[Roc]

object of the battle is to pretty much come up with the nicest verse, flowin off the followin bar..

i wanna ride a train up my lover's arm/
stop off at the brain, hop out and find out what's going on// - atmosphere

i picked that from the illest lines thread just to be fair.

u can diss, self-promo, talk bout whatever.. long as u keep it hott. whoever does wins.

1 verse each
unlimited bars
first to 3 votes

g'luck.

[Elbee]

i wanna ride a train up my lover's arm/
stop off at the brain, hop out and find out what's going on// - atmosphere

shit best be going down, I need the brains to catch my train of thought
so mythical like leprachauns' crates and pots or david blaines and gods
am I insanely flawed, at times I doubt whether my brains intact or not
so animalistic with rhymes that when I spit, its raining cats and dogs
if vision of sight's infinite, I'm sure I can reach an occupy my zenith
spread my wings and fly like a phoenix as though the sky's the limit
I manifest my mind in my lyrics with intrinsic rhymes I exhibit
the poignant vibe that I remit got even the most original trying to mimic
and believe me when I say I got the style even insomniacs are dreaming of
straight spit a flow with a sound so unique ina ear like an equinox
and rap tight like a python with knowledge as vast as the seas of poseidon
to split emcees with a trident and then feed their meat to the lions
and I won't change my mind, hip hop nirvana is what i wanna attain in life
continue to endeavor to end the strife until this fucking game is mine

ina ear=in a year
equinox occurs when day and night or of equal length. It happens only twice a year

[Roc]

i wanna ride a train up my lover's arm/
stop off at the brain, hop out and find out what's going on// - atmosphere

as if the possibilities are endless, the sharpest eye in a tempest,
the wisdom in world wonders, sparred with zeus and stole his thunder,
fuck it i'm hercules, the supernatural strength to hurt mc's,
the provider of hell's fire, i burn satan to a third degree,
you prolly heard'a me through the grapevines of mortars and mines,
mortals losing their minds behind enemy lines where many have died,
many-a-time i daydream of life without end or passing,
without the waste of moments i only hope to have lasted,
but in the midst of living and death i keep giving just to end up in debt,
the government keeps robbing my checks till about nothing is left,
these are the things that are kept in this broken heart,
if i wasn't imaginative my own metaphors will tear me apart,
rotten like chopped similes, outnumbered by a million hyperboles,
yet my greatest skill is true stories, drawn from ideas make-believe,
i wish mother earth can conceive, more warriors, more intelligent seeds,
mics bleed with every breath that i heave, goes to show i'm a belligerent breed..

[SpellBound]

Wow, this was a dope battle on both sides. Props to both of you

Elbee
Definitely improvin man, I'm seein a lot of good shit from you lately. Flow was on point, and your ideas were good.

Really like this:
and believe me when I say I got the style even insomniacs are dreaming of

Good verse

Jroc
Another good verse, flow was on point as well. I really like how you flowed from bar to bar in terms of ideas. Cuz it was all about one person with different types of things, really well put together.

I'm gonna have to give this to Jroc. Extremely close battle though, his was just better put together for me. Props to both of you though, one of the better battles I've seen lately.

[FFWB]

This battle was fire. No doubt both of you are good at what you are doing.

Jroc

Loved the way you were flowing. Made it easy to read and could hear it in my head. Gotta give it to the word usage, it was over the top enjoyable.

rotten like chopped similes, outnumbered by a million hyperboles,
yet my greatest skill is true stories, drawn from ideas make-believe,

the wisdom in world wonders, sparred with zeus and stole his thunder,

many-a-time i daydream of life without end or passing,
without the waste of moments i only hope to have lasted,


Only way to put it.. dope. It was pieced together really well, you had some plays on words that were hot and the whole thing seemed well thought out. I was feeling it.

Elbee

Wow. Looked a little sloppy just because of the typing and that could give wrong impression, but this thing was NICE. Flow was off the hook and the little pokes and usage of words was phenom worthy.

I manifest my mind in my lyrics with intrinsic rhymes I exhibit
the poignant vibe that I remit got even the most original trying to mimic

if vision of sight's infinite, I'm sure I can reach an occupy my zenith
spread my wings and fly like a phoenix as though the sky's the limit


and I won't change my mind, hip hop nirvana is what i wanna attain in life
continue to endeavor to end the strife until this fucking game is mine


Maybe not as impressive with the big words like Jroc, but the way you used the words in the references was sweet.



Great battle enjoyed reading it. I'm going to have to give this one to Elbee. His was more enjoyable for me, and I felt it more. Good job to both guys, makes me realize I got a lot of work, before I can hang with y'all.

[RingerINC]

hmmmm i feel conflict within my soul.

Both of you came really nice, both had that mad liquid flow. Elbee i felt came with some more quotable style lines, which were each good and each tres clever. But, Jroc came with ideas that were presented somewhat more cohesively. Like his ideas in one bar continued to inspire the next bar. Elbee sorta had that at some points, but a few seemed to skip around. Hmmmm, very interesting battle.

I think I'm gonna have to go with Jroc.

[VerbTech]

elbee, Its nice to watch other heads grow......your skills have grown a lot since you first started posting here.......your verse was good, flow was on, a good read.......

Juno, needless to say your verse was dope......the thing that sets your verse apart from elbees is it was just smoother and the ideas you set were clear.........

Jroc got my vote

[Roc]

i win, 3-1.

great battle though el, no doubt.

closing..