[SpellBound]

2:00 minute minimum

No flipping

Due by next Friday

Doesn't matter who goes first

[SpellBound]

Might have to turn your sound up, cuz it wasn't as loud as I thought it was when I recorded it on a different computer. Sorry bout the crackly noise at the beginning, here's the lyrics as well:

You aren't the realest to run it, but you do happen to rap
And matter a fact, you are the biggest faggot on tracks
He's the fakest man, and what really make him wack
Is thinkin he can intimidate us with his gangster swag
Gangster rap? Must be a joke, the ish you're spittin about
The only metal you've touched is the shit in your mouth
No surprise here, we know that this fag is a sissy
Only close to guns cuz Tech N9ne raps for his city
No one believes ya talkin about shootin the gat's heat
Cuz no one EVER gets their ass beat by a mathlete
You're nothin but a lie, like if I say you're the sickest
He's strapped...with a plastic dick to replace what he's missin
It isn't even close, with every bar I'm sonnin this fag
The only tool he's bustin hard is the one in his pants
Cuz you're the type of cat who I know it's easy servin
Soundin like the even more geeky version of Pee Wee Herman

Well okay, want more proof that he's so lame?
Meatspin.org is this little bitch's home page
Judging by his track, he wants to be compared to 50
Well I'll start it off for ya, you're both unbearably shitty
Let's be honest, he's not the type to go'n stab people
Mac Lethal's from KC, but it doesn't mean Mac's lethal
Call me an asshole, cuz that'll hardly phase me
Better than bein proof incest makes retarded babies
But really if he says he spits sick this guy's lying
What douche gets inspiration from Get Rich or Die Tryin'
I'm surprised that if when you drop the flow is potent
He's the next Fifty, cuz you both talk with no emotion
Quit spittin metal mouth, cuz you always rap like a bitch
Braces ain't help when I push your teeth back with my fist
I prefer ANYTHING, to the shit sound of this kid rappin
A thug? Nah, you belong in the suburbs you rich faggot!

I didn't even need to write for this kissin ass kid
I'll just play your recent track, it's a brutal diss as it is
Check out his names, that proves he's dumb as fuck
2Basic, and Skillless, well I guess that sums you up
He prays to god daily hopin that his flowin is witty
But his state is Kans and Ass, so we know that he's shitty
Aint a creator of hyphy, and you'll never make heat
He's the second Mac that's gotten killed in KC

[FFWB]

Enjoy.

[Khaled]

hahaha love the "You Got Owned" at the end Spellbound or whatever that says.

anyways here we go::

Spell: Badass intro, you coulda left it as is and still murdered him. nice. ok on to the track itself, the lyrics were good (you could of made it more lyrical imo), the flow was mostly on beat except for a couple of times where there were like an extra syllable or two. Anyways overall I think it was a good track.

FFWB: Week intro, It kinda made me want to go check the track out itself. Also Unoriginal. Lyrics were really weak, didn't find alot of punchlines (and including his mother wasn't right). If you included text we couldve at least understood a little bit better. Your flow was off-- at alot of points, for example that Population:33 line. That also didn't make sense. I actually thought the end without the music was a good idea if used with a dope ass bar or two.

Vote: SpellBound

[Tuddles]

Spell: intro had me crackin up ahaha,i felt though since its a battle that you should've upped your emotion or bettered your delivery but even besides that, flow nd what not was good throughout except for as Khaled said, when you had an extra syllable
EX: But really if he says he spits sick this guy's lying
What douche gets inspiration from Get Rich or Die Tryin'
i thought it was a good punch but, flow was hella choppy
mathlete line was fire though ahahah. Nice track man

FFWB: Intro i felt was weak just because... well Spell did it first man ahahah if not i might have thought it funnier but since he did one first it sounded more like, a copy (could it be considered a flip?)
the flow was really choppy, and it didnt seem like you rided the beat very well
and yeah the population line threw me offff like crazy man.
the way you did it, for some reason i felt like nothing Rhymes
did you mention dobbs!?

honestly FFWB, i've heard better from you man, i think you did this without much care. hopefully the next is better

VOTE:spell

[Mode]

spell - iono what everyone sayin about the intro.. i didn't think much of it.. pretty long winded, lol @ you imitating him though.. beats cool.. flows are on point, punchlines are pretty good but your delivery could be better so they hit harder.. tech n9ne punchline is played out.. around the middle you startin to run out of steam, kinda monotone.. you pick it up again after that 'ok i wanna kill him some more'.. overall you had some good punchlines and wordplay, only thing lettin you down the most is delivery in my opinion..

ffwb - intro, nope.. not feelin it, it doesn't really make sense the way you analyse his shit 'n whatever.. beats dope.. flows decent.. emotion 'n delivery is good.. not much on the punchline's 'n they aren't really hittin or makin alot of sense to me, kinda run out of steam near the end too.. overall you soundin pretty rushed, like your heart wasn't really in it.. i think you coulda come alot better than you did.. outro was pretty weak too man sorry..

aight, i'ma vote SPELLBOUND because he had better punchlines, wordplay.. both ya'll flow's was consistent for the most part, but spell held onto it a little better.. only thing ffwb edged out with is delivery, but only just..

peace.