[KiLLaBaNdaNnA]

Rules

2 Rounds
Spit as much as u want
no racism


alright you spit first

[Bizzare_101]

aight
i just got on and didnt know you set everything up so yea my post be in a lil bit

[Bizzare_101]

yo man fix my name in ya list... only one R...

[KiLLaBaNdaNnA]

alright you go first.

[Bizzare_101]

Look at this 13 year old
standin tough lookin bold/
boy this aint poker, you cant fold
so ya better switch up to ya battlin mode/
and once ya in your in
get ready get set lets begin/
i guarantee i will come out on top
hit ya in the teeth with a karate chop/
down to the floor, you will drop
with a sicking sound, of ya body goin flop/
now are you ready to pay the price?
alright homo roll the dice/
if I win i put ya nuts in a vice
better not run cuz my aim is precise/
and trust me bizzare dont think twice
cuz my heart is cold like ice/

ok there we go sorry i took so long... lets see ya spit it... peace

[KiLLaBaNdaNnA]

i aint gotta say check it, cuzz u noe watchu lookin at
spittin my punchlines at u, is like hittin u with a baseball bat
now i attack, show you where the battles at
my fist and your bloody jaw, will come heavily intact

outta dis whole battle we can see that your rhymes are the wackest
my lyrics will cause your screen to produce static
on dis site, your the most disliked
people regurgitate* everytime they catch your sight

so heres a little advice, killa b's just bein nice
how bout u stop bboyin, n get the fuck off this site



regurgitate- barf or throwup

[Bizzare_101]

this boy thinks he Cali fresh
fresh to da chest
think he da best
but bizzare suggest
ya give it a rest
you lil pest

boy wackest dont go with static
just to make it dramatic*
i hit you with a semiautomatic*
the words you spit were erratic*
i hit you so hard it traumatic*
for you this is problematic*

cuz i heard you was tender
not gangsta a pretender
buying rhymes from a vender*
put you feet 1st in a blender
i tell ya now, surrender
cuz im ya number one contender


dramatic* - sensational in appearance or thrilling in effect
semiautomatic* - a pistol that is a semiautomatic firearm capable of loading and firing continuously
erratic* - having no fixed course
traumatic* - psychologically painful
problematic* - making great mental demands; hard to comprehend or solve
vender* - someone who promotes or exchanges goods or services for money

big words for a lil kid lol... there ya go homie have fun

[KiLLaBaNdaNnA]

you dun need to define, i noe wat them words mean
im schooled and educated, ill make your nerves bleed
im ready to spit, yo i dun spit lies
not like you, im ready to take lives

words dun need to rhyme, just 2 make a flow
u should noe that, stick a post it on your dome
start and try to remembah, i got lyrics that will kill
i got the best heads, on there seats takin stress pills

what eva u spit, ill take it back and reverse
times dat by thousands, ill make sure that verse hurts
punchlines ready 2 knock your teeth outta your mouth
many punches and uppercuts ready to knock your lights out

next time u come back, headed up full of lies
ill make sure ill spit back, hurtin u like waterfalls and tides
cuzz if i hear another lie, shit u just bein a bitch
does your mouth taste good, cuzz it seems its full of bull shit

battle over, Need VOTES

[Zeke1]

ummmmmmmmm...ok?

yea, both verse were real wack...no punchlines worth quoting, if there were even punchlines...

bizzare...your rhyme scheme is equal to nursery rhymes, and honestly, im not being mean at all, anyone who wrote a decent rhyme ever will say that...seriously, not tryin to hurt your feelings, but you got a lot of work to do with that shit homie....need more substance and content...3 words and a rhyme for each line wont cut it, it makes your flow real shitty...like a lil kid and shit

killa b...your flow is a bit better, still sort of eratic tho...no content, and your second verse you kept sayin lies and about him lying...but no punchlines...nothing really directed at him...im nto tryin to be mean, but you need alot of work too

both yall...nothing clever at all, nothing funny, no wordplay, no personal hits...nothing good at all guys, sorry...

vote = killa bandanna....you got more potential than the other dude, you probably werent tryin hard, but to me it came out real sad, saying it was half way decent is being really nice....but yea, you took it...cuz bizzares verse was straight childs play...like someone who started writing rhymes yesterday


ps..dont think im being mean or get all offended...im being honest

peace guys...keep elevating

[t0rment]

word.^ what zeke said up there.


Killa-B takes this one cause his flow was a little smoother and lines were a tad bit more complex.

Bizzare addin some big words to your 3 word lines isnt gonna cut it, your jumpin ahead of yourself. In the end it just makes it worse. Isnt there a tutorial that explains multies, punchlines, flips, good stuff like that...?

I found giving a legend to some very simple words mildly insulting to my intelligence. We're emcees, words are what we do, we dont need a legend to some very simplistic words. If someone doesnt know, they can look it up and it will be more beneficial for them. Not pointing straight at you biz, i dont like it when anyone gives a legend for their verses unless its for some ebonics bullcrap that you cant look up in the dictionary.

Its always good to review and practice the basics, both of you could use a little practice on your own time (we all do, really) ....or i prefer...my class time. =p

Keep it up but most importantly, keep it real.

[atrain]

Aight, i agree with zeke for the most part, so i wont waste a lot of space.

Bizarre - BIG thing that annoyed me is that you defined a ton of common words that everybody should already know, and you used dictionary definitions instead of your own anyway. I dont think you actually did, but it makes it seem as though youre consulting a dictionary to rhyme. Your flow was weak. Your lines are too simple and choppy, and rhyme every line way too much (i.e. nursery rhymes). Punches were weak to non-existent and creativity was low.

Killa B - Your flow was much better, but still needs some work. You need more direct punches also, but overall they were better. You have a habit of talking about how you give sweet punchlines but dont really deliver punchlines. Creativity was lacking from you too. Overall you had the better verses, but you still need to work on flow, creativity, and punches.


My vote:

Killa B

[Bizzare_101]

ATRAIN - Bizarre - BIG thing that annoyed me is that you defined a ton of common words that everybody should already know, and you used dictionary definitions instead of your own anyway. I dont think you actually did, but it makes it seem as though youre consulting a dictionary to rhyme. Your flow was weak. Your lines are too simple and choppy, and rhyme every line way too much (i.e. nursery rhymes). Punches were weak to non-existent and creativity was low.

Boy I dont use a damn dictionary to rhyme.. wtf

[KiLLaBaNdaNnA]

atrain go his point through tho

[ll:A.N.G.E.L:ll]

lol yall niggaz is a trip
fer real though haha

[rhymersinc]

people still trippin off in a battle on the internet?-lol-hahaahhahah