[K1llaCam]

Rematch battle I lost the first time

1 verse
3-0 = KO, first to 5 when split
14 lines maximum
No deadline

Im going first.

One

[K1llaCam]

Im 'gunning' for the win, like skipping foreplay, I won’t bother with ya chest
But you’ll have a dot in between your eyes.....like your picture on the left
Probably gotta sinkin feelin in his stomach, but he’ll never admit to that
So Cam will tear apart his guts and intestines just to get the inside tract
Then I'll rip Jroc in two, from his name and the image that he raps hard
Then y’all can shoot J when I can pass the Roc…like NBA Point Guards
Freestyled and you beat me. You claimed victory but I don’t count that one.
Cuz It Was Written…and I don’t mean where you stole your signature from
J’s got half a mind to quit and a wack verse from the other half of his brain
And we know he’s too dumb to pick by his Nas signature with Roc in his name
Lame's usertitle is "exhumed"…He’s back after we forgot him so it’s true people
But J comes back to the site worse each time like damn Friday the 13th sequels
J and me aint equal, I'd know....On my mattress is all of the shit he ever said
And know he’s tired of being slept on so I guess I’ll just put his career to bed

[Bboy Jroc]

ya can't settle the score, the rematch'll fuck up the whore,
twice i'll kill-cam, make ya say "damn, what i battle him for?",
an eyesore fa the blind, ya rhymes stay outta line,
like failin' a sobriety test ya outta ya right mind,
can't shine if the sun held ya, can't be hot if it done melt ya,
ya train-a thought's way lost, i aint gotta wreck ya,
never felt ya ta begin with, how the fuck ya gonna win shit?
ya can be the mayflower, i'm a pirate who sink ships,
think bitch, i only spit with higher intelligence,
far beyond ya reach so webster's ya reference,
no relevance ta how roc is, ya 'bout as live as johnnie cochran,
ya kind's 'bout as dead-ly as a decomposin' carcass,
i'm marvelous 'n ya know it, the type that ya quote 'n,
remember years from now as "i-never-beat-opponent"..

votes

[Zeke1]

ok, time for my opinion...

KillaCam - Nice verse, alot better then i expected....Flow wasnt the best, but it was there..some punches were a little off, or could've been worded better....lines i liked:
"Then I'll rip Jroc in two, from his name and the image that he raps hard
Then y’all can shoot J when I can pass the Roc…like NBA Point Guards
Freestyled and you beat me. You claimed victory but I don’t count that one.
Cuz It Was Written…and I don’t mean where you stole your signature from"

nice set of punches right there....

"J’s got half a mind to quit and a wack verse from the other half of his brain
And we know he’s too dumb to pick by his Nas signature with Roc in his name"
i loved the punch, but the set up was kinda corney..

"J and me aint equal, I'd know....On my mattress is all of the shit he ever said
And know he’s tired of being slept on so I guess I’ll just put his career to bed"
this is what i mean about wording, really good concept, but if it was worded differently it woulda hit harder...dope closer though

Overall, good punches, good wordplay, okay flow

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Jroc - not bad, deffinately not your best....flow was on point nicely, not too much by way of punches though...good lines:
"J and me aint equal, I'd know....On my mattress is all of the shit he ever said
And know he’s tired of being slept on so I guess I’ll just put his career to bed"
not bad, not great either...but i liked it

"think bitch, i only spit with higher intelligence,
far beyond ya reach so webster's ya reference,
no relevance ta how roc is, ya 'bout as live as johnnie cochran,
ya kind's 'bout as dead-ly as a decomposin' carcass,"

nice set of punches, and nice set ups too...flow made it sound nice...the johnnie cochran line had me laughin

"i'm marvelous 'n ya know it, the type that ya quote 'n,
remember years from now as "i-never-beat-opponent"..
tight closer, could've been worded differently to make it more effective, but it was tight

Overall, good punches, good wordplay, dope flow


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Overall Vote: This one was close, i kept going back and fourth wih this one...but im gonna have to go with Jroc; it was close, really close...im still going back and fourth, i think another verse each would be tight,...but for this one Jroc had the upper hand with flow, punches were just about equal...but i got that "OOOooohhh" feeling after reading Jrocs verse...probably cuzz of the flow and setups..
Not a bad battle....killacam brought it nice, but the few corney lines threw it off and the flow was choppy and i'm a big fan of friday the 13th....personally i think they just got better....freddy vs. jason was a dope movie...so was Jason X....you cant diss some one like Jason..lol, sorry

[Bboy Jroc]

Originally posted by Zeke1
Jroc - not bad, deffinately not your best....flow was on point nicely, not too much by way of punches though...good lines:
"J and me aint equal, I'd know....On my mattress is all of the shit he ever said
And know he’s tired of being slept on so I guess I’ll just put his career to bed"
not bad, not great either...but i liked it

thanks fa the vote zeke, but that line aint mine..

[Zeke1]

haha, cut and paste mistake, my bad

i ment this bar..
"an eyesore fa the blind, ya rhymes stay outta line,
like failin' a sobriety test ya outta ya right mind,

[StraitlanE]

Here's what I think.

KillaCam
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I personally think your sentence length is too long. It kinda deters the flow.

"Probably gotta sinkin feelin in his stomach, but he’ll never admit to that//
So Cam will tear apart his guts and intestines just to get the inside tract//"
That was the best line in my opinion.

It's just too long and you lose the flow after reading so many words.

7/10 I rate

Jroc
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Jroc keep it short but hard hitting. You can catch the flow easier and there was some nice word play there

Best line:
an eyesore fa the blind, ya rhymes stay outta line,
like failin' a sobriety test ya outta ya right mind
The ultimate in sick!

I'd give Roc a
8/10

Conclusion
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Nice verses, but I didn't like the flow fo KillaCams
My votes for JROC

STRAIT

[Codes]

Killacam : good shiet cuzz, nice punches, dope lines...but tha flow wasnt that great.
"Then I'll rip Jroc in two, from his name and the image that he raps hard
Then y’all can shoot J when I can pass the Roc…like NBA Point Guards"
haha good shit... creative

Jroc : flow was dope as shit cuzz, shit was just rollin offffff... nice punches too
"think bitch, i only spit with higher intelligence,
far beyond ya reach so webster's ya reference,
no relevance ta how roc is, ya 'bout as live as johnnie cochran,
ya kind's 'bout as dead-ly as a decomposin' carcass,"
haha both reference thing was clever and the johnnie cochran...lol

my opinion Jroc had the better flow but other than dat both of you had dope punches, so my vote goes to Jroc

[Bboy Jroc]

dope. closing thread.