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ROUND 2 DEADLINES:
-Verses must be dropped by MIDNIGHT (HI time) Wednesday 06-04.
-Voting must be completed by MIDNIGHT (HI time) Friday 06-06

JUDGES:
VerbTech
Bboy EZ

THE RULES
-This is strictly a DISS tournament.
-One on One text battle.
-One verse (8 BAR MAX) per contestant per battle. NO FLIPPING!!!
-Strict deadlines for every battle. If you don't make the deadline it's an automatic DQ.
-Single elimination.

JUDGING
-Judges will be noted on each battle. If you battle you will be judging.
-Two Judges per battle, if resulting in a tie a randomly picked Judge will be the decider(or until Voyce comes back).
-You've got 2 chances... If you are noted as a judge and DO NOT post your vote by deadline you will 1) get a warning, 2) be DQ'ed from the rest of the competition.

NO FREEPOSTING. TAKE YOUR QUESTIONS AND COMMENTS TO THE OFFICIAL DOTY THREAD. MAKE IT A HABIT AND YOU'RE OUT OF THE COMP.

[SpellBound]

This is diss of the year, I'll be honest, I hate this herb's rhymes
Enkore? Fuck, your lucky if you get on stage the first time
Second round, and I'm sure that this cat'll be duckin from me
Face it, the only claps you'll receive are the ones on your beat
On every track you frontin, it's all show no depth under your spits
Part of SOL click? Guess your shit outta luck and a son of a bitch!*
You should just quit rappin now, everything you're spittin is wack
On the Mode collab you're lucky he was there to pick up the slack
Leave the site, no one likes you here, every track your recording is lame
You're a shallow ego centric prick, maybe that's why you're Dorian Gray**

To clear up any confusion:

*His crew is called Sons of Liberty, and the statue of liberty is a woman
**He used to go by Dorian Gray, and in the story Dorian Gray is obsessed with beauty

[Enkore]

listen to me, dont spit on a beat, and try to get it right,
your last track was wack as fuck...i jus have to patch this up,
i didn't shit on it harder cuz everyone else thinks ur pretty nice,
well dukes they just gassed you up, now im bout to give advice,
first off, you sound like a bitch... and so easy to attack,
second, im guessin this board the only reason that u rap,
third, ur a herb, a virgin who be dreamin for some back,
fourth, its liberty city, ur town isn't even on the map,
and besides the critisicm, i'm jus sayin i'm friggin wicked,
me versus you is like an eagle verse a little pigeon,
to match this, u wouldn't need practice, u need mysticism,
hatin cuz i keep it hood, ur no good and inconsistent,
i couldn't be kiddin, this couldn't be written, if it wasn't true,
spell's screwed if i'm comin through, in truth i just muscled you,
fuck a personal, just readin this is makin you uncomfortable,
now, lets audio battle, and i prove you no hassle for me to fuckin chew.

...werd.

[VerbTech]

spellbound that was a cool verse, nice attacks, of course some lines harder then others, your closer was def nice...overall a solid verse......coulda been a couple of bars longer.....but thats ok, i think you handled yourself well......that dorian gray line with enkores swagger matched perfectly.....nice connection.....

enkore, also a good verse......some solid punches but others lack some......bet if it was in audio your composure would sell it......really liked the flow of the muscle line.....and the punch towards spells city was nice.......

this is tough, both verses held ground......but i'm leanin towards ENKORE.....kid just had more material, which lead to more punches.......and like boxing when both kats are standing you gotta go with the one who lands more punches.......good battle though. thanks for the read........PEACE!!

[Bboy EZ]

Spellbound – Great opener--best line of this battle IMHO, a strong play on his name. Steady flow and on point, and had some creative lines on his name and on his history (good personals). Only criticism is that you didn’t have a single meta or simile. Although you didn't use up all 8 bars and stopped at 5, I felt this is a good case that demonstrates quality trumps quantity anyday.

Enkore – Unconventional rhyme scheme opener, but it worked for you. Good personals and name calling. I liked the mysticism line, I felt like it was a play on his name regarding “Spells" I enjoyed the flow as well, what I particularly liked was the fact it would be better to hear it on a mic rather than read it--meant for audio. Good solid verses all around, but there was really nothing that stuck out at me that much.

Overall – I thought it was a very close battle. You both were equally hitting on each other, and although nothing from either of you too made me go “Ohhh,” I thought you both had strong decent lines overall. I really don’t feel either one of you decide the landslide win, which would be 2-0. As such, I let Verb vote first so I can intentionally vote for the other person who didn’t get voted, making it a 1-1. So my vote is simply to emphasize the fact that neither one of you deserve the 2-0 win, as I felt it was simply that close of a battle and needs a swing vote. If Spell was voted by Verb, I would of voted for Enkore. As such...

Vote - Spellbound

[Diamond]

Spellbound

This is diss of the year, I'll be honest, I hate this herb's rhymes
Enkore? Fuck, your lucky if you get on stage the first time

flow's tight, punch isnt too effective, not bad start.

Second round, and I'm sure that this cat'll be duckin from me
Face it, the only claps you'll receive are the ones on your beat

haha nicer, decent punch, good concept

On every track you frontin, it's all show no depth under your spits
Part of SOL click? Guess your shit outta luck and a son of a bitch!*

good concept, delivery needs work though, the fact you had to explain it proves that

You should just quit rappin now, everything you're spittin is wack
On the Mode collab you're lucky he was there to pick up the slack

meh personal attempt, not that great, was more biggin up mode than knocking kaiz

Leave the site, no one likes you here, every track your recording is lame
You're a shallow ego centric prick, maybe that's why you're Dorian Gray**

wording could be better ok attempt at a personal though

overall this was an ok verse, but not that hard as battling goes. flow was consistent, but delivery on punchlines needs work

3/5

Enkore

listen to me, dont spit on a beat, and try to get it right,
your last track was wack as fuck...i jus have to patch this up,

no bigtime punch, flow was on

i didn't shit on it harder cuz everyone else thinks ur pretty nice,
well dukes they just gassed you up, now im bout to give advice,

like a bar of set-up

first off, you sound like a bitch... and so easy to attack,
second, im guessin this board the only reason that u rap,

not bad, coulda come harder

third, ur a herb, a virgin who be dreamin for some back,
fourth, its liberty city, ur town isn't even on the map,

lol finally a punch, good one too

and besides the critisicm, i'm jus sayin i'm friggin wicked,
me versus you is like an eagle verse a little pigeon,

nice flow, punch was a bit meh

to match this, u wouldn't need practice, u need mysticism,
hatin cuz i keep it hood, ur no good and inconsistent,

again, where's the hard punches? it's quite fillery

i couldn't be kiddin, this couldn't be written, if it wasn't true,
spell's screwed if i'm comin through, in truth i just muscled you,

no lie, your flow is dope, but you aint punchin man

fuck a personal, just readin this is makin you uncomfortable,
now, lets audio battle, and i prove you no hassle for me to fuckin chew.

finally another punch, and it hits because it's true

overall your flow was tight as a nun's cunt, but you just weren't punching man, i don't get it i KNOW you have better than this, real talk.

2/5

Conclusion

Kaiz had the flow, and his shit read like an audio drop which is good, but spell simple threw more punches, a battle is still a BATTLE. imo spell took this one fairly easy by actually attacking his opponent rather than writing a song about attacking his opponent.

My vote = Spellbound