dtack--your first verse came out real nice. best in the battle from both. shit i liked most of it and i can't break down which perticular lines i liked but overall good.2nd i liked it. i liked it less than the first. hahha but nahh it was good:
frightend cuz ya see ma result/
i! enjoying totally this verbal assault//
hope ya corps will rot real fast 'n well/
and break ya face cuz i cant handle ya smell//
zodiak--i don't get your randomly highlighted letters. it just isn't really seemin to work out when i read it. and all the real ya had to be there shit is hard to understand going back in the lines later. but ya shit is flowin out nice just not as nice as dtack this time.
VOTE DTACK
GoDDi Of New-Phex
No ONe Can RElate
R.I.P. DIZZY & Grandmom & Berk
Goddi and Anaktix--this was when i was in AZ for a day. we recorded this really quick. its not bad but i can do better. this is just so yall can hear me. i like freestyling much better at open mics and shit. hopefully the studio my boy got around the block will be open soon. http://soundclick. com/share?songid=6686079 www.myspace.com/goddi_rock_the_mic
thnks for the vote flobo...but those highlighted letters stand for sobe. sobe is an american drink. u might c it in store fridges n wutnot. if u go to college they should def have it around. it was all wordplay there.
i knew whAt it all said, and i kNow what sobe is, but the virgo thing it seemed like Ya jusT snatHed random ass letters In ya liNes as ya wrote. ya could spell anythinG that way.
1st round - you're an alright mc, but i didn't really feel your verse much. your disses were commonplace and your punches weren't as hard as they could have been. what i liked...
Who-aa! lets go for this ill ride/
ma bullets glide, turning ya lyrical aside//
cuz ma skillz catch failz like mice in mousetraps//
that was pretty much it for your first verse man.
2nd round - again, the same as the first verse. disses and punches were bland. coulda done better man. what i liked...
shit runs down ya pants ya sounds so dumb 'n retard//
betta hold ya breath cuz i bring diss, a la carte/
ZODIAK STIZO
1st round - decent verse. decent punches + flow. i liked your "sobe" thing and the "virgo" thing. your woldplay about phones was ok too. usin dtack's name that way was also decent. what i liked...
my shit so scury i got you pissin in ur pants//
but dont worry cuz i had your mama/ in the same stance//
i swing left 'hooks' and 'disconnect' ur schemed rhymes//
'unplug' ur vertabrae n leave u spinelessly spittin flat lines//
2nd round - kept up the punches. didn't like your flow as much, but it was still ok. what i liked...
phase through ur punches like u were hittin at [me] wid no hands//
slit ur tongue in two cuz it only takes one like u to spit the illest of rants//
in all, i'm goin with ZODIAK STIZO for better flow, punches, and wordplay. peace
