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03-23-2005, 04:21 PM

The one verse apiece was a really good idea too
that got it voted on quick
I'm learnin just posted on diss the previous, think it is an ok bit but anyways good lluck with the new mic

you came strong and the first line was the best damn opener
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03-23-2005, 04:31 PM

YO, YOUR FLOW IS TIGHT DUDE, BUT YOU GOT NO PUNCHES....THE LINES YOU PUT TO ME WERE NICE, BUT THEY HAD NO SUDSTANCE.....LIKE YOUR BEST PUNCH IN THAT SHIT YOU JUST POSTED WAS SOMETHING ABOUT TAKING TIME TO MAKE A RHYME?? I THINK, I REALLY COULDNT EVEN SEE A PUNCH IN IT....YOU NEED TO WORK ON THAT....GET MORE CREATIVE AND MEAN WITH THE PUNCHES

OH...AND 3 LINES DOESNT EQUAL 3 BARS...

2 LINES=1BAR


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03-23-2005, 04:43 PM

3 lines is just less than two bars, was what I was going for, aigght i'll keep working on the punches in general not jes pussyfootin around

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03-23-2005, 04:48 PM

Originally posted by nzameleznzobody
i'd do it to you in two bars but that'd be takin it too far get some rhythm affinity
I'll make it three a trinity my spits striking like lightning its divinity
you couldn't rhyme a worthwhile line if you had time to infinity

SEE WHERE YOU SAID, ILL MAKE IT THREE,....THATS WHY I THOUGHT YOU WERE THINKING 3 LINES MEANS THREE BARS...CUZ YOU SDAID YOU'D DO IT IN 3 BUT IT WAS A BAR AND A HALF...HAHAHA, NOT TRYIN TO MAKE YA LOOK DUMB OR NUTHIN, IM JUST BORED AT WORK

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03-23-2005, 05:04 PM

lol i'll edit it to make it
three lines, a trinity

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03-23-2005, 05:42 PM

Originally posted by nzameleznzobody
The one verse apiece was a really good idea too
that got it voted on quick
I'm learnin just posted on diss the previous, think it is an ok bit but anyways good lluck with the new mic

you came strong and the first line was the best damn opener
anyways
peace

thanks bro ........

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03-23-2005, 05:54 PM

OOOOOOOOOOoooooooWWEEEeeeee....fool just dropped the hot stuff on the cypher....

that was one of the dopest frees ive seen/heard from you dude...nice shit

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03-23-2005, 06:00 PM

Originally posted by b-boy sobber
thanks bro ........
but i dont think it was like jump up and down hott ... yo zeke im gonna get to writing tonight for that track ill call ya and flo get this shit movin

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03-23-2005, 06:43 PM

damn that test was hard yo, he put like 4 questions on homeomorphisms 'n we barely covered em, shoulda been more compactness damnit! we'll see how i did......

and since this has been brought up i wanna talk bout it right quick:
Originally posted by Zeke1
2 LINES=1BAR
so thats most def how we do it 'n prolly on other sites too (i dont get out much) but a couple different prodcuers i've spoken too will say suttin like, aight the beat i got so far is an 8 bar intro, 16 bar verse, 8 bar break then another 16 bar verse and they mean 16 line verse......i think it makes it easy ta say 2 lines is a bar but word, theres sometimes a lil mix up bout it........just thought i'd say suttin cuz errytime i see the word bar i think bout it.

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03-23-2005, 07:14 PM

hey zeke, sobber I tried to make some nastier punches in the freestyle cypher off mode, cuz that was my weakness
if you guys could tell me what you think
that'd be tight, yeah and I see waht you are saying about the bar/verse thing anaktix
can be confusing

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03-24-2005, 09:41 AM

I KNOW WHAT YOU MEAN ZAK-A-RY....I TALKING BOUT WHEN YOUR WRITIN IT OUT.....BUT WHEN YOUR RAPPIN (ACTUALLY SAYING IT) A LINE IS SOMETIMES CONSIDERED A WHOLE BAR...
BUT IF YOU WROTE IT OUT, IT WOULD LOOK LIKE A STRETCHED LINE...

LIKE: I SPIT FACTS TO REACT TO CRACK WACKNESS, RELAX'N COMEBACK WIT THE FAT PHATNESS

IN A SENSE, THAT'S 1 BAR, BUT ITS ALSO ONE LINE...

IS THAT WHAT YOU MEAN??

YO NAMEZ...ILL PEEP IT TODAY, GOT SOME WORK TO GET TO, ILL HIT YOU WIT A PM

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03-24-2005, 10:41 AM

I AM SITTING in work fucking sick as hell. i hate this. grrrrrrr

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03-24-2005, 10:43 AM

its all usualy the same unless its a dirty south beat

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03-24-2005, 10:46 AM

just posting this to make it my 3000th post. wahoo i went quickly through the 2000's. blah blah blah. thanx to all

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