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Anghellic
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02-15-2007, 10:43 AM

Yupp, A that was a nice play onn his name,
only sound pissed, cause you asked to be his valentine,
shot you down, now you sitt at home cryin, there's no denying
that this train never leads to the road of victory,
*falls asleep again*..


huh?

 

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02-16-2007, 11:01 AM

Angels stupid, disgrace of the rapper race, less skilled in this entire place/
Cuz when I asked him to produce hip hop, he started jumpin' on his waist/
Ya styles bitter and fake, and ya songs....wouldn't be smokin' if they baked/
Debate? I'll have this fake staked, pushed off a cliff to a lake....
Then have him physically abused and have em appear on Ricki Lake/
Ya shitty mate, and I'm nowhere near Australia/
Think he's pretty, boy......not even a Choo choo train would rail ya/
 

Anghellic
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02-16-2007, 12:02 PM

when this faggot hates, Yupp, I take it as a compliment,
This dude never touches mic, Yet im a disgrace to the rapper race,
this guy really takes pride cause he THINKS he's nice at text,
But i havent read ya verse's since you started posting here
*falls into a coma*....


...Wha?

 

nextlevel66
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02-16-2007, 08:12 PM

hollow tips dont enter ur chest my shit solid/
and i'll have ur body jumpin up and down like hydraulics/
dis dude flows shorter then a teen alcholic/
ima fuk him up on holy ground and have u raised to the sky so anghellic/
dis dude really tryna act like he goin to sleep/
keep playin that shit and i'll put u in a real coma u see/
and my shit is reality not a fukin fantasy/
ima have u levatate u gonna be the first one to defy the rules of gravity/
im not fukin around its real not no fukin elmentary test/
ima slice ur throat to teach u the real definition of a red neck/
im done cuz dis pussy startin to feel tramautized/
in a couple of hours a heart surgeon gonna be the one u idolized/
 

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02-16-2007, 09:31 PM

Faggot nextlevel thinks actin hood will get him love and hugs
Understand Tony Hawk's Under Ground's only way ya game's T.H.U.G.
Crap's what you enact with a rap, i laugh at this bastard's shit
Knock out this dickhead faster than premature blastin ejaculate
Impotent is the adjective that describes ya actions best
Next level's wack and depressed, an emo kids gettin smacked in the chest

Why you ever think fantasy 'n gravity rhyme together?
Expect A aint like leather, i dont rub off so you wont get clever
All my flows leave ya steez hurt like blows thats thrown wild
Kid read the first letters of my verse vertically, that's ya style

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02-16-2007, 09:54 PM

trains playin games with hidden werds
im slangin verbs and hittin nerves
sentecnces leevin ya weak ass under tha dirt
like marshmellows i compres ya flows and collect ya soul
the reaper on ya ass, death is my objective ho
non-subjective flows, i spit sex, you love it when i press
sounds like the organ playin the song of ya death
no games no jest, i am the best
no air in ya lung as i stomp on ya chest
feel it when my verbal knives hit ya organs
blood goes everywhere, but ya werthless everyone ignorin
wack flows, ya borin
i smack you and break ya neck
stop whisperin before i take ya breath

BBOY ROCMANIK

not really trying to beat you, I'm just trying to rock

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nextlevel66
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02-16-2007, 10:16 PM

im feelin to fuk u up, get a gun make u jump
now wat the fuk is up, now wat the fuk u want
u dont really want the beef, u betta squash the beef
b4 i unload this piece, u'll end up walkin wit mechanical knees
u think im fukin wit u bboy c
i'll light u up like a mothafukin christmas tree
dude im really sorry if i hurt ur feelings
but im gonna have ur brains hangin from an apartment building
i'll have the rest of ur body hangin from a caucasion tree
im not white but i'll make u feel more pain then ur ancestors did durin slavery
now wat u think, u still think im messin
i'll feed ur body to the lions and use ur blood as salad dressin
i pull clips dis bitch pulls dildos
dis dude is soft juss like his mothafukin marshmellows
im not done yet i gotta close the casket
me and ur bitch is fukin, gettin a baby for the basinet
now im over, im done im outty
tell the whole world how im ur fukin biological daddy
 

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02-17-2007, 01:33 AM

I'm gonna take you to the "next level" spittin shit so sick ya only hear in death metal
you bitch, you aint makin any one jump with ya lil ass bb gun, chump, If I see you I'ma fuck you up
Only casket closin is your own, when I got you lyin up in a funeral home
This is murda, no fuckin around, 6 feet, stuck in the ground, straight up killa shit
I fill a "clip" and dump the whole thing as soon as I roll in
ATrain, you wanna say names? you startin to play games you shouldnt be playin,
have you layin up next to this other bitch next level
none of ya'll know beef, you so weak, I been in it, walked through it and back, while you little fags sit here and act, like you know what the fuck the worlds about, talk to me when you leave your mommys house, bitches
 

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02-17-2007, 11:02 AM

ayo i can be 6 feet below
u can be standin on my grave and not be on a higher level then cloud 0
u swear u walked through beef,
well if no damage was inflicted why u walk out wit no teeth
i aint gonna be killed by u, dawg im not even amazed by u
ur juss another dude comin up
im so disgusted by u
but my flow is so disgusting ur whole family wanna throw up
i got punchlines that'll have biggie smalls throw up
and nigga i wont deny one resident i deny 87 residents
ur whole crew will be left out wit no trailer home to live in
ur not a bum just the others wack rapers
ur a kamakaze man ready to do my orders
 

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02-17-2007, 11:17 AM

dat shit was wack so ima diss myself
well its called diss the previous guy, man dat was my previous self
how u gonna be talkin bout biggie feeling ur flow
when the only flow im feelin is that period when ur not rhymin yo
uur skills aint hot ur whip aint hot, u aint even held a gun so nigga juss stop
ur a bitch quick to snitch when u see da cops
u not poppin shells u not poppin shit, the only thing ur poppin is ur pimples bitch
nobody even likes the way u flow ur flow is so elemantary
its not even as good as 9 year old, ur shit is uncontrolabe like a teen goin thru puberty
but oh well ur nextlevel66
there's a million so u need to get ur weight up lil kid

iano i was bored

Last edited by nextlevel66 : 02-17-2007 at 11:21 AM. Reason: spellin even though still some errors
 

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02-17-2007, 11:21 AM

aight, I'm 'bout to ride on this bitch ass.....listen up nextlevel

you should start thinkin 'bout shuttin ya mouth, cuz aint nobody believin' what you about
and I'm suggestin' you start takin some lessons none of that shit you just said is impressin'
I mean, come on kid, ya last 4 lines didnt rhyme, I honestly don't think ya even tryin
If I....see you on the back street ya better run like this a track meet,cuz I pack heat, and I have so much beef it's like I pack meat
you probably gonna call the police to come harass me cuz when I see you your gettin ya ass beat
you aint got no punchlines, and in that whole shit you just did I think I only heard one rhyme


let me get some opinions on my shit, I like it, but I dont know if other people do to..

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nextlevel66
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02-17-2007, 03:05 PM

If I....see you on the back street ya better run like this a track meet,cuz I pack heat, and I have so much beef it's like I pack meat

nice flow right there but the rest was ehh iight
 

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02-17-2007, 03:29 PM

ya think so? yea, I liked that line right there too, I like the rest but I got alot of learnin to do, I think I'm alright for a beginner, but I'm not gonna sit up here on my high horse and say I'm the next big thing to hit rap, ya know, anyone got any ideas on how to improve?
 

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02-18-2007, 05:48 PM

dont really mean to spam this page but juss write a lot over instrumentals and wat not. start kickin flows out of nowhere about things around u as well.
 

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02-18-2007, 09:57 PM

someone diss me after that last one, lets go
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