[istolicee]

Anaktix vs Flex - Verbal Violence

Welcome to Round 1.

The Rules.
- 2 verses each, no flipping
- 2 weeks to complete the round
- If neither participant checks in/drops a verse after 4 days, both are DQ'd
- Doesn't matter who posts first
- Voting will be done by the 3 judges after battle is completed. All erroneous posts and erroneous votes will be deleted.
- Judges have final verdict, no bitching

1st drop: Diss
- 8 bar max

2nd drop: Verbal Violence
- 10 bar max

[Anaktix]

fuck canada.....yup, fuck it, your shit's retarded,
flex's just like his country, he only gives us fuckin garbage,
plus he loves neiman marcus, fag, this dudes a fuckin chump,
never copped a pair a jordans but guess what? he's still got a buncha pumps....
....you're a Reflexion of your inner child 'n flex's kid is not a rookie,
cuz he's a old haggity ass bitch, looks like his inner kid has got a pussy,
so i'm laughin at ya avvy, actin like ya runnin the board,
dude cant spin, break, or graff....'n you sure as fuck cant do the last one of the four......
so its over, sorry it had ta end, it's been fun,
but a dude writin shitty verses.......homie, it's been done,
'n you cant rip a mic, listen, i'm speakin-of-that clear,
last time flex touched a mic.....he was ghost for three 'n a half years,
'n there's a reason for that, there's a reason you dipped,
everytime you spoke out a speaker......people pee'd on that bitch,
shit i'd pee on ya lips if i saw ya face up in the south kid,
the only 'beautiful struggle' would be fittin my nuts in ya mouth biitch.......





hahaa yezzir, aight flex get at it my dude.......

one.

[Reflexion]

this dude really rhymes? ya rap front I ain't buyin
I knock ya pride out like I'm hunting for lions
and don't be cryin, I know ya dream of the rap crown
a music vid, yeah I see it...if ya dance in the background
homie just back down and maybe I'll let ya off easy
ya lines have as much value as you charge for a cd*
a senior member easily, but in no way a veteran
only takes one hand to list who ya better than
rhyming's my denizen and shit your ranking was fifth**
leave ya charred in my fire like revenge of the sith
kid looks like a troll with a beard and buzz cut
anaktix only spits manly when giving a nut suck
just get out the game, god sake's TAKE A BREATHER
cats be like 'u hear of anaktix? naw, me neither'
i'm on top like a freezer, ya boy but also a critic
my advice? wait 'til diddy needs another assistant***

*see his sig
**for tourny entry
***

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[Reflexion]

i know ya busy with moving and all.. and if it's ok with the judges we can make it just the battle verse. if u can make a quick vv then i will too. just lemme know what ya wanna do homie

[Anaktix]

dude theres no way i can do it.....its rollin up on 3 in the am 'n i gotta sleep, prolly gotta wake up at like 730/8 then drive bout 10 hours tomorrow so i really cant do it.....i gotta sleep......its up ta the judges if yall wanna vote now or what but i prolly wont have access to the internet for a while so extendin the deadline or some shit prolly wouldnt work.......altho i do hope ta have the internet soon........flex good looks on the battle...aight judges its up ta yall........

one.

[istolicee]

battle will be judged on one drop only.

[Reflexion]

vooooote fuckers ahah

[SpellBound]

Well, since I'm tired of EVERYONE fucking bitching about this, I'm changing the rules. Anyone can vote now, this will save A LOT of time.

[Mythology]

It's taking longer for battles to be judged than it takes for them to be finished.

Anaktix:
Nice verse. The flow was a little inconsistent throughout, but upon second read it seemed to tie together better. Punches were nicely dropped. Liked:

"so i'm laughin at ya avvy, actin like ya runnin the board,
dude cant spin, break, or graff....'n you sure as fuck cant do the last one of the four......"

"n you cant rip a mic, listen, i'm speakin-of-that clear,
last time flex touched a mic.....he was ghost for three 'n a half years,"

Flex:
I liked your use of metaphors. Very clever, but that's all I seemed to notice. You had a couple of personal punches but they didn't impact very hard. I definitely like your clear and concise style. Very nice verse, but had you maybe reworded some of your punches or added some more hard-hitting personals you would have taken it. Liked:

"I knock ya pride out like I'm hunting for lions"

"ya lines have as much value as you charge for a cd"

Vote goes to Anaktix for harder punches and better delivery. Props to both.

[SpellBound]

Anaktix
Had some nice punches, flow took a bit for me to get used to, not too much of a problem. A good amount of personals in there, and only 1 or 2 weak punches for the most part.

Favorite Bar
so i'm laughin at ya avvy, actin like ya runnin the board,
dude cant spin, break, or graff....'n you sure as fuck cant do the last one of the four......

Flex
You had a lot of clever lines in this, and a few translated to good punches. But a lot just didn't deliver or needed to be reworded a bit. Flow was nice, and it made for an easy read.

Favorite Bar
just get out the game, god sake's TAKE A BREATHER
cats be like 'u hear of anaktix? naw, me neither'

Fuck, these KOBO battles are hard to vote on. But I'm going to have to go with Anaktix on this one. Felt like he had a few harder punches than Flex. Both were really enjoyable to read though, props to both.

[Elbee]

Anaktix
kicked things off with an okay opener with that garbage thingy. Like the rest stated, your flow was a lil consistent throughout and some of the punches were just mediocre. your best punch was 'dude cant spin, break, or graff....'n you sure as fuck cant do the last one of the four......' and you ended your verse decently with that play on his quote or whatever

Reflexion
jumped right into it with that pride of lion line. that rap crown/background bar was nice along with the take a breather/me neither line.. overall flow was consistent but ur punches were lacking a little.

It was a pretty close battle but Anaktix edged it out this time. IMHO, both of y'all have fallen off. guess thats what happens when u stop really trynna elevate your games..

[Roc]

zak wins. closing..