[Zeke1]

lets go dude..
dont take forever

1 verse

16 bar max

no flipping

hit it up when you get a chance

[KiLLaBaNdaNnA]

u go first i wanna see watchu workin wid

[Zeke1]

ok, somethin quick for ya

im funny, you're not. im a masta to the game
just steppin in this thread, is the only time ya catching fame

With a name like Zeke, beliefs are all structured
i coined the phrase with ya mother, ....right after i fucked her .(motherfucker)
i wasnt gone get ya fam, oh well but fuck it
i was hittin that shit while you was up in her stomach
you loved it, i know, but i wasnt tryin to get up in ya

this sorry kid reps west coast, when his bitch ass lives in VIRGINIA

ima vet to this, kid, this isnt new to me
come back at me when you finish goin through puberty
and ya skill, i cant see it for miles
ya through kid, like successful pedafiles


have fun

[Zeke1]

fuck it yo, make it 2 verses....i got some more for ya, haaha

[KiLLaBaNdaNnA]

so u a vet, u gon cure my dog
my dog got rabies, frum suckin on your cock
age of 13 i got so many years 2 improve, couple years 2 bust
my verses will hit u below the waist, and yes i mean yo nuts
my spits are like bullets, hittin out da macs

hit chu so hard, u could of swore midgets attacked

so u like peas, i cant give peas a chance
they small and green just like the ones in your pants
im bein nice as i can, trust me im not bein cold
cuzz zeke, u just got dissed by a 13 year old

[Zeke1]

im hard, kid, ya alway gone be soft
i mean, how you gone act hard when ya a killa cloth
doesnt matter the color, im still gone run ya
ill get you in one verse or two, you pick the number
this lil skinny kid looks like a banana from far
thats why you get bruised like the fruit that you are
like the bitch that you is, you only wish you got biz
only shootin an air rifle with plastic pellets an shit
screamin, "its not fair" cryin nothing but scared
faggot, you might get more respect when you finally grow some NUT HAIR

haha

[t0rment]

I cut it out, i will repaste afterwards.

[Zeke1]

thanx for the props bro, but killa still has to drop one more time....

try to do it tonight killa....

peace

[KiLLaBaNdaNnA]

if u hard then why u stressin kids 2 eat there peas
u betta off bein a mother, stop bein such a tease
u betta off lovin then hatin, n i noe u aint got no hair on dem nuts
dun only hair u got, is the mole on your butt

so step off, killa b hear to show u sum manners
why u pick on kids, shit u fruitier then a bannana
shit u gon bruise me, im gon set u in a blender
set yah on chop, add sum ice and a pinch splenda*

keep yah sweet, and pour u in a cup
maybe that would teach u to Shut da fuck up

[KiLLaBaNdaNnA]

tried my best wid chu sense u a vet. just wanted 2 have sum fun mayn. keep it flowin.

Yo start votting

[Zeke1]

no doubt man, you got mad potential, just keep tryin to work with playin with the meaning or words and building up to the punch...like a joke, you gotta get peeps ready, then hit'em with the funny shit..
but yea bro, thanx for making this quick...not something im used to seein in this place, haha


vote on people

[t0rment]

REPOST:

woo! do i get to vote now?

Zeke pretty much took it to the slaughterhouse.

Killa im going to tell you WHY exactly zeke won so you will know how to improve.

-Zeke killed you merely with punchlines. period.

You just insult in your verses, its not witty or funny. You should work on your wit. You can practice wit at anytime, you should look up some stuff on the internet about wit and how to be witty and practice it in your daily life, that way when it comes to a battle you can pull some shit out on somebody.

Zekes verses i was laughin all the way through. I felt like he had some knowledge to drop ya know? It was an intelligent read and you knew a punchline was about to come up and you anticipate it and you know its gonna be funny and that makes it fun.

Zeke pretty much summed it up "im funny, you're not." -thats real.

I give you props for takin the criticism well, killab - take it and use it to your advantage.

Keep up the work, both of ya.

[flobotopics]

i know zeke is in my crew, but if you don't think he won your straight retarded. its just obvious. i think killa even knows this.

[Mook]

tyeah Zeke u gots my vote too, killa man iknow u gotsbetter shit then tat,..dude ur 13 and ur already spittin as good as u is, like manu keep it up u could be the next eminem..lol.... tyeah but zeke ur shit was pretty sick guy,
i thought u ova used the nut hair rhyme a bit, but u had nice punchlines,
it was funny and creative, and some shit was actually new (it wasnt all ima shoot u wit a gun), killa u had somefunny stuff but basicly im only voting for zeke cuz his a lil more funny...good job bboys i liked wat i saw here, and it was nice and quick, i wish i could of had a battle like tat lol ( im talkin about killa taking so long for our battle lol) jk guys, keep flowin bboys respect.
l8er days.
-Mook-

[KiLLaBaNdaNnA]

aww cmon i dun take dat long. I technically did this battle cuzz i was bored. and 2 see hows vets do. dats why i wanted him to spit da first verse so i know what to do next time and get better naw what i mean. well thanks 4 da knowledge zeke. see u when im betta. payce