Diss the Previous guy - Page 9

Edit · 03-15-2003, 02:18 PM

no beef aight

puertolumbian · **aight -** 03-15-2003, 02:23 PM

u know i cant reply cuz dis aint a battle...check mine and raian's battle. only my first cuz he seemed to be hatin on me.

Bboy I/Self · 02:49 PM

good look yall...we all in here spittin some shit....i'll post somethin in a lil bit, i gotta go to get my fucked up hooptie fixed...o shit that rhymed....ha...peace.

03-15-2003, 06:45 PM

for Edit:

You shit's so bad, you should go back and press Edit /
You're name is synominous with disdain and discre-dit /
So I take your file and shred-it, coz your ass been deleted /
Stop with the obsolete-shit, unstructured weak-spits /
With no bar structure, so your flows-are-whack /
While pros-at-tack your tracks with bombs and gats /
You must be a hindu, coz you sayin, "no beef" /
Tell me where this ho sleeps and I'll leave the bitch with no teeth /
You gotta learn that a real emcee won't ever say "no beef" /
You gotta always come your hardest to compete /
Talkin bout erosion? I got flows that corrode /
Melt shit with toxic spits that fit your bitch-to-explode /
I shit on your styles like you was a comode /
Fill you with feces, defecate your face to overload /
I've been drinking tonight and still ten times better-than-you /
Newbie muthafucka, eat veteran-poo /

puertolumbian · 08:42 PM

eat veteran poo?/ wut kinda crizap is dizat?/ veteran my ass...that line was wizack/ stop the crizap right now at yo trizail/ lotta yall "veterans" think yall can surpass me but all yall fizelled/ nippin yuh rhymes in the tizail/ seein me when i spit so good yall say "How the hizell?"/ u spittin like you scurred to fizail/ now yall cant bizail/ comin harder on yall like hizail/ now i got 2 bizail...

*up in smoke* · 03-15-2003, 10:26 PM

this is it // its time to end this shit, im gettin recognised bit by bit
people say what the hell, what you really think you do it that well
im just a newbie, but i can tell whats good and whats not
and your certainly not, you think your so good
you think your so hot

peace

puertolumbian · **dat kinda sounded like nelly... -** 03-15-2003, 10:40 PM

nelly biter. same crap! j/k aight. paz

*up in smoke* · **how do ya get a pic -** 03-16-2003, 01:22 AM

hey how do u get a picture under ya name

03-16-2003, 01:42 AM

up in smoke? my words tie up ya throat as you choke/
verbal murder one, ull be seein me, you think my rhymes are a joke?/
dick in ya mouth, plugged up nose, chokin like you sniffed a pound of coke/
mind overload, blood flow corrodes, how do you diss? this kid dont even kno!/
keepin this verse short cuz i got much more important shit to do/
than waste my time spittin at wack little bitches like you!/

btw, u can get a pic by goin to your user control panel -> edit profile -> bottom of the page (change avatar)

Raian · 03-16-2003, 06:22 AM

do i think your rap is a joke,
skills like yours will send you broke,
your jus postin a diss so why did you choke?,
lunatic lines, writing wack-ass-rhymes,
keep up wit the times, i'm wastin my time wit dee's swines,
lines doesn't rap he whines,
lunatic can suck my dick, i'll burn you like a candle stick,
your times runnin out, so what you talkin about?.....

Jus playin bro, no beef.

03-16-2003, 09:34 AM

Yo can everyone stop saying "no beef" after their spits. It's kinda obvious, this is just a bit of fun, no-one should get offended.

You burn like I a stick, while I burn you like pro-pane /
Refrain from the pro-game, bitch, or you'll get dis-mayed /
I leave your skin-flayed, catch your death on action re-play /
So catch your last breath while I pass the baton in cypher relays /
R for the regular run of the mill /
A for the ass-hole I'ma verbally kill /
I for ingenious rhymes I drop ill /
A for the anal sex that gives this fucka thrills /
N for the noose I'ma hang round your neck /
I make choking a pro-ject, drop bombs as a re-flex /
Scoping your de-fects, verses appear as a pre-text /
To my pay check, I'll break ya neck if ya step to J-Flex.

03-16-2003, 09:36 AM

man I made a dumb-ass typo- that first bar's sposed to say "You burn like a candle stick".

puertolumbian · **I'll break ya neck if ya step to J-Flex. -** 03-16-2003, 10:11 AM

y u tryin 2 act like busta rhymes/ u trippin nigga u cant even bust a mime/ u like a human without usin yo mind/ sorry nigga but i spit on wannabes like u all the time/ time is of the essence 4 right now/ ima end this crappy shyt like lil bow wow//

03-16-2003, 02:11 PM

puertolumbian wut tha fuck was that?
your shit sounded like my mouse trap going rat-a-tat-tat!
your punches are wack, my shit got more flow than that!
well thats all for now, ending this shit and burnt your crap!

03-16-2003, 02:53 PM

My bars will burn your ass like a put you through a late brisk // doesnt make you a man yet, yah jumpin high roof tops at great risk//Messing with the best, kid, make it so you cant stand up, you fucking with me kid, nigga better duck//Ill pump yah chest cavity full of lead because i dont give a fuck//ill make gravity work against you, beat your ass down with my NUN-CHUKS//you throw VERBAL TANTRUMS whilst i remain calm, baby powder on my hands, smack your face with my palms...

*Brisk = in Jewish tradition, a baby is curcumsised when it is born, or soon after, and the "party" or celebration is called a brisk

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Edit Registered User Respect: 1 Posts: 10 Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: orlando	03-15-2003, 02:18 PM no beef aight
	Lsk nigga! all up in dat dirty souf


puertolumbian Registered User Respect: 1.5 Posts: 1,052 Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: Where the pen and pad is	aight - 03-15-2003, 02:23 PM u know i cant reply cuz dis aint a battle...check mine and raian's battle. only my first cuz he seemed to be hatin on me.
	Endless


Bboy I/Self FreeForm Artist Respect: 2 Posts: 108 Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: Soul City	03-15-2003, 02:45 PM good look yall...we all in here spittin some shit....i'll post somethin in a lil bit, i gotta go to get my fucked up hooptie fixed...o shit that rhymed....ha...peace. Last edited by Bboy I/Self : 03-15-2003 at 02:49 PM.
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Posts: n/a	03-15-2003, 06:45 PM for Edit: You shit's so bad, you should go back and press Edit / You're name is synominous with disdain and discre-dit / So I take your file and shred-it, coz your ass been deleted / Stop with the obsolete-shit, unstructured weak-spits / With no bar structure, so your flows-are-whack / While pros-at-tack your tracks with bombs and gats / You must be a hindu, coz you sayin, "no beef" / Tell me where this ho sleeps and I'll leave the bitch with no teeth / You gotta learn that a real emcee won't ever say "no beef" / You gotta always come your hardest to compete / Talkin bout erosion? I got flows that corrode / Melt shit with toxic spits that fit your bitch-to-explode / I shit on your styles like you was a comode / Fill you with feces, defecate your face to overload / I've been drinking tonight and still ten times better-than-you / Newbie muthafucka, eat veteran-poo /
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puertolumbian Registered User Respect: 1.5 Posts: 1,052 Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: Where the pen and pad is	eat veteran-poo / - 03-15-2003, 08:39 PM eat veteran poo?/ wut kinda crizap is dizat?/ veteran my ass...that line was wizack/ stop the crizap right now at yo trizail/ lotta yall "veterans" think yall can surpass me but all yall fizelled/ nippin yuh rhymes in the tizail/ seein me when i spit so good yall say "How the hizell?"/ u spittin like you scurred to fizail/ now yall cant bizail/ comin harder on yall like hizail/ now i got 2 bizail... Last edited by puertolumbian : 03-15-2003 at 08:42 PM.
	Endless


up in smoke Registered User Respect: 1 Posts: 5 Join Date: Mar 2003	03-15-2003, 10:26 PM this is it // its time to end this shit, im gettin recognised bit by bit people say what the hell, what you really think you do it that well im just a newbie, but i can tell whats good and whats not and your certainly not, you think your so good you think your so hot peace
	up in smoke


puertolumbian Registered User Respect: 1.5 Posts: 1,052 Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: Where the pen and pad is	dat kinda sounded like nelly... - 03-15-2003, 10:40 PM nelly biter. same crap! j/k aight. paz
	Endless


up in smoke Registered User Respect: 1 Posts: 5 Join Date: Mar 2003	how do ya get a pic - 03-16-2003, 01:22 AM hey how do u get a picture under ya name
	up in smoke


Posts: n/a	03-16-2003, 01:42 AM up in smoke? my words tie up ya throat as you choke/ verbal murder one, ull be seein me, you think my rhymes are a joke?/ dick in ya mouth, plugged up nose, chokin like you sniffed a pound of coke/ mind overload, blood flow corrodes, how do you diss? this kid dont even kno!/ keepin this verse short cuz i got much more important shit to do/ than waste my time spittin at wack little bitches like you!/ btw, u can get a pic by goin to your user control panel -> edit profile -> bottom of the page (change avatar)
Posts: n/a


Raian Banned Respect: 1 Posts: 115 Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: Australia	03-16-2003, 06:22 AM do i think your rap is a joke, skills like yours will send you broke, your jus postin a diss so why did you choke?, lunatic lines, writing wack-ass-rhymes, keep up wit the times, i'm wastin my time wit dee's swines, lines doesn't rap he whines, lunatic can suck my dick, i'll burn you like a candle stick, your times runnin out, so what you talkin about?..... Jus playin bro, no beef.


Posts: n/a	03-16-2003, 09:34 AM Yo can everyone stop saying "no beef" after their spits. It's kinda obvious, this is just a bit of fun, no-one should get offended. You burn like I a stick, while I burn you like pro-pane / Refrain from the pro-game, bitch, or you'll get dis-mayed / I leave your skin-flayed, catch your death on action re-play / So catch your last breath while I pass the baton in cypher relays / R for the regular run of the mill / A for the ass-hole I'ma verbally kill / I for ingenious rhymes I drop ill / A for the anal sex that gives this fucka thrills / N for the noose I'ma hang round your neck / I make choking a pro-ject, drop bombs as a re-flex / Scoping your de-fects, verses appear as a pre-text / To my pay check, I'll break ya neck if ya step to J-Flex.
Posts: n/a


Posts: n/a	03-16-2003, 09:36 AM man I made a dumb-ass typo- that first bar's sposed to say "You burn like a candle stick".
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puertolumbian Registered User Respect: 1.5 Posts: 1,052 Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: Where the pen and pad is	I'll break ya neck if ya step to J-Flex. - 03-16-2003, 10:11 AM y u tryin 2 act like busta rhymes/ u trippin nigga u cant even bust a mime/ u like a human without usin yo mind/ sorry nigga but i spit on wannabes like u all the time/ time is of the essence 4 right now/ ima end this crappy shyt like lil bow wow//
	Endless


Posts: n/a	03-16-2003, 02:11 PM puertolumbian wut tha fuck was that? your shit sounded like my mouse trap going rat-a-tat-tat! your punches are wack, my shit got more flow than that! well thats all for now, ending this shit and burnt your crap!
Posts: n/a


Posts: n/a	03-16-2003, 02:53 PM My bars will burn your ass like a put you through a late brisk // doesnt make you a man yet, yah jumpin high roof tops at great risk//Messing with the best, kid, make it so you cant stand up, you fucking with me kid, nigga better duck//Ill pump yah chest cavity full of lead because i dont give a fuck//ill make gravity work against you, beat your ass down with my NUN-CHUKS//you throw VERBAL TANTRUMS whilst i remain calm, baby powder on my hands, smack your face with my palms... *Brisk = in Jewish tradition, a baby is curcumsised when it is born, or soon after, and the "party" or celebration is called a brisk
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