[Mode]

killabandana first

- 1 week deadlines from the time it starts, then up to an additional 2 days from when the other person posts
- FLIPPING ALLOWED
- 3-0 KO or first to 5
- 10 bar MAX per verse
- 2 verses each
- Votes will be TALLIED in the vote tracker but battles will not TAKE AWAY points
- Votes need to be adequately BROKEN DOWN to count. No dickriding.

[KiLLaBaNdaNnA]

YEA! my first tourney. lets see if i get ripped! well here i go


Anaktix is wack, Talk crap, get capped
bloody fingaz on the microphone, you cant rap
by the way mother goose wants her rhymes back
she tired of u finga fucken her, she want it up the ass
but sorry dog, i guess u cant react
shit so small, even midgets dun even want that
now since u cant supply, u spend time with guys
a couple of beers, shit u got a surprise
goin home 2 your parents, yo i got somthing to say
mom.... dad.... ive been strugglin, im actually gay
they bust out laughin, they already knew
u make the fab five look like 2 Live Crew

My bad i put 2 verses. i had to edit it.

[Anaktix]

aight a quick sixteen.....i'm all sick right now 'n i thought flex was takin my spot (prolly cuz he said he would) but not ta leave homie waitin too long i just typed suttin up right quick wit it, holla............




this kids a joke so listen yo its easy just ta rip this ho,
i'd be complimentin this cat if i said that hes fifteen yo,
his writtens blow, his rhythm?? oh......shit's clean like ten buckets of piss,
i'd critique his flow but ummm........it doesnt exist.
aight thats it cuz now this kids already been merked,
shit i could quit 'n just write "i win" instead of a verse,
'n my prediction would be true, muzak's nostradamus,
my thoughts hit ta imprison this kid like where saddam is,
killa understand i got the best flow from the west coast,
i'ma win by ko tho i got a fever 'n some strep throat,
i'ma get the next vote plus the last one 'n thats it,
i could give you my strep but shit, you still couldnt rap sick,
i know its cliche 'n been played but i dont care,
you couldnt breathe flames even if i burned alla ya nose hairs,
well ya prolly got none like the hair on ya balls,
ya verses bore me, shit, i'd rather stare at a wall.....


aight you up again homie...

peace.

[KiLLaBaNdaNnA]

For u 2 lead to defeat, i stratagized a tactic
to set my best flows, to burn and scorch anaktix
ill make a quick 1 cuz dis is easy 2 agree
ill spread virusis with my spit, ill spread STD
lead yah death like eazy-e, killin u slowly
u say i was borin, but i noe u a pain
fo real, u just a geek, on the computer with cheetoh stains
playin games, cuz all u can do is play board games
ill make my level 99 dragon eat your dwarf okay?
but hey, anaktix i wont give up, i gots pride
ill spit and get better, im a prodigy till i die

[Anaktix]

aight this battles over so i'ma start spittin it next, rippin it fresh,
bout ta win wit a verse keyed in a minute or less,
so get wit the breaths sick in the chest inhaled over the screen,
i flow on a beat ta teach you all you needa know 'n believe,
ya needa focus cuz g, ya personal's hardly decent,
come at me wit some punches that hurt 'n spit like you mean it,
diss my style, say my tracks are wack, you need suttin son,
cuz right now you like two hundred thirty nine 'n i'm number one,
thats my number son, but you got madd time ta grow,
i was never 13 spittin wit madd lines 'n flow, naw,
i aint hit the mic till eighteen homie,
just make things homie, keep spittin ta see what fate brings homie,
now we back, you know me 'n i know whats bout ta happen,
i'm bout ta battle some cat 'n round two, its crackin,
this rap 'n i flow g, so you know me 'n my homie,
yo dont be a herb, just sit back 'n drop a vote, please.......

peace.

[razorbrain]

sigh ill be the first to vote(scary, no?) this was well... fuck it if you know who i am you know what im a say..lol so ill skip to the vote:


ok round 1:


Killabandana

ok check it out im not gona bash ya but ill try to be nice.. in battles even text flow is key.. reading it was hard to pick whe the lines ended and started like i tell people try reading it to ya self in a monotone voice with no breaks and see if ya can still find the flow of the rhymes..secondly, them punches were pretty bland.. most people when they not really creative resort to bland gay and dick jokes..the mother goose line and the lines like it("(name) called and wants his/her rhymes back").. come on now.. its gonna take more than that to win a battle.. now i know beng the 1st to spit is hard, but you gotta put down a more solid effort when ya battling...


anaktix

before i go into detail, ima say that this verse has a certain...cocky quality, that i seem to recall that people got on me about in my last tourney..lol so ha! who cocky now! lmao anyways..
flow was pretty good.. consistant from how i know you spit.. punches werent "oh shit", but were solid enough to beat the weak ones..suprisingly no flipping..oh well.. end was amusing

round 1: anaktix




round 2

WTF! howd this get all weaker and almost like people just resigned to defeat and then a message for people to vote? lol if i wanted a cypher id go check the cypher thread geez..

bandana

ok better attemp with flow so thats good..still not all the way there but much better than 1st verse.. punches were kinda flimsy.. the computer geek/rpg reference i got but still wanst much of a punch.. and then ya pretty much signed ya loss by sayin "but hey, anaktix i wont give up, i gots pride
ill spit and get better, im a prodigy till i die".. damn boy battling is about confidence.. you just signed ya battle away by makin it seem like you knew you was gonna lose..


anaktix

what tha fuck lol you know if there were more vets in here youd lose this right lol the flow was still good.. but some things bug me a bit one, he never said anything baout ya tracks being wack.. just some silly line about ya raps..could mean ya shit in here that im sure he barely knows about..and the last lines
"just make things homie, keep spittin ta see what fate brings homie,
now we back, you know me 'n i know whats bout ta happen,
i'm bout ta battle some cat 'n round two, its crackin,
this rap 'n i flow g, so you know me 'n my homie,
yo dont be a herb, just sit back 'n drop a vote, please"

next time i see someon a) give the opposition a pat on the back, and b) askin cats to vote, im fuckin voting for the one who was the weakest.. cuz thats wack.. real battle need real verses from start to finish.. while i enjoyed most of this that last part killed it fo rme.. but still, it was a verse with decent pucnhes and good flow so im voting for..


round 2: anaktix

final vote: anaktix... not really an enjoyable read but bandana you got plenty of room to grow so learn from this battle and and if you really tryin to spit keep at it.. anaktix tighten up boy!!! i expect more fomr the almighty audio champ.. ya may be being light but knows? mode might actually have some skill left and may see you or someone else may bite ya in the ass.. i know this aint ya thing but atleats swat people away with more skill so it seems like ya so dope you dont care lol..anyways keep spittin yall

[flobotopics]

round one

Killa-- umm your first verse had one good line imo. the telling his parents he's gay. i mean i couldn't catch the flow and the mother goose shit just really didn't work for me. soory man i ain't gonna lie and act like i liked it. ya got to respect that.

Anaktix-- your flow was there, and you had a couple of good lines. the opener was sweet. the 15 shit. the imprison like saddam was nice, and the strepth throat shit worked. overall a good verse.

Round 1 Anaktix

round 2

Killa-- you had a better flow here and this verse was better than your first. the level 99 dragon thing came outta nowhere and didn't really fit where ya put it. your opener was your best line you worte all battle. better but not great or anything

Anaktix-- i liked ya opener again. it was kinda funny how ya were giving him tip basically stating you already won. cocky bastard. but yeah you had this from the gate

Winner Anaktix

keep practicing killa. we all start somewhere

[ll:A.N.G.E.L:ll]

I mean what more can I say after what flobot and Razor said,
bandana's flow was choppy with medicore punches,
and well the 2nd round was a joke cause zak spent the whole verse boostin bandana and bandana wrote a verse kinda like accepting his defeat...

so im just going to base this off round 1..
cause that SOMEWHAT seem'd like a battle
but flow, delivery and punchlines goes to zak..

so umm

Vote: Ana

[Zeke1]

the zakman takes it...thread closed

edit: gotta spell the name right homie....