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04-26-2003, 11:05 PM
What ya'll think ?
I know I need some help with the rymes but Fuck it at least I'm learning Hey if I go to far tell me |
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04-26-2003, 11:24 PM
when i see water i say boil it/
when i see food i say spoil it/ when i see your rhymes they belong in the toilet/ cuz all i see you typing is shit/ gonna get slit, like the bitch/ you really are, you aint neva going far/ get the crowbar/ or give you sars/ your on mars/ cuz your outta this earth/ thinkin your rhymes having any worth/ because soon youll be driving to a grave in your hearst/ not sure if i spelled that right but oh well...well i hope im getting better...no beef...feel free to diss me hard..i wanna see some good rhymes |
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coming down hard -
04-27-2003, 12:33 AM
There you go with the word toilet
Dont use it cause you just spoil it When I see When I see Dont come here with that you studdering wanna be Talking about i'm from mars Bitch I'm at the gates heading for the stars Those who know me .Know where I'm from. This shit will never be over til I say its done If you ryme you should take a breath You gonna end up choking yourself to death I'm muder this I cant spell slut Mother fucker I hear you ryme I'm like "what?" Man you make no cence . Shit aint even worth a cent Here s a dollar buy ten times more of them |
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04-27-2003, 12:56 AM
no beef...
talking bout me not making any sence/ in your face ill be makin hella dents/ i could never even understand a word you said/ so watch out or im gonna lay you to bed/ when i shoot you youll be covered in red/ cuz youll find out that im part of the feds/ i got the warrant for your arrest/ if you resist me youll get shot in the chest/ listen to your daddy and go mow the lawn/ because my rhyme is done and now im gone.. damn dont i suck or what...payce |
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04-27-2003, 02:27 AM
Thanks for the info.I show your shit to a couple of my friends and they said that you where good.I was trying to beat you so i could think about how good you are but I like what you say .It makes me think
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04-27-2003, 05:27 AM
ha thx coca well your getting better...and from you i guess i am too...i hope...
someone else spit one please...gotta be more than me and coca...? |
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04-27-2003, 08:41 AM
damn straigh ya'll gone, in this game your a pawn,
fuck this faggots forlorn, already one one bar an you've been torn, nothing like the quiet storms scorn, get off this site you lyrical parasite, feedin off others fucking fellow brothers, you spit shit you it covers, your rhymes are weak, lines are shit they reek, what up zeke, just props to my bro, now lets get back to dissin this hoe, you don't make sense, when usin toilets ya'll use 'ladies' not 'gents', i'll tear those breasts from your chest, tell coco to mow the lawn as his dad you undress, hell i don't know why Jroc didn't delete your mess, 'cos shit that was wack, waterpistles are all you pack, claimin FBI that wont stop me from killin this guy, don't even try, to reply, fuckin heed my words, 'cos you will die... no beef man. we all know theres none on this site.  |
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04-27-2003, 03:23 PM
I wonder if you got edited just to say no beef/
start this investagation, you can call me chief/ case closed, rains spits are always wack, brittle as FALLen leafs/ i've punched ya mouth in out and back, ya speech is screwed ya tellin me "you punched out all my teefs"/ assassinated now,dump this chump's body out and let him sleep wit the fishies in the coral reefs/ oopsies, somethin floated back up from the waters, it was your brown stained briefs/ |
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04-28-2003, 02:17 AM
a yo this cat's wack like weird Al taught him to rap,
take-this-slap, get off of breakdance and never come back, see-this-rap, thing is for cat's that has skillz by the plenty, and from ya bullshit so called rhyme you don't have any, don't-envy, the powers of Bootcamp Click, Canibus and Em, i bring it to ya like i was having 12year battle with them, skillz-a-perfect-10, your is the number before zero, your style can't hit the spot like Shaq shooting a free throw, ill-see-you-when-i-see-you, fuck it catch me on breakdance, or you can catch me in ya girl showing her real romance, just playing! GORGANUS HAS SPOKEN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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04-28-2003, 09:16 AM
you think you're showing his girl romance but really she's just fakin'it
she tried to show you to slow dance and you thought that's what's meant by makin'it if you want to be pinning those models you'll need to know your ass from your arsenal it's not all spinning the bottle if you're getting all nasty and personal. didn't i see you in safeway last night ?a gorganus sighting in action with you pants hangin low , there's a limit ... you know , your tighty whities got skids that are distracting your mamma never taught you how to use bleach? here , i'll show you , it's pretty damn basic just pour it in nicely , add vinegar to your whites , see ? take a deep breath and then shove your face in it . i've got news for you homie , that 12 year battle you think you've got going with canibus and em... i know that you're lonely but you're growing up now so say bye bye to all your imaginary friends |
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you must have been a bgirl.... because the only moves that you pulled on me were heartbreakers
- the visionaries |
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my bad just being lazy! -
04-28-2003, 01:56 PM
here's a fresh one for ya!
yo take this cheese burger bitch and that fries on the side, i'll shot you out the sky like duck hunt whenever you hand glide, just-abide, by my rules GORGANUS is the underdog, i'll-kill-you-hog, running stright forward even in the thickest fog, get-at-me-dog, like i'am DMX screaming loud on the mic, you-just-a-dyke, in the wrong hood trying to be hype, but-i'am-show-you-hype, try deep sea diving and rhyming at the same time, your just a wanna be trying to be a Spliff-Star for Busta Rhyme, see-this-take-time, but skillz like mine you don't have none, i'll use this rap shit to spray cat's at random, so-tell-ya-grandson, that a long time ago GORGANUS took the show, but i erase you mind right after, if they ask what happened after? you'll say i don't know???? GORGANUS HAS SPOKEN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 |
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04-29-2003, 04:39 PM
i smacked u like u wuz my bi***/
u annoying like a mosquito itch/ every time i spit u flinch and yuh eyes twitch/ wuts duh matter? am i settin off yuh lyrical awareness switch/ u could't rock anything even if u was abercrombie and fitch/ havin my skills? yeah right! u wish/ i dish more lyrics to you like if u wuz under a spell by a witch/ u got sum wits thing u can take my hits/ but like jack be nimble, i be 'quick'-and-'sick'/ like a breaker boy i pop-lock-and-tick/ leave u in scraps like a computer with an ill malafunctional glitch/ no way ull step to me again, cuz u cant be fixed// take that b**** PUERTOLUMBIAN HAS SPOKEN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 hahaha. j/k. no beef. gorganus - u decidin if i can join yuh crew(text-cee?) |
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04-29-2003, 11:35 PM
you be like duh?... stupid//
and all of yo whack rhymes is putrid// so sullenly weak lame yet lurid// slike the only way you got helps from druids// cause hard work wont change it, magic// how hard you try, yet fail, its traggic// so here i am, rip through, paraplegic// thats how i'm leavin you when i'm through// sad to see you tryin to join anus' crew// oh well// havin your skill?.. ha ha you wish!// i gots more skill even after poppin a pill// sayin you got skills slike sayin space got matter// dark matter, slike how i spray your brain matter// yo main mulfunction is a lack of brain function// you say you pop lock and tick, tick, tick// tickin, side effects of this kickin// i inflict verbal wounds like shrapnel// and your fears only death dispells// see yo lack of ability repels, as do you bright yellow lapels// choir boy, you a fuckin toy, a dish// got less musical talent than that crazy collective pish// fuck it i could go on all day but i am in class so i am out. peace, all in good fun aight. ABSTRACTHOUGHT |
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04-30-2003, 02:47 AM
nice man
man what are you smokin that didnt even rhyme work on your english that shits a fuckin crime u dont have no skill even while u pop them pills there anti birth control to help your baby mills thats right i know your secret your a fuckin girl you sit at home by your self your hair you try to curl coz its the only thing you got to do after overdrive beat you this shit is to good for you i hope you dont sue. oh i forgot u cant get a lawyer you got no fuckin money i know whats for dinner its just a glass of honey this isnt funny. my skill is to great i dont mean this shit theres no need to hate! read the last line /\ /\ /\ | | | yea i dont mean none of this i just got real bored and decided to post |
