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08-08-2009, 07:52 PM

do what ever it takes just to get high
and wonder, how'd life just fly by?

Yet others are ignorant, and never question the illogical./
Accept a carpenter's their savior, which is more than just improbable./
They reject all drugs because commercials say they're made for fools./
"Screw researching, I'll just assume that God thinks they're Satan's tools."/
They accept indoctrination, unaware it's even taking place./
Just get back on the hamster wheel and enter in the paper chase./

I'll just start off by saying the majority rappers today have no intention of supporting hip-hop culture. If you don't support the culture, then you aren't really hip-hop.
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08-08-2009, 08:02 PM

They accept indoctrination, unaware it's even taking place./
Just get back on the hamster wheel and enter in the paper chase./

enter the paper chase with a hook aimed for your face/
cover the separate space and put you more toward your place/
your bar is a waste and you can't run through this race/
you're a disgrace, like a detective that couldn't solve his case/
I cover more openings than a rack lace/
I cover for ground than a track race/
and i cover more back than back brace/
you're a wack fate and a black eighth//

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08-09-2009, 01:25 AM

and i cover more back than back brace/
you're a wack fate and a black eighth//
Let me cut fast pace straight to the chase/
this place that I stand on has a serious case//
of subliminal insanity that no one cares to see/
or hear since it's only at an insignificant degree//
well they're free to do whatever they see fit/
but bit by bit, they'll end up bein' torn n split//
by the time they realize that it's a lil' too late/
and they're fate is sealed tight, ceasin' to respirate//
all because they chose to simply ignore/
when all they had to do was care a lil' more//
to prevent the situation from rottin' to the core/
from hittin' the floor and burstin' out the gore//

You're still around? Get down to da FLOOR!

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08-09-2009, 01:43 AM

to prevent the situation from rottin' to the core/
from hittin' the floor and burstin' out the gore//
You're burstin' the gore but i thirsting for more/
than your writtens and you've been rehearsing this war/
what i've got cursing in store, this couldn't be worse or../
..could it, what should it? Your brain man, where did you put it?/
your rap is like good bars eaten and chewed it/
i stood me and you suck like kid cudi//

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08-09-2009, 08:48 AM

your rap is like good bars eaten and chewed it/
i stood me and you suck like kid cudi//

i spit calligraphic slick beauty 'n tell a thousand words,
from the smile on my face to the pain 'n how it hurts,
nouns 'n verbs, the sound of an hours worth of silence,
it's a certain science, the earnest search required to discern the quiet,
take the time to breathe it, succumb unto the silent treatment,
forget all rhyme 'n reason lest you find your mind defeated,
you will discover still another conciousness and sense of being,
an opulence of denser meaning to give yourself consent for dreaming..

 

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08-09-2009, 02:45 PM

Originally Posted by Mode View Post
your rap is like good bars eaten and chewed it/
i stood me and you suck like kid cudi//

i spit calligraphic slick beauty 'n tell a thousand words,
from the smile on my face to the pain 'n how it hurts,
nouns 'n verbs, the sound of an hours worth of silence,
it's a certain science, the earnest search required to discern the quiet,
take the time to breathe it, succumb unto the silent treatment,
forget all rhyme 'n reason lest you find your mind defeated,
you will discover still another conciousness and sense of being,
an opulence of denser meaning to give yourself consent for dreaming..
i'm not gonna lie dude, that was totally dope, and my last one was terrible :P I haven't written rap in awhile so...

This modes plasticly was the last spit ass to me
I think its blasphemy the way he thinks that he's apt to be
in the same thread let alone the same class with me,
So I'll serve as a catalyst in this kids fast atrophy,
he ain't emo, is what this kid screams massively
but he sure looks the part and no doubt acts the scene,
lights and cameras but im still waitin for the action please,
in fact if we, stripped him down to his bare basic fact of vie,
we'd most likely find a somewhat embarrassing clash of theme
A kid lookin in the mirror askin does my ass look fat in these
cuz he stays wearin skinny girl cut fashioned jeans
livin in fear of his boyfriend sayin he's got a new rash to see

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08-10-2009, 04:08 AM

cuz he stays wearin skinny girl cut fashioned jeans
livin in fear of his boyfriend sayin he's got a new rash to see


Perceptual stimulus.. for the minds eye-
Blind guys leap to dark that fades black, smack
Open handed blows knock sense to light
A verbal assualt that fears no man, recite
The stakes is too high, to be abscent from sound
I'm prayin' for your souls with a care profound
Deep depths of love sink reputation for souls
Solitary sails tread a path so solo
An island but I'm smilin', cool like palm breeze
Mellow vibrant is my vibe, live like calm sneeze
Bless you and your crew, if you got one, fun
On tracks of soiled dirt.......... I run none
Few are called and few are chosen, frozen
Cold statistics.. preached by a water walker
Enter by the narrow gate on a path hidden
Repent from the rotten route marked forbidden

 

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08-10-2009, 06:45 PM

Enter by the narrow gate on a path hidden
Repent from the rotten route marked forbidden


And I call upon strength from my ancestors/
To defeat the temptation of saints and sinners/
Yes I said saints because the truth is just cuz I ain't/
Don't mean I always follow a path that's spoiled and taint/
I refuse to be a follower or a leader/
But don't want to end up shackled to the grim reaper/


short key note: post a longer one later.. peace
 

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08-11-2009, 12:41 AM

But don't want to end up shackled to the grim reaper/

again it gets deep like the mind of a brother's keeper/
I stays underneath the shadow of another's feature/
I make split decisions while I'm in an oven heater/
quick to discover if another's weaker./
Not to bash, but to lift You, we were on the same team/
Pass the ball shift it where you can't see/
Make a no look./
The new bboy stance is so... "put your hand like your frustrated in your dances flow."

not as dope as i'd like it, but I've got to eat now.
 

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08-11-2009, 02:27 PM

The new bboy stance is so... "put your hand like your frustrated in your dances flow


I lance foes impaled from head to toe held up high/
i personally ally with guys to attack then rise/
above the masses to take the rap prize/
a dove passes over black skies, like noahs ark/
I'll be flowin longer then 40 days this just the start/
lift the haze over my hidden arts/
discovered when they uncovered the disk cover/
found out my words are sharp like I was writing with darts/

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08-11-2009, 06:20 PM

discovered when they uncovered the disk cover/
found out my words are sharp like I was writing with darts/


Different day, different time/
I got yours, you got mine/
How'd we got here, I don't know/
Lost memory faded into an echo/
But am I alone in my stronghold?/
I refuse to let my fort unfold/
Now I think I'm getting sick/
Too much to bear, too proud to quit/
Contemplating a new retort/
To this argument I don't support/
In time, not now, remote antiquity/
We'll lift the grounds of inadmissibility/
But false promises of democratizing the land/
Just falls under auspices of the ruler's hand/
Still believing, here waiting to scream bingo/
This lottery promises freedom from the ghetto/
Patrons of the masses, wearing rose colored glasses/
Beckons the brasses, ledgeless, no balance/

"A coward dies a thousand deaths... a soldier dies but once.”
- 2pac

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08-12-2009, 01:45 PM

Patrons of the masses, wearing rose colored glasses/
Beckons the brasses, ledge less, no balance/

Fall in as time passes, allegiance controls valence
Paraplegics teach gym classes, strategic, no baggage
"But teacher I don't wanna run." "You better, I can't!
You're just being lazy." "This is crazy, my sweat's full of pant"
I mean my pants are full of sweat, you're runnin us to death
I'm out of breath, poundin' in my chest like I just hit the meth
Everything's blurry, then it's swirly and I'm falling on my head
Man this is scurry, fingers curling while I'm Stalin seein' red

'Let the bitch suck my dick now her throat famous.'
 

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08-12-2009, 09:27 PM

Everything's blurry, then it's swirly and I'm falling on my head
Man this is scurry, fingers curling while I'm Stalin seein' red
This dog is so furry,but somehow i see it so blurry
I know not the reason so i fall in fury,goddamn man i think i betta hurry
And rush it's before i get buried
Man shit,dont wanna go to bed,so sad for my dad
He really loved me, wait..he didn't he's bad
He beats the shit outta me its like a fad
Cuz everytime he gets mad,it's like i wish i had
The physical power needed to fuck him up,SOUR!
Then do this until he starts to cower,and shower
His ass up till he becomes like a flower


Im named bboyspeedstep/
as a bboy that name I rep/
Im also named Oblitworeight/(Obli2r8)
speedstep's MC roommate/
 

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08-13-2009, 06:15 AM

Then do this until he starts to cower,and shower
His ass up till he becomes like a flower


Time withers and fades like the grass pedals and medals
Meadows of sunshine.. define my one shine
My voice climbs praise to the One who shows mercy
Alleviation to the distressed and de-pressed
I'll bring a bag of lettuce to the cypher, crisp fresh
I stay fresh.. even if I rock payless
I weigh less, a buck fifty, belly out shout
Wet blanket rhymes you'll never catch me in a drought
Trout.. I swim against the current, steady flow
Slayin' manic lies with truth, machete pro
I already know, I tread through trees with heavy woe
I'm a menace to the "hey everybody look what I have"


Unfortunatly due to outside circumstances I couldn't make it a 8 bar piece.

 

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08-13-2009, 06:23 AM

I already know, I tread through trees with heavy woe
I'm a menace to the "hey everybody look what I have"

hey everybody look what i have
showin off your glamour like shorts and calfs
but only half of your whole picture stands to the full
turns out the inside of your apperence appers to be bull
they say dont judge a book by its cover i do
but i got to the first chapter and decided the book might be poo

.......^^ this is not a diss its all i can rap about at the moment for some reason haha

"the first time i rode my bike i felt like i could fly'
now my bikes a blunt and flyings just a state of mind"


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