[Moniker]

K Homie, Its set up, Ill drop later tonight when I get home, right now I cant.

So I guess

No time limit
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Let's get it on

Peace up.

[Moniker]

Yo, Check it, Verbtech, the epitome of herb wrecks/
you wanna battle with words? lets, its evident who gettin served best/
think you down cause you chill with these nerd vets? you rockin with hurt sets/
I asked for a battle, im kinda rusty so I needed something easy but why you?/
You know how I do, me vs one of you, shit I shoulda tried two, im a sly dude/
nobody likes you, if you saw mode on the street best believe he'd walk by you/
Honestly this is no fair, Ill burn you up like nose hairs, look at you so scared/
after the battle get you boys to vote here/
But when were done like the letter H ill have you in the middle of nowHere/
been gone for years now, but Im here now, makin you hear now/
FRS just gets loud, I can hear em cheer now, awating my demise of this queer now/
you seein clear now, Im as hot as the devil as im striking the metal/
I thought I saw you in downtown, in a furcoat and stilletos/
This line is gettin played out, but you need a ladder to get to the elevator that reaches my level/
Verb, acts hard but its all play, all day he on the streets but his blocks soft/
Even FRS is too intense, so after he drops his verse I know hes just gonna log off/


Haha, yes my first official drop on FRS in oh it has to be years.

[VerbTech]

btw how many rounds we taking?

yo imma key this post, right here, cuz moniker ain't worth the time/
for me to kill this bitch, right here, must be a mothafuckin crime/
he says, "its been years", like im going to take it easy on a nigga/
like jigga i got 99 problems, and this bitch ain't one of em eith-a/
u feel me "mon", my joint's gonna smoke ya like a ra-sta-far-i-an/
i feel, i won, people move outta my way cuz lots-of-lives-i-gunned/
u a featherweight, i weigh a ton, i'll risk ya life like arm-a-ged-e-on/
want two? I spit heat like rays of the sun, bitch u-can't-han-dle-one/
for the record, he claims no location, cuz i cleaned his whole sector/
Moniker's a snack on this board cuz i eat emcees like hanibal lector/
i garrentee his post was all prewritten like a page from mad libs/
probably cost him 3.99 and you just gotta add a name above this ________/
oh! he was here since he was a freshman, really? NO ONE GIVES A SHIT!!!!!/
Moniker does cum hard when he spits maybe because faggots suck dicks/
its been a while, i can tell, you impressed me like Gaylord Focker/
funny how you dropped Modes name in this, "HEY MODE!!! I FOUND YOUR STALKER!!!"/
i really like the fact you do know what some whores tend to wear/
and you know what dawg, u ain't that high. fuck ill just take the stairs/

[VerbTech]

........moniker u gonna drop again or what? or is this it? let me know.....

[Zeke1]

moniker used to post here under kuss_awut, he had a few hundred posts under that name, he's cool

[Moniker]

Well ya sorry homie Its finals time yo, but dont fear tomorrow is my last major one that would require me to study for. So this weekend for sure Ima drop maybe even tomorrow. Ill find time.

[VerbTech]

hahaha its cool, as long as you drop, im always on lately so............ill be waiting i guess

[VerbTech]

man it must be a long ass weekend huh!? lmfao

[Reflexion]

so has this turned into a 1-verse?

[VerbTech]

sure.............its not like he coming back anytime soon lmfao

[Reflexion]

uppin.. votes now

[BbOyJeOpArDy]

herez my first vote.... ever

MONIKER
the inners were nice:
"Yo, Check it, Verbtech, the epitome of herb wrecks/
you wanna battle with words? lets, its evident who gettin served best/
think you down cause you chill with these nerd vets? you rockin with hurt sets/"

but then these....
"been gone for years now, but Im here now, makin you hear now/
FRS just gets loud, I can hear em cheer now, awating my demise of this queer now/ you seein clear now...."

i think you kind of overused "now" in that bar and half line, you know what i mean?

but this part didnt really flooowww:
"Honestly this is no fair, Ill burn you up like nose hairs, look at you so scared/
after the battle get you boys to vote here/"

the first line is 19 syllables and the second one is 11, so therez a big difference there

although your lines are long, i think it was kind of "fixed" because of your inners... know what i mean? it's like they kind of break up your lines into smaller ones, so in the end it's not too long

i think you also had the only wordplay in this battle
"But when were done like the letter H ill have you in the middle of nowHere/"

nice ender:
"Even FRS is too intense, so after he drops his verse I know hes just gonna log off/ "

VERBTECH
"like jigga i got 99 problems, and this bitch ain't one of em eith-a/"
i liked that line.... lmao jay-z

"u feel me "mon", my joint's gonna smoke ya like a ra-sta-far-i-an/
i feel, i won, people move outta my way cuz lots-of-lives-i-gunned/
u a featherweight, i weigh a ton, i'll risk ya life like arm-a-ged-e-on/
want two? I spit heat like rays of the sun, bitch u-can't-han-dle-one/"

it's hard reading those.... i dont think theyre really multies, and if they are, they sound kinda forced

"for the record, he claims no location, cuz i cleaned his whole sector/
Moniker's a snack on this board cuz i eat emcees like hanibal lector/"
^DAMN that was hot right there....

i also really like this line:

"i garrentee his post was all prewritten like a page from mad libs/
probably cost him 3.99 and you just gotta add a name above this ________/"

"Moniker does cum hard when he spits maybe because faggots suck dicks/"
^at first i thought it was an overused faggot-dick thing, but then i realized the "cum hard" part lmao funny

nice flips:
"funny how you dropped Modes name in this, "HEY MODE!!! I FOUND YOUR STALKER!!!"/
i really like the fact you do know what some whores tend to wear/
and you know what dawg, u ain't that high. fuck ill just take the stairs/"

^ and nice ender

so, this being my first vote

i gotta give it to.....




VERBTECH

[Inkonsistent]

aight i vote

moniker - yeah nice multis and everything but where be the punches?

But when were done like the letter H ill have you in the middle of nowHere/

found ONE

This line is gettin played out, but you need a ladder to get to the elevator that reaches my level/

word to the wise... if u start a line 'this line is gettin played out...' plz dont finish the line

i dont know who u are... apparently ur rusty, i know the feelin, i wasnt too impressed wit this verse... i was actually underimpressed... it flowed aight and tha multis was koo but tha punches/creativity/meta's/so on and so forth were lackin...

annnnnnnnnnnnnd...

verb -

like jigga i got 99 problems, and this bitch ain't one of em eith-a/

i mean all u did was add like 1 word to his hook, but it was koo

for the record, he claims no location, cuz i cleaned his whole sector/ Moniker's a snack on this board cuz i eat emcees like hanibal lector/

first line... good personal
second line... was kinda hopin id neva see/hear this one eva again... but i concede

i garrentee his post was all prewritten like a page from mad libs/ probably cost him 3.99 and you just gotta add a name above this ________/

good read

i really like the fact you do know what some whores tend to wear/ and you know what dawg, u ain't that high. fuck ill just take the stairs/

good lil ender... wasnt tha hardest, but it was good play off his verse

basically ill say verb took this just cuz he came out wit punches more often and had some good personals... like i said i feel moniker's verse was more of a freeverse than a battle and ... yeah ... this is a battle

vote - verb

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[nxyte]

okay let me do this quick...( feeling a lil tired to quote punchlines, for the breakdown..so i'm jus summing it up)
Moniker
- due to the structure of some lines.. some of the punches came off weak. a bit wordy also. creativity was okay, but mainly it was probably the wordiness that made your flow off and on

Verb
-you had some clever punches. had some personals in there. the flips were okay. i liked the "99 problems" quotable

moniker vs verb in:-
creativity-verb
Punches-verb
structure-verb

so my vote goes to verb..

[Reflexion]

aight, verb takes this 3-0