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Diamond · 10-25-2008, 08:56 AM

Oddly enough, I think that always having the same end-rhyme overy two bars gets dull as fuck after a while. I love putting in the odd callback rhyme everynow and then, or doing two rhyme lines one that doesn't then a fourth which resolves the rhyme. I say you keep it, let's face it, most of the online heads sound the same as each other anyway lyric-wise, prolly a good idea to do suttin different.

SpellBound · 10-25-2008, 12:00 PM

That, and there's way more leniency when it comes to stuff like that in audio. There's a lot of tracks you'll hear with things like that. As long as it doesn't fuck up the flow then I'd say keep it.

AJTL · 10-25-2008, 04:39 PM

Originally Posted by RingerINC

don't care about your hair aj, reeeecooooord swagger foool lol.

Ahah

VicValSwift · 10-25-2008, 05:05 PM

Word y'all, thank for the advice.. I hardly ever use callbacks but those are interesting and I think I might incorporate those more often.. plus I resolved the issue already just gotta get a second verse down for the track.. gonna be pretty okay I guess lol.

Tuddles · 10-25-2008, 05:18 PM

what exactly do you mean when you say call back rhyme?

Elbee · 10-25-2008, 05:18 PM

Btw swift, when are you planning to re-record your verse for the clusterfuck track?

Khaled · 10-25-2008, 05:44 PM

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Elbee · 10-25-2008, 06:24 PM

VicValSwift · 10-25-2008, 07:10 PM

Call-backs- Rarely used in the forums, they should still be explained if people want to expand their arsenal.. People may not get them because they are a part of a more complex rhyme scheme. Basically, what call-backs are, is when the start of the first line rhymes the end of the second line, and the end of the first line rhymes the start of the second.... example:

Teachin a lesson, here's a mutha fuckin call-back
don't stall jack or u'll fall flat when i reach for the wesson - Awe-dio

Got that from the advanced guide haha but he explains it good so yeah.

Hm, I could re-record it right now actually, what version should I use though? Because if I re-record it over the one I have.. it's the one without you talking saying "swift, where you at".. lol.

It'll have an echo to it.. but I guess for like.. ever my voice will have that quality since I won't have another place to record that isn't so empty and has a hardwood floor until I move out which is eons from now haha..

AJTL · 10-25-2008, 07:11 PM

Traphik or TimothyDeLaGhetto lol is pretty sick

VicValSwift · 10-25-2008, 07:13 PM

He's aight..

Dude is funny but in all honesty, as an emcee, he isn't all too great. But he has a lot of "e-fame" and that's something I don't have lol.. nor do I strive to get it but whatevers.

AJTL · 10-25-2008, 07:15 PM

Yo I cant upload on here (Audio Lounge). Whaaaaaaaats goin on?

Elbee · 10-25-2008, 07:31 PM

It's the new server. Let's hope its only temporary.

And swift, yeah, I havent posted up the version that has my re-recorded verse but not yours. I will probably upload it onto zhare or something. I dunno.

VicValSwift · 10-25-2008, 07:32 PM

Hm, well If I can get the latest version so that I could use it I could re-record right away seeing as I have plenty of free time plus I'm recording in my room instead of my closet which will probably sound better lol.

Diamond · 10-25-2008, 07:41 PM

motherfucker. *note, this is just seeing if I'm still censored.

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Diamond Member Respect: 5.5 Posts: 1,012 Join Date: Jul 2007	10-25-2008, 08:56 AM Oddly enough, I think that always having the same end-rhyme overy two bars gets dull as fuck after a while. I love putting in the odd callback rhyme everynow and then, or doing two rhyme lines one that doesn't then a fourth which resolves the rhyme. I say you keep it, let's face it, most of the online heads sound the same as each other anyway lyric-wise, prolly a good idea to do suttin different.
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SpellBound Writer Extraordinare Respect: 12 Posts: 1,589 Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Missoula	10-25-2008, 12:00 PM That, and there's way more leniency when it comes to stuff like that in audio. There's a lot of tracks you'll hear with things like that. As long as it doesn't fuck up the flow then I'd say keep it.
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VicValSwift Emcee/B-Boy Respect: 7 Posts: 2,641 Join Date: May 2006 Location: Frisco, Cali	10-25-2008, 05:05 PM Word y'all, thank for the advice.. I hardly ever use callbacks but those are interesting and I think I might incorporate those more often.. plus I resolved the issue already just gotta get a second verse down for the track.. gonna be pretty okay I guess lol.


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Khaled Member Respect: 3.5 Posts: 1,000 Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: TX, NY, CT, NJ	10-25-2008, 05:44 PM got a new track with luda on there... all explained in the thread hit me back with feed, you know i leave feed for most of yall LINK >> I Do It For Hip Hop - Ludacris Ft. K-Atomic <<
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AJTL Banned Respect: 7 Posts: 1,252 Join Date: Jul 2008	10-25-2008, 07:11 PM Traphik or TimothyDeLaGhetto lol is pretty sick
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VicValSwift Emcee/B-Boy Respect: 7 Posts: 2,641 Join Date: May 2006 Location: Frisco, Cali	10-25-2008, 07:13 PM He's aight.. Dude is funny but in all honesty, as an emcee, he isn't all too great. But he has a lot of "e-fame" and that's something I don't have lol.. nor do I strive to get it but whatevers.


AJTL Banned Respect: 7 Posts: 1,252 Join Date: Jul 2008	10-25-2008, 07:15 PM Yo I cant upload on here (Audio Lounge). Whaaaaaaaats goin on?
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Elbee Exothermic Reaction Respect: 10 Posts: 2,896 Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: your nightmares	10-25-2008, 07:31 PM It's the new server. Let's hope its only temporary. And swift, yeah, I havent posted up the version that has my re-recorded verse but not yours. I will probably upload it onto zhare or something. I dunno.
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VicValSwift Emcee/B-Boy Respect: 7 Posts: 2,641 Join Date: May 2006 Location: Frisco, Cali	10-25-2008, 07:32 PM Hm, well If I can get the latest version so that I could use it I could re-record right away seeing as I have plenty of free time plus I'm recording in my room instead of my closet which will probably sound better lol.


Diamond Member Respect: 5.5 Posts: 1,012 Join Date: Jul 2007	10-25-2008, 07:41 PM motherfucker. *note, this is just seeing if I'm still censored.
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