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Spikey#1
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01-13-2004, 06:57 PM

I'm fed up with kids that think their ryhme's tight/
when for real all they ever do is bite/
stizzy,ur mum just called n said,"give lil stizo a chance,don't burn his ass pliss wait till he learn to wipe his crap"
c'mon dawg?thought ur done with the hickory dickory stuffs/
bah..say what?u wishing one day to become a power puff..wow good luck!
time-out time-out!!i'm spitting ryhmes against an under-age emcee...
turn up the mic lemme rhyme him up with some nursery/
"jack and jill went up the hill to fetch a pell of water,god knows what they did up there n came back with a daughter"
happy?quit it!ur a rookie,trying hard to be the next jayz? ..when ur battling with the next 183 from the east side brother name TAKI..
u stand no chance,this ain't even a game..its a one way highway
damn! the shame ur facing with the fame i'm gaining..
its a pain to see a war go down with no battling/
no intention in my action to leave this kid with some blurry tension..
just doing my job of serving guilt .. goo goo gaa gaa now he needs to sleep?
guess my time's up too but i'll leave him here with a bottle of milk!!

Last edited by Spikey#1 : 01-13-2004 at 08:18 PM.

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bboyarfen
the muffin lives on...

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01-14-2004, 02:43 PM

that sure as hell wasn't rap, didn't have an ounce of flow/
I'll burn ya ass, like ya sat on red hot wood stove/
that tops the charts as the worst verse ever on bboy.org /
you like a crease in the book of rhymes on this message board/
should have a warning label: "can cause flow wackness/
I'm breakin the spine of ya rhymes, makin them useless/
there ain't such a thing as spikey's improvement/
when ya step up to the mic your composure, ya lose it/
rhymes so bad when ya speak in the mic ya bruise it/
get rid of ya newb shit, theres already a thread for newbs to spit/
you only emcee cause you attracted to the mic/
its hard, wide, and works for anal, only sex ya like/
men flock to ya, like ants on a pack a' moldy twizzlers/
you got some 'chest'nuts* with ya man by the fire this winter/
you better take my hint here, you don't belong here/
don't ever come around when arfens anywhere near/

YAY

*'chest'nuts as in nuts on his chest...

Last edited by bboyarfen : 01-14-2004 at 02:47 PM.

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Vin Diesel invented the internet while trying to steal cable TV.

Contrary to popular belief, it was in fact Vin Diesel who invented the internet. Al Gore stole the designs when Vin fell asleep at his keyboard.

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Zodiak Stizo
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01-14-2004, 08:02 PM

marvelous wigger couldn't trigger [grls'] orgams if he got any bigger//
go figure, he b-arf['s] - en -y time he gets a shot of liquour//
forgot ur losing streak, u got a shot term memory?//
got beat so many times there's no way u'd remember me//
cant stop him from jock riding dicks cuz he 'hard headed'//
if it came out ur dick then bboy arfen said it//
give a man a hook and he will learn to fish n swim//
give arfen a dick and he'suck till he's old and limb//
way u spit is like a goat chewin grass harassed by rabbies//
side effect of terds fucking and michael jackson droppin down babies//

Knowledge is power. Without knowledge there's no real power..just 'weapons of mass destruction'.
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01-14-2004, 09:58 PM

yo check this out yo...
how bout you answer this riddle, stizo
why you telling arfen to suck a dick
when you no there's nothing better you'd love to give a lick
it's in your blood, in your name, you know you love the cack-a-lack
yo this dude bends over all the same, when he heres about the back attack
you know the fact's exact,
you don't get wack when you see another man
you get down on the ground, ready to wack with you're free hand
step back kid, before i actually try to get you wacked kid
i got talent that aren't matched
i get violent, when i hear crap
so who you kidding with your lyrics that are empty
you think you're winning, but everyone knows you aint an mc
 

xlifelessx
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01-15-2004, 12:36 AM

hey yo, I laugh at your raps/
and your more yellow than a cathater bag/
fuck battle rap, gimmie some gas and a rag and a match/
and I'll blow your fuckin house up worse than Iraq/
piss on your ashes, nigga thats after the fact that I ran in your house, fucked your bitch in her ass, choked her to death, and
and made you watch while I laughed/
cuz blessed are the sick, nigga you suck more dick than a set of gay lips, and you think you're "sofisticated" when you really aint shit/
cuz I don't just talk it son, I walk the walk/
unlike you who'd rather suck on ostrich cock while gettin your balls chopped off/


LOL, respect dude, I lost it there...to much weed, peace every1
 

bboyarfen
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01-15-2004, 01:11 PM

can't find ya flow if it was a pussy and I had an erection/
slight misconceptions...hell that shit needs directions/
you was nit pickin quick bites, for ya rhyme last night/
checkin every website, lookin for what you think sounds right/
hell ya can't even bite right, ya write worse than me, an im WHITE/
my flow encompasses ya rhymes, so powerful it rearranges ya mind/
kinetic energy flows from my verse out to all of you/
so go home an harness my energy, or else its through/
I'm like rhymin salvation, gonna save you/

Vin Diesel and the Internet - relation? I THINK SO

Vin Diesel invented the internet while trying to steal cable TV.

Contrary to popular belief, it was in fact Vin Diesel who invented the internet. Al Gore stole the designs when Vin fell asleep at his keyboard.

http://www.4q.cc/vin/index.php
 

Zodiak Stizo
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01-16-2004, 03:51 PM


freekish turn of light, arfen is a child of the night//
skillz outa site//
turn daylight he turn tails to a street dyke//
i guess tits and ass r n ren't ur type//
wid bars bite from boards, using white race as a ledge//
call urself eminen instead,then taste the edge of my sword//
fag said use a condom so cum don't stick in his teeth gapings//
raped this mc twice and now he says he really likes rapping//


a girl of the night is a prostitute

Knowledge is power. Without knowledge there's no real power..just 'weapons of mass destruction'.
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STIFF_UK
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01-16-2004, 07:27 PM

These lines are dropped - just for Zodiak Stizo/
You think yours are hot - you ain't beating these though.//
Please don't - bother replying with bitching and whining/
On my first turn rhyming I-show ya'-need-to-put time in//
Before I show you the door listen up.../
Your wordplay is poor and your rhymes simply suck//
Now it's your turn to say what you think is up/
But in truth noone cares and I don't give a fuck//

A bboy without style, is like a broken pencil.

There's just no point.
 

AzNbReAkA
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01-16-2004, 09:34 PM

uh oh, stiff uk steppin up to the plate//
if you continue at this rate, you'll end up a disgrace//
face the factz that incidentally you come up when i come bak//
i lost track but without even thinken i know your shit's wack//
you think you're phat, but ya end up smokin crack//
ya lack the skillz, my lines are packed and made ta kill like that//

haha, i'm rusty -_-

email me at freshbboy@hotmail.com
aim me at "Wondering Lobz"


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STIFF_UK
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01-16-2004, 09:58 PM

Rusty? HAHA! You really ain't joking!/
It seems to me that you're the one smoking//
What part of "My first time" confused you?/
You've set up for a beginner to abuse you//
I never once said that I think I'm phat/
I dunno where your head's at, but it's on the wrong track//
What gives you the right to call my shit wack?/
When you end your verse with a miss like "that"//
I know I'm a new-jack but you've picked the wrong fight/
Just keep coming back, I could sit and diss you all bloody night.//

A bboy without style, is like a broken pencil.

There's just no point.
 

AzNbReAkA
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01-16-2004, 10:05 PM

i got all night so what are you waitin for//
rhymes, bore, i rip ya ta shreads and look at the gore//
ur mouthz sore from spittin too much//
i jus got started so right now, all you spit is fuck//
got bombarded by my lyrical content//
you steal everything you do so i'll jus say you chompin//
ya got nothin on me, even though i've been out it for over 3 weekz//
no new tweekz, jus startin out fresh, what better ta start out than ta diss this guest*


*guest to f.s.r.s

heh

email me at freshbboy@hotmail.com
aim me at "Wondering Lobz"


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STIFF_UK
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01-16-2004, 10:34 PM

I ain't bitten a thing, it's against my religion/
Exodus 20:15 "Thou shall not steal" son//
All your attempts have been done before/
You got nothing better than shreds and gore?//
What have you got against closing lines?/
Or do you mess them up on purpose every time?//
"I've been out for weeks" - Don't come with excuses/
I've got you beat on my third time doing this!!!//

A bboy without style, is like a broken pencil.

There's just no point.
 

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01-17-2004, 01:56 AM

You know you're wack... hell, everyone thought this
only way you're gettin Stiff is thru a bout of rigor mortis
I fought this urge to combust your lacklustre attempts
Back here again sandwiching with your gay boyfriends
Pennin your death you're lending excess bullshit to FRS
You couldn't be up to speed even if you were injectin meth
Depressin this wreck thought patterns selectin the best
rhymes with attention to depth so never be intendin to step

sub

I don't live for diamonds and ends/
And i don't live and die for the four elements//
Yeah, I rap but is hip hop my life?/
Who gives a fuck when millions of kids starve tonight.//
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01-18-2004, 02:43 AM

'It's close to midnight and something evil's lurking in the dark'
yo quit it, your last two lines don't make sense
to hit it, you gotta find time, to spit rhymes, rather than sell meth
that the best you can do?
where' the rest of this "wreckin'" you spew?
i'ma bout to subject hits to you- here's a new subject
beating you up verbally and i haven't even gotten rough yet
your best bet, is to sit back and get well rest-ed
while i pump you full of lead, instead of head like your best friend
you're the one who's queer with the men and the words
i'm the one who strikes feer into men using lyrics like swords
so when you hear this, like dmx, i'm showing ya where the hood is
make you say more fucked up shit like "hamlet of goodnes"
that aint even a sentence, tho i aint a hater
but someone who screams attention shouldn't call himself the mic incenerator
..speaking of samson's pillars.
let me give you a hand son, that's a killer
but is that yours or did you punk it off someone like my first line from "Thriller"
yo, now you're kinda dry when it comes to spitting thrills
come back here and reply when you got more skills
 

Spikey#1
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01-18-2004, 07:56 PM

Wowww....we all off somedays i feel that but ur lines just hit the rock bottom mr sofisticated/
ur mic will be confiscated u shud start listening to some boy bands' latest/
noone's goin' lower than u,ur the whackest,ill lines like that ur about to be castrated/
labelled with realest rhyme and illest flow,spikey's the real GET GO GET LOW/
with all the TEC 9 and the even with the landmines,ur arse is still about to get roast/
i'ma thump u,shoot u,batter u,nail u to the cross and spit on u/
then watch and smile at u while makin it come back to u..
"where' the rest of this "wreckin'" you spew?"
lose the freestylin' n stick to what ur best at, try "miming"/
and quit acting like ur wearing sean john or Karl Kani/
ur no freestyler,ur a free-wannabe-rider..u just wanna take the culture down u might as well post up some flyers/
I wasted a whole 5 damn mins just scribblin this out/
just so i can clear the foggy thoughts n leave u without a doubt/
i'ma jack this jailbait lyrically with no d'lay its gonna be harder than a knockout /fo sure this's where it ends holla did i hear an OUCH?

Last edited by Spikey#1 : 01-18-2004 at 07:59 PM.

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