[Bboy Jroc]

Deadline: Friday, April 1st

"..automatic systematic, but so erratic its almost tragic
how static causes electricity to swirl near me like magic.." - razor

edit: thread title

[Zeke1]

"..automatic systematic, but so erratic its almost tragic
how static causes electricity to swirl near me like magic.."

the facts is, light excites blacklit facettes like backflips
I retract it, light is like the exciting spike of a match tip
relax kids, im not tryin ya patients, monotone groan...straight from the basement
skill sustainin, will'so amazing, defacin complacent phased men to craven crazed men
everyone knows that the new-phex crew stay bent
trees, guiness, and jim beam, zeke takes showers but never stays clean
they say he's crazy with creating stages that may amazingly amaze thee
the nice guy of the crew but everyone still blames me
the shame be, filling the room wit doom as eyes watch me excite her
the freak zeke at the peak of the cypher
a new-phex exect, staying a Freestyle Rhyme Session lifer...

[Bboy Jroc]

a new-phex exect, staying a Freestyle Rhyme Session lifer...

spark shit like a lighter, rhymes better than sex, pullin' all-nighter's,
we not virgins but damn we still tighter, the best of all fighters,
read on, we God's writers.. the most prophetic 'n hectic,
so sick we binge on antiseptics, cringe like epileptics,
wreck shit like we strapped with bombs, rap with psalms 'n military arms,
but don't be alarmed, light-years from y'all we above 'n beyond,
blaze the path that we on, the wrath is far from ceasing,
no mercy, we leave mc's bleeding, atheists to believe in,
the fact that we slay dudes, the type cats should pray to,
got the hunger fa flesh like the fangs of nosferatu..

[Mantic]

got the hunger fa flesh like the fangs of nosferatu.. - Jroc

now thats true, we stay cool, like ice melting your thoughts,
thundering words giving you shocks, giving de-Feet warm like socks,
just like a rolling stone, we rock, the set is ready we spit messy,
eating mc's phater than betsy, thats probably why our digestion flow is heavy,
im ready to drop cut, slice and dice, killing the flow twice as nice,
my head is ready to cypher this life sturr, my words are wise,
Independent yet in a team, we both flow sicker and mean,
the theme we all know and role the call as we answer whats represented,
im impressed at my skillz switching styles faster than j'los switches her man,
only to command, that the only thing tighter is the grip on this mic with my hand,
were a drink thats to good for waste, once we jump in ya dont wanna spit back,
like a train we run down tracks, not givin a fuck if jeapordy wants to bitch about facts,

[Yosh One]

"were a drink thats to good for waste, once we jump in ya dont wanna spit back,
like a train we run down tracks, not givin a fuck if jeapordy wants to bitch about facts" - Mantic


When we switch on the tracks, like trains derailing, brains sailing /
My mane's flailing, I'm painstakingly, banging every nail in /
The coffins of prophets who spit the logic of apocalypse /
No stopping this, metropolis shocking like Osama's dropping this /
The sickest atrocities, born out of foolish philosophies /
You're probably wondering where the hell I've been, here's my apology; /
Lost in the mountains for days, hanging out in cave /
Meditating the grave, finding my way, feeling the sun on my face /
The wind in my wings, we all sing, truth be told /
Real bling ain't silver or gold, it's in the pit of your soul

[Enkore]

Zeke: wordplay wasnt really there but the flow was SICK. really nice, lots of 2 syllable multies and inners kept it flowin like h2o and that's fo sho. u flowed mad nice offa razor's line which was a great start. felt it man.

the only thing that i really didnt like was that there wasnt wordplay. iono, u had 1 or 2 lines that coulda been swapped for some nice puns or suttin and that woulda made the verse that much better.

Jroc: felt the verse mos def. from the start u hit it with some wordplay, whether simple or not, it pulled me in. also came with a crazy flow, lots of inners like Zeke had. i liked how u really flowed off and rhymed Zeke's last line, added to the cypher feel.

iono really whut negative things i might be able to point out, overall i thought it was a solid verse.


Mantic: ehh, wasnt feelin the flow much man. i thought u started out great but u jus lost it with a couple stretched lines. concepts were cool, kinda liked the sock line, and the rest was pretty good.

once again my only problem with ur verse was really the flow. i jus could not find a rhythm once u hit around the middle. line up ur verse syllable wise and it'll def help out.

Yosh: felt the concepts, truth be told, u and jroc really get down with a similar style. flow is nice throughout ur verse, a little flooded with inners in the opener. u came hard in it though and that's respectable.

the real downfall of ur verse was clearly the ending. after a verse full of knowledge and rawness u jus ended it so abruptly and it was not cool, jus leavin me hangin. wordplay wasnt really there either, but the concepts made up for that.

Final Thoughts
i thought it was a fairly even battle. generally flow was on in every verse and as teams u really came in the same range of niceness in my head. Nice little cypher but i'mma give it to Jroc and Yosh One on account of clear concepts, consistency and jus nice flowin. If Mantic or Zeke fixed a line or two in either verse i coulda possibly gone another route with the vote, but i stick by my decision. good job peeps.

and if u get the chance, get at my battle wit a vote .

[mothafunky]

zeke:
i thought your flow was slick, but felt repetetive by the end, i dunno how to explain what i'm thinkin. like, if you try to use complex flows, i think it gets weird if you don't change it up enough, it feels old or something. but that probably sounds worse than what i mean, overall i thought it was a good verse. liked most of the concept, came pretty nice.

jroc:
nice verse man, loved the flow and the concepts. there were maybe one or two lines i wasn't feelin, but on the whole good drop man.

mantic:
ok man, i'm a say this once, unless someone comes up with the sickest idea ever, i'm a start slicin throats when i hear de-feet lines. sorry man, but that wordplay is way overdone. outside of that, alright drop. can't match up to the first too, but not the worst i've read.

yosh:
haha, i completely disagree with enkore, i think your opener wasn't that great, but i loved your ending. outside of your opener, i thought it was a dope verse. came nice.

vote: jroc an yosh, came more consistent as a team.

[flobotopics]

good stuff guys. heres my breakdown.

zeke: your flow has been mad on point lately. not suprising this verse had flow. went in a good cypher direction. all around it was a good cypher verse. ya just took it from the begininng and rolled with it. very nice homey. i loved the closer too

Jroc: "so sick we binge on antiseptics" awsome line man. pretty normal verse for you. flow wordplay and all was there. good cyphering. a jroc classic

Mantic: ya started off really nice, but like enkore said ya fell off a lil. it was an ok verse. but if ya woulda kept the flow up like the beginning it woulda been much nicer. imo this was my least favorite verse in the cypher. sorry man

Yosh: except for your first line(cause it was similar to mantics train line) the whole verse was ill. man this was straight uo my favorite verse in the cypher. flow and all was there. good job brotha.

how i think the verses were:
Favorite=Yosh
2. = zeke
3. = jroc
4. = mantic

vote goes to Yosh/Jroc

[flobotopics]

yosh and jroc win 3-0. closing thread