Pretty clean. All it needs now is variety. How much footwork do you know? When you do moves like bicycle pumps, you can try moving with it (just walk with your hands and the rest of you will follow) to give it a more dynamic feel. Storm's DVD has a lot of different concepts you can throw in to your footwork that you can mess around with and make your own.
yah like all this guys are sayin' its clean. tho when u do that ice climber thing, i sorta went...wtf? dont do that too much and try a pull thru after that to turn, try not to just repeat a move that switches back and forth too much
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^ that's cause he's got a longer style of doin footwork instead of doin it as tight and small as i hear everyone tellin people to do on here. i wouldn't worry about it. once he gets more flow in his footwork it won't be a problem.