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Elbee
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07-07-2008, 09:33 AM

come on homie, seriously, is that all you got
you're like drunk tightrope walkers, falling off
your whole diss is hilarious, got no fucking style bro
if you survive after this, consider it your biggest milestone
fuck you, success always eludes you, just like the female species
my lyrics sharper than that spear used to impale jesus
its no surprise that when I spit, this guy is beaten
cuz' honestly, a free like this is doper than your tightest writtens

The maker of my destiny, mould it with these hands of midas.

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VicValSwift
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07-07-2008, 01:40 PM

I move like a german blitzkrieg, carrying battlescars
Dawg, why do you have yourself dancing in your avatar?
Straight faggot shit, it's no wonder you have no bboy skills
And my 'dong' is the only thing that's makin' 'kills'
 

JRod
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07-07-2008, 07:28 PM

the people that are dissing you, your quoting
why dont you get off his dick and stop blowing
only got noobs in this thread for you to impress
no avatar, cause your stupid and its too complex
you never be the best cause your just too weak
in hell, about to burn your soul from what i speak
 

VicValSwift
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07-07-2008, 07:37 PM

LMFAO. The dude deleted his post..
 

FFWB
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07-07-2008, 09:54 PM

you ain't burnin' souls bitch, ya all talk/
you annoyin' like an itch, I'm tall stock//
no avatar is better than your goofy shit/
cartoon animals? man that's proof he bitch//
and now ya system's glitched, I'm a fuckin' disease/
i'm sick, and I spit quick, strike terror into enemies//

it's like the barbershop y'all... NEXT!
 

VicValSwift
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07-07-2008, 11:47 PM

After I'm done with you, you'll leave with bruises the blackest
The only precedents you're settin' is being the wackest
Fuck with this MC, you'll be layin' beneath the dirt
Strike terror? you the type to hide from girls in skirts
Move like a phantom, the way I lurk and drift
You should instead tattoo your arm "murked by Swift"
 

zul00n
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07-08-2008, 12:09 AM

yo vic val i mean gasmic' gal u wack just quit
like a pimp, i like to slap my bitch
your nothing but a hoe on the street
Strike terror? you aint killin fools, you beat meats
you like sweet skeet, freshly hot with heat
you stealthy just to sneak to see hot guys
u invisable, aint nuttin to be shy
with there fly unzip, you watch them strip
equip some toys and make a relationship
 

dead-i-logik
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07-08-2008, 01:23 AM

hold up zu
ya rhyme styles weak to me
ya febal minded brain got a leak in it "g"
how u goin box wit gods
when u retarded in slow
behold the illest one is about to unfold
u like sweet skeet skeet
here..take the load
as a matter of fact
ya need to get ya style in tact
u soft as kitten
and im a thundercat
hoeeeeeeee!!!
is what u are 2 me
dont be mad
this is simply art 2 me
but if u take 1 step closer
im a punture an artery
obviously ur artilary is non-existant
listen e-rapper
tap out--go ahead submit kid
 
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07-08-2008, 02:08 AM

now hold up logik you might have dissed zu
but you know now i'm coming after you
the way you ryhme make you sound whiter than bread
you made a grave mistake when posting on this thread
if zu is a hoe to you then youz a bitch to me
and if you dont recognize i'll somehow make you see
that i'm better than you'll ever be
now hold up i'm sorry for what i just said
forget everything that you just read
cuz now i'm coming at you stonger than ever
cuz the amount of times you banged bitches was never
for that you need a lesson from the master
roadrunner here to teach you how to hump faster
cuz them bitches and hoes like the way i do
but when they see you, they're like "EWW!!!"
 

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07-08-2008, 02:25 AM

Edit: this verse is at dead_i_logik or w/e his name is. the guy posted b4 me while i was taking a dump.

you a thundercat? bitch, thundercats hooo/
my flow so tight its like cock lock reload/
with this bullet im sure to puncture your skull/
n leave you body limp on the side of the road/
speaking of retards youre the weakest of yo race/
kinda like a little dwarf without his +1 mace/
trying to rhyme smart but youre failing miserably/
all thats coming out yo mouth is "Im a Di Di Deeee"/
so go back to your special class and your special bus/
get let out five minutes early and still get left in the dust/

Last edited by _-=FiRe=-_ : 07-08-2008 at 04:19 PM.

MODS, IF YOU READ THIS, PLEASE CHANGE MY ACCOUNT NAME TO "Sketch".

THANKS IN ADVANCE
 

JRod
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07-08-2008, 02:25 AM

LOL at the talent in this thread
 

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07-08-2008, 02:29 AM

americas got talent?

MODS, IF YOU READ THIS, PLEASE CHANGE MY ACCOUNT NAME TO "Sketch".

THANKS IN ADVANCE
 
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07-08-2008, 02:35 AM

well i'm new to ciphering and freestyling so i'm just getting started with this. that was actually my first freestyle rap ever lol
 

dead-i-logik
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07-08-2008, 02:45 AM

haha..funny shit fire..its all good..il take 2 verses against me as a compliment
 

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07-08-2008, 10:05 PM

ayo, quit playin with "fire" cuz you gonna get burned/
let's see how you react when them shot's returned/
you got alot to learn, my flows make headz stop and turn/
yea, you talk like you 'bout it, "cocked and locked" but ya aim's off/
nigga, I slang rocks like slang shots/
I stay with the heat, I bear arms like tank tops/
you aint hot, let's see where you be when them thangs pop/
you runnin, hidin off in the bushes, lookin like crack addict/
I'm on the front line with them semi-automatics/
faggots, I aint just dissin this last dude/
I'm talkin to all you bitches and wack crewz...


lets get this shit poppin nigga
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