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BaLi vs Jonnyz (the welcome back battle) - 06-20-2005, 01:29 PM

alll right... 5 bars.. 2 verses.. i called you out so i drop first...
no time limit... but dont be an ass

3-0 ko
first to 4 other wise

lets get it on !




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THOUGHTS ON BALI
Originally posted by RapmastaF-fresh B-Girl BaLi, the word warrior princess of b-boy.org
Originally posted by B-Boy Alloy -B-girl bali-godmother of breakdance.com
Originally posted by Mode -Bgirl BaLi, spam princess of bboy.org
Originally posted by DTACK -Bali the Verbal Cornerstone of bboy.org
Originally posted by B-boy-bomb -Bali - the coolest Bgirl...
"B-boying is the bastard child of hip hop.Graffiti is the black sheep.DJing is the obedient child that always does what it's told.And rap is the spoiled brat that is actually the youngest of the four." -CRAZY LEGS
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06-22-2005, 01:57 PM

eager to get hit, i flip scripts as i rip kids/
only stepped cuz he never seen how she do this/
rhymes are fluid, tsunami style stoppin attempts to "drop"/
call the cops, remains have to be cleaned with a mop/
underaged like hillary duff, ya best attempt still aint enough/
im callin ya bluff, Bali strapped up, i know you like it rough/
hand cuffed, got ya best lines hog tied/
said u aint a newb, but ya verse prooved ya lied/
Still young in the game, rhymes Pre K, cryin cuz you missd ya cue/
I might as well be R-Kell, looks like i jus PISSED ON YOU/


ill be back on saturday ... to respond to your verse
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06-23-2005, 02:52 AM

Ive only voted once... but i'll do my second vote soon

hog tied? strapped up? hand cuffed? shit, you're a porker stop it
I think ima vomit, please, I cant stand ya fat ass talkin bondage
You think I aint seen how you do this? You cant do shit
I'd tell you what I seen, but I cant see past you, bitch
Fat ass, with wack tracks... on the real ya past is boring yo
Aint seen ya win, I saw every vet on bboy.org floor ya though
And I still remember when you got slaughtered by awe in audio
Got me snoring, yo. You only dreamin ya above me, like level four in mario*
You make it seem like you're dope when really ya not performing
Dumbass... how you gonna judge me by my verse when ya dropped before me

*level four in mario is that dream land cloud place...
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06-27-2005, 05:55 PM

yet another young wanna be comes with the same shit
callin me fat, my rap wack, but the truth: he's the lamest
i coulda drooled fire hot enough to melt your bars/
Rhymes back of the pack tryin to catch the pace car/
hope ya ready to climb, cuz im a bitch in her prime/
forcein ya rhyme, is like forcin the time/
to move,its always stuck in one groove/
buck and i proove, hope ya ready to loose/
ignorance evident, similar to Roc u bout to be crushed*
like a radio show with deaf guest, ya lines stay hushed





* double meaning= 3-0 ko and Roc and i used to date
BaLi vs. Jroc
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06-29-2005, 04:50 AM

ya tremble in place, it’s obvious a wretch of your weight aint got the most flexible waste
but I’ll hit you so hard in the stomach you kick yourself in the face
twelve minus four equals ate, which is what you’re about to become
spit fire after I douse you in rum, im hotter than the lead that comes outta my gun
and ya know, you’re right. My rhymes are stuck in the groove, unlike yours ya slut
my styles solid, while ya wordplay, flow and punches are all forced as fuck
if it weren’t for you’re enormous butt, im pretty sure I’d think you were a guy
you’re doomed if you try cause ya cant see me, like I put glue in your eyes
cant see the debris, from when I spit my wackest and still beat you with ease
shit bitch… ya cant even see you’re so manly you gotta bigger penis than me


Nice battle bali.
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mode vote - 06-29-2005, 05:32 AM

bali 1st - same old, i thought you'd be coming with more freshness after how you voted on the three way battle, but you had alot of old lines in here.. flows was aight, i liked the closer..

2nd - again, pretty weak, but closer line about roc was funny.. flows were ok.. bit of self promo when coulda used a punchline.. but yeah weak.. expected more.


jonny z - open nice, good flip, nice punchline.. fat lines etc against bali might be played, but if you can be original with it who cares, it's good.. good wordplay with the mario line, flows were sweet all the way..

2nd - open hard again, good solid diss made me chuckle.. got a little self promo here too but picked up with a string of nice punchlines, real direct.. wordplay was aight.. flows were nice throughout..

overall it was one sided.. it's pretty easy to see jonnyz took this, harder more directed punches, solid flows 'n decent wordplay.. bali, you need to pick up your game.. and probably try work on your rhyme scheme to help the flows along..

vote - JONNYZ
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06-30-2005, 11:53 PM

i dont care if you take my vote to account, juss want to input my thoughts.. ive been around since '03 anyway, but its up to you..

BaLi:
1. it was pretty good, ive seen better from you... ive heard that closer punch alot from other people, not necessarily on bboy.org, but its still good. the flow was pretty clean...

2. kinda weak.. once again ive seen a lot better.. your first bar was kinda wack.. hAh ive never seen an mc (femcee) use her personal life in a freestyle, but i like your last bar though..

jonny:
1. I see you got very creative with this battle.. like mode said good flips, good comebacks. solid throughout.. it looks like one of your better ones.

2. Once again creative.. iunno, prolly someone else can catch it, but i couldnt quite feel your flow.. good word choice.

overall jonny came out with the upper hand, being solid all around.. i know bali could do better, so maybe a rematch? ;p

VOTE: JONNY


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07-01-2005, 02:59 AM

2-0 johnnyz
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07-07-2005, 01:42 PM

Alright Let me break this down.

Bali:

Verse 1: Your flow was pretty good, spotty in a few places. The punches came off a little weak, but there was some decent punchs. I've seen better from you

Liked: Your opening, "eager to get hit, i flip scripts as i rip kids/"

Verse 2: You opened really shake but your flow pulled together and really started moving later on. The Punches were decent, once again, not the best ive seen from you Bali. Some good worldplay: "i coulda drooled fire hot enough to melt your bars/"

Also liked: "ignorance evident, similar to Roc u bout to be crushed*
like a radio show with deaf guest, ya lines stay hushed"


Overall not the best Ive seen from you, but you had your moments.

Jonnyz:

Verse 1: The flow was dope, but I wasn't feeling all the fat cracks. Shit was mad clever though.

Liked: "Got me snoring, yo. You only dreamin ya above me, like level four in mario*" I feel the Video game references. :-P

Verse 2: More fat jokes... /sigh. Flow was hot at first, but you fell off a little towards the end. Nice punches, good wordplay.

Liked: "twelve minus four equals ate, which is what you’re about to become
spit fire after I douse you in rum,"


Hate to do it Bali, but I'mma KO this with

VOTE=Jonnyz




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