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02-15-2004, 05:03 PM

Mode luvs ta break spines, reminds us in everyone of his rhymes//
Try to even touch mine and ill leave ya goin home wit a flat line//
Come up with new shyet wit no bits and ill be impressed//
But dont spit, rumors have it that you 'suck' like a 'breast'//
Gots an A on dis test, contest and youll flunk like the rest//
Obsessed?? of course cuz ya just got fucked by the best//
Whew! gotta take a breath, n'spark so i can pound on the chest//
Witness ya death while im high, so i think im dreamin instead//
Easy ta see that you suckin in frees//
Served ya first loss in ya losing spree G//
So get off ya pedistal and bow before thee//
You like a bitch when im on top Mode...
Straight beneath me//
 

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02-15-2004, 07:40 PM

ur kinda outdated so let me inform/
mode is hoter than lighting be aware of the storm/
im the newb but ur not new to me/
ur that fag in the street asking for a blow to the 3/
step outa here g u aint no player or pimp/
get slaped in the face and run off with a limp/
ur a puppet and im pulling the string/
your the apeticer of in my buffer so ur the hot wing/
son u get sprayed not layed/
u dont get ass u get played/

peace~

poetry is a work of expresion, comes in good with style and perfection, with paper and pen you begin to write, the poetic way of non violent fight, poetry is a settled state of mind, concentration in the soul is what your tring to find.

bboy Oc~

finaly back to my home~
any audio head wanna bring it im here...
 

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02-15-2004, 07:57 PM

I'm laughing cuz this newb also needs to be "inform"ed
The FRS ain't for fags or words poorly formed
Kid, you got yourself in some boiling hot water
Time to step up and face the verbal slaughter
This is strictly a warning to get your ass thinking
Your rhymes need work and your flows steady sinking
My verses crush your style with blazing "versatility"
Amazing agility and the strongest of power
Your rhymes are sour, something I chew up and spit back out
Your lines lack power, something you never knew about
So don't quit your day job in hopes of emceeing
The stage is the real test and a girl just ripped you...FREE KEYING!

One life one tribe one love one blood
Too much has been shed its time to rise above
You don’t have to understand it and you dont have to like it
But were much more powerful when we're UNITED
Ignorance fight it Knowledge embrace it
Have sympathy for people who too scared to change shit
Dont talk it just live it
Enjoy life absorb every minute
Quit placing the blame
Put your mind towards change
Hold the torch, light the flame, make a difference
One love one nation lets get uplifted
 
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02-16-2004, 02:17 AM

okay, straight keystyle, fuck a freestyle, this shit be wild.
n' speakin of day jobs, aura's workin at mcdonalds givin out free smiles
please, child, leave rappin for the men to do n' attend your crew
'fore you leave here havin more twists than my pencil do.
i'll end ya screwed life, like menopause i'll make ya period die with devious lies
shit, what's this bitch doin here? it'd diss the previous 'guy'!
i'm serious, I, didn't want to have to resort to violence n' shit.
so i'll pop a woody n' shove it in her mouth to silence this bitch.
fly with the hits, ya stuck up? phff, i'll cut this slut up.
"no no, where's all your positive energy" *slap* bitch, shut the fuck up!

keystyle. get back at me.
 

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02-16-2004, 04:01 AM

this bitch has got to be kidding me, i have to seriously laugh at ya/
razzle' a joke: cats like are why no one respects canada//
atleast im honest, whoever said you nice had practice lying before/
ya punches are pointless, like having the french join us in the war//
nothin but uselss kinda like most of what ya post on this site/
take some advice: stick to the text cuz ya suck on the mic//
before ya dropped it was like, "razzle's the man, he's proabably dope"/
then it became "damn, should call him turkey man, cuz razzle got smoked"//
one turn after another you have disappointed fans badly/
usted to think you were straight, but then i took a look at ya avvy//
im finished pickin on you..no use wasting what im kickin/
you were right though "this is diss the previous guy", but how'd the hell did you get in?///

sorry razz i had to.. couldnt resist lol..anyways i wont be backn in here no more to bother any one no more.. so get at me if you choose

 

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02-16-2004, 06:56 AM

razors sellin out, an bali tells me he aint well endowed,
clappin this geek ya rappin is weak, so get the hell out now,
just spittin an rant, ya shittin ya pants another turd in ya trousers,
ya flippin is bland, razor can't rap, he's a "public service announcer",
i got the sweetest flow, i got a flavour that suits me,
he runs in so many crews damn razors a groupie,
as a matter of fact ya wacker than wack, ya style is laughable,
an while ya raps farcical, girls are the only "phat" part of you,
ya shits generic, razor forever "rocked the mic",
i 'sock' this tyke, a 'sweatshirts' the only thing you dropped that's tight,
razors swingin, i'm duckin his purse, ya been suckin since birth,
read ya shit? nothin is worse, he's so hardcore - this thug is a nurse!

blah, shoulda come harder..

 

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02-16-2004, 03:11 PM

shit ppl, iunno why i fuckin entered this thread/
u guys think u rappin hard and still to me u soft as bread/
so mode you asked for it, face it you dont got a sweetest flow/
the only sweet you got is the condom on your dick that your mommy blows/
you betta watch out, or my rhymes come out lyke ice cold soda/
i spit so hard that in a couple secs you be as wrinkly as yoda/
you cant take the pain of my flows, they come at you lyke freddy and jason/
the force will make you bleed so much youll shrivel up like a raisin/
yo mode, you must have been dropped when you were little/
cuz i aint spittin hard and yet you bleed to death, man you brittle/

dammit not one of my best

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obey-1
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02-16-2004, 11:07 PM

stay the fuck away from rappin, and stick to the turn tables//
pussy ass mutha fucka is what it says on your own label//
you bout as fucked up as moby in a all girl staff//
cant say why u entered the thread or let sumthin enter ur ass//
yea, bread is kinda soft just like your momz left titty//
but i couldnt check on her ass, cuz it smelt kinda shitty//
this dude said his ryhmez are like "ice cold soda"//
well in that case minds are hot like uh crystal cup of folders//
now the only thing thats shribbled is the 2 inch between ya legs//
this dudes raps are weak, so ima hand you some of my prays//
i'll cut you ear to ear wit the razer on my gillet//
had your old lady screamin, and i didnt even break a sweat//
 
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02-17-2004, 03:32 AM

<-----first time here

damn maybe u should stay away from rappin'
yo flows wack from all those dick suckin'
or not yo wack cuz yo mama smokes crack
and lacks blow jobs from yo 1cm cock
so stay away from me and go do yo geeky ways
go get a life before i kill ya with mah mamaz laser rays
or make you cry with my chinky eye race
cuz yo rhymes aight worth shit from a newb fella like me
i maight be cocky but itz tru cant you see
 

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02-17-2004, 01:03 PM

this fag dont need to jock ride cuz he got his bitches whipped like lassie//
wut gay ass name to rep, remove the rest and rap this pussy like a tac ciee//
come to flo askin guys to "hold me tight"//
always knew something besides ur name just wasn't right//
i can play and list shit on this prik n dyke//
cuz i got better shit to do than write an sn while tryin to jack n type//
changed oral to audio's, now u a real headbanger//
but ur name names outa context, skills no contest, jigga, u aint even a challenger//

Knowledge is power. Without knowledge there's no real power..just 'weapons of mass destruction'.
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02-17-2004, 05:41 PM

u think baggin on mah name can hurt me
fuckin bitch think hes cool but hes really lame like kirby
thinkin smokin fake weed make him part of the game
but thatz sad cuz that for her mama to blame
actin like a balla talking about bitches
the only bitch u know is yo sista after she got her stiches
so go do yo home work fagget
go fuck yo baby sista and love it
 

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02-18-2004, 02:44 AM

genuwine rhymes, something you should be spitting everytime/
stop talking about incess if that the only thing on your mind//
hat trick with losses, i can see why you dont have a victory/
so stop rhyming go back to listening to that weak emcee, jermaine dupri//
haven't been here for a while, but i can still put down this clown/
versatile styles, when it comes to me, i dun like to fuk around//
all i can see are recycled rhymes, this niggaz kinda bitin'/
come back and find better punches, when your lyrically fightin'//

[ tryin ta reminisce tha optimisim within my state of mind that once exsisted ]

You do not have permission to access this page. WHY CAN'T I POST ?!?! lol my rhymes too explicit haha.. jkz.. but someone.. fix my account ? one of em MODS or ADIMS or sumthin.. someone.. !! *strangles himself*
 

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02-18-2004, 06:27 AM

all this talk about bitin.. damn i can say the same is fa you,
ya flows raped, so fake ya even bit the name of ya crew,
'mighty mighty d-block'*.. ring any bells? posin thug,
keep ya nose in butts, think ya lines are 'phat' but ya wits 'slow as fuck'**,
my flows fast, ya like school on weekends.. no class,
i spit illness like i blow sars, ya only 'come hard' behind closed bars,
don't start, whats this about shitney.. you new there?
because it was called sydney before you moved there,
5 bars for this bitch, i 'bomb' this MC, make him 'C-4' of me,
think before ya speak, like a bad apple, ya core is weak..

peace.

*d-block is a rap group
**fat people are generally slow..

Last edited by Mode : 02-18-2004 at 06:38 AM.

 
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02-18-2004, 02:34 PM

hey steve irwins broder u betta shut the hell up
ur skills ur rhymes im gonna bust them all up
im gonna make u run like tarzan
and kill you like a taliban
you know ur rhymes are copied
i saw them verses in a disney story
u don't know nothing about the dblock
"MIGHTY MIGHTY"? what u want a kids meal?
we ain't in mcdonalds bitch this is the real deal
shut up about the dblock
i know ur in denial u know u like pop rock
 

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02-19-2004, 05:29 PM

from the first line ya rhyme scheme was knocked off/
flow was wack as fuck, simplistic and abrupt, ya came soft/
are you lost?, cause a lyrical rescue crew couldn't find ya flow/
newbs should peep the rules ya know, to elevate an grow/
I kno ya just slow ya spit like ya broke, a dishonorable showing/
elmo coulda come harder with his lines, hes doper an ya know it/
behind ya keyboard ya got some supressed gay tendencies/
descrepencies with ya sexuality causin relapse of morality/
everyone knows ya gay, ya actions show ya preference bluntly/
ecstasy, ya too pussy ta touch it, you a god?? pure bullshit/
take my hits as my punches completely rip this drop to shit/

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