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10-30-2006, 09:55 PM
arite same dealio as usual, two verses no limits flipping and all the usual allowed.
i went first in my other battle so i would prefer to go second, but if you want I can drop first. Let me know. |
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10-31-2006, 10:15 PM
alright little g, forget fighting with me cuz you finna get dropped,
split lips with the intricateness of my spits, kid i'll make you shit on the spot saw my shit against roc, already took note of my deviousness, i can tell you you're wack now... ain't gotta look at ya previous shit. i'm serious bitch, ya whole style's a joke, ain't at all provoking best to put the weed away... you gon' lose ya Voyce with all that smoking* i ain't joking, attacking me is blasphemy, i'll flip ya one-eighty degrees, thrill ya with killer fillers, only way you'd be iller is if you traded with me. shit you probably would, and i bet you've done it already, you couldn't bust my chops if you brought a fuckin gun and machete, ya get me? i thrash and smash these half-assed cats drastically, actually i'm supposed to be nice to retarded kids.. mommy told me i have to be this wack rap catastrophe is askin me to jump in the ring for a bout, were you thinking this out? if you've seen my shit... what the FUCK were you thinkin about? you gonna get rocked kid, left snotless when i smack ya face, rearrange ya skull with my fists, kick everything back in place, matter of fact you couldn't top this verse if you fell flat at my feet shit... ya wouldn't have a chance if ya whole crew wrote it collaboratively still wanna battle with me? take a second to think... go speak with ya boys hold up for a sec.....ain't this is a text battle? there ain't no need for a Voyce. *his av. |
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11-03-2006, 06:25 PM
Read it n’ weep, why need a Voyce when I could have this idiot see/
Myth like quick pussy to me, I demand you turn Gynec immediate-ly/ And she told you to be? she’ll regret sayin’ shit about me, let’s get this cleared/ Mrs. Myth if I’m the retard what is your son? He posts 8 times a year/ V don't listen to queers, limp punches n’ whack flow is how your attack goes/ The fuck you swing at though?... You missin' the cut like black people wit afro's/ I got them skillz that you lack yo, step and get my hand right smackin’/ Bitch… You couldn't 'bust' a 'chop' if you was a 'Lamb cli-maxin'/ Slackin’ wit all ya actin’ n’ rantin’, if you can flip me put up a bet-bro/ You should just let go…Myth you can't even flip a chocolate-covered-pretz-ol/ What the hell yo, how dare ya closer not acknowledge my previous rips/ What a meaningless writ, 10 battles and script was in the last previous six/ Got me turned mischievous quick, this delirious dick done bored me/ Mythology’s fake fictitious shit, this kids a made up story/ Debate like a bitch on Maury, I rip and they standin’ up clappin/ ...You couldn’t Rip shit if you was Rich Hamilton crappin’/ What happened?? Is that round 1 the only thing that you got?/ Your stupid one line openers are the only thing that’s shit on the spot/ |
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11-04-2006, 03:22 AM
i've wrecked sets of vets. contest texts with myth, bitch, expect to fail.
still wanna bet on me flippin you? you my quarter... heads or tails? it ain't safe to play with me. why? i'm a dangerous guy. guess you already knew, that's why it took you days to reply wasted this guy, ya got popped and disgraced kid, ya shit's sloppy, just face it dissin my verse, when ya whole STYLE looks like mine... just copied and pasted. drop and replace it with some letters that hurt, could it get any worse? my punches are limp? shit, your only decent line was fed by what i already said in my verse, and it involved sex and a sheep, i'll make you wet at the seat when i'm flexin the heat forget a vendetta, an easy win's the only thing i'm expecting from V rest, take a seat, let's stop rappin for a sec... just talk to me how you gon' say my flow's wack, when half ya shit ain't rhyme properly? scoff with me and i'ma rip-this-sorry bitch to bits, shit i'ma git it gory, i was gonna slash ya verse up too... but you already did it for me/ your ass got broke in the first, and that joke of a verse ain't deservin no respect if i'm a pussy, you's a ball, the way you're gettin served over the net .... had to pause for a sec, let you get some oxygen to the lungs in ya chest, take out the badge and the cuffs, that last one put ya cardiac under arrest. bitchin bout how work's got you trippin, take the week off, son, you need love, i'd diss on ya opener too... but you ain't got one to speak of. i should probably end it here, i could go on and on with dissing, so next time you accept a battle... size up your competition. |
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11-10-2006, 09:11 PM
This Lyrical List got that effect without the need for the cause/
Why you start again… your fuckin’ hottest line was your pause/ Whole closer should be fed to the dawgs, like cards have’em mucked dude/ Shits as good as gettin’ head from a chick wit a bucktooth, as she sucks you/ Only a dick would fuck you, I don’t think Myth even a man yet/ Using Proof’s line to hide cuz his couldn’t hold up his Spandex/ Round 2 and nothin’ has land yet, you just soakin’ in mine/ Never heard a flip verse flipped worse then your opening line/ And copy and paste your shit, man why would I ever glue crap/ How you wreckin’ vets when you spittin’ all of there used raps?/ Recyclin’ is whack, must of seen 99% of ya rhymes/ If I’m a quarter, a nickel is your Mythological sign/ Voyce that Astronomical kind, ya words can’t space V either/ How dare you bust a serve line, you stupid Cheer-leader/ I’m a firm believer that you got punked now, who let this skunk out/ Voyce so ‘select’, this dudes Don Flamingo from Mike Tyson’s punch out/ |
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11-10-2006, 09:27 PM
Hmmm something wierd just happened. I saw Verbs battle and noticed that I had basically the same line he had. Now I swear to god I dont bite shit or at least to my knowledge do it willingly. Obviously it would be a stupid ass move to bite his line in his battle and put it right in mine. Anyways, what i think might have happened was that i read his verse a while ago. His rhyme probably stuck to my head and I wrote something like it forgetting that he wrote something very similar. My bad. Verb hope you don't think I bit you. I'd be the stupidest person in the world to willingly put your line in my verse with our battles going on the same time. I guess my fault for not remembering that you wrote that. Peace
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11-11-2006, 12:22 AM
lmfao, my nig, its freakin cool.....shit i don't patent my lines, plus im pretty sure hundreds of emcees have used that shit b4, fuck lines are recycled almost daily, and the common facial feature as bucktooth, yo, thats damn understandable.........don't sweat it man.........do your thang, let me take a shit, then imma vote on your battle fo sho.........go vote on me and GF, we gotta close that one, we prob going to do a 2 rounder right after, kid got upside, like myth said he's dedicated........and don't worry myth ill post something good......lmfao.........alright give me a bit, gotta batman!......peace
*vote - breakdown myth rd 1 the opener.....was ok......nothing great about it......plus i battle guys that seperate openers, bodies and closers, i didn't like that format........your verse just reminds me of that, but im not holding that against you.......but no big deal, openers don't win battles........moving on......... the rest were nice, some lines i liked, some i was, why'd he put that.......overall good quotes "saw my shit against roc, already took note of my deviousness, i can tell you you're wack now... ain't gotta look at ya previous shit." -that should have been your opening bar...... "i'm serious bitch, ya whole style's a joke, ain't at all provoking best to put the weed away... you gon' lose ya Voyce with all that smoking*" -nice play "still wanna battle with me? take a second to think... go speak with ya boys hold up for a sec.....ain't this is a text battle? there ain't no need for a Voyce." -another nice play BTW "matter of fact you couldn't top this verse if you fell flat at my feet" -am i missing something? im sorry i didn't grasp this line at all....... voyce rd 1 well you started off kinda blah, then you started getting punchy.....well when you go second you can def use the flips and attack hard, you used that well, voyce had the upper hand in round 1........overall a little better than myths first, round 1 is yours quotes "And she told you to be? she’ll regret sayin’ shit about me, let’s get this cleared/ Mrs. Myth if I’m the retard what is your son? He posts 8 times a year/" -nice flip, a smile came to my face..... ""V don't listen to queers, limp punches n’ whack flow is how your attack goes/ The fuck you swing at though?... You missin' the cut like black people wit afro's/" -afro part was nice "Slackin’ wit all ya actin’ n’ rantin’, if you can flip me put up a bet-bro/ You should just let go…Myth you can't even flip a chocolate-covered-pretz-ol/" -nice bar, plus those Flips are pretty good, the white chocolate sucks tho......stoney ass food "Mythology’s fake fictitious shit, this kids a made up story/" -nice play "...You couldn’t Rip shit if you was Rich Hamilton crappin’/" -liked myth rd 2 ok, opener was ok, but the rest got good, the pause, i didn't attract me at all, good creativity tho, but overall good shit........ quotes "it ain't safe to play with me. why? i'm a dangerous guy. guess you already knew, that's why it took you days to reply" -once again shoulda used this as your opener "forget a vendetta, an easy win's the only thing i'm expecting from V" -........nice........ "rest, take a seat, let's stop rappin for a sec... just talk to me how you gon' say my flow's wack, when half ya shit ain't rhyme properly?" -liked how this flowed "scoff with me and i'ma rip-this-sorry bitch to bits, shit i'ma git it gory, i was gonna slash ya verse up too... but you already did it for me/" -nice hit! voyce rd 2 this verse was the best of the battle, not by much, but i think the punches voyce had in both verses hit harder than myths.......thats all i need to say..........voyce takes the second round and the win, mainly on the effect of the punches, both flow and use of fillers were pretty equal......... quotes "This Lyrical List got that effect without the need for the cause/ Why you start again… your fuckin’ hottest line was your pause/" -this was nice on the "hottest line" flip "Shits as good as gettin’ head from a chick wit a bucktooth, as she sucks you/" -huh, a recycled filler, nothing more, just pointing that out.......it didn't help me and it didn't help you.....lmfao "Never heard a flip verse flipped worse then your opening line/" -the flow and hit was on point......like this line a lot "Voyce so ‘select’, this dudes Don Flamingo from Mike Tyson’s punch out/" -that was hot, with a "select" uppercut for the knock out......... EDIT: CLARIFY VOTE - JROC |
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11-13-2006, 10:35 PM
Verb voted for Voyce
Round One: Mythology Introduction - Not your best work, it really didn't hit me. Witty, but I just didn't feel it. Structure - I thought this was a pretty good structure. The same as the other ones, and I like how your style goes. Rhyming - I liked how this all flowed together with the rhyme scheme. No complaints here, the rhyming was all you. Ending Line - It was ok I guess... It really didn't hit me as hard as I thought it should. It kind of died at the end, your strong point was in the middle.
Voyce Introduction - I may not know whay a Gynec is, nor do I care to know, but your opening lines were pretty good. I liked it. Structure - I kind of got a beat to it, it was a bit hard to follow. But none-the-less I still got it. It was an ok, not bad, but then not the greatest work you've put either. Rhyming - Yours was pretty sweet, but I think Myth still beat you on this part. You took him down with that opener, but then it just kind of got sloppy. Not to the point where it sucked, but it could have been better. Ending Line - I don't know if you gave him a compliment with that last bar or if that was an insult, but the ending didn't really hit me. I just couldn't grasp it. Maybe it's just me, but it could have been better.
Round 1 - Mythology Round Two: Mythology Introduction - Again, I've seen better, but it wasn't bad either. It was fairly decent, better then your first one, but not much. Structure - I thought that this structure was better then the first one, it had good flow to it. That pause was also pretty creative, and it didn't throw off the flow at all. Nice job Rhyming - Again no problems here. A little iffy in the middle, but it didn't really affect in the flow. Ending Line - Separately those bars are pretty sick, but when you put them together they didn't flow together at all. Good bars, but not a very good line.
Voyce Introduction - Again I liked how that flowed, it really hit me. No complaints in this department. Structure - Hmm, that did look a lot like Verbs didn't it? Lol no worries man, it's still good. No complaints here either. Rhyming - I thought you could improve on this one a little better, I just didn't see the flow happenin' here. Ending Line - ... I have no idea wtf you were talking about here, so I'm not even going to comment on this lol. It SOUNDED good, but you completely lost me.
Round Two - Mythology Conclusion - This one goes to Mythology because of his good flow and structure. Although Voyce had good flips, that was really his only strong point. |
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11-14-2006, 04:53 PM
aight i been ghostin for awhile but time for a post
Myth round 1 Overall- flow was your best feature, your wordplay and creativity were pretty solid, punches were all right the only line that really got my attention was the closer "still wanna battle with me? take a second to think... go speak with ya boys hold up for a sec.....ain't this is a text battle? there ain't no need for a Voyce." - yeah its kinda played, but then again i liked it and it hit hard as a nice punch [U]Voyce round 1[/u] Overall - flow was pretty on point, you had alot of wordplay, some worked better than others... punches were nice. in all you brought the better lines in this round favorite lines: "V don't listen to queers, limp punches n’ whack flow is how your attack goes/ The fuck you swing at though?... You missin' the cut like black people wit afro's/" -the flow was killer here, and the wordplay in that punch was awesome, made me laugh "Got me turned mischievous quick, this delirious dick done bored me/ Mythology’s fake fictitious shit, this kids a made up story/" - nice play on the name "What happened?? Is that round 1 the only thing that you got?/ Your stupid one line openers are the only thing that’s shit on the spot/" - that was a nice flip haha Myth round 2 Overall - i can tell myth you do alot better with the ability to flip and shit.... you came back from the decent drop in round one and just really tore up round two. again, flow was real nice, and this time you came really consistent with the punches, had good ones almost every line.... there was some played stuff in there but the good shit shined through i wasnt really feelin the opener, it was aight, but kinda played out, nothin too special i liked pretty much the first half throughout but here are the best spots in my opinon fav lines: "it ain't safe to play with me. why? i'm a dangerous guy. guess you already knew, that's why it took you days to reply" - ouch... nice hit there to start off "wasted this guy, ya got popped and disgraced kid, ya shit's sloppy, just face it dissin my verse, when ya whole STYLE looks like mine... just copied and pasted" - the flow really helped it hit hard, good punch "and it involved sex and a sheep, i'll make you wet at the seat when i'm flexin the heat forget a vendetta, an easy win's the only thing i'm expecting from V" - i really liked the wordplay, one of those "oh dayum!" lines, real creative "scoff with me and i'ma rip-this-sorry bitch to bits, shit i'ma git it gory, i was gonna slash ya verse up too... but you already did it for me/" -again the flows so on point here, and the slash personal had me laughin "had to pause for a sec, let you get some oxygen to the lungs in ya chest, take out the badge and the cuffs, that last one put ya cardiac under arrest." -doesnt seem super-original but i liked that wordplay Voyce round 2 Overall - this verse was pretty good, you had some real nice lines, but i didnt get the same impact i got from your first verse. a few iffy spots made it fall off a bit. again your flow was mostly good, punches were straight, pretty creative with the wordplay but some i wasnt really feelin intro was tight, good start "This Lyrical List got that effect without the need for the cause/ Why you start again… your fuckin’ hottest line was your pause/" "Whole closer should be fed to the dawgs, like cards have’em mucked dude/ Shits as good as gettin’ head from a chick wit a bucktooth, as she sucks you/" - i dig the flow here, nice line haha "Round 2 and nothin’ has land yet, you just soakin’ in mine/ Never heard a flip verse flipped worse then your opening line/" - haha that was a real good hit "Voyce that Astronomical kind, ya words can’t space V either/ How dare you bust a serve line, you stupid Cheer-leader/" - now this bar i really didnt like.... i like how you started it but the second line just completely threw it off and killed the fluidness of your verse. and im assuming your closer was some reference to a video game or somethin, but i dont know that game so it didnt really do much for me. a little too obscure for a closer in my opinion OKay so i think voyce took round one, but myth really stepped it up and came through and took round two. Overall i have to say myth took round two by a bigger margin than voyce took round one, so i have to give the win to myth my vote: [color="Cyan"]Myth[/COLOR] this was a good battle for both of you, nice read EDIT: sorry voyce i dont know what i was thinkin lol |
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11-14-2006, 05:00 PM
Nice vote but I aint VERB, BITCH!! LOL
Myth up 2-1 |
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11-16-2006, 01:23 PM
Bumpin' for Votes
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11-17-2006, 04:23 PM
Myth
Verse 1 "shit... ya wouldn't have a chance if ya whole crew wrote it collaboratively still wanna battle with me? take a second to think... go speak with ya boys hold up for a sec.....ain't this is a text battle? there ain't no need for a Voyce." That was nasty, just nasty "ya get me? i thrash and smash these half-assed cats drastically, actually i'm supposed to be nice to retarded kids.. mommy told me i have to be" I liked that line, flow was iffy but the punch was there Verse 2 "wasted this guy, ya got popped and disgraced kid, ya shit's sloppy, just face it dissin my verse, when ya whole STYLE looks like mine... just copied and pasted. drop and replace it with some letters that hurt, could it get any worse? my punches are limp? shit, your only decent line was fed by what i already said in my verse," tight, punches right on point "your ass got broke in the first, and that joke of a verse ain't deservin no respect if i'm a pussy, you's a ball, the way you're gettin served over the net " Well worded, liked this bar Overall Opener on the first verse was tight, not feeling the second opener too much. Same deal on the closers, first was dirty second one fell off a bit. Wordplay was nice throughout. Flow was a bit iffy at times, but steady for the most part. Voyce Verse 1 "I got them skillz that you lack yo, step and get my hand right smackin’/ Bitch… You couldn't 'bust' a 'chop' if you was a 'Lamb cli-maxin'/ " Flip of the month right there, nice "V don't listen to queers, limp punches n’ whack flow is how your attack goes/ The fuck you swing at though?... You missin' the cut like black people wit afro's/ " Nice punch Verse 2 "And copy and paste your shit, man why would I ever glue crap/ How you wreckin’ vets when you spittin’ all of there used raps?/" nice wordplay, good punch Overall Verse one came hard but Verse two fell off a bit. The opener on verse 2 was nasty, good job. Ok wordplay, flow was a bit iffy. VOTE = Myth Great battle, both of you guys dropped hard! |
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11-17-2006, 06:16 PM
Yo Myth......This battle first to 3 or 5?? Anyway is straight wit me.
Myth up 3-1 |
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11-17-2006, 09:58 PM
no clue, don't care. i'm leaving this one up to you. good battle regardless.
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11-17-2006, 10:16 PM
Aight we'll squash this battle then. It'll prolly take weeks for two more votes to come in anyways. But yeah yo, Good battle man. Respect. We'll do this again in the future no doubt!
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