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Tournament Rd. 1 - enkore vs. rhymersinc - 01-01-2006, 05:16 AM

- 1 week deadlines from the time it starts, then up to an additional 2 days from when the other person posts
- cuz it's only 1 round, NO FLIPPIN
- 3-0 KO or first to 5
- 10 bar MAX per verse
- 1 verse each
- Votes will be TALLIED in the vote tracker but battles will not TAKE AWAY points
- Votes need to be adequately BROKEN DOWN to count. No dickriding.




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01-11-2006, 10:22 PM

Y'all placed me with him... as if it was an obstacle,
Impossible, with 'inc' this 'rhymer' is simply horrible,
It's probable, i'll stomp on you...your wack as fuck,
Damnit son, make you like a comets tail, and turn your ass to dust,
Understand the pun? I think it exceeds your intelligence,
On the mic, your prolly a babblin fuck like he's the president,
Seen some sentences, and I came to the conclusion,
That...your not an emcee your basically a nuisance,
Son...your the worst with the lyricals,
Ain't fire, your styles like failed Viking burial rituals,*
You a nobody, it's best this guy steps aside,
Cuz the only doors opening for you got exit signs,
Recognize the way I 'shock' and I 'electrify',
Your 'static' dude...barely make the crowd get 'energized',
Nevermind, ever try'na go against the madman,
I got a rep here...it's safe to say you can't rap,
Damn fam, it seems you got a cruel fate,
Honor your schoolmates, but whut you need is school, mate,
It's too late, I hammer with pens...my tool's sick,
Your useless so I just 'murdered inc' like Ja Rule's click...

there ya go...

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..::SONS OF LIBERTY::..

Originally posted by Anaktix
then i'ma give you an Enkore.....how much more can i say??
i'm dope as fuck like that one cat, aka Dorian Gray......


Originally posted by Mode
...your presence, flow 'n all that shit is on point, reminded me why your my fave emcee on bboy yooo..
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01-14-2006, 01:15 PM

Yo…’flush’ me out dis battle?…man ya ‘handles’ broke/
your consistency of backed-up flows, make ya punches choke/
I battled ‘kids’,’geeks’,’clowns’…your another failure to rip me…/
…’n I checked ya avy , man, u the take attributes of all three/
’n ‘queens’ to speak of, I smack ‘bitches’ too insight for a fight/
cuz inc’s sexy…u left ‘king copywrite’ and stepped in as your chance to ‘bite’/
fuck foodchains…dis vector’ll drink blood of mc’s till dey outta pints/
’n ya style's a ‘health’ hazard...I’ll feed ur weak ass wit these ‘granola’ bars/
enkore’s got ‘unpropelled’ attacks…I’m not being ‘swung’ at/
the ‘hardest’ shit u brought to dis battle is ya ‘knee caps’/
only vote you’ll get is your cap*… that’s da only one feeling ya/
I’ll continue rippin ya… but my first set of bars already killed ya/
choppin off ya neck n hangin it…is da only way u’ll ‘be-head’ of me/
and u only talk big for a ‘wack reject’ who couldn’t be qualified ‘wannabe’/


*referring to the cap on his head in his avatar




damm outta time..
had to hurried it down quick, that I don’t even kno what my opponent came with.…
I was busy since Thursday doing other stuff… I gotta head out to continue and finish my schedule I was unexpected hit with on Thursday…my break just finished…
and by the way I didn’t bite off anyone’s lyrics… so if u heard something there you’ve heard before..just tell me…I did searches for each and I found nothing similar to any of my punchlines…




≤Ďbåźň×ďřãğōñ | Řh¥mëřšÏñ©≥ ya done kno'..
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01-14-2006, 09:55 PM

vote up y'all.
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01-15-2006, 01:01 AM

no doubt,...you heard it peoples...vote!










i vote enkore..

good wordplay inc...but enkore got ya with the punchs...he hit harder and his flow was so much better...sorry man but enkore got ya

inc..your wordplay is OK at best but you push it tooo hard...you need some more punches and less word play liek you had, you could have had better punches but the way yhou worded some lines made it hurt...no doubt tho, good battle


vote- enkore




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01-15-2006, 01:29 AM

aite....

enkore - ya flow was on point... wordplay was nice, punches were aite...
"You a nobody, it's best this guy steps aside,
Cuz the only doors opening for you got exit signs," <-- i jus liked the way this flowed.
"Recognize the way I 'shock' and I 'electrify',
Your 'static' dude...barely make the crowd get 'energized'," <-- nice.

inc - ya flow fell off a couple times... wordplay was nice, but i got irruhz with all the 'quotes' and honestly i didnt understand why some of them were like that. i mean, i get it, jus didnt think some of them needed it. also didnt get some of your lines..... like some words didnt fit the line contextually........ punches were pretty good, but i really had to READ it to get it...
"choppin off ya neck n hangin it…is da only way u’ll ‘be-head’ of me/" <-- this was the best line of your verse

i gotta go with ENKORE - better flow, more consistent throughout. inc, ya had some good punches but it got too confusing for me ta be able to follow it well. good job guys




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01-15-2006, 02:27 AM

if ya not in the tourny can you still vote? i dont know so im not goin to vote yet but someone let me know and i'll vote if able, aight l8er days.
-Mook-




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01-15-2006, 03:30 AM

i aint in the tourney.....
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01-15-2006, 04:28 AM

anyone can vote!! fuck i;'m hammered lol


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01-15-2006, 10:41 AM

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Originally posted by istolicee
inc - ya flow fell off a couple times... wordplay was nice, but i got irruhz with all the 'quotes' and honestly i didnt understand why some of them were like that. i mean, i get it, jus didnt think some of them needed it. also didnt get some of your lines..... like some words didnt fit the line contextually........ punches were pretty good, but i really had to READ it to get it...
"choppin off ya neck n hangin it…is da only way u’ll ‘be-head’ of me/" <-- this was the best line of your verse
-lol-i was such in a hurry that i didnt explain two other stuff... i just typed something up quick.....


Quote:
’n ‘queens’ to speak of, I smack ‘bitches’ too insight for a fight/
cuz inc's sexy...u left ‘king copywrite’ and stepped in as your chance to ‘bite’/
that bar meant that he did a lil bite back in the day from a small line from Copywrite's lyrics...so i made a King and queen relationship..("queen" meaning where he's from so i made "queen" a noun to go with what i was saying...)

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Quote:
fuck foodchains…dis vector’ll drink blood of mc’s till dey outta pints/
the line that enkore actually bit off was a foodchain line from copywrite

-lol i was real hustling that verse down. most the bars with punches that werent quite clear were actual double-meanings-lol-

but anyways.... peeps keep it coming to end this battle quick for the other round to start becuz the tourney is already behind schedule
peace/respect
inc_

^those explanations wasnt supposed to sway votes.... it was just to make some the lines a little more clear on what i was saying....

-lol- next time i would have to ease up a bit on the "WORDPLAY PERSONALS" punchline method... i realised it may not be quite clear to understand for some of those reading...

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01-16-2006, 04:55 PM

~ENKORE~

good punchlines, okay creativity, Great flow i liked how u put the whole sctructure together. i found a beat and your flow was great. punchlines where okay but nuthin that will make u bust a gut. creativity was great same in line as your punchline.

~Rhymersinc~

Your Flow was okay. creativity was okay and punchlines was okay. It wasnt that great. rushing really did take off alot of your verse, u could do better

Overall battle goes to enkore


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01-16-2006, 08:13 PM

enkore wins...3-0 ko


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