[Transcendent]

Originally Posted by JRod stupid little ass bling, your disses dont sting trying to be gangsta but never killed a thing dissing elbee when hes probably your daddy saying you bling but dont even make a salary why you got four when you should have less how is a little ass kid gonna get any respect stupid shit got more respect than brain cells and had more guys inside you than a jail cell

Hey I don't come at people unless they come at me./
But you'd know all about that, you wack ass gay MC./
Of course I have no salary, I own the fuckin universe./
Only time you do a drive by is when you've died and in a hearse./
I'm well respected because the rhetoric has been perfected./
Your neglected and on the road to being cut, dissected./
Unless you change your course of action, I'll be forced to disintegrate./
So stop with the hostility and let's cause the site to integrate./

[Khaled]

Originally Posted by 61!/V9 Hey I don't come at people unless they come at me./ But you'd know all about that, you wack ass gay MC./ Of course I have no salary, I own the fuckin universe./ Only time you do a drive by is when you've died and in a hearse./ I'm well respected because the rhetoric has been perfected./ Your neglected and on the road to being cut, dissected./ Unless you change your course of action, I'll be forced to disintegrate./ So stop with the hostility and let's cause the site to integrate./

he might be gay but your worse, your just wack
you get no replies when you scream 'HOLLA BACK'
the crowd hates you cuz your boring and lame
everytime you spit a rhyme it sounds all the same
the only thing youve dissected is your dick
to find out that you cant disect a 3 cm stick
sorry man this rap game is not for you
reminds me of germany and the fucking jews
you get slaughtered, laughed at and then boo'd
for me to losing not an option, infact its a sin,
I have no other goddamn option but to win
unlike you when i get on the stage the lights dont dim
but they get alot brighter and they seem to shim
and Im sorry didnt mean to rip you like Em and Kim.

[Transcendent]

Who let this poser in the forum? You need to vacate./
If you aggravate, I'll decapitate, with a tre eight./
Your rhymes are weak like infants, we all know they're too feeble./
Satan kept me out of Hades for just being too evil./
That fact alone has shown that I'm known to take mortality./
In reality your sexuality contains an abnormality./
So I don't even need to kill you, the AIDS will do that for me./
Quite simply I'm superior, that's it, end of story./

[VicValSwift]

Originally Posted by Khaled he might be gay but your worse, your just wack you get no replies when you scream 'HOLLA BACK' the crowd hates you cuz your boring and lame everytime you spit a rhyme it sounds all the same the only thing youve dissected is your dick to find out that you cant disect a 3 cm stick sorry man this rap game is not for you reminds me of germany and the fucking jews you get slaughtered, laughed at and then boo'd for me to losing not an option, infact its a sin, I have no other goddamn option but to win unlike you when i get on the stage the lights dont dim but they get alot brighter and they seem to shim and Im sorry didnt mean to rip you like Em and Kim.

After this, the trophy i'll be takin' home
You rap like a dyslexic with down syndrome
Wackass, you're just material to feed my bored mind
Stupid enough to think "timepiece"* is a gun to record time
You know my rhymes are enough to be fazin' 'ya
This homo sucks dick even in conditions of dysphagia
You're as wack as the DJ you stole your name from
Fuck with your brain like a surgeon, that's how it became numb

*A watch.

[Khaled]

Originally Posted by VicValSwift After this, the trophy i'll be takin' home You rap like a dyslexic with down syndrome Wackass, you're just material to feed my bored mind Stupid enough to think "timepiece"* is a gun to record time You know my rhymes are enough to be fazin' 'ya This homo sucks dick even in conditions of dysphagia You're as wack as the DJ you stole your name from Fuck with your brain like a surgeon, that's how it became numb *A watch.

thinkin your a Brain surgeon?
its more like a gay virgin
with no freinds or homies
best you can do is blow me
my vocabulary is great like Zeus
like your moms pussy its loose
Im pretty tired now and need to go
so imma holla at ya tommorow yo.

*im tired like fuck so i dunno kinda sucks*

[Mr.Remote]

Originally Posted by Khaled thinkin your a Brain surgeon? its more like a gay virgin with no freinds or homies best you can do is blow me my vocabulary is great like Zeus like your moms pussy its loose Im pretty tired now and need to go so imma holla at ya tommorow yo. *im tired like fuck so i dunno kinda sucks*

Ok, now lets look at this rhyme for a minute/
how could your vocab be great with words from second grade/
this little kid needs wake up and get brave/
if it's a gay virgin your look for theres a mirror by your name/
load up a icon and not one of that gay khaled dj/
your shit so easy to flip off of and play/
that I feel like a gymnastic girl from UGA/
the hell outta my game till you learn to write/
me against you is like a easy to win fight/
little midget, meet my uzi/ and on 123 your brains will be oozing/
all over Bling and Vicvalswift the neat MC's/

[Transcendent]

Don't try to rip the homie Vic, he's coming at ya swift./
You think you tough? You're about as hard as baby shit./
I'll extract your intestines and use them to double dutch./
Hospitalize you, when you get out beat you down with your crutch./
So you've had enough? Fine, surrender peacefully./
It only took me three bars to rip apart this weak MC./

EDIT:That was to Khaled, just so everybody knows.

[Khaled]

Originally Posted by Mr.Remote Ok, now lets look at this rhyme for a minute/ how could your vocab be great with words from second grade/ this little kid needs wake up and get brave/ if it's a gay virgin your look for theres a mirror by your name/ load up a icon and not one of that gay khaled dj/ your shit so easy to flip off of and play/ that I feel like a gymnastic girl from UGA/ the hell outta my game till you learn to write/ me against you is like a easy to win fight/ little midget, meet my uzi/ and on 123 your brains will be oozing/ all over Bling and Vicvalswift the neat MC's/

Im about to speak so slowly so you can understand,
youve spit the worst flowin verse lets get ya banned,
your off flow like theres turbulance in your rhymes,
droppin it like the US and humanitarian crimes,
your music prolly sounds like the caveman times,
stop hatin man cuz this about to be my main prime.

[Transcendent]

Your rhetoric is putrid, your lyrics way too sloppy./
Not just that, your flow is choppier than teppan yaki./
You could never stop me, you know my flow remains perpetual./
You make no sense at all like a rape that is consentual./
You seem to have forgotten, so here's a quick reminder./
Step to me, I'll rip you, like I rip virgins' vaginas./

[Khaled]

Originally Posted by 61!/V9 Your rhetoric is putrid, your lyrics way too sloppy./ Not just that, your flow is choppier than teppan yaki./ You could never stop me, you know my flow remains perpetual./ You make no sense at all like a rape that is consentual./ You seem to have forgotten, so here's a quick reminder./ Step to me, I'll rip you, like I rip virgins' vaginas./

i would keep on goin but I would be losin intellect
your pretty good man for you I got alot of respect
but lets face it, youv'e only got one simple defect
that you after me but it wasn't you whom i direct
the earlier rhymes to but i'm still trying to perfect
these rhymes so they can hit you and then disect
your body, then sicken you with venom and infect
you till your body's so sick your forced to reject
rapping against me cuz your body cannot collect
enough energy to redirect these rhymes and affect
me as hard as I did to you and just got you wrecked
like a ship that got hit by a wave and got sideswept
im so hot - dangerouse im called " the greenhouse effect".
The government don't like me cuz im here to resseruct
Hip Hop from its sad death and help to save and protect
it so we can start a real movement that will take effect
on everyone in the world so that they can be able to connect
to one source, leadership and one justice to expect
so help me out brother before you start to rhyme and reject
every word I just spit for reasons so that we may erect
and not mug one another like we got necked.

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shiiiit dunno why but i couldnt keep goin, let me know how this was.
thanks

[Transcendent]

That was probably the best one I've seen of yours so far. Rhymes were okay and your flow was decent, way better than the other verses. Although it wasn't even a diss, more like a self-promotion song.

I'll let someone else post cuz the whole battle triangle of me, you, and remote has gone on long enough.

Come on people, I'll be happy to mini battle any one of you.

[Khaled]

thanks for the feedback yo

[HelpMeLearn]

Eat at me

[Transcendent]

So be it.

I'll beat you, defeat you, eat you, like a scavenger./
Ravage ya, blow you up like space shuttle Challenger./
There's a reason you have one respect, it's not that complicated./
Your rhymes dilapidated, I think your mind must have been sedated./
You wanna learn from the master, I know I'm well regarded./
I'd help you learn but it's hard because you are retarded./

[Mr.Remote]

^^ hahaha nice verse, I'ma take a short break..... or atleast until i can't stand to not write anymore hahaha