nice
I liked the wordplay in the pussy lines, and you flipped this well:

i’m doubtin ya razz, slap this bitch with my wallet, he getting showered in cash,

And ended strongly with this:
get back ta school an quit rappin, you should stick to beyblades
-tight finish to your first verse..
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Mode had a lot more power + quantity in his punches in the first verse, so he's up round one..

Round 2:

RAZZLE

razz'll spray clips to this gay bitch's anus till his brains split to eight bits.
bringin great spits to bake kids.. shit mode, if you're representin fakeness.... you aced it.
-fucking niceness..

if i'm a pussy, that's okay.. cuz he's got no dick to stick in me
bitch's lickin me, cuz i'm all fluid, hey bitch, watch what you call stupid
how you gon' diss my av (again), when yours looks like my balls drew it?
- this was dope..

You started off just as well as you did in your first verse, but you didn't sustain your quality throughout the verse, apart from the pussy flip of course, which you did extremely well. some of the lines were a bit played like the biting, but that's mode's fault, haha..

MODE

RD beleive me when i say ya free's be painless, try spit from ya 'dome', but shit ya 'brainless',
ya flows aimless, ya couldn't 'step on me' if you were 'trainers'..
-nice punch.. you stepped it up here.. nice intro!

just look at this queer he's attakin rappin pioneers,
each time ya qoute 'RAH' ya get billed for royalties by rakim an his peers*,
-very nice.. new take on the usual biting lines..

if i'm a clone of yours i must be the updated model, ha,
comparing my style to yours is like a grown man to a toddler,
damn man i'm hotter, a step up on the evolutionary tree,
what faults you had i discarded to promote an elocutionary breeze,
-NICE flipping.. you took what he gave you and made yourself look good in the process

dazzled? ya free's choakin, blaze ya last week an your av's still smokin..
-great finisher..
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THis round was straight even.. Mode came harder second round.. Razzle, your quality didn't change, the only defining factor for the winner was the flipping. and mode managed to come a fresher

Overall..


Mode - better flipping.. razzle had some lines that really shone and that were tighter than mode's but overall, mode came harder throughout the duration of the contest.. props to both emcees for a great battle..

thanks for the votes, guys... but i guess you guys don't know yet... i only want people with over 200 posts to vote on my battles. this ensures that they've been here for a while, and know how to vote properly on keystyle battles... also, it allows me to up my skill level from educated suggestions from them.
how u wannna do it, mode?

[Mode]

don't care bro, both emcee's with under 200 posts gave pretty detailed critique, but i'm fine if you want voters with 200 +.. but who is there with over 200 posts that will vote? and i know there is some people with under 200 posts who's opinion i'd value over some with 200 +..

peace.

[The Hungry Wolf]

that's kinda bullshit razz seein as how the only people with under 200 posts voted for mode. we just liked his shit better man, no offense to you. and i know plenty about hip-hop. been around it since i was a youngen. i didn't join this site cause it was about breakin. i joined cause of the hip-hop forum. i wanted to test my shit against other mc's accross the globe to see how i stand up against the comp. i don't even post my best shit in here, but i know i'm one of the best here. so is subject. kid's shit is ill. i just think your partisan view ain't that cool. and you act like you're better than the rest of us sayin you odn't want cats under 200 votin cause they don't know what they're talkin about. check that shit man. no disrespect. peace

i respect the fact that people have a lot of experience, even though they may have under 200 posts... but if they have 200+ posts on THIS site, it shows me that they've been around here for a while, and they know how things roll around here. also, it will allow me to get more acquainted with their style, so i can base their votes on how they free. na'mean? why do you think the people with less than 200 posts voted for mode, and the peeps with more than 200 didn't? cuz the people that have been around here longer have developed a better understanding of the concepts that go into keystyling (multies, inners, metas, etc.). n' i'm not saying that mode ain't a dope mc, cuz he is. props to ya mode.
now i've got nothing against your votes, i'm counting them. it's 2-2 right now... but the reason i've brought this up is that i've had a lot of experiences in which i've battled cats that drop some bullshit, and newbies come vote for them cuz they think he sounds more like nelly or ja or some shit, and they think it's 'dope' cuz he talkin about hoes... gettin it? i've got nothin against anybody, but i do have some different views and approaches when it comes to votes. so i'm asking yall to accept and respect that.
peace