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Picture Battle: Roc vs. Mook -
12-10-2007, 11:28 AM
2 verses each
10-bar max
first to 3 votes wins
flippin allowed
and about uppin a pic.. just "go advanced" when u reply to this. click "manage attachments" down the page and it should be self-explanatory from there. i'll post mine when i get home.
g'luck yo..
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12-11-2007, 12:34 AM
yeah it's cool. just say who u are in the pic of course. here's mine..
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12-11-2007, 12:30 PM
I'm the dude in the pic...lol
brllllrrabrllraahmnbrlllradigiidydiggidydiggidy... .BOOM!
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12-12-2007, 01:05 PM
i'm not impressed with fancy pictures, gettin kisses from skanky bitches,
posted-up in a suburban home, what the hell were u thinkin?
limousine pimpin, shit.. that's a stretch hearse in roc's standards,
you forgot to dress-up, don't worry.. ya suit is in the casket,
ugly-ass bastard, you deserve to get beat-up and blasted,
i'll cut ya fuckin head off and take shots at the basket,
ya face is haunting, gimme goosebumps like a ghost gawking,
get a noose chump, you aint ballin.. you look like a young stephen hawking,
really son, stop it.. you aint gotta front, don't make me aim for ya cunt,
i'm just sayin you look more pussy, you should be the one puckered-up,
shit outta luck, ya outfit's similar to a homeless fuck..
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12-19-2007, 05:40 PM
Notice this dude stands there with a sign of peace
Unfortunately there’s no peace, watch violence increase,
Standing there looking all proud to be Jroc,
Looking like ya getting pleasure from a tube sock,
Now I don’t want to say ya ugly, but I guess, I jus did,
You jus the kid we can’t get rid of, the sites only skid,
Let’s face it, falling out of the ugly tree is an understatement for you,
Being beat with an ugly stick a little harder then most is more true,
The background looks like the setting of the movie Saw,
You’re jus a little fucked in the head with a wide overextended jaw,
Raping little boys in your mommy’s basement to get back at her,
She beat you as a child and now we have to defer from calling you sir,
She must have beat the shit out of you and now it’s stained to your skin,
Like you fighting your mother this is a battle you can’t win*,
Probably the only girl in the world that would even touch you too,
Admit it, you wish the girl kissing me was actually kissing you,
At your point of view, actually, bet you wish I was kissing your cheek,
Computer geek looking shit streak under my shoe as you remain weak,
I do happen like the golf shirt though, you’re going need it,
After this battle you’re going be forced into retirement.
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(* I had a better diss here but it seemed a little racist to me so I took it out.)
[now for the second verse do you put up another picture?]
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12-20-2007, 03:11 PM
10 bars and i didn't feel shit, i'll dispose you real quick,
hand in ya pocket, feelin that dick.. the only action ya gon' get,
none from that bitch, don't give a fuck if she'd kiss me,
matter fact, i refuse.. to hell with sloppy seconds from a hillbilly,
slap you silly, wipe the half-assed grin off ya face,
the sign aint for peace, poke ya eyes till they both deflate,
quit sweatin my jaw, that's an iron chin, took punches from iron men,
closest you got into a fight was with ya shirt, obviously you struggled to iron it,
fuck retiring kid, in old age i'd still rock my old ways,
i'm "seasoned" like old bay, this fag's a rookie.. goin both ways,
i mean, kiss my cheek? i'll flush you down to shit's creek,
you really are a mook*, thinkin i'd cater to real freaks..
*a foolish person
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12-21-2007, 05:14 PM
10 bars and you don feel shit, yet it’s taken you two verses to commit,
You don’t feel it but the shit is stuck to you like myself and my girls tits,
As your ugly ass tries to hide to the side by turning half way around,
Do me a favor complete the turn away form the camera and face the ground,
When I’m done you won’t be standing close to proud at all,
Next picture I see you’ll be leaning against that wall,
Iron men punches or iron men cum shots don care what your use to,
Super Man himself could come and fuck you and I’d still say the same to you,
Now tell me when’s the last time you’ve ever seen a hillbilly with a limousine,
The thought of it is just obscene like you holdin ya side for fear of losing ya spleen,
Next time you pose for the camera try bathing in ice cubes and try to get clean,*
Your dirty ass is makin me sick to my stomach, I’m glad you're read and not seen.*
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(* Old urban Legend about waking up in a tube of ice with a missing spleen.)
(* Don’t know Him or never seen him In person, jus read his stuff online.)
There kinda done quick but tyeah. Nice Verses the Jroc
VOTES UP.
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12-21-2007, 11:00 PM
Jroc
Round 1
Flow was nice, but seemed like the punches were just comin up short. I mean you definitely attempted punches, but the only nice one that I really saw was the Stephen Hawking one.
Favorite Bar
ya face is haunting, gimme goosebumps like a ghost gawking,
get a noose chump, you aint ballin.. you look like a young stephen hawking,
Round 2
Much better in the punch department this round. Flow was good again, and you had some pretty nice punches thrown in there. The personal on his name was cool, especially cuz I had no idea the meaning of Mook was that.
Favorite Bar
none from that bitch, don't give a fuck if she'd kiss me,
matter fact, i refuse.. to hell with sloppy seconds from a hillbilly,
Mook
First Round
Came weak with the punches, first 2 bars were mostly filler too. You didn't even diss on his pic that much, a lot of it was you stating irrelevant stuff. Flow was okay, but either way you're punches were really lacking.
Favorite Bar
Let’s face it, falling out of the ugly tree is an understatement for you,
Being beat with an ugly stick a little harder then most is more true,
Second Round
Same problem again man, just a lot of filler lines that made ya verse weak. You had some okay lines here and there, but too many weak ones.
Favorite Bar
As your ugly ass tries to hide to the side by turning half way around,
Do me a favor complete the turn away form the camera and face the ground,
Vote goes to Jroc
Return the favor on SpellBound vs Elbee
You have nothing interesting to say so you write about yourself
NEW SONG - FROM THE SOUL
My Music
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12-27-2007, 06:07 PM
Bboy Jroc
Verse 1
ya kicked things off pretty well but most of your bars were lacking but I liked the limousine/stretched hearse line along with the young stephen hawkings(providing the pic really helped as well). flow was on point throughout.
Verse 2
you came much harder in this verse though. flow was on as well. the peace sign flip was hella dope and the thoughest fight with the shirt shit cracked me up. and that mook punch as a closer was good.
Mook
Verse 1
first thing i notice was how uneven your lines were which in turn led to horrible flow. most of your punches werent really based on his pic so thats a downpoint for you. and you shoulda used that racist punch because thats what battling is about, degrading your opponent as much as possible and making it personal.
Verse 2
flow was off in the middle of the verse but it wasnt so bad besides that. the only punch i was feeling was the one where you said he should completely turn awayfrom the camera and shit. I felt like didnt put much effort into this verse.
Win clearly goes to Bboy Jroc for the better punches and flow.
The maker of my destiny, mould it with these hands of midas.
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12-30-2007, 06:28 AM
aight, jroc - i expected better, the punchlines were more just normal battle standard, not really referencing his pic very much.. couple nice lines like that stephen hawkins one.. couple other times you dissed on the pic but i think they didn't quite hit the mark.. flow was alright..
second round - better than the first, started out kinda slow but you picked it up pretty nice, that line about ironing made me chuckle, was nice.. everything after that came pretty solid 'n your flow improved on the first verse too..
mook, like roc you came kinda with a normal battle verse, had slightly more picture punches than roc's first verse, but the delivery was poor, flow was aight, 'n you lacked creativity..
second round - 'bout the same as the first verse, punchline delivery was slightly better but that's about it..
my vote - jroc.
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12-30-2007, 06:54 PM
3-0 roc, g'job guys.
PEACE!! =o) ...cee
hip hop head, mommy x2, business owner, scrapbooker
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