[Bizzare_101]

aight...
just one verse i guess
any length...
normal rules n shit like dat....

i was hopin for someone with less talent but whatever... you want it to be topical??

[VerbTech]

anything man, im as bored as u so, whatevers.........post anything u want, ill be down, imma head out but im gonna post later tonight so, if you post you'll get my response by 2morrow, that cool? give me something ill man

[Bizzare_101]

aight homie.. i'll try anyways...

[Bizzare_101]

TOPIC : you just seen the most hottest chick you've ever seen in ya life and ya describe her to everyone! there...

[Bizzare_101]

lol shit homie....
aight heres my spit..

met this girl up in south side queens
she be wearin them ass tight jeans
her skin is dark just like coco
so damn fine i think im goin loco
hope to god she aint no hoodrat
trust me homie you aint want that
my daddy say shes one fine lass
i just cant stop starin at that ghetto ass
she gives me head in the middle of class
how long will this kinky shit last??
i try to get her in bed
but she gives me head instead
you should see these curves
so damn hott its almost on my nerves
she has one great body
and shes so damn naughty
next all i wanna do is seduce
so i hope she aint to loose ( lol )



shit ran outta ideas.. and its really bad lol... oh well... lets see some REAL good shit VerbTech

[VerbTech]

lol alright.........i'll key this right now


yo wassup homies you should hear what i gotta tell you/
i saw this fine ass woman, she was fuckin incredible, i'll tell you/
she got that cute look and her personality was clean/
had that banging body, she needs to be on me, naw'mean/
she the type of girl u get ice cream with, to know better/
flirting going back and forth, my eyes stuck on hers....and sweater/
god damn, it feels so good talkin with her, i get them chills/
gotta force my will, to have her be mine, gotta show some skills/
she got a stylish walk with her ass, YO its fine as fuck/
her lips so soft i kissed her gently, i almost lost my cock/
damn her body full of curves my head gets full of words/
yo i can't lose my nerves before my vision gets all blurred/
she the finest girl i ever did see, she takes the time to be with me/
i can't get this dime off of my mind, i need to see her another time/
i better drop her a line cuz to not be with her must be a fuckin crime/
i can't fuckin lie, she'd be crazy to not complete this guy/
GOD DAMN!! im in need of that, everything just feels so right/
she knows she can have me whenever she needs it, thats what im feelin/
on a scale of 1-10, yo this girls a fuckin billion, thats what im thinkin/
id really be ok if she was just my home girl, ya know/
but id rather her just be my girl, she'd be my whole world/

but a girl fine as that must have a life of her own/
she might not even want me in it, i might have to leave her alone/
what it could have been, i'll never know, make this lady wonda/
she could be another guys girl, or at least his babys mama/
fuck it though if she wanted it, she could get it easily/
this shit is fuckin frustratin, all ya niggas feelin me?/



ok............i guess heads can vote now

[Skavet]

This is actually kinda a hard vote...lol But I'll give it to verbtech..
The flow was pretty close, they both pretty much put me at the same place.. But VerbTech just has a bit more creativity.. I feel like you's might have not really stuck to the topic.. like the topic was to "describe her to everyone!" and it doesn't seem to be much of that...lol

[VerbTech]

ummm......ahh i'll let the votes come first b4 i explain myself.....lol

[dbaznxdragon]

Bizarre:
Flow: Ok diz is wat it is, you have good structure in your bars. your two lines in each bar work together, BUT, ya bars in general don't connect well with each other, they're more of seperate ideas of the same subject, as if ya wrote a bar down, waited a day and came back to write another bar without lookin at da previous one.
Creativity: ummm...limited...couldn't ya pick a subject that would be easier for you? j/w..but anywayz, after "how long will this kinky shit last??" i got bored...well maybe earlier than that line but you get my picture? like ya said at da botttom of da post, ya ran out of ideas.
Punches:..oh yea...it's a topical..nvm

VerbTech:
Flow: flow was lightweight decent, i didn't like how you worded half of it though, seemed a lil, iono, i think 'rushed'; same comment to you about wat i said 2 bizarre about da bars, had more expression though, but overall some of the lines didn't seem to flow
Creativity: decent, until i saw that it was limited 2..yea yea yea, it's about describin a chick and all cuz she's fine but i think that if ya gonna talk about how fine her body is, there's more creativity rather than ass, lips, and just..body, after a lil while it just seemed repetitive.
Punches:..damnit i forgot again..

My vote goes to VerbTech

- he had more going in his verse and put more ideas down in his verse too. Though there was a major difference in length between verbtech and bizarre....the amount of expression had little difference, but i felt verb put a little more 'oomph!' into his. peace.

[Bizzare_101]

aww shit...

[Mook]

tYo you need more votes?
Bizzare- tYo guy i thought itwas pretty good andall but i felt you changed your ryhmes a lil to much, it kinda messed with ya flow, you best line was "next all i wanna do is seduce so i hope she aint to loose" but i also felt that you were jus a playa tryin to score, from what i though it was suppose to have feelin in it but you gettin betta hommie. (i thought you quit?)

Verbtech- tYo guy mani really like your, good rythem/flow, had lots of feelin man, my fave line " i can't fuckin lie, she'd be crazy to not complete this guy"
i dunno why i jus like that one, but your creativity was awsome guy keep it up.
so my vote goes to Verbtech, sry Bizzare but tyeah guy you gettin betta, (good idea guy with the topic choice) both ya'll keep flowin aight.
-Mook-

[Zeke1]

3-0 ko...verbtech wins it....not bad bizzare, gettin some what better with it