[BBoy AuStIn]

Im a noobie, so dont flame me lol first time ever freestyling.

Look at mcer tryin to be a raper/
Why dont you put his sorry ass back in a candy wrapper/
Cuz his skill aint sweet/
Its just as bad as dirty feet/


Hey mcer why dont you do a guy/
or is youre sorry ass a bit to shy?/
Pore man walkin down the street/
Why dont you go jump his ass so you can beat his meat/

Sorry ass fuc*er aint go no skill/
he think that mans is too full to fill/
Bit** who you trying to diss man/
You masturbate so much u use youre dick as a wrist band/

Boy who you trying to diss now/
you look an sound as bad as kung pow/
Go take a shower/
cuz youre done, finished,ur rhyme aint got no lyrical power/

Bro youre rhyme is wack/
Go off and an take a tic-tac/
Im on a roll cuz i got skill/
im addictive like youre mom is with her pill/



Thats all guys, nothin ment.

[bboyarfen]

hey yo, look at this shit talkin bitch n' check the line he bit/
takin jins lyrics but I still ain't hearin anythin dope from your lips/
droppin prewrit-verse even while ya bitin ya can't drop hot shit/
quit this, ya game ain't worth a burnt pile of flapjacks/
I'm crackin wack cats, n' tearin n' tramplin ya crap/
ya got verbally disgustin lyrics linin ya path/
ya drops are trash, I lyrically clash with ya imperfections/
to many to mention, 4 verses with wack splits/
seen better spits eminatin from my armpits/

...atleast I think its jin...lol

[MCER]

Yo Arfen, I think that is Jin, but I never really followed his stuff, did that kid seriously steal a line? If so that just makes his weak shit all the weaker....lol

[BBoy AuStIn]

oh snap, i thought that was orginal lol! lol that was jin. damn mah bad i thought my friend said somethin like that before so i put it down an changed it alil bit an i dont kno if thats the exact same as. but i dunno if it is the same mah bad i thought it was all orginal lol

[Mode]

thats bitten. nothin we can do about it though, mod's can't ban people anymore, austin.. welcome to the BA (Biters Anonymous) just a warning though, we wont do nothin, but don't do it man, whether it's off your friends or an artist, you will get caught.

[BBoy AuStIn]

i didnt take it off a friend, my friend said u masturbate too much u should have a wrist band that says it. so i changed it around an put that.

[bboyarfen]

lol...its cool. I just thought it was funny cause thats the second time somebody bit that line...ludacrystal, haha...

that clip comes to you compliments of wannabe...haven't seen him around for a while...

[BBoy Supra]

Aight i am new to this too but critcise away it helps
bboy arfen the one with the muffin how can u say that when ur as weak as stuffin'
ur rhymes are so weak that will always shriek u certainly arent unique so u better not be on a winning streak now i got u beat ill let u back up to ur feet now you better go admit defeat take the heat ur raps are about as good as the boys from the backstreet im goin be discrete u might as well retreat bak to ur potty seat now ur in the hot seat u smell like excrete theres the fools saying ring side seat i am elite ull find me on wall street now ull have to cheat to beat this great feat so ill treat u like hard wheat and beat u til u say that shit is sweet

[s0fiztik8ed]

yeh when i was readin it i was like..
aye "aint that jin".. ?? hahaha sorry that was from one of jins songs too
yeh i follow his stuff alot.. it was from umm..
i was a former aznrap member thats why i guess..
it was bitten from when jin was battling skazoo..
his 6th week up there i think.. and it went

i get girls, who are you trying to diss man?/
he masturbate so hard he had to rock a wristband//

y'all going off topic.. *slaps everyone* i like this thread

yo bboy supra aint nobody feelin' ya, your more like a toyota loser/
like a gtr on nitros, i'll fly past ya like a missle on a battlecruiser//
im more sweeter than KK donuts drenched in cordial with no water/
bboys like you come here to the FRS threads, just to get a good slaughter//
get back on topic you guys, or are to high so you socialise/
nice try but if your a biter you'll get shot down before you can even fly//
rhymes should be legit, not recylced from emcees from battle to battle/
y'all got your asses wet and now, i have to watch you lil ducks paddle//
he bite, who cares lefts move on, he'll learn one day to be strong/
don't discourage him but encourage him, its not like we've never been in the wrong//

austin dont worry about it if it wasn't your intentions..
keep trying.. coz if you first dont suceed, pick yo self up and try again..


so says aaliyah

its not call bitting.. it was caled intertexuality ahahahha

^ mind my spelling i dunno if that how you spell it.. -_-'
but it suppose to mean using other sources for reference..
its a good english technique really for essays ahahaa

[Mode]

you on some bullshit, fooled ditz, bet he thinks he's cool shit,
my flows scary, like ghouls bitch, pull clips till ya full bitch,
"sof" has his "dick mistaken"*, only cock ya got's on farmsteds,
ya harmless, wouldn't be 'top of the class' if ya rocked the rafters,
sock this bastard, drop ya casket when i crash ya wake,
smash ya face, this fags act is damn wack when i bash this fake,
with a diss thats hienious, flows in my viens like intravienous,
rip ya femurs, the meanist, can't come hard if ya grip ya penis..

keystyle, forgive the wackness

*sof-iz-ticated = sof-dick-mistaken

blah

[BBoy AuStIn]

aight here i go lol.

Yo, look at mode/
looks like his lil pet toad/
when im done with he'll look like a fucked up afro/
whats up with you sayin that s0fiztik8ed is gay/
you look at guys penis's everyday/
Bam imma finish u up/
you be so small an weakless i could fit u in a cup/
Its gonna be like this/
Watchout while he cummin he mite piss on you/
wait was that you with that lil too-too?/
walk into a gay strip club/
you'd fit in an act like its a pub/
Bitch imma knock u down/
after im threw with u ull wanna leave tha town/

haha.

[s0fiztik8ed]

haha.. alright disses.. just didn't have the flow..
it'd get better if you keep flowing..

imma leave him 'stone cold'* just like steve 'Austin', so start hiding/
my rhymes be hittin hard like a 'stunner'*, when im lryically fighthing//
bad sense of taste in clothin', like Austin Powers/
only diffence is he doesn't get chicks, but gays by the hours//
he aint human, must be outta this world like all his lyrics without flow/
unless that was another language, that was pathetic, just to let you know//
8 lines is all it takes to get burned by the one and only s0fiztik8ed/
if you were rapping instead of bboyin, as an emcee you still wouldn't of made it//

*stone cold steve austin - professional wrestler.. fav move stone cold stunner..

just kidding bro.. peace

[bboyarfen]

yo man, ya droppin shit like ya addicted to ex-lax/
sofiz, face facts you a wack cat with a skill lack/
this fag cracks whips n' sucks dicks for laughs/
he attracts men like they narcs n' hes got crack/
a quick attack to ya back with a fury of verbal fists/
I'm a lyricist who perfects his shit at your expense/
ya like a machine, generic shits all ya dispense/
fermentin as ya rest, not mentionin ya verse is a mess/
thinkin you impress, man ya lyrics are defective/
get things in perspective as I point out ya imperfections/
ya shits so wack I keeled over n' now i'm on medication/

[blamma]

arfins a joke who'll get smoked wit no hesitation
the black lungs your destination each bars charred wit resination
defeat you wit meditation your next post....the medic station
lucky if you you live again, what a predicament,i spit to win
each verse can split ya chin, i hands been fistin twins
make you slit ya wrist again, since birth i been committin sins
you like a chic in tims, soon as you step in the ring
ya heads gonna ring, when i step in darkness sets in
well guided i never get played by disception

[MCER]

Yo blamma you a joke, don’t nobody feel you
You a decrepit horse and I’ma turn you to glue
Quit writing cause your shit just sucks
Stop actin’ like people ‘round here even give a fuck
Each time you write it’s filled with pre-pubescent anger
Talkin about females like “I’m gonna bang her”
Actin’ all hard/you sound like a retard/Is this stabbin’ you like a glass shard?
So you “never get played by deception?”
But you think you attract people’s attention like an exposed erection?
Son you deceiving yourself if you think that’s true
Maybe you are an erection but your balls are blue
You might need Viagra, cause you lookin’ a little limp
Ya’ll look at the gimp who was frontin’ as a pimp
Like I told you before you need to get a clue
But now I’m done wasting my time on you