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..::Puerto -Vs- t0rment::.. - 12-03-2005, 01:19 PM

Puertolumbian -vs- t0rment aka CaseSensitive

- Topical Battle -

rules:

- Unlimited bars (but please nothing to extensive)
- 3-0 k.o; 5 split
- deadline: none
- stick to topic

voting:

- normal voting (i.e: better 'flow', creativity, etc)
- no cock jumping votes
- no hate votes
- at least 30 posts to vote please

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Now, all we need is for someone to choose a topic and we can begin. Please let it be reasonable. No shitty topics. Thank you and good luck.




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12-03-2005, 03:44 PM

I dont know if youd be willing to this, but ive been wanting to do a 'themed' battle and this one idea i had seemed really fun. 'Good vs Evil'

If you would rather someone else pick, thats fine.

If you wanna do that though, set the theme as "Good vs Evil" and we can get this shindig started.
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12-03-2005, 04:08 PM

ok. well, its the same as a topical. if its me being good or evil vs you being good or evil, then im the evil one. lol.
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12-03-2005, 04:13 PM

no no no.

The theme is 'good vs evil'

Same rules apply.

Spit how you may.

The interesting part is seeing what you come up with, or how you go about it.

If you understand what i mean....or maybe not...
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12-03-2005, 06:47 PM

ok, so its a topical and we rap about 'good vs evil'
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12-06-2005, 12:37 AM

Round 1 (t0rment the lichlord):

yo, decay rot drip from my infected flesh
body covered in bone like a bullet proof vest
torment the lichlord, bring death to the surface
devouring lost souls like a demonic whirling dervish
the evil i breed bring hate to tangible form
splinters backstab the holy to souls sworn
my scorn for the righteous devour like pit vipers
holy servants exxed out by a band of skeleton snipers
crosses held against me ignite with satans flame
spells cast by demon mages bind with ghastly chains
free the reins of twenty night mare to invade your dreams
demonic thoughts craze and split your psyche at the seams
what seems to be is the loss of your utter being
evisceration, fleeing is not conducive to what your seeing
steam rise from the fist of vengeance, death seething
angels fall broken wings cant escape, fates meeting
honour bleeding, maggots fill the void of angels shattered souls
the wars over t0rment stand before you, your new god, behold.

- t0rment [the lichlord]

(kinda threw it together there at the end cause my brain started to hurt)
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12-06-2005, 04:37 PM

heyo, can you drop your first as soon as you get a chance, i almost got my round 2 done, peace
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12-07-2005, 07:35 AM

yea, possibly tomorrow or friday cause i got work today and a project to do for skool. so this is a topical like good vs evil then? out to skool...peace!
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12-08-2005, 11:27 PM

ok, topical right? right. ok. =)


my birth was a mistake, i was supposed to be nice
but i wasnt, i became evil ever since i spoke in a mic
a vulture of life, my breed was the unfamiliar type
i believe that in the end, i was only built to fight...


im the living version of a bad dream of copernicus
my style's immaculate, flawless, superlative
i been worshipped since the death of king arthur
i resemble and dupliacte the image of a beaten martyr
im the father, the son, the holy spirit of hate
my flesh isnt exactly what'd you like to face. . .


blah blah blah. i was hyped for this, but im not exactly feelin the topic...dunno. have fun
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12-09-2005, 01:46 AM

Round 2: (t0rment, holy sniper)

We sling whips with tips laced with holy water
while demons evaporate infected by holy slaughter
t0rment holy servant, dealin sinners justice
wielding gods blessed bow with jewels that be rustic
souls dusted, ripped to ash by arrows bathed in light
t0rment, holy sniper, snipe out your demonic sight
glowing bright, holy armor shimmer with purest white
encased in gods armor, prepared for the righteous fight
take flight with silver wings nestle upon a group of clouds
wait patiently, lock an arrow, put a shaft through sinners brows'
mowed down, skulls shatter, mages spells reflect back
angelic samurai wield swords that hack back bone flack
devout priest stand firm while angels heal the fallen
demon beasts get beheaded but their bodies still be crawlin
cleric scrawlin words upon a scroll to him recite
demons fleeing as the light shoot forth, demolishes the night
holy sight, the war is over and the demons stay in hell
t0rment take rest up in the clouds, in his sniper nest he dwells

-t0rment, holy sniper

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12-09-2005, 01:52 AM

edit: cut//

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12-09-2005, 12:27 PM

will lets see..torment...u had better creativity but ur flow isnt all tat great its hard to folo...puer...ur the oppisit... good flow but i dont think ur feelin the topic too much..like u said, so my vote goes out to torment...
keep flowin bboyz u gots great stuff.
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12-09-2005, 12:39 PM

err... you usually drop the entire battle and THEN vote.. voting for each verse still only counts as 1 vote... wait until everything is dropped first


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12-09-2005, 06:03 PM

yea seriously...cuz it gets confusing if you vote each round instead of a battle




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12-11-2005, 08:52 PM

i torch the remains of men and sniff the ashes
hi def known to sip blood by the gallons through gashes
bruises, niccas foolish, im made to do this bull shyt
so if a dude defy me, hes diein see? one crack from a bull whip

forget the trauma, i see a dude crawlin for safety
but, aint no such thing as safety when my blade swings
see? its the same thing, either that or i cup guns
cause im the nightmare that all my enemies cant wake up from
no luck son, decapitate any nigga that oppose me
so dont say its all love if in all reality...you dont know me
i feed off fear, i follow the streets of they veins
and i love hearin the screams of squadrons when they bleed from they brains
ahmen, no shame, no glory, all guts and gory
my murderous tactics'll murder this bastard before me
cats look up to me, i wield the only true iron fist
and i sip blood for fun when i cut inside yuh wrist
i see this diein kid, i descended from the gates of this heaven
i dont stop the torture til the final outcome is that yuh face is embedded...

o well...i tried. topic was a lil iffy, but its coo. now yall can vote
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