[BBoYsPeeDsTeP]

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[BBoYsPeeDsTeP]

Guess it's time for me to lose myself yet again
And it's obvious as hell I need no fucking plan
Now I know at least why I beat MC's like a trend
I got a Gorgonlike effect,all you can do is stand
And read the shit I drop,with yo shiverring hand
unable to pick up the pen,I doubt you'll attend
this thread again after readin this verse,you send
For backup cuz bboyprotoge is all but a protoge
Matter of fact he must be a pro-too-gey
See he must've missed some letters like hey
would ya mind starting rhyming in vain?
Or did ya already pass out from feelin the pain
You don't know something though its the same
My stomach wants to eat ya It can't be tamed
You fell for it's trap,that's why I wont worry about diaria
Cuz you're just not ill,you'll prove it yourself so see ya

[bboyprotoge]

sick rhyme heres mine:

ey you know im in a hiher divison den u cuz i got 50/50 precison
its like bang a huge collision i gues u mad the wrong decision
cuz i rap the same way i write keepin my life goals in sight
cuz im from the streets and i rap hittin right on the beats
its like a crazy sunami my rhymes jus blow u away
its 100 percent clear what they say
y is it 100 percent clear cuz all u know wht rhyme is like a bay bay
its rhymin time and all your rhymes are grosser then all tht slime
but the reason i rap is cuz my head is hollow but damn i hope my son don follow
i do wht i do keep on rappin till im dead but now at least my son has some bread

[Bizzare_101]

all three of these votes are retarded...

go read on how to vote in the stickys..

Speed- your lines were wack and you flow was fucked, but you delivered more punches then the other kid

Otherkid- you entire verse made no sense at all.. go fuckin read a book

vote speed

[istolicee]

i have moderated this thread to exclude unneccessary posts as well as horrible, non-criteria-meeting votes. like bizz said, please check the stickys for what constitutes a proper vote.

1-0 speed.

[BBoYsPeeDsTeP]

yes thank you for removing non criteria votes,if you can do the same with my battle with blessone I'd appreciate it..tnx in advance

[_-=FiRe=-_]

Contrary to common misconception, you're actually supposed to insult the other person in a battle. With that in mind...
Vote: Speedstep

[istolicee]

c'mon fire, don't waste my fucking time with a vote like that. you know these cats be newbs, why don't you be a help and crit them instead?? and why am i not voting right now? cuz i gotta moderate bullshit posts like yours.

[Bizzare_101]

ok.... this is a vote..


Speed - ya verse was weak with really pointless lines throughout.. go read the stickies.. they may help.. your flow.. well i could kinda see what you were tryin but it wasnt working.. for a starter like you i say use more simpler rhyme techniques and then work your way up through practice

Protoge - your flow was right messed up, your punches were weak and well your verse made very little sense so i suggest the same exact thing as i did to Speed ok just learn to control everything better.. umm.. i think there is a sticky that both of yous to use..

im gonna vote for SPEED.. due to the fact that Protoge had me thinkin "WTF" throughout his entire verse and that Speed had at least tryed to throw a punch...

[Transcendent]

Speed: I think the only diss from you was a lame gay joke. Remember to focus on the actual dissing aspect. You're still at the point where you're rhyming whatever you can think of, so work on content. There's lots of forced rhymes in there also, but at least you are keeping a reasonable syllable count.

Protoge: Um... More than half your lines didn't make any sense at all and you only had one extremely weak diss. Have a purpose in your rhyming. Saying words that rhyme randomly doesn't make for a good verse. Go read the stickies and take it back to basics completely.

Vote goes to Speedstep, although both of you need a lot of practice.

[Sutley]

Guess it's time for me to lose myself yet again And it's obvious as hell I need no fucking plan Now I know at least why I beat MC's like a trend I got a Gorgonlike effect,all you can do is stand And read the shit I drop,with yo shiverring hand unable to pick up the pen,I doubt you'll attend this thread again after readin this verse,you send For backup cuz bboyprotoge is all but a protoge Matter of fact he must be a pro-too-gey See he must've missed some letters like hey would ya mind starting rhyming in vain? Or did ya already pass out from feelin the pain You don't know something though its the same My stomach wants to eat ya It can't be tamed You fell for it's trap,that's why I wont worry about diaria Cuz you're just not ill,you'll prove it yourself so see ya

A lot of this just doesn't make any sense. It's not a diss, it's not verbal violence, it's not really self-promo either. I don't know what you're trying to get across with this, but the point of a diss battle is to insult your opponent and assert yourself as the better battler by proving it with clever, sophisticated, or hard-hitting original punches. This doesn't really have any disses minus the pro-too-gey line, which doesn't make any sense anyway.

With that in mind, you were okay when it came to flow. Not good, just tolerable.

ey you know im in a hiher divison den u cuz i got 50/50 precison its like bang a huge collision i gues u mad the wrong decision cuz i rap the same way i write keepin my life goals in sight cuz im from the streets and i rap hittin right on the beats its like a crazy sunami my rhymes jus blow u away its 100 percent clear what they say y is it 100 percent clear cuz all u know wht rhyme is like a bay bay its rhymin time and all your rhymes are grosser then all tht slime but the reason i rap is cuz my head is hollow but damn i hope my son don follow i do wht i do keep on rappin till im dead but now at least my son has some bread

Alright, man. More nonsense. What is 50/50 precision? You have a 50% chance of being precise? What good is that? And dude, this isn't Ghostbusters, why are you talking about slime? That's just stupid.

Worse flow than Speed, relatively same amount of stupidity, but a bit more aimless. Also, not really any disses here besides that "bay bay" thing which is a complete disgrace.

I usually vote really quickly on finished battles, but in all honesty I didn't really want to touch this. I hope you can both do better than this, because this battle was terrible. Straight up.

Vote: Speed

[BBoYsPeeDsTeP]

3-0 K.O if im not mistaken worse battle ive done i think