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07-01-2009, 07:04 PM

im probably not very good but...

jedi you say rise or die well im gunna rise while you sigh and cry,
its diss the other guy so dont go woundering why i choose you to die,
when i declare war i throw metaphors like micheal moore in starwars,
show me a line with death and pain come on jedi why did you pick that name,
did you think you would get fame instead my snipers aim at your head,
as your dead filled with led i fed my cannibals what was left of your head,
with that said i think many are happy with you dead,
if you try to retaliate i wont procrastinate or hesitate to show you my hate,
its fate that you dissapate because here im the one you fear.

queer!

Last edited by adam-aka-bboy-ace : 07-02-2009 at 08:11 PM.

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07-02-2009, 03:26 AM

this so called ace is dissin the wrong guy/
his value could be the lowest, or at the top, very high/
guess he choose the first option, he's rated in last place/
this guy ain't fast pace lost to himself in a race/
and couldn't even get a date with Mrs. eve/
fate put them together, he leaves, saying only men please/
doubting his own skilll before he writes his verse/
this is an art, quit before you start looking any worse/

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07-02-2009, 04:47 AM

doubting his own skilll before he writes his verse/
this is an art, quit before you start looking any worse/

Okay well if the first verse didnt make things worse/
then i guess i'll make the second send you back in a hearse/
which will mean past death, like leave your soul cursed/
which works cause the fact is i enjoy going past the merk/
calling me an adversary is very very scary/
i would have to beg the contrary/
cause nobody's fuckin' with me as long as i have my bitch mary./
i'm at a leisure stroll singing down merrily/
your running to catch up and just doing that barely/
do i ever lose? lets just say it happens less often than rarely/
see you like the shit that i write in this and whats actually most stiflin' is/
the fact that i'm so good that someone here could only 'cite "the clipse"/
and i too like the clipse and i too can recite the shit/
"like a buck and a half can get you in the game/
anything less is just a god damn shame"/
i'm full of myself, but can you blame me for being this cocky/
cause in reality; do you know anyone that can stop me?/
 

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07-02-2009, 09:04 AM

First or second verse dude, none of your verses make sense
Your lines are all chewed, Like what is this nonsense?
He strolls around having conversations with himself
like fuck look at me i'm so god damn good at this man
instead stop yourself when you talk and realise, you are your biggest fan
Lets talk about his name for a second, bboy Jedi, what a fucking joke,
Well my names Darth Maul bitch and guess what. FORCE FUCKIN' CHOKE!
I'll let you know something before I wring the pride out of you
You're losing to me right now and there is nothing you can do.
 

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07-02-2009, 05:31 PM

Look at him go, dishin' out that flow.
Pssh, who are you kiddin'? You think you're spittin'?

Semi34, goin' up half way crashin' the floor.
Your name says it all; just climb up and freefall.

Splat! There's your body, all bloody, all shoddy
fallen on the ground so muddy, your mouth so shitty.

Ya ain' rhymin', you're posin', cheatin' thru and slitherin'
like a snake belly floppin' and chokin' you go wrigglin'

Right in my hands, right besides your friends.
I beat you in your "game" and you go burn in flames.

Embarassment ain't nuf to describe the harrassment
that I put you through; I welcome you to my regiment.

Ya just joined the losers I've burned and churned.

You're still around? Get down to da FLOOR!

-KennY-
 
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07-02-2009, 08:34 PM

jedi i told you i wouldent hesitate to unleash my hate if you were to retaliate,
with your girl i mate and your soul i ate,
your to late your dead i killed you,
imbolmed i filled you then sealed your doom,
as you fell in to hell you still feel your wounds,
no you dont get a tomb,
so dont think you can send me in a hearse,
with that wack verse,let me quench your therst
first ill reverse your curse then let the next guy give me his worst,

KRS one: hip means to know its a form of intelligence to be hip is to be up to date and relavent. hop is a form of movment you cant just observe a hop you gotta hop up and do it hip and hop is more then music hip is the knowledge hop is the movement hip and hop is intelligent movment.
 

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07-02-2009, 10:06 PM

Are you for real? Callin' yourself Bboy Ace?
All I see is a newbie ramblin at his own pace.//

Sadly, but truthfully ya can't even spell.
A freshly dumped kid in da scene whom I smell.//

I give mad love to those who try to fly.
But you ain't it; you I must deep fry.//

Revolutinize is the motto, but you synthesize in your grotto
cheap rhymes only worthy of pass times; ring a chime?//

Yea that's you; you the wannabe, the sucker-to-be.
How about I suggest you one thing: go on a goddam spellin' bee.//

You're still around? Get down to da FLOOR!

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07-03-2009, 02:08 AM

Originally Posted by B-Boy.FReaK
Yea that's you; you the wannabe, the sucker-to-be.
How about I suggest you one thing: go on a goddam spellin' bee.//
go on a spelling bee? What are you telling me? /
Cuz i know anything i spit is a goddamn felony /
i hit the beats and i spit the melody /
You're sick full of jealousy, cuz' you won't be the end of me/
i'ma put this cat in his proper place /
The referee had to stop the race cus you can't clock the pace /
rock ya face then i'll chop ya waist /
i spit the taste and i dope create /
i'm hot like the oven when it's time to bake/
I'm from philly and i'll cypher you to cheesesteak //

Originally Posted by adam-aka-bboy-ace
with that wack verse,let me quench your therst
first ill reverse your curse then let the next guy give me his worst,
you said give the worst, but i think that's reversed /
I'm the next in line too bad you spit first/
I'll leave you cursed and leave ya dirt immersed
I quench my thirst and i soak your shirt /
feel the hurt as i throw ya to the dirt/
I'm an idol to greats across the states/
I'm the foundation of rap like a cypher base/
I'm a lighter brace with a flow that can shoot to space/
I'm sweet like ya bowl of frosted flakes/
Sweeter than a chocolate cake, make no mistake/
I cut ya line so ya better check ya brakes//

Originally Posted by semi34
I'll let you know something before I wring the pride out of you
You're losing to me right now and there is nothing you can do.
Theres one thing i can do and that's rap/
I'm dope like crack and you're flow is wack/
I flatten your cap and i'll smash your trap/
Rock ya chin strap and knock your front teeth into your lap/
Simply put i've got this rook shook/
i give him the look to get his bravery cooked/
I'm no classy or classic and i got no track/
But i know how to put cats on their back like a backpack/
See this shit it off the top, it's un-orthodox/
See me rock these chalks and bring the cops/
Don't fuck arround with this shit that i'm spittin'/
The fact it's here written means it'll def get bitten/
Cus i look at you and i know this cat ain't got it/
I'm about to clear your socket and stick your eye to the corner pocket/
Cutting you down a few notches is the reason that i do this/
You know that i rule this/
Smack you in your two lips you'll end up under tulips//
 
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07-03-2009, 04:10 AM

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you said give the worst, but i think that's reversed /
I'm the next in line too bad you spit first/
I'll leave you cursed and leave ya dirt immersed
I quench my thirst and i soak your shirt /
feel the hurt as i throw ya to the dirt/
I'm an idol to greats across the states/
I'm the foundation of rap like a cypher base/
I'm a lighter brace with a flow that can shoot to space/
I'm sweet like ya bowl of frosted flakes/
Sweeter than a chocolate cake, make no mistake/
I cut ya line so ya better check ya brakes//
its true im not threw,
you keep coming back with the wackest attacks,
as a matter of fact ya did soak my shirt,
as i fed from your hurt and your blood squirt,
your sweet but im bitter your girl i hit her,
after i fucked her and the sitter while flirting with your mom on twitter,
you dont even know wtf your reversing anymore,
rehearsing your come backs you implore,
the sore's left on your girl half undressed,
i leay to rest impressed with the mess i messed,
blood doused all over your house,
dead bodies all over its over sweet men cant win against me,

KRS one: hip means to know its a form of intelligence to be hip is to be up to date and relavent. hop is a form of movment you cant just observe a hop you gotta hop up and do it hip and hop is more then music hip is the knowledge hop is the movement hip and hop is intelligent movment.
 

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07-03-2009, 04:33 AM

its true im not threw,
you keep coming back with the wackest attacks,
as a matter of fact ya did soak my shirt,
as i fed from your hurt and your blood squirt,
your sweet but im bitter your girl i hit her,
after i fucked her and the sitter while flirting with your mom on twitter,
you dont even know wtf your reversing anymore,
rehearsing your come backs you implore,
the sore's left on your girl half undressed,
i leay to rest impressed with the mess i messed,
blood doused all over your house,
dead bodies all over its over sweet men cant win against me,
Yo i got alotta dope rhymes
I got lights you can't compare the size
Bright enough to single past your eyes
and it's obvious what you spit is all lies
Salty and wet like mcdonalds fries
I'll blow this joint with guns n heavy ammo
I walk immortal like half naked rambo
I waste the mags and pop the frags
I murk these cats and i spank yo ass
I'ma treat this battle like lazer tag
And have sniffin coke out a paper bag
Theres no way you could be a lamer fag
Cus man Adam-Aces name, Is not a big fame
Theres no way i'ma lose to this walking shit stain
I got a sick brain and dope lame
I got the skills in this battle to bring change
 

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07-03-2009, 01:27 PM

Jedi must of been practicing the wrong technique/
writes many verses, but he gets worse with each/
skills would go the wrong direction on a one way street/
you could never sin again and hell would still be where you'd sleep/
this guys talent keeps depleting, your ass i'll be deleting/
like the old michael jordon shoulda just stopped competing/
your supposed to be dissin cats, not doing a self promo/
half naked rambo? that comparisons fuckin homo/
now i'm starting a full out war, you treat this like a game/
and wouldn't score on an empty net, your really that lame/

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07-03-2009, 03:20 PM

Yo i got alotta dope rhymes
I got lights you can't compare the size
Bright enough to single past your eyes
and it's obvious what you spit is all lies
Salty and wet like mcdonalds fries
I'll blow this joint with guns n heavy ammo
I walk immortal like half naked rambo
I waste the mags and pop the frags
I murk these cats and i spank yo ass
I'ma treat this battle like lazer tag
And have sniffin coke out a paper bag
Theres no way you could be a lamer fag
Cus man Adam-Aces name, Is not a big fame
Theres no way i'ma lose to this walking shit stain
I got a sick brain and dope lame
I got the skills in this battle to bring change
dope rhymes your running outa hope with them wack lines,
at times i might get out standing fines,
putting up signs with your head cut off to top it off,
i waff the smell of you rotting in hell,
but dont tell that illegaly i sell your fragrance as ace de la pell,
my agents are trained well i send them to kill your friends,
unable to mend together again theres now one left to defend,
ill lend you a menu to the venue you should attend to,
and send you an invitation to the collaboration,
a party with hardy burgers, waiters,caters but no haters,
and all your ex gf's as stripers the sitter and your sisters,
every one else here are kidders,
now sit down its time for dinner with the ultimate sinner bboy ace,
the winner!

KRS one: hip means to know its a form of intelligence to be hip is to be up to date and relavent. hop is a form of movment you cant just observe a hop you gotta hop up and do it hip and hop is more then music hip is the knowledge hop is the movement hip and hop is intelligent movment.
 

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07-03-2009, 04:25 PM

It's called diss the pervious guy not diss whoever you quote...you shouldn't be posting right after someone dissed you either.

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07-03-2009, 05:38 PM

Originally Posted by Backfire View Post
Jedi must of been practicing the wrong technique/
writes many verses, but he gets worse with each/
skills would go the wrong direction on a one way street/
you could never sin again and hell would still be where you'd sleep/
this guys talent keeps depleting, your ass i'll be deleting/
like the old michael jordon shoulda just stopped competing/
your supposed to be dissin cats, not doing a self promo/
half naked rambo? that comparisons fuckin homo/
now i'm starting a full out war, you treat this like a game/
and wouldn't score on an empty net, your really that lame/
haha it was like 2AM xD i know it was terrible
 
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07-03-2009, 06:44 PM

Originally Posted by Backfire View Post
It's called diss the pervious guy not diss whoever you quote...you shouldn't be posting right after someone dissed you either.
yea i know me and jedi kinda just had a war goin on haha

KRS one: hip means to know its a form of intelligence to be hip is to be up to date and relavent. hop is a form of movment you cant just observe a hop you gotta hop up and do it hip and hop is more then music hip is the knowledge hop is the movement hip and hop is intelligent movment.
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