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Goma
Eyes of the fallen

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10-01-2009, 07:18 AM

Listen up you think your shit is sick
But all ya really spit is cum
Too much dick comin in and outta your mouth
Drop the dictionary, drop the pen, quit
Use words you yourself can comprehend
Steady rhythm attack I'm taken back
Reread what you wrote, I can't tap a note
No beat to be heard of, No rhythm to be seen
magical clips, scripts...
Cut it man your done, your own lyrics got you spun
dawning on his flame you spit...
A Metaphorical statement gone wrong
Think before you write
Then read and rewrite
I can ghost write for ya if ya like


Peace

Rip my shit =)
 

D0sage
Elemental Inspiration

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10-01-2009, 05:13 PM

Eyes of the fallen got a glass eye and a stigmatic infection
don't think your gunna diss,
check your words and apply protection
my shit is kinda so-so fuck ill roast on myself
How you think you became a ghost
Shit you pleaded for help
you screamed and you yelled,
before LEGION got you with that lyrical ammunition
this is no competition, this is my rhyme with submission
too broke to pay admission,
and you say I got no flow
But who the fuck rhymes "write" with "rewrite" , are you that slow?
are you that pro, to where you can talk shit and bring nothin back
Its genocide trying to re-track with somethin that's fuckin whack
so before I pack,
up its been ripped like a virgin coochie
so lay back and stay there sick ass little groupie
=)
 

L.E.G.I.O.N.
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10-01-2009, 11:34 PM

this is my rhyme with a knock out, ha ha second round
i will have this little kid, fightin from the ground
i established the fact, not even Ares would beat me
so this blank dosage will be erased completely

ill also hit you with my lyrical ammunition
and dont think i wont, i have targeted your position
this is a freestyle so i wont kill you with a written
cuz that would be slaughter, so try to show me your submission

the theoretical statements that have all been revealed
have opened my eyes to a whole new battlefield
one that has no room for pussies like you
come at me with your crew, but you will still lose

the rhymes that i write have a flow in my head
but they come to drown you in waves, so my victims are dead
and the dosage you deliver is wacker than wack
makes me wanna cock the hammer back, and watch your brains splat...

come at me with some real shit bitch hahahah t double c!!!!! im ready for you bro...
 

Mode
World Reknown

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10-02-2009, 04:10 AM

kid you are nothin to front, motherfucker you suck,
treat ya ugly ass flow like ya ugly ass face 'n cover it up,
claimin you hot with a freestyle you wrote down?
you aint dope clown, you a joke there's no doubt,
peep my respect, an amount you'll never reach or collect,
you a bitch, a trick freak 'n a wench kid aint even a vet,
so stop braggin ya hustler 'cos damn you a buster,
a faggot a chump, son you the wackest to jump up,
i bet you never even touched a bitch in ya life kid,
and unless you a sphincter you aint ever spit tight shit..

 

D0sage
Elemental Inspiration

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10-04-2009, 02:39 AM

Okay ill give that much ta ya, killed him clean simple and quick
You write mean so I cant seriously touch this ish
I cant touch that shit, but I can kill you just as hard
Stop to bombard
you with bombs too close to the face
ill cut up the pace throw knifes,swords with grace all over the place
too much embrace, ill kill the details and get to the chase
dont write your verses ctrl plus A and erase
its a fuckin disgrace how I,
I see the respect
but all I wanna do is just direct
everything you throw at him and make it go round
with theoretically adhesive nouns
fuckin quote clown
then the officers recheck the cell
and find the lyrics you wrote down..
 

therealkickass
The REAL Kick-Ass

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10-05-2009, 05:56 AM

This dumb founded nigga looking dumb in his picture
I can squish you with my finger it would be off your fucking rector
I’ll use some stealthy Ninjitsu mixed with some Gracie Jiu Jitsu
To get around you like some Tenchu to spit slugs that won’t miss you
And you gave that nigga Mode too much props, ya’ll can both kick rocks
You niggas are on some Kama Sutra shit like a knot both sucking each others cocks
Fuck an American Canyon ya’ll through punches without landing
Blast your face in with a cannon, through you out like Rich Gannon
And then send your bland blend back to whatever foul sin it arrived in
Making your sad attempted to spin rhymes like a medallion not win
 

stereo
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10-07-2009, 02:27 AM

The real kick ass, more like the fat kid picked last,
Your rhymes sound like they from 30 years in the past,
Trying to test me, with your gracie jiujitsu,
I'll put you in guard, mount, then side control like dude,
I'm a black belt, you still a single stripe,
Throw you into a triangle with just one swipe,
Clench that shit till i feel the slow in your heart's pace,
Leave you with a broken jaw similar to Mase,
After he was done getting fucked up by Ghostface,
 

BbOyJeOpArDy
M0DERHATER

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10-07-2009, 04:40 AM

look at that....

a verse all about fighting, but you cant stop me kid
you see im mr. miyagi, and youre the karate kid
and im dropping sick while you jocking dick, it's no lady he's on
make me a song, you're still stabbing that baby freeze wrong
you see youre just evidence that stereo quality can suck
move the crowd? please - you cant even make comedy stand up
fact is your rants suck, pull your pants up and stop bending forward
youre shit. to turn off the stereo is like ending torture
so stop rhyming, relax, go re-learn your coffee grinders and sixsteps
because when you misstep you'll learn the hard way of why jeopardy IS BEST

freestylesessionboard.yuku.com
^ check the events page v
thebboyspot.com
facebook.com/jeopardy1 - i like to battle people on bboy.org in real life
 

Bboy-hackz
aka Epic

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10-07-2009, 08:00 PM

hmm that sounds so sick but are you sure not strokin that dick?
now watcha got to say haha im just sayin roflmao all day
sittin back chillin relaxin haha and im even bboxin now i look at your silly rhymes haha i think you ran out of time....but wait i aint finished yet
i still forgot to say is your mom home yet?
=P

Practice Makes Permanent{It's not about bein the best it's about showin what you got!}"Take a Bow young ones and respect me..click it!''
 

Mr.Remote
IS BACK

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10-08-2009, 01:44 PM

this cats to wack/
i wont even attack/
back to the end/
get back in line/
try and re write ya verse to stay in time/
i bend.. like light through water/
rainbows of slaughter/
you just get caught up/
i dont even need rhyme scheme/
i just go straight for tha kill/
then get back home and send ya tha bill/
your girl see the total and all she do is scream/
but i still used words to kill with little rhymes seen/

currently have :

B-boying: Footwork, Nice ass transistions, some power...

poppin: Hitting, boogaloo, waves, tuts, glides, fresno, robotic/toying.
 

TONYLP
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10-10-2009, 11:49 AM

What the fuck wrong with you callin that dude wack/
Look in a mirror you buffoon, cause you way off track/
You say you don't need a rhyme scheme but you obviously do/
Sayin you bend like light through water, what the fucks wrong with you/
so get back to basics, and face it, you don't know jack shit/
my words and verbs erases the traces of this dumbass bitch/
Ima continue to push your buttons mr. remote/
I'd throw you in the ocean, but i remember shit floats/
so instead i'll punch you, and continue pushin ya/
pop you in the mouth like i pop a pimple and see the puss in ya/

no beef bro
 

G-Trickz
di bawse

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10-10-2009, 01:07 PM

now look at this guy called TONYLP/
looks like a new kid looks like a B/
i aint tryna send this is straight honesty/
so sit back down and drink a hot cup of tea/


its all luv out ere (no blasphomo)

..
 

Bboy-hackz
aka Epic

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10-12-2009, 02:06 AM

now who's this cat dissin the due that's got my back
dude sersly ya gotta stop steppin back
I'll slay ya kill ya send ya mom the meat
then go to tha house and ask is there anything good to eat???
this is verbal abraysive abuse killin ya rhymes and slappin a douche
haha i think i just slapped u!
=] no beef bro =]

Practice Makes Permanent{It's not about bein the best it's about showin what you got!}"Take a Bow young ones and respect me..click it!''
 

Bboy-Sharkz
Bboy FiN/MirroRz

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10-12-2009, 03:47 AM

Yo hear I am with da faggot in brown
hes tryin to spit some rhymes,
but I aint hearin no sounds
instead I gotta make fun of dis clown
bud ima beat you so bad,
you be datin Chris Brown

No beef bro

"God gave you shoes to fit you, so put em on and wear em."

"You spend Minutes, Hours, Days, Weeks, or even months over-Analyzing a situation;trying to put the pieces together, justifying what couldve,shouldve,wouldve happened..Or you can just leave the pieces on the floor and move the fuck on."
 

Anghellic
The Terror Reign

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10-12-2009, 07:22 PM

They got a Sand Shark facing a Great white,
Couldn't beat me with 8 Mics,
all Listed with the lyrics posted,
n You were hosting the segment,
Fuck it I'll be back in a second....
prolly at his keyboard pullin hair like
OH GOD AM I STRESSIN!,
cause dudes wack join the federline squad,
N come back when you got some betters lines god,
You probably B Boy in Skinny Jeans...with a pink Polo,
Long hair n Goofy as fuck like yer mixed with brink n frodo....

baggins...

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