[Mode]

yo imma revive this, but just drop your own topic after you drop a verse. try to keep the topics reasonable. and if any mods find the topic outlandish they WILL change it.

[puertolumbian]

whats the topic?

[mrtical32]

If the word was given and the word was gave
Hip Hop would be my word in these worldly days
But no sense dwellin on the words that were
Let's focus on the words that make dreams occur
I wanna speak words that'll invoke strong inner feelings
And get your heart beatin on the hand that's dealin
Cause Word is more than just a slang preposition
It's the verb, it's the noun, it provokes a disposition
But don't take my word just ask the kids
Cause their actions mimic albums and those in showbiz
So we all need to work and pull out educated sentences
And cancel out the negative to put an end to this
Next time you hear somebody respond like Word
Remember all the thoughts and reasons you just heard
Word

[puertolumbian]

yo mode. throw down the rules so i can understand it mang. thx

[mrtical32]

Here let me help you out on the rules in this category of Topical, this is my bread and butter. The rules for this Thread are easy and basic, what Talent and I like to do is keep this Thread on a positive note. Somebody brings up a topic whether it be something as easy as "Education" or somebody might suggest "Story Raps" where you make up or tell a story about somebody you know and how they messed up their life and how people can change the situation.

But one thing that is looked down on in this category is when somebody tries to battle or diss somebody else, cause it's not on a positive note. This means that there is no need for lyrics like, "I'll gash you, slash you, straight rip out your adams apple." No need for lyrics like that, remember it's on the positive.

Basically somebody will throw out a topic in the subject category now you can either write a rhyme on that topic and keep that topic going or you can write on another topic that you just happen to be feeling at that point.

All in all keep it on the positive.

[GORGANUS]

we met in the mall while i was doing my normal work chours,
she look confused when she and he mom walking in the game store,
i said (hi my i help you) with a sexy voice that could melt you,
she said (sure i looking for this game called Devil May Cry part 2)
i said (do you play these games cause their rated mature)
she said (no its for my brother, not me i'am an amature)
the whole time she talking i'am ther staring at the lip gloss on her lips,
a dark complexion chick,i know she had a fat ass because of he thick hips,
i'am think sink ships gor, having day dreams of fucking her,
but my dreams was cut short when i remembered he mother,
she said (hello sir) and laugh so i came back to earth like a shuddle,
so i took her to the playstation2 section so could be together like a football huddle,
i said (ok here we have you game Devil May Cry 2)
but to be honest i think you should start with 1 before 2,
she said (why) i said (well 1 is the best of them all)
cause the problem with 2 ain't like the first and it has a couple of down fall,
she said (you know alot about games) i said (its my job to make you happy)
then i said (look ma here's my number when ya not busy holla at me)


.....................................to be continued

[mrtical32]

I met this girl on a Monday night
Five minutes with her and I was freakin right
Exchanged IM names and we chatted online
Couldn't always get on but I would make the time
We used to say stupid things like "do you like me"
The other would respond with "it's obvious to see"
So I'd go over on the regular to stay with her
Cuddle and caress I know I was fallin in love with her
We used to talk about the future on where we'd be
She said she wanted kids and no less than three
I only wanted one but I could look past that
Cause when I looked in her eyes I froze where I was at
Anything she said I would agree with
Everything's going smooth, that's why I couldn't see it
..................

Part 2 coming later also

[mrtical32]

nice rhyme up there, good subject

[-=XAngelX=-]

2 Faced
=============


this girl i used to know,
maybe was it love or lust to long ago,
I fell in love and maybe i was a fool,
a fool to fall for her, a fool to rush right in,
to live a live of sin, that ofen times dont makes sense,
Whther she would cheat n creep, or lie to me,
Being a good man to her is all i wanted to be,
to have that hand to wed,
stripe my heart from my chest,
now im wishing i was dead,
hat very day I said fuck the game,
Men can play to nigga so I played the game,
pimp'd women by frame,
dame by dame,
wondering which next bitch to tame,
so no matter what goes,
you forever changed me now....
Angels quotes the shit
Trecherous hoes..just not allowed

[Mode]

i'm so lucky to have what i've got,
to have a great girlfriend whos also hot,
if i never repeated school we wouldn't have met,
a japanese exchange student, first time we talked, so nervous i sweat,
but from then on there is no time i regret, i'm always thinking 'whats next',
can't think straight i done lose my mind,
X marks the spot the best treasure i find,
but she leaves at the end of the year, what can i do,
all i can say to her is, "to the end of the earth i'll follow you!"

bit of a poem, i'll continue soon. i like the topic, makes you feel better. good luck to all you guys with your ladies. hope all goes well.

peace.

[b mafia jr]

there was a girl i wanted so bad/
but she wore me out like an old fad/
she didnt feel the same way about me/
that bitch had me climbing up pine trees/
i wanted her so bad, so much/
but now that i think about it, it was just lust/
i used to think that to be with her was a must/
but now i relize, that i was a fool/
shes not what i wanted, i was just her tool/
she's everything i dont want in a girl/
i dont know why i wanted her/
it was something different something new/
she didnt have blonde hair, her eyes werent blue/
she wasnt the pretty, but i still wanted her/
i wouldve boughten her, 100% real fur/
but i told her how i felt, which was a mistake/
cause when she said "i just wanna be friends'', i felt like throwing myslefi into a lake/
but now its all good, i found someone new, someone twice as good/
she likes me, i like her, it was ment to be, and if it wasnt it should/

[razorbrain]

girls help..girls hurt...they act stank and they act proper/
some girls cant do a thing, while others have more to offer//
every girl i ever been with,showed me things i didnt understand/
at the time, but once i did it helped me grow as a man//
my first, for 4 years showed me love, and it was nice/
and also showed my heart pain, when she cheated on me twice//
" i love you like a brother" she said, which hurt me to the bone/
and from that moment,my big heart turned to stone//
which helped keep me guarded against gettin hurt again/
and helped me stay strong when they want to be "more than friends"/
the next girl i had, showed me how cool girls can be/
playin ball and videogames, while lookin fine in sweats and a T//
was real thorough, real laid baid, looked good but wasnt gassed/
had jokes, and ill convo, and aint ashamed to ask for ass//
she held me down for real: helped a brother get his mind right/
thing aint work out but we still chill hang and play fight//
one girl taught paitence,showed me how to deal with stress/
i didnt get it for 2 years, then after that i realize things shouldnt be based on sex//
had a super smart woman(yes a woman) who taught a whole lot/
learned quite bit was kept on my toes, and shown how to shine on the spot//
i have known alot of women: older, younger, never had a preference/
and i have noticed its the womans mental state, not the age that makes a difference//
some have the same hangups, women act like kids and vice verse/
stay gossipin and nosey,will rock dirt like tight shirts//
but regardless, good or bad everyone gave a lesson/
wether worthwhile or not, every experience was a blessin//
at this point, i am a good man who learns from his mistakes/
i grow more everyday,from when i sleep till i wake//
and thats all due to women; who help me grow and go crazy/
im a better man because of you..so thanks...i love you ladies///

had to sum it up.. i dont got a girl and i am who i am because of women.. my bad on the length.. should me move on to next topic or no?

[GORGANUS]

after i gave her my number i was think that she ain't gonna call anyway,
then my cellphone rang, i said (hello) she said i'll be their soon like my birthday,
i was like no way, shit this is like a dream come true,
she said (my mom was sleeping, so i took the car to see you)
who would of knew, that my ass would get this lucky,
the time was 9:30, and if i wanna be finished by 10 then i gotta hurry,
where is she?, as i'am out side waiting to exhale,
then she pulled up in a Honda 2004 the same colour as Gingerale,
if all else failes, then i know that we could catch a cab an'em,
luckly that i took 60 dollar earler from the banks ATM,
when i saw her she was wearing Fubu and a black see through topless,
i'am there with my dick hard saying the our father prayer cause she's in alotta mess,
in my mind i start to undress, her clothing so i could feed the population,
but she was wearing almost nothing, she left no room for imagination,
before i start creation, like mastubation once i started i could'nt stop,
i'am picturing her siting on top, she said (hi) then after her bubble gum pop,
i said (hello again, its after 10 so whats you plans for tonight?)
she said (you told me to holla right, plus tomorrow i'am leaving on an early flight)
i said (alright), but in my mind i'am saying YES! what a way for this night to begin,
10 minutes later we stoped at a red light, looked to the right and saw a Hollyday Inn,



............................................to be continued

[puertolumbian]

10 minutes later we stoped at a red light, looked to the right and saw a Hollyday Inn.....

I thought that this girl was only here for the 'cheese'/
She was on all fours like a dog, even beggin me please!!/
She like it rough, no problem for me to be 'inside' her/
She said, "YOU TOUGH", there was no way i denied her/
The night kept goin and we were at it like animals/
She requested we '69' and i eat like the 'hannibal'/
It was about 6 am.....still goin at it again, flowin like a leaked pen/
Then all of a sudden.....door knocks, "Room Service!", she still shootin like *"HA-DOO-KEN"/
No time to hurry, the doorknob twists and a click on the door/
Minds filled with worry, we see a peep through the door/
Room service was actin like this girl's momma/
I thought she was gonna go suicidal like osama!/
She said, "GIRL!!! WTF ARE YOU DOING?! THIS IS MY ROOM"/
We were like "WHAT?!", she said, "lemme get my purse in the bathroom/
Room Service left and we were at it again/
Another doorknock!!! wonder what happens again//

*IN street figher, they would say that when they shoot the energy thing.....she had a HUGE burst of energy.

"TO BE CONTINUED......................"

"PL HAS SPOKENN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" lmao.....just wanted to try. and razor.....is this right? i went off of him

[b mafia jr]

shits goin fine, im over nicole/
to see jenn i gotta roll/
she lives five hours away/
damn thats fuckin gay/
without a licience thats just to far/
to make matters even worse than they are/
nicole wants me to hook up with her best friend/
which would be fine, if she was fine, since im 'free'/
especially since this girl barley new me/
but she doesnt got much goin for her/
for her its not "dayam" its "brrr"/
shes got a nice rack on her though/
even for my standards this is low/
i told her, i dont want a girlfriend at the time/
if she was a whore, she couldnt get a dime/
but fuck her and im goin back to jenn/
i wrote her a letter on paper wiht a pen/
cause shes away at camp/
i thought long and hard about what to say, it gave my brain a cramp/
but shes hasnt wrote back yet/
the post office fucked up i bet/

aight ill contine this later