[JRod]

what the fuck happened to this thread.

it used to be so promising *sigh*

[BboyJedi]

Okay, here's a little shit I wrote last night
I'm really sick of listening to you cats fight
Cuz that's like watching two asswipes smoking crackpipes
It's a sad sight; like a Nazi witnessing the fall of the last Reich
you're so full of fear that you're half past fright
And you're half past dead if you pass that light
And even if you fight back with more than half-assed might
You're already so far left everyone else looks right
You're gone, you ain't coming back, that's what it looks like
Cuz you can't reach the sky on a high, you're gonna need real height
In a world full of darkness, everybody wants light
But this world's full of money, so everybody's uptight
Like god during judgment, you fleas I shall smite
No, I don't need to look back at what I write
Cuz as soon as it leaves my brain you already know it's tight.

[Semi34]

Whining isn't going to solve the so called "promises" you speak of.

[L.E.G.I.O.N.]

i finally caught caught semi like a fish trapped in a net
ima keep this simple so you dont feel like ima threat
your rhymes are weak and childish so dont call yourself the best
cuz if you do then ima put a desert eagle through a test
you have people online tryin to make somthin of therselves
so why dont you do the same, chase fame and common wealth
if you didnt read my last post, well i said i was the elite
so keep in mind that if your rhymes are weak, they will be my treat

[bboy clip]

you can feed on my lines fiendishly and never become dope.
i smash ya hopes with punches to the middle of ya throat.
you wanna stay simple cuz its all you can do,
pretending to be the shit ima slap the make-up off ya face too.
slash with razors and leave a legion where ya liver will hang through,
drop a couple of bows and just to color your brains blue.
i got ill tactics for sad kids actin with their wackness.
deliver bombs to ya porch and leave ya ass blackend.
to the point where you cant breathe, you call it a burn of the 3rd degree but we all know its just you layin in defeat.

[AJTL]

You are a duckling
you are a ugly
yo smell like poo
and look like it too!

[Alcab-boy]

Ugly ducking? Is that an insult dude?
Your heads up your ass jumping around like a kangaroo
You better step back 'fore ya' hurt yourself
Better get back before your heads for sell on a shelf


I'm obviously not that great.

[Save]

Youre a noob,
now excuse me while i suck on your boob.
i might hafta choob you moob,
so keep walking you stupid cooby looby toob

[BboyJedi]

You don't have the right to call someone else lifeless
Unless you yourself appreciate the value of what life is
Life is justice and vice grip vices
Whether or not you fight the vices, the price is priceless
But all in all, life is sweet as cherry ices
Life is complex ideas and devices
My license allows me the right to start a crisis
People stop to listen to me spit- my voice simply entices
I have legs that are faster than Jerry Rice's
Starting a fire so this rap i just light this
One of yous will probably bite this
I won't call ya out though, out of sheer niceness
I must admit though yous have pretty nice writs
I know we all make sacrifices
And now freestylin is a part of my lifeless life bitch
And neither of you two could do shit like this
So frankly, I don't give a shit whether or not you like this
Know your place bitch, Jedi is the nicest
You dikes are real smooth like ice picks
And you're hard like prison stiff right dicks
You'll never guess how long it took to write this
'bout as long as it takes Mike Jackson to write hits
And with the right hits, I can hit the right tits
This is as left as right gets
I left it right where the site sits
And I cite the site everytime I sight the fight list
That's all the hype shit I can rhyme with light so goodnight kids

[newb-boyblaze]

yo im bout to stomp on this PA kid

yo i put away anxious people and poets and also poets poems in dark pits angrily

all because people attempt to point there laser pointers at me not properly angled G

you see if you so left to the right of a clockwise race

you on the out lookin in runnin at a slower pase

so you end up in last place

yo let me show you a sample of how sick tast

but first you got to stop spittin your wack flows ace

cuz all it show is that your more annoying then discussing a case with nancy grace

yea i put you "rappers" in ya place


and you from a crew thats armed and dangeruos well bring them on cuz i be slayn them all day like from dusk till dawn

and when the dusk rises the dead, (zombies) ill be off with there head

event if it means if im forever seein red from blood shed

and i live every crew with a big fuck you at who ever dissis on what i said


cheakin out at 14

[AJTL]

You little punk
your rhymes are junk
i put them in a trunk
you smell like skunk

[newb-boyblaze]

what the crap!......someone who is somewhat serious with rhyming could of dissed me and it be good but now someone has to diss you ....and you just suck sounding like dr.suse or some shit

[AJTL]

im better
youre a feather
you suck like vacuum
my ryhmes go vroom vroom

[newb-boyblaze]

wow

[L.E.G.I.O.N.]

DR. suess doesnt even suck that bad. "t" you just insulted him