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RingerINC vs. Angel - 12-27-2007, 09:02 AM

Time for some ass-hattery.

2 rounds, 5 bars each, flipping allowed, first to 5 votes, 3-0 ko 4-1 tko.

"If life was a song it'd probably suck..."


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01-02-2008, 05:43 AM

Yo fuckit, I’ma be blunt and you can taste a dry mace/
Fuck stepping to me you already a waste of myspace/
Future of the west coast that's what we're all tryna doubt/
Because fuck the birds man, EVERYBODY's gon be flying south/
Or risk dying out, bitch step to me and I’ll downsize ya ribs/
Eat spotlights, downed while they’re lit, I’ll still outshine ya spit/
But when the best blow you’ll have to accept holmes/
That you’ll have a whole new halo supporting neck bones/
You below real and average, Ya face gon feel this savage/
By now, Angels already got the home field advantage/


Sorry for d-lay was writing up some other shit, anyways lets kick it off.

"If life was a song it'd probably suck..."


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01-02-2008, 11:03 AM

He's not got a mace; I'm not in ya space so ya bars is false,
He's already lying like a chick; strip his heart now he has no pulse,
Im the future of the west, Im something people wanna be,
if you were the future of text i'd burn my board..each and every key,
I got wings cause im fly, you hold signs to block ya image,
Dude so frail he nearly broke apart on his walk to scrimmage,
So you beatin me? trust me son that is not concievable,
Erase Bboy and write "I'm Gay" on ya avy..Thats more believable,
So talk cheap again i'll leave ya body blue like lilo's pet stitch,
Ya can't outshine me bitch, my flows got ya off switch

 

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01-02-2008, 03:53 PM

Truth is fucka, with your skills my throne; you could never sit in my place,
You look like Tom on speed' idolizing ya top eight on myspace,
Ya nose so big it could hide a small family, actually...
your nostrils so big a sneeze could cause casualties,
this kid is so skinny just walkin is exercise for him,
read two bars of ya five cause the rest was so borin,
no joke, cut the crap cause imma give this lady a smack,
his shirt so small looks like he started shoppin at baby gap
this dude wouldn't weigh a hundred pound if he wet,
consider a win like a lisa screech, something you'll never get...

Last edited by Anghellic : 01-02-2008 at 04:34 PM.

 

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01-04-2008, 09:09 AM

The only thing that winged was ya best fucking punches/
Better invest in some crutches, coz next up is lunch bitch/
About the baby gap, looks your chick likes tall white men/
Don’t worry in six months it’ll all make sense/
Stick to hooks, and face it man you love ringers looks/
Not surprised you bored, I don’t write picture books/
Hear my voice, ya head’ll rip and I doubt any weapons miss/
Which makes me the illest ears, nose and throat specialist/
It was a mistake to start me, I spark heat with each bars ease/
Wait… Why am I battling you? Gimme my fucking car keys/


And that screech shit was fucking funny… and I had nothing for it lol… I’ll think of something eventually… And it will be dope and everyone will go
"Damn ringer, that screech flip was so dope" and I'll be like
"Yeah, yeah it is..."

Anyways, good battle man.

"If life was a song it'd probably suck..."


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01-04-2008, 12:22 PM

LoL ya'll funny shit man. really close battle.

Ring 1st Verse:
I really liked the opening with this one:

"Yo fuckit, I’ma be blunt and you can taste a dry mace/
Fuck stepping to me you already a waste of myspace/"

thought you lost it a bit on the rest, wasn't as strong as it could have been.
Other than that flow was there and a couple other hits.

Anghellic 1st verse: Dude you fliped ringers stuff really good in verse, flow was good and ya had a couple of ya own nice hits too, so it wasn't jus flippin.
My fave Bars in this verse are:

"I got wings cause im fly, you hold signs to block ya image,
Dude so frail he nearly broke apart on his walk to scrimmage,"

and

"So you beatin me? trust me son that is not concievable,
Erase Bboy and write "I'm Gay" on ya avy..Thats more believable,"

Second one made me giggle first one was jus a nice punch.

Anghellic 2nd verse:
First bar was really good:

"Truth is fucka, with your skills my throne; you could never sit in my place,
You look like Tom on speed' idolizing ya top eight on myspace,"

But I felt ya dissed his avey too much, like if it were a picture battle it would have been good, but thats pretty much all you used aside from the flipin. Flow was still good and the hits were nice however. a Good read.

Ringer 2nd Verse:
First off I liked how you flipped the "Baby Gap line" it made me laugh:

"About the baby gap, looks your chick likes tall white men/
Don’t worry in six months it’ll all make sense/"

actually everything after the first bar was really good. My fave bar in this is:

"Stick to hooks, and face it man you love ringers looks/
Not surprised you bored, I don’t write picture books/"

Thought it was a well put together flip. This verse was also an easier read then ya first.

Now if I could go on verse I'd say Anghellic won the first Verse and Ringer took the second Verse but unfortantly there can only be one winner.

Vote=RingerINC

I felt he had a lil more creativity Than Anghellic, as were Anghellic relied on the avey a little too much. I like the way his verse were put together better but Ringers second verse made up for that.
Good Battle Guys ya'll made it really hard for me to decide.

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01-04-2008, 12:44 PM

RingerINC
Verse 1
Kick things of decently with the taste of dry mace/waste of myspace bar but the punch was just so-so. Flow was constant throughout. That halo supporting neckbones was nice but your closer was a plain killer man. props to you.

Verse 2
maybe its just me but I honestly felt this verse was lacking the creativity and was too generic in a way. nothing really stood out to me besides the fact that you're getting more adept and the multis shit.

Anghellic
Verse 1
As always, flow never disappoints but your punches were a little lacking in substance here. Ringer hit you with a ton of personals in his first verse but I'm surprised you didnt retaliate better. That nearly broke apart on his walk to scrimmage shit was hilarious though. Overall, I felt you could have come better here.

Verse 2
that was pretty unconventional posting twice in a row, IMHO ya should have waited for ringer to post his 2nd verse then only starting writing yours so you could have more to flip but whatever. back to the breadown... lol. your first bar, tom on speed idolizing top 8 on myspace shit was hilarious as shit. this time around you came harder but dissing his nose size and shit which was something you werent doing in your first verse. that baby gap shit was pretty funny as well and I don't get your lina screech reference so I'm not gonna say shit about. Much better than your first verse.

This one is a pretty tough one to judge. Ringers first verse was probably the best in this battle but his second one was a major letdown whereas Anghellic may have dropped the first round but came much better the second time around. Imma probably go out on a limb here though. Anghellic takes this because he was a tad bit more consistent in the battle which had too much inconsistency in terms verses from both battlers. Pretty dope one nonetheless

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01-04-2008, 02:28 PM

Angel

1st Verse
From everything else I've seen from you, i thought this was mediocre at best.
Opener was iffy....punch wasn't hard enough in my opinion. The flippin' mace setup was straight but the punch just didnt deliver for me. The verse started heatin' up towards the middle/end stages.

Top lines:
"Dude so frail he nearly broke apart on his walk to scrimmage"- Dude is mad skinny

"Ya can't outshine me bitch, my flows got ya off switch"- Wasnt the hardest punch but the concept was nice.

2nd Verse
This is definately more of an Angel verse. Your second drop put your first to shame. Flow was on point with alot better punches and creativity. You came with some hard personals, which I believe, is the basis for a legit diss verse.

Top lines:
"Ya nose so big it could hide a small family, actually...
your nostrils so big a sneeze could cause casualties,"- Nice flow to this and rhyme scheme is on point

"his shirt so small looks like he started shoppin at baby gap"- hehe that shirt does look a little snug

Ringer

1st Verse
Not a bad verse. Like Angel you started off weak but started kickin' it in towards the latter stages. Thought your opener was crappy. Openers and closers have to be the biggest punches in your whole verse. Have the crowd say daaaaaamn right from the start and have em say woooooooow right at the end. Those are the two lines that stick out most in a battle.

Top line:
"But when the best blow you’ll have to accept holmes/
That you’ll have a whole new halo supporting neck bones"/- Very nice. Nice multies within this bar. Decent punch.

2nd Verse
Thought this was a downgrade from your first drop. Didn't see any clear personals. The punches had no relation to Angel. Felt like more of a cyph verse then anything.

Top lines:
"The only thing that winged was ya best fucking punches/
Better invest in some crutches, coz next up is lunch bitch"/- Liked ya opener

"Stick to hooks, and face it man you love ringers looks/
Not surprised you bored, I don’t write picture books"/- Nice flow to this, although the punch was soft.

Aight. Overall you two maggots let me down. I've seen better crap in DTPG and Cypher threads from the both of you. In battles you gotta come hard with your A game and you both came with your C games. When it comes to my decision it's pretty clear to me who took this battle. Angel had alot more attacks and flips. On the basis of flow and creativity you guys were pretty equal.

My Vote:
ANGEL

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01-07-2008, 08:43 AM

Ringer:

Your first verse I didn't really feel, it was moderate, no really hard punches.

Fav Bar:
Eat spotlights, downed while they’re lit, I’ll still outshine ya spit/
Your second verse was the best one out of the 4. Mega flip backs, good flow.

Fav Bar:
Stick to hooks, and face it man you love ringers looks/
Not surprised you bored, I don’t write picture books/
Anghellic:

Your first verse was pretty decent, good flips, nice flow. The lilo and stitch thing went nowhere though.

Fav Bar:
Erase Bboy and write "I'm Gay" on ya avy..Thats more believable,
Your second verse wasn't as good as your first, but it was ok.

Fav Bar:
read two bars of ya five cause the rest was so borin,
Overall:

I'm gonna give this one to Anghellic, cuz although Ringer's last bar was the best, his first one was weak. If the first one would have been stronger, it would have been different.
 

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01-19-2008, 03:20 PM

Angel

1st Verse
i like this verse espically when you flip it. its smooth but i think you coulda came a little bit harder than that. especially some of the stuff you hit me with on diss the previous guy form lol.the punches coulda been set up a little bit better... but overall it was smooth

Top line;
Im the future of the west, Im something people wanna be,
if you were the future of text i'd burn my board..each and every key

2nd Verse
Much more you... defenitantly outdoes the other one... your setup on your punches was way better then your last verse and your delivery was better
Top lines:
You look like Tom on speed' idolizing ya top eight on myspace- i think he kinda does look like tom

"his shirt so small looks like he started shoppin at baby gap"-true to that

Ringer

1st Verse
your first verse is ok... your opener doesnt really pull me into the verse your punch has a nice line and it has a good deliverly ...overall this verse was ok
Top line:
"But when the best blow you’ll have to accept holmes/
That you’ll have a whole new halo supporting neck bones"/- your best punchline

2nd Verse
your second verse is not as good as your 1st but your opener is alot better... you were hood with your delivery but how were you dissing him i really couldnt tell but this verse wasnt as good as your first.
Top lines:
"The only thing that winged was ya best fucking punches/
Better invest in some crutches, coz next up is lunch bitch"/- this pulled me intoo the verse

My Vote:
angel
 

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01-19-2008, 04:39 PM

Angel wins 4-1 TKO

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