Close Conflict vs. Skavet and Mook

Reflexion · **Close Conflict vs. Skavet and Mook -** 01-03-2006, 06:42 PM

- 3-0 KO or first to 5
- 10 bar MAX per verse
- Votes need to be adequately BROKEN DOWN to count. No dickriding.

Aight, since we made the callout we'll go first (like it should be). No time limit just not months ya know?

these rules good? if nothing said then i assume so, gl.

Reflexion · 01-12-2006, 07:17 PM

flex is startin' by spittin shit thought ridiculous
hit these kids who get on more dick than syphillus
before ya rip with this leave ya diaper and raddle
it's a death wish ya call 'accepting this battle'
two newbs tryin' big things right off the bat
y'all mine as well have brought some rabbits and hats
me and mode's been around, y'all weak and ya shy
this'll be their first post not in 'diss the previous guy'
seems victory for these two just ain't gonna bite
like fat kids seeing their toes...it's outta ya sight
you're in trouble if Mook's the best ya attack wit'
thinkin' ya savage, y'all more inflated than Gadget
y'all just to snack with, drop Skavet like bad habits
rep Espo? y'all need to give it a rest like the Sabbath
like broken arcades, there's no game in ya quarters
ya team's more bombed up than afghanistan borders
breakin' you kids into pieces and mode ain't even swept
hope leftover's are fine, but ain't much really left...

Skavet · 01-15-2006, 02:43 PM

I'm winning this battle, beat you stoned and half drunk
run you down in ma car, you can lie in the trunk
Cause I'm a better 'Mode' of this 'Reflexion', Close-Conflicts your doom
They must be some faggots, cause Mode puts on perfume.
Means Mode is the bitch, but just wait, Flex owns the dress
Crossdressing faggot, I'll leave your face in a mess!
And for distress, i'll send you to Iraq, put you up in da middle
Sit back and have fun, even laugh just a little.
Bet on your life.. you can die or outlive,
Lets end this tonight bitch, cuz' I neva' forgive.

Second waves here to hit you, assuming your alive,
First part shoulda' killed you, doubt you'd survive.
So two stars I'll give ya, be lucky your reading,
But if Mode wants to win, a better team he'll be needing.
Cause Flex coming short, old age left him no clue,
That his retirements coming fast from the Rave Breaker's crew.
So I mined and refined, combined and confined every thought that I had
to remind you of this loss, 3 months, fuck I'm a newbie,
But still I smoked you like a stoner does to a dewbie.

Sorry it took so long...lol Forgot to post and then I was busy at Mook's sisters B-day Party...lol

Mode · 11:31 PM

no respect no regrets i'ma wreck some kids,
got no fans, on stage they like flex's sig,
ya text is shit, ya'll get smoked like bong's is,
iraq don't want us yo, they had enough bomb hits,
spittin dumb shit like ya'll are killin rhymes,
it's fuckin stupid like quotin ya'll in illest lines,
abusin two victims it's true these dudes bitches,
have no friends so they hang with mook's sisters,
ya'll wack as fuck, there's some truth to bear,
see i really don't think fightin you's is fair,
yeah i was late to post yo, but who's to care?
shit, i was givin ya'll time to grow pubic hair,
ya'll are has been's, belong in a trash heap,
my flows are nasty like ya bitch in her bad week,
beatin us'll take more than just luck you rookies,
we can't be gay, damn we just fucked two pussies,
i swing hits like golf, who's next on the fairway,
get clubbed a mile high like sex on an airplane,
this aint a battle, no it aint even like that,
call it spousal abuse 'cos the bitches don't even fight back..

Mook · 06:22 PM

Holy shit, we got this thing on the go,
took so long, my pubic hairs a fro', (afro)
God damnit, now im old, jus in case you didnt know,
even my neckless had time to corrode,
that shouldn't happen, its made of gold,

Tyeah so your the "baddest" with a pad'n'pen, and not in a good way,
im on the edge of my seat gettin ready to leave,*1
now that might be hard for your small mind to conceive,
cuz you rappin anywhere near good is impossible to believe,
you beat us... tyeah and a billion dollers i might receive,
i'm god like, shouldn't be to hard to achieve,

fuck even Mode wishes himself dead.
but cant afford a gun so he pionts his finger and thumb to his forehead,*2
i live in a small town with a bigger population then all of Australia,*3
him get more pussy then me? he'd have to take up Necrophillia,

ima finish, uhmm uhmm uhmm, shit sry Mode bit that line i couldn't read it,
not like i need it, here have another ryhme, you can keep it,
Modes all small, he didn't have one big hit,
everyone knows it, its not a secret.
End

*1 read Modes sig
*2 theres a pic in his public profile with his name under it (check it)
*3Mode lives in Australia

Reflexion · 01-24-2006, 07:59 PM

alright: votes

Voyce · 01-24-2006, 08:39 PM

Reflexion

Flow was on point. Punches were on/off. Afghanistan (MiddleEastern) shit is gettin' mad played lately. I've heard alot better shit from your past verses. But these were your dope hits:

"before ya rip with this leave ya diaper and raddle
it's a death wish ya call 'accepting this battle"
-Nice flow

"breakin' you kids into pieces and mode ain't even swept
hope leftover's are fine, but ain't much really left..."
-Good closer settin' up Mode

Skavet
Flow was pretty choppy to me. Punches were fairly weak. Try to be more original, man. It sounded like I was reading a poem or somethin'.
Your top punches:

"Cause Flex coming short, old age left him no clue,
That his retirements coming fast from the Rave Breaker's crew"
-One of your most original punches

"Cause I'm a better 'Mode' of this 'Reflexion', Close-Conflicts your doom
They must be some faggots, cause Mode puts on perfume"
-heh It was so dumb it was funny!

Mode

Flow was straight. Ya punches were sick. This shit got me laughin':

"no respect no regrets i'ma wreck some kids,
got no fans, on stage they like flex's sig"
-Isolation lol

"yeah i was late to post yo, but who's to care?
shit, i was givin ya'll time to grow pubic hair,"
-clever

Mook

Flow, felt like there wasn't one. Punches were iffy.
Your best punches:

"Holy shit, we got this thing on the go,
took so long, my pubic hairs a fro', (afro)"
-okay flip

"now that might be hard for your small mind to conceive,
cuz you rappin anywhere near good is impossible to believe,"
-not bad

OVERALL

This was a no-brainer! Close Conflict pretty much won in every category from flow to punches to creativity to skills. Skavet n' Mook: you guys are elevatin' slllllooooooowwwwly! Constructive Criticism fellas, GET YA GAME UP! You two have been here for mad long, put more thought into your spits. Learn from others on the site. I want to see you guys improve!

Winner: Close Conflict on the basis of everything. Peace

Skavet · 01-24-2006, 09:27 PM

Mad long? Thought? Improve?
I'M DOING THIS FOR FUN!..lol
Other than reading peoples stuff, and rarely posting.. I NEVER LISTEN TO OR DO RAP, not really a fan of it. Something to do time to time...lol

Mode · 01-24-2006, 09:30 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Mook

Tyeah so your the "baddest" with a pad'n'pen, and not in a good way,
im on the edge of my seat gettin ready to leave,*1

i changed it.. but my sig did say -

i'm the baddest yet with a pad 'n pen,
you on the edge of ya seat like "what happens next?"

thanks for the vote voyce.. uppin for more.

atrain · 01-24-2006, 09:43 PM

Yeah this was murder, no offense to rave breakers.

Reflexion - good flow, sick punches and wordplay. ranged from aight to very strong creativity

fav lines:

"two newbs tryin' big things right off the bat
y'all mine as well have brought some rabbits and hats"
- dope, made me chuckle

"seems victory for these two just ain't gonna bite
like fat kids seeing their toes...it's outta ya sight"
- funny shit

Skavet - okay flow, weak punches, too much filler, overplaying the gay joke, and not your best creativity. The fillers really hurt you, cause i didnt notice very many strong punches at all. One thing that i thinks really annoying and newbish that you should avoid is inverting sentences in awkward ways to get your end rhyme. case in point:

"But if Mode wants to win, a better team he'll be needing."
- wording like this sounds really amateur, especially in a battle. this inversion of the subject and verb may be fine in some cases, but most all the time it detracts from the verse and just sounds awkward

fav line:

"Cause Flex coming short, old age left him no clue,
That his retirements coming fast from the Rave Breaker's crew"
- decent wordplay

Mode - this was a killer verse. just half of it alone probably would have sealed the battle. flow was on-point, punches were hard and abundant, and wordplay was damn creative. it just seemed line after line you just kept pummeling.

fav lines:

"spittin dumb shit like ya'll are killin rhymes,
it's fuckin stupid like quotin ya'll in illest lines,"
- raw and harsh

"yeah i was late to post yo, but who's to care?
shit, i was givin ya'll time to grow pubic hair,"
- mad funny made me crack up

basically i could have quoted the whole verse, it all flowed logically and created some tightass combos

Mook - flow was pretty off, but seems to be progressing from some of your spits ive seen. Like i said to Skavet, your punches were weak, and it was almost all filler. creativity was pretty low. and again you have the inverted structure i mentioned sometimes.

"tyeah and a billion dollers i might receive"
- this isnt the worst example, it could work, but its still awkward

"i live in a small town with a bigger population then all of Australia,"

-i didnt like this at all. australia is definately mad big and im sure QLD is bigger than Espo, so that didn't really work. but the second half of that bar i think was your best attempt at a punch

"him get more pussy then me? he'd have to take up Necrophillia"
- okay line, made me chuckle

Overall, great job Close Conflict with the great verses as expected, and to the Rave Breakers keep workin.

Close Conflict wins

Voyce · 01-24-2006, 10:48 PM

Skav, I'm sure were ALL doing this for fun. But since your doing it, why not try to improve and be the best that you can be, ya feel me? You never listen to or DO RAP?? What is it that you think your doing man? Singing? Poetry?
Freestylin' IS RAP! If you don't know NOW YOU KNOW! PEACE!!!

AND GET YOUR GAME UP

Mook · 01-24-2006, 11:17 PM

tyeah Atrain i think i originaly meantto put with a smaller population not bigger, as in there more verity in Australia andi still get more, but i fucked that up i guess lol aight ima keep workin on it though, this flow shit is hard for me to grab but aight i'll keep tryin. l8er.
-Mook-

Reflexion · 01-24-2006, 11:17 PM

thanks for the votes; 2-0 us

Skavet · 11:44 PM

"Other than reading peoples stuff, and rarely posting.. I NEVER LISTEN TO OR DO RAP"

Voyce, before you call me an idiot.. again.. READ THE FIRST FUCKING WORD IN THAT SENTENCE!!! Way to go smart-ass!! (the smart-ass is major sarcasem, thought I should tell you, hopefully this isn't still too intelligent for you..)

Voyce · 12:15 AM

What a negative fuck! You didn't have to explain your stupid ass post to me.

"Other than reading peoples stuff, and rarely posting.. I NEVER LISTEN TO OR DO RAP" by Skavet

Thats like me saying "Other than fucking my girl once in a while...I NEVER HAVE SEX" by Voyce

Thats how STUPID your sounding right now little boy. You RARELY posting indicates that once in a while you come up with a poor excuse for a verse.
And if you don't listen to or DO rap, why the fuck are you even here? This is a HIP-HOP/RAP SITE!!!! Why should people on this site even take the time-out to vote in any of your battles if you never DO RAP!! Oh yeah I forgot. OTHER then rarely posting. So I guess your kinda doing rap, but not, but sometimes, maybe. Your wasting mine and everyone elses time on this site!

IDIOT

p.s And Intelligence?? Your spits says it all