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11-06-2009, 05:22 PM

Originally Posted by AK47 View Post
Talkin' about weather, you're a natural disaster
Leavin' you with frostbite and adhesive plaster
You can't spit fire; hence the rain, hail, snow
You got the same fuckin' potential of aborted embryos
I'll bust the real verbal slugs, leave you dead like Kenny
I lay you out like rugs, you've been served by many
Look at your lines, a ghetto Dr. Seuss clone
Worst sounding stereo out of the ones I've owned.

Edit: I am wack as fuck

Edit: And disrespect to the max. Bring it.

I told you mom not to let you out of the house
Cause if she did I'd have to stomp you like a mouse
He maybe the ghetto dr seuss but I found the real clone.
Your lyrics sound like you found them in a 4th grade poem
Sam I am cause my names sam
I got this shit cause I'm like, damn

I don't look at other dancers as idols, I look at them as opponents.
When I see someone do something dope on the floor, I don't go screaming like a little girl, I try to do something even better.
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11-07-2009, 03:07 AM

You belong in the 4th grade after seeing those lines
Im packin these verses like nines
While you still learning nursery rhymes
Dr.Seuss or Mother Goose i'll still leave you on that noose
Rope you up like I aint never heard of a truce
Start using you as target practice for that deuce deuce
 

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11-07-2009, 05:14 AM

Originally Posted by stereo View Post
You belong in the 4th grade after seeing those lines
Im packin these verses like nines
While you still learning nursery rhymes
Dr.Seuss or Mother Goose i'll still leave you on that noose
Rope you up like I aint never heard of a truce
Start using you as target practice for that deuce deuce
Dear Raj,

You're a broken record, repeatin' lines like Kobain
Yes it's true, that punch is mad generic and overused,
But honestly, you're ass is broke, and records are lame
Hang on a noose, piņata, leave you battered and bruised
You're Indian not Mexican, shit I got it confused
But in reality those terms are truly never misused
That means you're the same, neither can speak English for shit
Your verse is lame, so introduce your face to my fist
I got rugged and bumpier knuckles than fuckin' Freddie Foxxx
You're lines don't even match, you been suckin' some cocks
while you write, bitch, you're prolly gonna leave in a hearse
Shit, you can't even count the syllables in your verse
Seriously, have you tried your shit over a beat?
I can't tell if you suck or if you're just fuckin' with me
I gotta go, I got some albums to sell
If I need to talk, call customer service at Dell?

Bitch

Edit: No disrespect intended

Last edited by AK47 : 11-07-2009 at 02:55 PM.

"Of course we gotta pay rent, so money connects, but uhh
I'd rather be broke and have a whole lot of respect
It's the principal of it, I get a rush when I bust
some dope lines oral, that maybe somebody'll quote"
-- O.C.
 

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11-07-2009, 05:21 PM

Ok AK what the hell do I have to say
You're on this site 24 hours a day
You sold albums, what the fuck
your probably as good as that soulja boy chump
Maybe you should use a dictionary to check your spell
It's spelled cobain, he's dead, so go to hell
You really need some help you're a lyrical disaster
I'd hook you up if you call me master....bitch

I don't look at other dancers as idols, I look at them as opponents.
When I see someone do something dope on the floor, I don't go screaming like a little girl, I try to do something even better.
-A guy from bboyworld.com
 

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11-08-2009, 03:18 AM

Yo, check it..

Arp, look dude its time to be real,
Your lines are whack there aint no style to feel.
Wake up from ur dreams enuff being surreal,
If ur bboy was ur rap : Another soulja Boy record deal.
And Im tired of ur baby talk, im tired of ur babblin
See Ill come through your crib and get the place rattlin.
Now whose the student bitch, you couldnt even master,
my talents that plasters you whack emcees into natural disasters.
 

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11-08-2009, 01:35 PM

You ain't a prodigy or protege- got no flow
I tackle your raps like Cal in the rose bowl
Its like ya sayin nothin but still vocal
that shit shouldnta counted as a first post
its just spam ima eat it with my french toast
but first i gotta smoke it like menthol
come disguised when i make my wars mental
till i smile hide your body in my trench coat
 

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11-08-2009, 11:28 PM

This kids a vegetarian, and im servin him beef
I let the hollows smash his face in, like an episode of bleach
Bitch your blows are like a sawed off, that shit is missin reach
My bullets will make your blood spray, like a bloody fucking queef
your shit is fucking weak, I should slit your fucking throat
Ill beat that smile off your face and choke you with that coat
Then ill heat your place and mace your face, and watch you up in smoke
Leave you burnt and raped, hurt and gaped, like a pyro fucking goats
 

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11-09-2009, 01:24 AM

boy you think you're so sick, actin like a gang$ta thug
little middle schoolin kid just want a cooky and a hug
drawing bullets in margins, shooting cans in the garden,
have you ever touched a REAL gun, let me tell you my son,
your cartoon heros just a zero with a moustache and a pistol
if i'm a steak, he's a bone, you the discarded gristle
cause he's a fake but you're a loner with a thing for anime
next time maybe ask your mommy if you really want to play
 

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11-09-2009, 02:11 AM

I had something for Futeki, but it looks like amecrussel posted before me. Nonetheless, I'll just post up disses for both.

Originally Posted by Futeki View Post
This kids a vegetarian, and im servin him beef
I let the hollows smash his face in, like an episode of bleach
Bitch your blows are like a sawed off, that shit is missin reach
My bullets will make your blood spray, like a bloody fucking queef
your shit is fucking weak, I should slit your fucking throat
Ill beat that smile off your face and choke you with that coat
Then ill heat your place and mace your face, and watch you up in smoke
Leave you burnt and raped, hurt and gaped, like a pyro fucking goats
FUTEKI
Yo bring the references, this is true battle rap
I'm about to kill this fag like the U.S. did the Japs
Nice try Futeki, but your shit is really weak
and laughable, no real rapper watches Bleach
Bitches gotta stop using that veggie and beef line
it's way overplayed, now you can't fuckin' lie
about havin' bullets, you're like five years old
and keep the coat, I'm gonna leave you in the cold
or better yet, I'm gonna have to have you sold
to a horny pyro fuck, although I'm the real G.O.A.T

Originally Posted by amecrussel View Post
boy you think you're so sick, actin like a gang$ta thug
little middle schoolin kid just want a cooky and a hug
drawing bullets in margins, shooting cans in the garden,
have you ever touched a REAL gun, let me tell you my son,
your cartoon heros just a zero with a moustache and a pistol
if i'm a steak, he's a bone, you the discarded gristle
cause he's a fake but you're a loner with a thing for anime
next time maybe ask your mommy if you really want to play

AMECRUSSEL
Let's get this shit started, what the fuck is on your head?
Tryin' to cover up the holes after I pumped you full of lead?
Well fuck it, the hollows left your brain messed up
Might explain why your rap sounds retarded as fuck
Now, you're a true example of a net emcee
When it comes to recording, no one will read
those fucking dollar signs, you freakin' dumbass
No dollar signs in your eyes, you always place last
To respond, yeah I've touched a real gun
And you have too, let me tell you my son
I grabbed a Glock from my dad's wooden drawer
You grabbed a big cock from your dad's drawers
Yeah I'm talkin' about the fuckin' underwear
I would honestly keep going, but this really isn't fair
'cause I'm killing you....

Seriously...

This shit ain't fair...

LOOOOOOOOOOOL

"Of course we gotta pay rent, so money connects, but uhh
I'd rather be broke and have a whole lot of respect
It's the principal of it, I get a rush when I bust
some dope lines oral, that maybe somebody'll quote"
-- O.C.
 

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11-09-2009, 02:30 AM

Yo AK, I'm gonna show you where your place is
Fuck you up worse than amecrussel's face is
Steal your body parts and give you no replacements
then spread them out in to 50 different basements
You're tasteless, learn the fucking basics
Calamity rap more psycho than Norman Bates is
Let's face it, you're a forum moderator
But I'm a fucking Regulator.
 

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11-09-2009, 02:50 AM

Calamity, I'ma really show you where your place is,
You're already fucked up worse than ammecrussel's face is,
But on the real, go back quick to the graffiti boards
You starvin' for some dick, specifically Gone84's
Disrespect, he's the one you been tryin' to impress,
But even he got stressed and told you to clean up ya mess,
"Calamity rap more psycho than Norman Bates is"
Bitch you learned that rap from "Vinnie Paz Flow: Basics"
So yeah let's face it, I'm a forum moderator,
so if you diss me again, you'll be banned now or later.
 

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11-09-2009, 03:20 AM

Fmanz, I'm gonna show you where your place is,
My disses are fucked up like ammecrussel's face is,
And what the fuck? Ban Calamity now or later?
I'm the real manager, and you're just a cocky waiter
Except for this time, you're the one gettin' served
I won't leave you a tip, your rhymes are left curbed
Like Now & Laters, you acted hard but now you're soft
I bring the battle rap, I'll leave you shell shocked
Now study my rhyme, I'll give you time to bite
But like Prodijay, it's your last time on the site

Edit: and wtf you're not a moderator.

"Of course we gotta pay rent, so money connects, but uhh
I'd rather be broke and have a whole lot of respect
It's the principal of it, I get a rush when I bust
some dope lines oral, that maybe somebody'll quote"
-- O.C.
 

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11-09-2009, 06:33 AM

alright moderator rhymer ak47
think you can spit but ma rhymes a weapon
and ya yo disses are fucked please get to steppin
thinkin that coz your from cali that make you hard
i`ll kick you like steven gerrard
make you move a 100 yard
but ova here in europe we call im metere
please your a cheater and if a bitch was like you then we`ll leave her
please yous as smart as peter griffin
and real niggas like me keep it rippin
so go ak47 let it go
let it blow
im the doom and gloom when i hit the room
blamin people like you
like eastwood ill take you out at doon

 

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11-09-2009, 04:03 PM

AK just diss the guy above you please.....although you are also dissing the previous guy, the newbs here might see that as an open door to just start dissing anyone they please which will result in a chaotic thread.........

ok i wasn't gonna play but i guess ill post something........its been a minute since i posted a rhyme..........lmfao

when i attack im viscous bro, enough to dissect this bitches flow/
straight hit ya dome, with words that burns your existence yo/
your fuckin wack dude, if we were comparing skills yo i can't lose/
seriously my verse alone would body slam you until your backs bruised/
yea im that rude, lookin at ya pic, ya probably shoulda been born dead/
now logoff the internet and get back to programing nuclear war heads!/
was that outta line? my bad, its been a while since i just dissed for fun/
so bitch we're done, now is there extra wishes for the blackest leprechaun?/

Once while walking through the mall a guy came up to me and said "Hey, hows it going?". So I grabbed his arm and twisted it up behind his head and said "Now whose asking the questions?"
 

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11-09-2009, 04:18 PM

Originally Posted by VerbTech View Post
AK just diss the guy above you please.....although you are also dissing the previous guy, the newbs here might see that as an open door to just start dissing anyone they please which will result in a chaotic thread.........
Aight my bad tech. I was typin' up a rhyme for Futeki, but amecrussel beat me to it so I just thought it'd be a waste of effort. I'll watch it from here on out.

Anyways, whoever posts next please diss VerbTech and not me.

"Of course we gotta pay rent, so money connects, but uhh
I'd rather be broke and have a whole lot of respect
It's the principal of it, I get a rush when I bust
some dope lines oral, that maybe somebody'll quote"
-- O.C.
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