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03-08-2003, 07:08 AM

Gorganus has spoken?,
it's his own ass he be pokin,
little bitch think you can beat me?,
while you sittin in the morn with your scones and tea?,
you wish you were me, bro your raps are good,
but i think you should,
think before you act, watch who you choose to diis,
you know you can't handle this,
as you be takin the piss,
havin a golden shower,i'm the one with power.

 

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03-08-2003, 11:51 AM

Raian couldnt drop lyrical "rain", if the the clouds were black-dark/he's so stupid if he were a "car" in a garage, he wouldnt know where to "park", too bad your bite isnt as good as your bark, but in real, you bite others like a verbal stealing spree shark.

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you bite others like a verbal stealing spree shark. - B-Boy Alloy - 03-08-2003, 12:04 PM

dats right, im the shark and im comin to kill/
givin yall my infinite skill/
juss like a rollercoaster givin yall finatical thrills/
y u so nervous?/
sit back and chill/
lockin and poppin like pills/
B-Boy alloy couldnt cash a check even if his name was "bill"/
to me, u just a bump on a hill/
runnin ova yo ass leavin yuh fatigued and ill/
jumpin ova yuh like jack and jill/
yall look at me dizzy cuz im spinin faster den a "windmill"/
yall couldnt get my talent even if yuh had the last name of smith and first name of will//

u know im playin...
 
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03-08-2003, 05:08 PM

yo guys... lets try to stay on topic here. post all unfinished battles in the unfinished battle thread.

arite, this one's to gorganus:

i've wrecked-'em, tekked-'em and still nobody would select-'em
if you removed the "gorg" from your name, you'd still be a rectum!
i've rattled-hits... he'd let a guy "ride him" if the saddle-fits!
you'll get smashed when razzle-spits... now stop posting all your disses in here, and find a battle, bitch!

 

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03-08-2003, 08:25 PM

to puertolumbian,
you think you is a shark?,
theres bigger fish in the sea,
and the biggest one be, you guessed it ME,
you've got talent, my my skillz over yours lament,
i don't know where to begin, your rhymes be soundin too thin,
mess with me you aint gon' win,
i aint creatin no beef, you cause me no grief,
give me your best shot, give it all you've got,
i'm lining myself up to get shot down,
but i don't fear 'cos i've got the crown,
come against me your undies be turnin brown,
it's time to finish this, let me see your best 'diss',
just watch yourself though, i write better than edgar allen po,
i can turn any tide, piss me off your gonna wanna try hide.

iit's all godd peurtolumbian, i wanna hear your reply.
no beef.
 

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i can turn any tide, piss me off your gonna wanna try hide. - Raian - 03-08-2003, 09:11 PM

why would i wanna hide?, u think we playn hide and seek?/
let me tell u nigga, the lyrics i spit now is only a sneak peek/
sayin im weak/
im the one who said the rhymes for missy and memphis bleek/
my words comin harder den mahogany and teak/
makin bullets outta my words leavin you bloody and leaked/
holes thru yo body cuz im one you cant defeat/
if i wuz u nigga...i would take my ass and retreat//

hehehe. u know theres no beef. u just remind me of one of my friends.
 

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03-08-2003, 09:42 PM

i like your style puertolumbiun.
 

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03-08-2003, 10:00 PM

u do? its aight? most of the time i dont got enuff confidence in myself. my frends think im good.
 
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To Puertolumbian - 03-08-2003, 11:38 PM

You wana hide because your ass is scared of dying//
This bitch can't run or hide cause he's in a dead end crying//
You see "PORNOHUMPIAN" is a gay fucker that would do anything just to get dick//
He's so desperate that he would cross dress and wear his mom's lip stick//
If he can't get any cock then his last resort would be fuckin old ladies about 90 years old who live on his block//
At this very moment the doctor declared him dead//
He was killed by my lyrics so he won't be able to come back this thread//

Peace
 

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03-09-2003, 12:22 AM

oh my damn feliciatenn, TRANQUILICATE/
you try too hard, now ima finish you off with my rhyming karate/
while sippin on some delicious brown CAFE/
did i mention my favorite flavor is cafe latte?/
your O-Bitch-uary is gonna say"Felicia murio, alloy MATe"/

**all words in caps are to be said with a spanish accent gringos, =)

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03-09-2003, 02:43 AM

alloy sittin' alone in dark alley cryin' like a pussy/
too wack for emcees like me, afraid to face-it// 1
can't spit for shit, punches never hit/
spittin' wack bars, actin' like it's all hard// 2
dissin' a retard like you only need 6 lines/
you tryin' to shine, when yo' skills is 10 of me combined// 3

*really wack :P, rushed it in a minute.. aight im out now
pz*
 

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03-09-2003, 06:20 AM

yo wannabe,
you wanna think about what you say in your rhymes,
your dissin yourself with those shit lines,
does it take 10 of you to be as bad as you say alloy is?,
think before you say, this time it's ok,
next time i hope you wont be so passe,
my skills are wasted on you, i hope you apologise,
this time i'ma take home 1st prize,
raian doesn't wast his time with lies,
i refer to myself in third person,
as does the bible, like jesus this is my second revival,
i'm immortal, exit this world through a portal,
i will diss you no more, 'cos your skills are too poor,
i'll wait for you to settle the score.

no beef bro. we is all friends here.
 
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03-09-2003, 08:41 AM

take home first prize, man you need new eyes,
what youre writin is PURE lies, that shit stinks covered in flies,
lookin to the skies for inspiration, youre lookin to me an my rap invasion,
raian your rain is all dried up, i finish you like i drink from a cup,
an then when you parched, i turn the heat up,
you an the bible are indeed both the same,
both old news just trin to bring fame to your name,
im game cause ive so much ability i can pour it from tap,
use my lyrical agility, mix it aroun an come up with rap,
settle the score, you're like a ho beggin for more,
lookin for your ass to get tore, bitch go knock on some other door.
 
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03-09-2003, 05:08 PM

fuck this clown... with that kinda verse he deserves to get busted down.
you were called to the "stand" with wack rhymes... my advice: "just sit down."
leave this kid crunched and drowned... when forensics investigated his body, they lost track of how many punches found.
 

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03-09-2003, 08:42 PM

no punches found, razzle can never claim that his rhymes are profound/
my verbal 'percussions' will break his 'eardrums' with deafening sounds/
it only takes one round, one minute to unleash the world's deadliest assault/
i shall 'strike' his entire being like the havoc of an extremely violent 'revolt'/
tell me, can he ever 'break' my flows if he can't even 'pop' my punches?/
he's the one drowning coz his lyrical 'gut' lacks close to a billion 'crunches'/

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