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istolicee
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DOTY '08 ROUND 2 - Elbee vs Bboy EZ - 05-29-2008, 09:06 AM

ROUND 2 DEADLINES:
-Verses must be dropped by MIDNIGHT (HI time) Wednesday 06-04.
-Voting must be completed by MIDNIGHT (HI time) Friday 06-06


JUDGES:
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THE RULES
-This is strictly a DISS tournament.
-One on One text battle.
-One verse (8 BAR MAX) per contestant per battle. NO FLIPPING!!!
-Strict deadlines for every battle. If you don't make the deadline it's an automatic DQ.
-Single elimination.

JUDGING
-Judges will be noted on each battle. If you battle you will be judging.
-Two Judges per battle, if resulting in a tie a randomly picked Judge will be the decider(or until Voyce comes back).
-You've got 2 chances... If you are noted as a judge and DO NOT post your vote by deadline you will 1) get a warning, 2) be DQ'ed from the rest of the competition.

NO FREEPOSTING. TAKE YOUR QUESTIONS AND COMMENTS TO THE OFFICIAL DOTY THREAD. MAKE IT A HABIT AND YOU'RE OUT OF THE COMP.




PEACE!! =o) ...cee

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Elbee
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06-02-2008, 08:16 AM

EZ's crippled built, little skill no doubt its a simple kill
he's name implies it all, this Bboy Equals Zilch
honestly theres no way in hell this fake is rappin cool
E-Z, well, thats just the fuckin grades he gets in school
plus ya look like you had a hundred cocks slap your face
dont even try, your punches weigh less than objects in space
ya couldnt be off the hook the way you are bound in shackles
quoted bars were dope, too bad they dont count in battles
judging by your amount of wackness, ya gonna be departing soon
they call you EZ, funny how thats not the way chicks are with you*
when will you ever learn cat, I was born to shatter queer lads
EZ says: keep on running, yeah, and don't ever turn back**
I'm known to flow fierce, its clear the votes will go here
beat ya and as consolation, imma let you quote my whole verse

*EZ=Easy.. for you slow chumps
**EZ says... in his sig




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Bboy EZ
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06-03-2008, 12:09 AM

Aiiight asterisk kid, chekk it...

Yo, mad props for your siggy hah, your words made me cry
Here's a dick in your mouth, drink the tears from my third eye
My reign (rain) will never stop son, your rhymes musta ran dry
All your verses stopped working and now read "Please Standby”
Your speech slurred in the sound—this a battle of tongues kid
How’d you make it past the first round speaking with your lungs ripped?
Dumb bitch, don’t get it? Your rhymes dead as lads in morgues
Cuz your wordplays like retards playing over scrabble boards
While my spit’s hot as ash kid, I can taste the roast
Fuck clinking glasses, but I’ll make ya “toast”
I'm ill as Ted Kennedy, worse than chemotherapy
Cloning ten Elbees still won't match a fraction of me
Punches "beat" this chump hard, clubbed down like a seal
And you only in my nightmares cuz you ain't even real
EZ sees victories, while your "position" to win this bout
Is "on your knees" with judges, now use that spit in ya mouth.




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EZ Says: Keep on running, even when it hurts. Look past the pain and it shall subside. Finally, go the extra mile.
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Originally Posted by Bboy EZ
I'll "devour the beef" you can bring for days
like obese men at "all-you-can-eat" buffets
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Died and buried alive, no wonder you Don't Get---Sun
Like "Boxing over yer grave," my punches over your head son

next cat, come get some...
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Bboy Jroc
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06-05-2008, 12:03 PM

elbee: weak closer.. didn't quite get it. other than that, pretty solid verse.. nice wordplay.. esp. liked the "grades" line. good drop.

ez: had some nice punches in there, but i felt like u didn't land them as much. decent flow though.

vote: elbee, on the account of harder punches and wordplay.




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RingerINC
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06-07-2008, 10:31 AM

elbee
good nameplays throughout, could have done with some personals about ez himself... dunno maybe about how he left for a while and only just came back or something, I'm sure theres material there. Yeah your accent played you on the last bar there, that didnt rhyme at all man. Would have been kinda cool if it didnt drop the flow. Didn't count in battles was a pretty funny line, like a kind of arrogant line that worked well with the rest of the disses you had going there. A lot of creativity as well throughout the verse.

Ez
first few were personal and then it kinda drifted off into a more generic verse with more creative lines. And the personal lines didnt really hit that hard for me. Also the multi line with ten elbees didnt really work for me, but that may be an accent thing again. Nightmares line was a nice little personal. I dunno, the lines kinda felt less going at him in a diss kinda way, i mean elbee talks alot on here and theres alot of opportunity for material and i kinda felt there was a lack of you using that.

and this has to be the first battle ever where both people said lad.

I think my votes gonna have to be for elbee but this was a close one.




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