[qubixrube]

K, My 1 must-have rule - low profanity

and 2 rounds? peace
LAsT VoTE
_murda

The Zen Master writes the truth, my fuckin pad is the bible/
It a'int viable you could even earn the title of deciple/
I'll be liable for this bitches and many others deaths/
I'll destroy yo ass faster then Hitler strung out on crystal meth/
My punches come straight from the brain and then flow out the pen/
While every verse you've ever written bores me like conversations on MSN/
Just the same shit again again, why don't you come with something original/
Like not losing for once when I rip you through the digital/
Mainframe of this computer, even your modem frys/
As I shoot hot shit like Clinton's scathing lies/
Bitch thinks hes in the spot light, I'll put up a stop light and make ya stop right/
In ya tracks, dangerous like ya ass under a stacks of loaded macks/
With the safety unhinged, leave your body singed from the hot shit I spit/
Every match is lit after the words start to flow/
As I start to show the extent of how much ya view is bent/
I'll make ya "give up" like this shit was lent/
Kill ya even if it was a religious holiday, it'll be straight manslaughta/
I'm smarter, Murda's soft, an aluminum can is harder/

Upping

[qubixrube]

Shyt bro - Im too tired right now (jus bboy sessioned for 4 hours.. i have a hurt... everything, lol) - besides i got a time limit. My shyt'll be up by tommorow tho, promise.

Jus letting ya kno the 411, peace
_murda

Mind hurrying the fuck up?

[qubixrube]

I could waste ur time, i could sit around all day
youre waiting to come back with rhymes all gay.
Here wat im about to say, ill open ur inept walls with a filet
knife, ill stab ur dead rhymes and give em life any day
You got nothing to preach so dont practise a killing spree/
Ill clown ya for eternity endleslly/
The only way ya could win is hypothetically/
Your truth is soemthing uve never seen/
I dont even need historical figures or drugs to have sum fun/
Your brains already dead I could shoot ya in the head without a gun/
You couldnt fry a computer faster then i make ya run/
The only hot shit ya shot was self-compliment cum/
Your all filler, thriller made a fool of you being a writer/
At least micheal jacksons ideas werent in the concept of a biter/
Your not a fighter or a killer so dont act like one your paper
Your so weak u got molested by a 3 yr old raper/
Computer is ur enterprise junior take it as a compliment/
My aluminum is tougher then the ego i jus bent/

There... ya happy now? My limits almost out. it would be longer but i only type like 60wpm... peace
_murda

[qubixrube]

Originally posted by Zen Master N
Mind hurrying the fuk up?

Lets just make it one verse since I'm sick and busy and won't eb writing anything soon.

Votes?

uppimn

ok..


zen, ok flow, punches were here n' there, wordplay aight.. on the whole, not too bad. coulda used some uppers here n' there.

"Bitch thinks hes in the spot light, I'll put up a stop light and make ya stop right/
In ya tracks, dangerous like ya ass under a stacks of loaded macks/
With the safety unhinged, leave your body singed from the hot shit I spit/"
^^ not bad. coulda used a lot more personals.

overall 7/10

murda, decent flow, ok punches, wordplay.. aight, also no personals.. not bad overall.

"Your all filler, thriller made a fool of you being a writer/
At least micheal jacksons ideas werent in the concept of a biter/
Your not a fighter or a killer so dont act like one your paper
Your so weak u got molested by a 3 yr old raper/"
^^ pretty nice. flow was on.

overall 6.5/10

i'ma go with zen on this, cuz he seemed to have more consistent flow.. i couldn't really catch on to murda's as much as zen's.
vote: zen master n on account of better flow n' punches.

[qubixrube]

yo razzle, wtf u mean by personals - its the fukin net not sum get together... jus need sum clarification on sum of y'alls terminology aight? peace
_murda

[XLyricX]

imma have to agree with Razzle ya punches werent something that was too hype or to get my like "ohh dayum" he jus shitted on em but i felt that Zen had a cleaner flow
so thats what imma have to base it on

VOte :Zen

[lawndale killha]

yo nice flo's but i would like for it to go one more round but if your sick then i feel you. so let me explain how i get down i like to point out and break down the stuff i like so here we go.

Zen verse

The Zen Master writes the truth, my fuckin pad is the bible/
It a'int viable you could even earn the title of deciple/

I'll be liable for this bitches and many others deaths/
I'll destroy yo ass faster then Hitler strung out on crystal meth/

My punches come straight from the brain and then flow out the pen/
While every verse you've ever written bores me like conversations on MSN/

Just the same shit again again, why don't you come with something original/
Like not losing for once when I rip you through the digital/

Mainframe of this computer, even your modem frys/
As I shoot hot shit like Clinton's scathing lies/

Kill ya even if it was a religious holiday, it'll be straight manslaughta/
I'm smarter, Murda's soft, an aluminum can is harder/

yo zen that's what i liked in your verse. u had some good punchlines and i was feelin the flo but close to the end u wasn't rippin as hard but nice ending i like that.

Murda's Verse

I could waste ur time, i could sit around all day
youre waiting to come back with rhymes all gay.

Here wat im about to say, ill open ur inept walls with a filet
knife, ill stab ur dead rhymes and give em life any day

You got nothing to preach so dont practise a killing spree/
Ill clown ya for eternity endleslly/

The only way ya could win is hypothetically/
Your truth is soemthing uve never seen/

I dont even need historical figures or drugs to have sum fun/
Your brains already dead I could shoot ya in the head without a gun/
You couldnt fry a computer faster then i make ya run/
The only hot shit ya shot was self-compliment cum/

Your not a fighter or a killer so dont act like one your paper
Your so weak u got molested by a 3 yr old raper/

My aluminum is tougher then the ego i jus bent/

these are some of the things liked out Murda's verse.
u had some punches and some nice come backs.

but i got to vote on who wins so, my vote has to go to ZEN for the punchlines and for better flo's.

[Mode]

Originally posted by bboymurda
yo razzle, wtf u mean by personals - its the fukin net not sum get together... jus need sum clarification on sum of y'alls terminology aight? peace
_murda

personals - disses towards their avatar, things in their profile etc.. you know, personal things, they tend to come across harder than a normal punchline, 'cos they have relevence towards your opponent than just saying they're gay or some shit.. like in a live battle you diss their voice or appearence.. personals.

i was gon' vote, but it's 3-0 Zen

Zen wins KO

peace.