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03-07-2003, 05:02 PM

kid I dont even see why I should diss you
bitch your shits so whack i should just skip you
you cant even rap your whole ryhme patterns weak
what you wanna battle me, but whats that sound?
I hear chattering teeth your scared arent ya clown
cuz I shatter the beat, assault n batter emcees
that think there sick but catch the whack rappers disease
 

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03-07-2003, 05:11 PM

Dez-V i should diss you, you call yerself an MC?/
I should but a lead ball in your chest, so i dont have to here the rest, of your crap rap to be/
I control you and throw blows that leave you dazed/
your rythmical assault wont even leave me phased/
ill just grab my weed and blaze/
All nite or all day, but what do you care, yall just fuckin gay/
so stay back and off my track before i run you over and yall get smacked/
You think of yerself as the shit, ill sink you in my toilet, like a battleship/
you might be cool, who knows? but i think your not/
oh shit, you got verberally shot!/

MC Wang
nuff said
 

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03-07-2003, 05:49 PM

wang chung,

this rap is a diss,
i'm right on target bitch, i never miss,
i wouldn't piss on you to put out a fire,
my lyrical concepts satisfy your every desire,
like a funeral pyre, i roll on you like a tyre,
what?, you think i'ma stop?,
i aint even hot,
i'ma diss you some more,
i gotta settle the score, till the end when i can think no more,
my raps make you look poor, knock you to the floor,
throw you out the door,
i'm the best, forget about the rest,
you couldn't pass the test,
me and your girl be havin a slut-fest,
ha, i liked that last one, but just you wait wang chung, i aint done,
now it's time to have some fun,
enough is enough, now it's time to get rough,
i don't need to bluff, i'm the best at this stuff,
nigga's be actin tough, but they is lost,
'cos your rhyme was too soft,
nothin is stoppin, these words i be droppin,
puttin the final nails in your coffin,
this shit is serious, no time to be delerious,
nigga now i'm furious,
get out of my way, 'cos if you stay,
my .45 will blow you away, you wont have time to say,
as your life fades away,
when you take your final sleep, you realise i don't pack any heat,
'twas just my words and this rhyme that put an end to your time,
this rap was intimidation, now it's time for your cremation.
 
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03-07-2003, 05:50 PM

Whos this wang chung think he is anyway
tryin to diss my shit by sayin I'm gay
Yo what if I was you still couldnt fuck with me
so just shut the fuck up before this shit turns ugly
cuz I dont spit for money I spit to kill shit
so ya better watch you mouth or git hit for real bitch
then you'll feel this as I kick in ya grill
you textcee bitch try spittin for real
 

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03-07-2003, 07:42 PM

that wang chung was a noob, hes just tryin out//
so fuck him, and leave him out too//
its u and me now, so get some rhymes//
start the spit and send them in time//
you better watch who u dissin too//
cos shit gets ugly, and starts to look just like you//
so stop the gay jokes, their toke//
so stop spittin cos u choke, u'll get broke//


Peace bro (again no beef)

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03-07-2003, 08:38 PM

The only thing i broke was your fugly face/, hell, peeps like you are like a new species, a new race/, litte children who never got to first base/, now trace, back to the time when you were still pickin up the pace/, guess what, your keepin up with me is still a damn disgrace/, another useless chase, cause im the master-tongue-twister/, faster-lung-splitter, while i leave you as the mister-dung-shitter/, blistered-hunged-hitter, obese ballyed-total-fitter/

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blistered-hunged-hitter, obese ballyed-total-fitter - 03-07-2003, 10:29 PM

obese balleyed-total-fitter?/
try a new verse rewind the little **critter/
dumb behind rhymes is all i can hear/
i guess the only thing comin thru my ear is the rhymes frum dis queer/
now im the masta of dis spot/
leavin behind a new era/
ima drop it like its hot//

** i have no idea where the f*** dat came frum
 
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03-08-2003, 12:05 AM

oh shit, why did i post-this-topic? now look who shows up... this cat with a roasted-logic.
i'll toast-your-phonics... i enter your room to see all of your walls with my posters-on-it.
he's boring, but he's got a fun-sister , i got her drunk last night, but somehow, he's hung-with-her.
he must have been drunk when he signed up, cuz his name's a tongue-twister!

hahaha, just playin around
peace
 

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03-08-2003, 01:19 AM

Razzle thinks he Dazzles readers, but he's simply not felt/
His wackness attacks the retina causin eye welts/
Misdealt every single keystroke you rhyme/
Can't get us high even with ya "coke" head lines!!/
It's discharge time so ya dishonorably dismissed/
This is it cuz I only get a couple bars ta rip you apart wit/
I won't miss, just quickly throw the last bar down/
Ya shouda tried ta win the finals. Why'd you hand Poptart the crown??/



hehe it's all good. Peace.



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03-08-2003, 02:11 AM

ya talent's hidden behind way too many layers of wack/
like layers of fat, stacked together takes place of the spine you lack//
shred you of ya dignity and dough; now you sleepin on a park bench/
you just a closet mc- that why ya mic shrouded in darkness//
came to site with hope but once i spit i cut ya vocal chords/
and sent you back to ya home page: www.backtothedrawinboard/
.com, i drop bombs that crush palms/
with my book of talent disses that run longer than bible psalms///



 

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TO TALENT - 03-08-2003, 02:19 AM

yo ya golden mic is about to get burned by my Raging Demon,
my platinum style is high class, yours is broke like a poor person,
ok stop the serching, people we found the gay rapper,
we'll hang him tomorrow, GORGANUS is champ this is a night to remember,
i'll put my hand in a blender, and TA DA.. nothing will happen,
you try it and get cut up, cause why i pushed the power button
yo i 'am just joking, i'am bored as fuck trying this battling bit,
i could battle and fuck at the same time, now that's some TALENTED shit,


GORGANUS HAS SPOKEN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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oops - 03-08-2003, 02:19 AM

sorry razor

GORGANUS HAS SPOKEN!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 

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03-08-2003, 06:28 AM

gorganus,
you is rapping like you got a sore anus,
your raps are getting worse, thats the effects of my curse,
i'm a lyrical wizard, you got caught in my blizzard,
you rap about gays, so what you must be,
or you just got HIV?,
you can never touch me, and don't even try diss me,
it's just not healthy,
Gorganus has spoken, but his voice be soundin broken,
'cos he gets shot down after his raps gone to town,
stop trying to rap, you look like a clown,
my word come down like a shower,
already you feel the power, this is my third entry in this game,
your my 3rd victim i've had to shame.
 

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03-08-2003, 06:37 AM

no beef intended gorganus
 

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TO RAIAN - 03-08-2003, 06:49 AM

yo who you trying to diss, that shit was softer than cotton,
(wait do yo smell that shit?) this new cat rhymes are rotten!
tell me i rap about gay's i'am sorry if your offended,
i'll rain blow's on ya faggot ass, and now your life has ended,
GORGANUS HAS SPOKEN!! this is my sing out that i'am quoting,
i'll say it again to piss you off, even now at 5:30 in da morning,
son you can't test me even if i write ya rhymes for you,
saying i'am your third victim can't you count it's now two.


yo when you get 30 or more post, then we battle
that cool son respect.one
oohh and i almost forgot

GORGANUS HAS SPOKEN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:
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