[KiLLaBaNdaNnA]

Rules-

2 Rounds
Spit as much as u want
no racisim
Keep it clean

Just diss. you go first. wanna see wat im workin wid.

hit it up wen u can

[Vice President]

alright then i'll start now. yay first battle.

[Vice President]

alright then, can someone tell me what's a killa bandana?
your style won't be "smooth" even if you were santana.
i leave you choked, leave you smoked, leave you all abandoned.
on the dot, on the spot, i don't need to plan it,
so my rhymes are like my flares, they're both very dynamic.
your shit is too static, that means it won't go nowhere
except for one spot, and that's on your underwear.
clean up your act, pal, cuz you're style ain't fresh.
it's mundane, but i'm outta this world like john tesh.
if you want pain, battle me and i'll char your flesh.
i'm far from the greatest, but you're sub-par at best.

yeahhhh

[KiLLaBaNdaNnA]

killa B step up his game, ready 2 attack
Ill punch yo lights out, everything pitch black
u say u can do flares, but i bet chu break a few bones
thinkin u a thug, while u sittin there all alone
Ima hit chu wid punch lines, yo dats how u diss
ill scare the pantys off you, make yah drop nuggets and drip piss
i see u wear glasses but i think i already did punch yo lights out
since u red all over proballey your bleedin now
you Pm'd me and asked me 2 battle
That was a bad decision, cuz ill make yo teeth rattle

Yo breath stinks, maybe u shouldnt spit the rest
yea get a tic tac, cuzz your breath is charing my flesh
maybe u was right about some parts of yo speach
but u aint the greatest have u seen the heads speak

u have hang man, mode, reflexion and zeke
there are many others who reach the peak
battle me, im 13 it only take a couple of years
i will become great, Ill destroy your carreer
Next time u wish 2 spit against me, bring a 4 leaf clover
cuzz wid out luck, yo carrer will be ova

[Vice President]

yeah i break a few bones, but not mine, they're yours.
i battle you with wordplay, so i dont have to use force.
but your bones break anyway cuz i rock it hard, of course.
you dork, your mom regrets the night she called the stork.

and don't go sucking up to mc's that have more flow.
cuz if you haven't heard, i'm sure you wanna know.
you're like Bobby Byrd, cuz you know I got soul.
i rock so steady, there's nothing you can say to me.
so you better get ready, cuz "i'm coming, i'm coming baby."

think you're dope cuz you bring up mode and reflexion?
talk bout big names does nothing but gets you stepped on,
so you're like gum, but your words don't stick like Teflon.
quit acting dumb, you know you're like: "damn i'm impressed, Tom"
when you see me in my vids doing spins like it's nothing.
then you're like: "oh shiz, where's my crib?" cuz i ran off with your honey.

your turn again, hunny bunny.

[KiLLaBaNdaNnA]

u aint got no flow, wat the fuck are u talkin about
ill bust a verse that will really clean u right out
And u should check out, what im gon do 2 my lines
and not like u ima create funny punchlines

Well the stork picked u up, right out of the cabbage patch
he smelled sumtin funny comin out of your ass
he dropped u and u fell, can u believe that

Your Face hit the ugly tree, and u hit every single branch

Dats why u so ugly, dats why u wear glasses
cuzz seein your faces, is like seein over 100 fat ugly asses
now speak of the heads because u should noe
there better then you, i aint lyin fo sho
cuz even i can bust you, a lyrical attack
verses hit u hard in the face, creates a smack
right in the face, just to hit the ugly away
how bout u go practice, and where a mask everyday

Battles over. 2 rounds is over.

Votes please

[Enkore]

that was...not good lol...

VP [First Round]
you started off tryin wordplay, and the santana line was pretty creative for the most part. next couple lines didnt provide much fire power, you kinda just boasted and filled them with internal rhymes. lots of boasting actually for sucha small verse. to be honest, iono who john tesh is, but i don't see any punch comming out of that line either. besides that, you had a real nice closer. good punch, got amultie in there, flowed great so props on that.

[Second Round] i felt the multie or two you had in the verse again, shows that your complexity isn't too bad. sadly, your creativity dropped big time so your verse here was kind of weak. nice way to use his verse though on the stork line, i was feelin that, but ending was just blahhh...didn't have that power you needed it to have.

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Killa Bandana [First Round] your flow was just horrendous. that might work for some acapella stuff but i couldn't find that rhythm to it to let the words just roll through. rhymes were basic, and so was your creativity. nothing was original or hard hitting. i dun really think the bad breath lines are worth much cuz you can't even smell the guy lol...it doesnt make sense to comment on it if you don't even know how it is.

[Second Round] the beginning was wack yo. you didnt even make rhymes in there, u repeated like crazy too. actually you repeated all throughout the verse. attempt to hit him on his appearance but it wasn't funny, it didnt connect well.

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reading all the verses, more than once and thinking it over, i'mma give this battle to Vice President. i felt he was more creative and his flow was just on point for the most part. he had like that extra bit to push him ahead of killa bandana.

I probably didn't need this long of a vote but the idea is that i'm saying both of you needa step up your game. get a feel for the flow and try to get funky with it. creativity is what wins you battles, and boasting definitely doesn't help when they could be replaced with punches.

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FAVE LINES:
if you want pain, battle me and i'll char your flesh.
i'm far from the greatest, but you're sub-par at best.

but your bones break anyway cuz i rock it hard, of course.
you dork, your mom regrets the night she called the stork.

[Zeke1]

VP definately took this one...

killa b, you really need to work on your punches and build ups...read some old battle verse and punchlines, and get some ideas on rhyme scheme...you just need to increase your vocab and get into a better rhyme scheme

vp..you definately showed you had wit...just need to work on wording the lines out better and try not to be so corney with some of the lines...overall it was decent for someone who rarely drops rhymes or write..

vote =vp

[KiLLaBaNdaNnA]

lol oh well. hey VP did do good on his first battle. and i was hearin bone thugz n harmoney while i was typin so i like typed with the whole acapella of thuggish ruggish bone on accident. so it felt kinda weird. But yo. i thought the ugly tree part was funny. plus im 13 give me a break. =D

[Zeke1]

i heard 13 year olds rip shit before, dont keep that as an excuse....plus an accapella means NO BEAT

[KiLLaBaNdaNnA]

fine. i suck u got a problem. but i got fucken years 2 improve

[Vice President]

are you guys serious? i thought i got served up. but i guess i dont know anything.

that was pretty fun, though. i'm gonna go practice a lot more.

*edit: oh yeah, and john tesh = alien. http://www.xent.com/FoRK-archive/summer96/0115.html
*edit again: and mundane means "worldly." alien, out of this world, not mundane? mmm bop.

[Zodiak Stizo]

president verse 1
-there was flo, disses were weak overall. it more like rhymin wit weak disses then any personals or punches. seemed like a frs audio where u flowin but disses were still dismal

killa verse 1
-choppy flo, disses weak, bad attempt at one flip, no punches

prez v2
-flo ok, line bout gum seemed like only real punch, bad outro, rhymin n weak dissin

kila v2
-tried flippin using an old joke then dragged it out, for rest of verse after sayin u'd through punches, gotta come more creative

overall- i cant give any one punches, i can give prez disses, killa loses pts on the weak flippin, no good personals

vote: President

keep elevating

[Reflexion]

aight 3-0, vp takes this.. keep uppin